The host of fast time travel is forced to marry every day

Chapter 89 I'm Sincere To You (4)

Only then did Xu Yingcai come back to her senses.

He gave Yuan Yao a warning look, and then quickly smiled and said to Xie Rong, "Yes, yes, what's wrong with Mr. Xie?"

Xie Rong raised the script in his hand, "There is something illogical about Lu Yi's emotional change and Xu Zhen's ending."

Xu Yingcai was taken aback.

Xie Rong opened the script in his hand, pointed to the places marked red by him, and analyzed, "Before meeting Xu Zhen, Lu Yi was a brother-controller, but after recommending Xu Zhen to Lu Ye, She will be happy because of Xu Zhen's meritorious deeds, which shows that Lu Ye has a strong position in her heart. But after Xu Zhen was imprisoned, she did not ask Lu Ye for proof of Xu Zhen's identity at all, so she made up her own mind to help him escape, betrayed The elder brother figure seems unable to stand up."

"Similarly, Xu Zhen was an important person in the early stage, but after Lu Yi's death, he only appeared in the final battle for a few seconds, and he was not the key person who triggered the battle. Not to mention, he was not confessed in the end. ending."

Xu Yingcai suddenly hesitated and said, "Although Lu Yi's setting is a brother control, she is also a love brain, so I think there is no problem with her behavior, but Xu Zhen is indeed a bug. I will ask the screenwriter to change it. "

Listening to Xu Yingcai's explanation, Xie Rong closed the script in his hand, but suddenly glanced at Yuan Yao who was looking aside with a curious face, with a slight smile on his lips, "Although there is no major problem, but I have a Suggestions to make Lu Yi's character design fuller. I don't know if Director Xu is willing to listen to it."

When Xu Yingcai heard this, she immediately forgot the question of whether her niece could do the job, and said with bright eyes, "Of course! Teacher Xie, do you have any suggestions?"

Xie Rong's eyes fell on the four big characters "City of Flowing Smoke" on the cover of the script, paused for a few seconds, and then said, "... Lu Yi found out that Xu Zhen was indeed an undercover agent while helping Xu Zhen escape, and thus fell into the trap of his relatives." A dilemma with her lover. When Lu Ye caught up with them, Lu Yi made a final decision in the midst of collapse. Killing Xu Zhen and then dying in love not only fulfilled her love, but also preserved her family relationship."

Xu Yingcai was stunned.

Yuan Yao didn't understand why all of a sudden, her part in the scene suddenly increased.

And it got more complicated.

Originally, she only needed to play the role of a young lady with big breasts and no brains, but now she has to delve deeper into the character's mind.

So she tugged on Xu Yingcai's arm a little bit without tears, and begged pitifully, "Uncle, can't you change it?"

Xu Yingcai is now completely immersed in her work, and doesn't care about Yuan Yao's opinion at all, she just reassures her perfunctorily, "Yaoyao, uncle knows this is a bit difficult for you, but you think, if you perform well, You can definitely become famous in one fell swoop! Who will dare to look down on you in the future!"

Yuan Yao: "."

Yuan Yao wanted to say that she didn't want to become famous in one fell swoop.

But looking at Xu Yingcai's radiant face, she also understood that there was no room for change in this matter.

So, she could only take the script a little discouraged, and prepared to go back to her room to study it.

Seeing her embarrassed look, Huahua couldn't help reminding, "Yaoyao, you can make trouble for no reason!"

Yuan Yao shook her head when she heard the words, "Uncle is pretty good to me, I can be self-willed in other places, but let's forget about messing up his work."

Seeing what she said, Huahua felt a little speechless for a while.

(End of this chapter)