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Chapter 161 The Segmentation Limit Is Known With A Slight Shot
At this moment, Lin Bai was not in the mood to pay attention to the prompts on the system panel.

The vision in the field of screenwriting was instantly elevated.

And the idea of ​​'knowledge' in other artistic fields such as music, performance, etc. seems to be blocked.

The field of screenwriting is full of concentration.

A feeling of overlooking from the top arises spontaneously.

The mind is extremely active.

At the same time, Shi Dafu's expression turned serious, and he began to analyze the existing scripts and episodes based on his own level.

"In the past two days, we have edited the original version from 35 episodes to 31 episodes. We only removed some useless branches, but did not actually enrich the character image."

"I thought about these characters holistically, and I felt that many places were too thin."

"for example……"

Shi Dafu just made a brief summary, and began to discard the chaff and save the chaff without any fuss.

When Lin Bai looked at the existing script again, he had a fundamental sense of insight in his vision.

Quickly follow the train of thought.

Then he expressed his own opinion: "In my personal opinion, first of all, the role of right and wrong should be used, and some useless details should be removed."

"for example……"

"We also need to add some changes in character characteristics, such as these..."

While talking, Lin Bai directly picked up the laser pointer and started to draw lines on the projection screen.

"Among them, here, here, and here..."

Shi Dafu was a little dazed, looking at Lin Bai who seemed to be glowing all over in front of him, and finally realized how perverted the genius touted by so many big names in the music circle really is.

He can't achieve this level of concentration alone.

It’s simply enough to accumulate enough. It’s as simple as drinking water, right?

In fact, Shi Dafu didn't feel how much Lin Bai's level had improved, he just felt a sense of simplicity, concentration, and insight.

In general, it can be called back to basics.

This thing is something that can't be met in many artistic creations.

In fact... Lin Bai cheated on the spot, and everyone didn't believe that he had the root cause of cheating.

The big hang of the hall-level experience card is basically based on the basic level of related attributes to elevate the field of vision.

The displayed state is what Shi Dafu saw.

Shi Dafu was alright, but he was just stunned, Wu Ming and the others all opened their mouths wide.

However, even though, Shi Dafu immediately continued: "This part can make the character stand up, but it's too plump..."

Wu Ming also interjected: "On the contrary, more episodes will be added."

Shi Dafu waved his hand: "That's not the point. Deletion is not just deletion."

"It's just that the person who is too plump to be right and wrong, according to the structure of the character spectrum, if you want to make the main characters plump, it will become a foot wrap."

"Do you want to balance the male lead?" Lin Bai pondered for a while, "In this case, subtract these, and start with one knife."

"..."

"In addition to these aspects, there must also be a certain balance in terms of female characters..."

"So we should start from this aspect."

"Dilution of the concept of one man and one woman."

"..."

"Among them..."

Lin Bai's personal output has become more and more, and Shi Dafu is also in full swing.

His level is roughly equivalent to LV8 of the screenwriting attribute, and he is experienced enough, so he is really a guide at the moment.

This is not surprising.

Shi Dafu is much better than Lin Bai in screenwriting.

Lin Bai's advantage is the cultural and artistic treasures of the entire earth, which is impossible for Shi Dafu to possess.

And as Lin Bai's personal output increased, Wu Ming, who was able to insert a few words at the beginning, also shut his mouth, and became a bystander and recorder honestly.

At this time, the situation in the classroom was very different from before.

Lin Bai and Shi Dafu cooperated tacitly, as if they were teaching a large-scale precision surgery demonstration.

But Wu Ming and the others have all become serious students.

The identity is correct.

In less than an hour, Shi Dafu and Lin Bai worked together to complete the localization, simplification and high-quality of the script of "No. [-] in the World".

Revising a finished product can indeed improve the quality in many cases.

What's more, Lin Bai is open, and Shi Dafu is of high level.

And from Lin Bai's current point of view, there was intentional water injection in the No. [-] Under Heaven book written by that fatty Wang Sanri.

So it's not that difficult to get to the water.

"Okay." Shi Dafu took the lead in applauding, "Xiao Lin is really extraordinary, I didn't expect to finish the final draft in one go."

Wu Ming and the others also applauded.

"Brother Lin is really too strong!"

"What a fantastic teaching demonstration!"

"Invincible."

Shi Dafu pressed his hands together, and said with a smile: "First of all, congratulations, the project is over."

"Secondly, congratulations that you are free to take a vacation."

"Finally, wait for the money."

"Up to two days, I can finish the final touches and deliver the manuscript."

Wu Ming and the others cheered: "Cow Cup!"

"..."

At this time, Lin Bai only felt that the sorrows and joys of human beings were not connected, he only felt that it was noisy.

He walked to a corner of the classroom alone, and began to close his eyes and meditate.

With the sudden drop of vision, other artistic "knowledge" thoughts resurfaced, and distracting thoughts abounded in an instant.

It made him upset.

It took a long time before he reorganized his thoughts and adapted to normal thinking.

At the same time, a system panel suddenly appeared in Lin Bai's eyes.

in……

Screenwriter: LV4 (172/200)+
Thanks to Shi Dafu's cooperation, the direct gains from using the experience card this time are outstanding.

Not only that, the indirect harvest is also very good, and it is expected to grow to LV5 naturally in the next few days.

Not only can you make up for the lost attribute points, but you can also earn a little bit more.

.........

As soon as Lin Bai came back to his senses, he looked up and saw Shi Dafu sitting not far away, and the empty classroom.

Facing Lin Bai's gaze, Shi Dafu joked: "It seems that your sense of concentration also needs to consume energy."

"Haha, of course it is necessary." Lin Bai said very honestly, "It is necessary to build a focused space in the brain to eliminate distracting thoughts."

Shi Dafu pursed his lips: "A unique skill."

"It's alright."

"..."

Chatted a little.

Shi Dafu turned serious and said: "Thanks to Lai You's contribution, this script is far better than expected. I think you are also the chief screenwriter."

Before Lin Bai could open his mouth, Shi Dafu explained: "The ranks of screenwriters are the same as those of lyrics and music creation. There is no limit. As long as you are talented enough, you can write any script."

"This is preferential treatment for original art, and it is also the main guiding idea of ​​the management method at the artist level."

"Theoretically, it's okay to go from zero to top stream in one day. For example, if you collect all your songs and release them on the same day, and you have 50 songs, you can become a gold medal songwriter in a dozen hours."

"With the investment of Golden Crown Entertainment, if you get hired as the chief screenwriter, this drama should be enough for you to be promoted to a second-tier screenwriter."

"The ranks of screenwriters are different from the ranks of songwriters. At least only 7 scripts can be promoted to the top rank."

"Speaking of which, at the time, the above actually wanted at least 10 scripts, but everyone felt that the difficulty exceeded the standard, and finally reduced it to 7, that is: at least 4 TV scripts and 3 movie scripts."

Lin Bai thought for a while, and finally accepted Shi Dafu's gift calmly: "Okay, thank you Teacher Shi."

"You're welcome, and you deserve it." Shi Dafu waved his hand casually.

In the end, Shi Dafu said: "After submitting the manuscript to Golden Crown, they should start publicizing it, and it should make your situation better."

Lin Bai just laughed: "It doesn't matter in this respect, I'm used to it."

"After all, Huadu and Huadu are already immortal, and it is impossible to resolve it through the exchange of casual interests. It is impossible to expect such a big company to have no idea of ​​​​fighting back."

Shi Dafu nodded: "That's true."

Immediately got up: "Okay, let's go, get ready for your concert."

"Oh, yes, give me two infield tickets, my wife and my daughter seem to like listening to your bad songs."

Hearing this, Lin Bailian said: "I'll ask my agent to send it to you later, are two enough?"

"Enough." Shi Dafu waved his hand casually, "I don't like to listen to your stuff."

Lin Bai was slightly suspicious of this.

Shi Dafu is nearly 50 years old, and it happens that some songs focus on hitting the age group.

However, it is also possible that screenwriters do not like listening to songs.

Lin Bai left.

Shi Dafu took out his mobile phone and glanced at the electronic ticket stub on it: "Why don't I grab it myself if I want to go?"

…………

Not two days later, on the morning of the 22nd, Lin Bai heard the news from Xiaowei.

Golden Crown Entertainment began to publicize to the outside world, directly clarifying that it will start the joint filming of "No. [-] in the World".

During the promotion, the script "No. [-] in the World" was praised a lot.

It is said that this is the light that smashed the declining era of Chinese martial arts TV dramas.

Because Golden Crown also organized a similar special press conference, relevant discussions on Weibo quickly became a hot topic.

Among them... Netizens' focus of attention has indeed shifted to Lin Bai's head.

Because, Golden Crown Entertainment has released the main information of the script of "No.

In addition to Shi Dafu's name, Lin Bai's name is also displayed on the chief screenwriter column!
In the screenwriter column, the names of Wu Ming and others are arranged in order of contribution.

Therefore, there is another topic on the Weibo hot search list:
#Scriptwriter Lin Bai
It is not surprising that this kind of discussion was triggered and a hot search was formed.

After all, Lin Bai now has more than 750 million fans on Weibo, and he is really going to reach 800 million.

Although, Lin Bai quickly opened Weibo to watch the excitement.

As soon as I entered the comment area of ​​my Weibo, I saw those familiar IDs 'crusting'.

Fatty Meat Sauce: "Dabai, who has thick eyebrows and big eyes, has been running really fast after updating his news every day. He thought he was hiding from other things, but he secretly became a big screenwriter, right?"

"We have millions of fans who don't want to lose face?!"

Nurturing Pai V: "Indeed! This matter is too much, listen to my advice, and we will talk about it next time when we think it over."

No money to pay for the card: "Is there a possibility that Dabai has been secretly working as a screenwriter for a long time, and only recently produced a finished product?"

Sooner or later: "Tsk tsk~ I finally know why Dabai skipped the online concert, so it is so."

Lin Bai, who had just logged in, was stunned for a moment, and then replied: "I knocked?! I was too busy to forget!"

(End of this chapter)