Chapter 28 Professor He's Criticism
Fang Ling read the notebook carefully twice, then fell silent.
It was difficult for her to describe her specific feelings.
In all fairness, does "You in Eyes" have a magnificent and ups and downs plot?In fact, there is no such thing.
All the content revolves around those common elements in everyday life, such as home, school playground and so on.The protagonist is not a great hero either, he is just an ordinary kid with a bit of skin, who is very annoying to his mother, with paralyzed legs.
But in these daily bits and pieces, there are many sincere emotions that make people feel the same.
Especially the three reversals of the story, although they all use the same material and are all similar events, but after changing the perspective, the expressed content becomes completely different.
So in the end, when you look at the protagonist from the mother's perspective, there will be an effect of all the accumulated emotions bursting out.
This book not only wrote all the lines and actions of the characters, but even the details of the scenery, music and sound effects, etc. were all clearly written. The degree of completion is too high, and it is not like a student can do it at all.
"Did you find this book from the Internet?" Fang Ling asked.
Zhang Yiyang quickly shook his head: "No, these two notebooks were originally written by classmate Lu Zhixing. You should still have an impression? Last time I told you that he had a very good original song, and the scouts of "High School Show" even snatched it up." coming."
Fang Ling was surprised: "It's him again? He released a song and two language programs by himself? Are you sure it's original?"
Zhang Yiyang nodded: "Sure, Mr. Fang, I searched the Internet for a long time, and I didn't see any similar works at all, not even a little bit. 100% pure original."
Fang Ling was also shocked: "It seems that our college has a genius? It's incredible!
"He has put in so much effort, when I look back at the awards, I will reflect to the leader and pay more attention.
"Hey, by the way, there is a problem. It is written in this book that "You in Eyes" requires a lot of art materials, not to mention the setting, and when the scene transitions, some fantasy images will be projected on the screen ?Do you want to use another style of painting? These resources should not be prepared yet, right?
"Time is running out, so I'll report it to the academy leader to see if I can allocate some funds, and ask the Academy of Fine Arts to cooperate and provide some resources..."
The students are so sensible that they don't have anything to do with her as an instructor, and now they finally think of where they can help.
Seeing that Fang Ling was about to make a call to make arrangements, Zhang Yiyang hurriedly interrupted: "Mr. Fang, no need, the art materials are all ready."
"All... ready?" Fang Ling, who had just picked up the phone, showed an expression of disbelief.
Zhang Yiyang nodded and took out the USB flash drive from his pocket: "Yes, everything is ready."
Fang Ling took the USB flash drive and asked while plugging it into the computer: "How did you prepare it? Did you find alternative resources online? The projector on the stage requires high accuracy of the material, and those low-quality garbage resources are not acceptable. "
However, in the next second, Fang Ling opened these resources on the computer and was stunned for a moment.
What kind of free low-quality garbage resource is this?
The accuracy is obviously very high, and I am afraid that you can't buy it with money in the editor!
"Where did this material come from?" Fang Ling was confused.
Zhang Yiyang was silent for a moment: "I don't know much about this. Lu Zhixing said that he is making a game of the same name, and he just prepared these resources, which can be used directly. But how did these resources come from...he said he drew them himself.
"I think he may not want to tell me the specific sources of these resources, but Mr. Fang, don't worry, I checked it briefly, and there shouldn't be any copyright issues."
There was a brief silence in the office.
Fang Ling is also full of groans and wants to vomit, what the hell did she draw by herself, can this nonsense be any more outrageous?
However, considering Lu Zhixing's series of monstrous behaviors, it is not too outrageous to draw art resources by himself.
Which freshman can write a song, two scripts, and develop a game in such a short period of time after enrolling?Even the resources for this game are prepared?
But Fang Ling didn't ask too much, is she worthy of paying attention to this kind of thing?
As long as the welcome party can be held smoothly, it will be fine if the performance of the live program is good.As long as there are no copyright issues with these resources, what does it matter where Lu Zhixing got them?
Whether he really painted it himself, bought it with money, or asked a friend to help him do it, that's all his skill.
"Okay, then these two language programs are finalized! Later, I will tell the management teacher over there in the Science Hall, and you and that classmate Lu will find some time to go there to debug the machine together to ensure that the stage can achieve the best results.”
Seeing Fang Ling was very happy, Zhang Yiyang decided to strike while the iron was hot, and made further progress: "By the way, there is one more thing. Teacher Fang, you see that the books of these two language programs are so good, and the virtual sets are also available. Are there any more in the courtyard? Allocate a little bit of money, let's go buy some costumes and props?"
Fang Ling understood instantly: "Hey, are you waiting for me here? Okay, I'll report to the courtyard and apply for as much funding as possible for you!"
Amidst the laughter, Zhang Yiyang finished his report and left Fang Ling's office.
He breathed a sigh of relief: "Sure enough, there must be a limited-edition plug-in for junior! If it weren't for these two language programs, I really don't know how to make a difference.
"But it's all right now, let's hurry up and rehearse. After the holidays, when the college funds come down, go buy some costumes and props, and we'll be all set!"
It was the first time that Zhang Yiyang was looking forward to the college's welcome party.
As a freshman last year, although he also participated in the welcome party and sang on stage, he didn't have any strong expectations at that time, just going through the motions.After all, the programs at last year's gala were quite ordinary, more like routine.
But this year is different. He is full of expectations for these two language programs.
This is the qualitative change that a good program brings to the party.
Zhang Yiyang hummed a ditty and was about to leave when he saw Professor He Cheng walking from the opposite side with a thermos.
Seeing Professor He Cheng, Zhang Yiyang's heart skipped a beat, thinking, how did he come out of the tiger's mouth and into the wolf's den!
Did you not read the almanac when you went out today?A little back!
Professor He Cheng has a reputation for being vicious, and sophomores have suffered a lot from him.
The key is that Zhang Yiyang, as a student cadre, often went to the college and received special attention from Professor He Cheng, which made him miserable.
Now that we bumped into each other, we couldn't pretend we didn't see them, we could only say hello honestly.
Professor He Cheng saw his face darken: "Huh? Xiao Zhang? It's just right, come to my office."
Zhang Yiyang felt a "thump" in his heart, feeling that he was about to suffer.But he had no choice but to obediently follow Professor He Cheng to the office.
"What happened to your homework last time? It was too perfunctory! How did I talk about it in class? A good level design must be rich in content and save resources. It must often make players feel 'suddenly enlightened' design, what level are you making?"
Professor He scolded Zhang Yiyang for his homework.
Zhang Yiyang's previous good mood disappeared in an instant, and he was dejected, like a defeated rooster.
After a while, when all the problems in my level design were sharply commented by Professor He, the storm finally passed.
Professor He Cheng picked up the thermos cup and took a sip of tea: "You, you, have you been busy with the welcome party recently, and you have done all your homework?
"It's not long since the sophomore year, and many classes are at a critical time. It's understandable that you have to be busy with the student union, but you can't put the cart before the horse, right?"
Zhang Yiyang lowered his head: "Yes, Professor He, I will definitely pay attention in the future."
Professor He Cheng waved his hand: "Okay, there is nothing else to do, you can go back. Remember to redo this homework, I will read it after the holiday.
"Hey, wait, there's one more thing."
Just as Zhang Yiyang was about to leave, he turned back and said, "Professor, tell me."
Professor He Cheng asked: "A freshman named Lu Zhixing, do you know him?"
Zhang Yiyang nodded blankly: "Lu Zhixing?... I know you."
He doesn't know many first-year students. After all, he has just started school. How many people can he get in touch with?That is to say, he is familiar with those who participated in the orientation party.Unexpectedly, Professor He Cheng just asked someone he knew very well.
Professor He Cheng nodded: "Then do you know what he is busy with recently?"
When Zhang Yiyang heard it, huh?Xuedi Lu has helped me so much, so I have to say something nice to him in front of the professor?
"I am very familiar with Brother Lu! He has been a great help. You don't know the professor, but he is talented. First, he created an original song for our college's welcome party, and wrote two language classes himself. The script of the show. Also, although I don’t know the specific situation, it seems that he often goes to work outside the school to do some work-study work. He is very diligent and motivated..."
These are basically the truth, and Zhang Yiyang also added fuel and vinegar on this basis, hoping to leave a good impression on Junior Lu in front of the professor.
Although I don't know why Professor He pays so much attention to this junior, but it's okay to say these compliments, right?
However, the more Zhang Yiyang said, the more he felt that something was wrong, because Professor He Cheng's face was obviously gloomy.
"It makes no sense, isn't this nonsense?
"He is such a talented person, why didn't he finish his studies well and spend all his thoughts on the orientation party and part-time job?
"I think you are in a daze. Think about what your main business is? Can you still make your debut as a star in the future?"
Zhang Yiyang felt a "thump" in his heart, it's broken!It's a disservice!
Originally, he wanted to say a few words of kindness to his junior in front of Professor He Cheng, but he didn't expect to flatter him on the horse's leg.
No, I have to help my junior get it back quickly, otherwise what should I do if my junior holds a grudge, wouldn't my limited edition cheat be flying with wings?
"No, no, professor, you misunderstood. In fact, although Xuedi Lu has done a lot of things, he didn't delay at all in making games. This stage play "You in My Eyes" is a game adaptation he is working on. You look."
As Zhang Yiyang said, he quickly took out the script of "You in My Eyes" and handed it over.Although this is a script, not a game design draft, but with Professor He's skills, it can be completely recreated by brain.
Professor He Cheng looked puzzled: ""You in Eyes"? What is that? Isn't the game he is making "Ordinary Life"?"
He took the script and flipped through it quickly.
Only then did I realize that it was a new game?Moreover, the design is already so perfect?
According to the situation of the script, the original design draft should have been completed, and it can even go directly to the production process.
"In such a short time, he designed another game??"
Professor He Cheng was dumbfounded. The two games designed by Lu Zhixing were highly completed and both were masterpieces!
In "Ordinary Life", Professor He Cheng can still find some faults, such as too many resources are consumed, some literary works in it are difficult to handle, etc., but "You in Eyes" can't find faults at all.
As a plot-oriented independent game, its story is complete, its structure is compact, and its resources are very economical. It can be said to be impeccable.
Professor He Cheng lost his language for a while.
Not doing business?
If it is said that Lu Zhixing was busy with other things and delayed the game design, then it is indeed not doing his job properly, but what if he has done a good job in other aspects and also doubled the homework?
That's not doing nothing, that's time management masters!
Professor He Cheng looked at Zhang Yiyang, and his face sank again: "Look at your junior, and then at you! How can he make such a good design while busy with the welcome party and part-time job! How come? You can't even design a level well!
"Learn more from others in the future! Go back and make a double copy of this homework, and make two different levels! Hand it in after the holiday!"
Zhang Yiyang petrified instantly.
……
PS. Recently, because I want to upload PK, I PYed a lot of chapters with the author friends in one breath. After ten days, I will push a book every day. They are all books by old authors. Everyone has their own love.
Today's recommendation: Walking into unscience, an extremely hard-core author and a group of extremely hard-core readers, this is a black science and technology article that can't be understood without any culture
(End of this chapter)
Fang Ling read the notebook carefully twice, then fell silent.
It was difficult for her to describe her specific feelings.
In all fairness, does "You in Eyes" have a magnificent and ups and downs plot?In fact, there is no such thing.
All the content revolves around those common elements in everyday life, such as home, school playground and so on.The protagonist is not a great hero either, he is just an ordinary kid with a bit of skin, who is very annoying to his mother, with paralyzed legs.
But in these daily bits and pieces, there are many sincere emotions that make people feel the same.
Especially the three reversals of the story, although they all use the same material and are all similar events, but after changing the perspective, the expressed content becomes completely different.
So in the end, when you look at the protagonist from the mother's perspective, there will be an effect of all the accumulated emotions bursting out.
This book not only wrote all the lines and actions of the characters, but even the details of the scenery, music and sound effects, etc. were all clearly written. The degree of completion is too high, and it is not like a student can do it at all.
"Did you find this book from the Internet?" Fang Ling asked.
Zhang Yiyang quickly shook his head: "No, these two notebooks were originally written by classmate Lu Zhixing. You should still have an impression? Last time I told you that he had a very good original song, and the scouts of "High School Show" even snatched it up." coming."
Fang Ling was surprised: "It's him again? He released a song and two language programs by himself? Are you sure it's original?"
Zhang Yiyang nodded: "Sure, Mr. Fang, I searched the Internet for a long time, and I didn't see any similar works at all, not even a little bit. 100% pure original."
Fang Ling was also shocked: "It seems that our college has a genius? It's incredible!
"He has put in so much effort, when I look back at the awards, I will reflect to the leader and pay more attention.
"Hey, by the way, there is a problem. It is written in this book that "You in Eyes" requires a lot of art materials, not to mention the setting, and when the scene transitions, some fantasy images will be projected on the screen ?Do you want to use another style of painting? These resources should not be prepared yet, right?
"Time is running out, so I'll report it to the academy leader to see if I can allocate some funds, and ask the Academy of Fine Arts to cooperate and provide some resources..."
The students are so sensible that they don't have anything to do with her as an instructor, and now they finally think of where they can help.
Seeing that Fang Ling was about to make a call to make arrangements, Zhang Yiyang hurriedly interrupted: "Mr. Fang, no need, the art materials are all ready."
"All... ready?" Fang Ling, who had just picked up the phone, showed an expression of disbelief.
Zhang Yiyang nodded and took out the USB flash drive from his pocket: "Yes, everything is ready."
Fang Ling took the USB flash drive and asked while plugging it into the computer: "How did you prepare it? Did you find alternative resources online? The projector on the stage requires high accuracy of the material, and those low-quality garbage resources are not acceptable. "
However, in the next second, Fang Ling opened these resources on the computer and was stunned for a moment.
What kind of free low-quality garbage resource is this?
The accuracy is obviously very high, and I am afraid that you can't buy it with money in the editor!
"Where did this material come from?" Fang Ling was confused.
Zhang Yiyang was silent for a moment: "I don't know much about this. Lu Zhixing said that he is making a game of the same name, and he just prepared these resources, which can be used directly. But how did these resources come from...he said he drew them himself.
"I think he may not want to tell me the specific sources of these resources, but Mr. Fang, don't worry, I checked it briefly, and there shouldn't be any copyright issues."
There was a brief silence in the office.
Fang Ling is also full of groans and wants to vomit, what the hell did she draw by herself, can this nonsense be any more outrageous?
However, considering Lu Zhixing's series of monstrous behaviors, it is not too outrageous to draw art resources by himself.
Which freshman can write a song, two scripts, and develop a game in such a short period of time after enrolling?Even the resources for this game are prepared?
But Fang Ling didn't ask too much, is she worthy of paying attention to this kind of thing?
As long as the welcome party can be held smoothly, it will be fine if the performance of the live program is good.As long as there are no copyright issues with these resources, what does it matter where Lu Zhixing got them?
Whether he really painted it himself, bought it with money, or asked a friend to help him do it, that's all his skill.
"Okay, then these two language programs are finalized! Later, I will tell the management teacher over there in the Science Hall, and you and that classmate Lu will find some time to go there to debug the machine together to ensure that the stage can achieve the best results.”
Seeing Fang Ling was very happy, Zhang Yiyang decided to strike while the iron was hot, and made further progress: "By the way, there is one more thing. Teacher Fang, you see that the books of these two language programs are so good, and the virtual sets are also available. Are there any more in the courtyard? Allocate a little bit of money, let's go buy some costumes and props?"
Fang Ling understood instantly: "Hey, are you waiting for me here? Okay, I'll report to the courtyard and apply for as much funding as possible for you!"
Amidst the laughter, Zhang Yiyang finished his report and left Fang Ling's office.
He breathed a sigh of relief: "Sure enough, there must be a limited-edition plug-in for junior! If it weren't for these two language programs, I really don't know how to make a difference.
"But it's all right now, let's hurry up and rehearse. After the holidays, when the college funds come down, go buy some costumes and props, and we'll be all set!"
It was the first time that Zhang Yiyang was looking forward to the college's welcome party.
As a freshman last year, although he also participated in the welcome party and sang on stage, he didn't have any strong expectations at that time, just going through the motions.After all, the programs at last year's gala were quite ordinary, more like routine.
But this year is different. He is full of expectations for these two language programs.
This is the qualitative change that a good program brings to the party.
Zhang Yiyang hummed a ditty and was about to leave when he saw Professor He Cheng walking from the opposite side with a thermos.
Seeing Professor He Cheng, Zhang Yiyang's heart skipped a beat, thinking, how did he come out of the tiger's mouth and into the wolf's den!
Did you not read the almanac when you went out today?A little back!
Professor He Cheng has a reputation for being vicious, and sophomores have suffered a lot from him.
The key is that Zhang Yiyang, as a student cadre, often went to the college and received special attention from Professor He Cheng, which made him miserable.
Now that we bumped into each other, we couldn't pretend we didn't see them, we could only say hello honestly.
Professor He Cheng saw his face darken: "Huh? Xiao Zhang? It's just right, come to my office."
Zhang Yiyang felt a "thump" in his heart, feeling that he was about to suffer.But he had no choice but to obediently follow Professor He Cheng to the office.
"What happened to your homework last time? It was too perfunctory! How did I talk about it in class? A good level design must be rich in content and save resources. It must often make players feel 'suddenly enlightened' design, what level are you making?"
Professor He scolded Zhang Yiyang for his homework.
Zhang Yiyang's previous good mood disappeared in an instant, and he was dejected, like a defeated rooster.
After a while, when all the problems in my level design were sharply commented by Professor He, the storm finally passed.
Professor He Cheng picked up the thermos cup and took a sip of tea: "You, you, have you been busy with the welcome party recently, and you have done all your homework?
"It's not long since the sophomore year, and many classes are at a critical time. It's understandable that you have to be busy with the student union, but you can't put the cart before the horse, right?"
Zhang Yiyang lowered his head: "Yes, Professor He, I will definitely pay attention in the future."
Professor He Cheng waved his hand: "Okay, there is nothing else to do, you can go back. Remember to redo this homework, I will read it after the holiday.
"Hey, wait, there's one more thing."
Just as Zhang Yiyang was about to leave, he turned back and said, "Professor, tell me."
Professor He Cheng asked: "A freshman named Lu Zhixing, do you know him?"
Zhang Yiyang nodded blankly: "Lu Zhixing?... I know you."
He doesn't know many first-year students. After all, he has just started school. How many people can he get in touch with?That is to say, he is familiar with those who participated in the orientation party.Unexpectedly, Professor He Cheng just asked someone he knew very well.
Professor He Cheng nodded: "Then do you know what he is busy with recently?"
When Zhang Yiyang heard it, huh?Xuedi Lu has helped me so much, so I have to say something nice to him in front of the professor?
"I am very familiar with Brother Lu! He has been a great help. You don't know the professor, but he is talented. First, he created an original song for our college's welcome party, and wrote two language classes himself. The script of the show. Also, although I don’t know the specific situation, it seems that he often goes to work outside the school to do some work-study work. He is very diligent and motivated..."
These are basically the truth, and Zhang Yiyang also added fuel and vinegar on this basis, hoping to leave a good impression on Junior Lu in front of the professor.
Although I don't know why Professor He pays so much attention to this junior, but it's okay to say these compliments, right?
However, the more Zhang Yiyang said, the more he felt that something was wrong, because Professor He Cheng's face was obviously gloomy.
"It makes no sense, isn't this nonsense?
"He is such a talented person, why didn't he finish his studies well and spend all his thoughts on the orientation party and part-time job?
"I think you are in a daze. Think about what your main business is? Can you still make your debut as a star in the future?"
Zhang Yiyang felt a "thump" in his heart, it's broken!It's a disservice!
Originally, he wanted to say a few words of kindness to his junior in front of Professor He Cheng, but he didn't expect to flatter him on the horse's leg.
No, I have to help my junior get it back quickly, otherwise what should I do if my junior holds a grudge, wouldn't my limited edition cheat be flying with wings?
"No, no, professor, you misunderstood. In fact, although Xuedi Lu has done a lot of things, he didn't delay at all in making games. This stage play "You in My Eyes" is a game adaptation he is working on. You look."
As Zhang Yiyang said, he quickly took out the script of "You in My Eyes" and handed it over.Although this is a script, not a game design draft, but with Professor He's skills, it can be completely recreated by brain.
Professor He Cheng looked puzzled: ""You in Eyes"? What is that? Isn't the game he is making "Ordinary Life"?"
He took the script and flipped through it quickly.
Only then did I realize that it was a new game?Moreover, the design is already so perfect?
According to the situation of the script, the original design draft should have been completed, and it can even go directly to the production process.
"In such a short time, he designed another game??"
Professor He Cheng was dumbfounded. The two games designed by Lu Zhixing were highly completed and both were masterpieces!
In "Ordinary Life", Professor He Cheng can still find some faults, such as too many resources are consumed, some literary works in it are difficult to handle, etc., but "You in Eyes" can't find faults at all.
As a plot-oriented independent game, its story is complete, its structure is compact, and its resources are very economical. It can be said to be impeccable.
Professor He Cheng lost his language for a while.
Not doing business?
If it is said that Lu Zhixing was busy with other things and delayed the game design, then it is indeed not doing his job properly, but what if he has done a good job in other aspects and also doubled the homework?
That's not doing nothing, that's time management masters!
Professor He Cheng looked at Zhang Yiyang, and his face sank again: "Look at your junior, and then at you! How can he make such a good design while busy with the welcome party and part-time job! How come? You can't even design a level well!
"Learn more from others in the future! Go back and make a double copy of this homework, and make two different levels! Hand it in after the holiday!"
Zhang Yiyang petrified instantly.
……
PS. Recently, because I want to upload PK, I PYed a lot of chapters with the author friends in one breath. After ten days, I will push a book every day. They are all books by old authors. Everyone has their own love.
Today's recommendation: Walking into unscience, an extremely hard-core author and a group of extremely hard-core readers, this is a black science and technology article that can't be understood without any culture
(End of this chapter)
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