Two-dimensional: The goal is to heal the master

Chapter 161
"Do you want to hear the real evaluation?" After Xia Yu finished reading, he frowned slightly and looked at Wugeng Liuli.

"Think!" Wugeng Liuli swallowed subconsciously when she saw Xia Yu's not-so-good face, and then nodded affirmatively.

"In terms of plot and impression alone, it can reach the level of publishing a book." Xia Yu said this, Wu Geng Liuli's eyes lit up obviously.

In her opinion, it is the limit for a writer who has hit the streets countless times to be able to publish a book.

"Coupled with the relatively novel world view of this novel, even if it is adapted into a comic, there is a certain possibility."

Hearing this sentence, even Kosaka Kirino, who was sitting and playing with the handheld, looked at Wugeng Liuli in surprise. He didn't expect Xia Yu to give this guy such a high evaluation.

Saori was also a little surprised to hear Xia Yu's comments, but she was relatively calm because she felt that Xia Yu had more to say.

"but…"

After Xia Yu said the word "but", Sazhi showed such an expression as expected, while Wugeng Liuli showed a dignified face, as if listening attentively.

"Although you try to write a depressing feeling throughout the article, I don't feel too depressing. The control between daily life and combat is very poor. Sometimes combat is too childish, and daily life is too dull." Xia Yu revealed what he found After the question was uttered, he began to teach a writer who rushed to the street the experience he could see from reading a book written by a great master.

"The feeling of depression does not exist at the beginning, but it has to be brewed continuously. Instead of repeatedly emphasizing this theme, it is better to write a daily life that makes people feel healed, and then change the style and style of play during the battle."

"How do I change my style?" Wu Geng Liuli couldn't wait to ask.

"Writing [-] sentences about how tragic the battle is is not as good as writing a bloody scene. Only a bloody battle can be regarded as a real battle." Xia Yu said this, and suddenly thought of an anime-Yuna Yuki is a brave man

Yuna Yuki wakes up every morning, gets ready to go to school, attend classes, participate in club activities, play with friends, very healing daily stories...

The real situation is that humans angered the gods, and the gods sent the disaster "Vertex", the god tree sheltered humans, and the power of the brave relied on the god tree. When using it at full capacity (similar to the awakening skill), you have to "sacrifice" part of your body, and the protagonist died in a circle , is a depressing story.

The novel written by Black Cat is somewhat similar to this one!How about I provide a little more inspiration and ideas?

With this in mind, Xia Yu recounted the general framework and plot suggestions of the anime "Yuki Yuna is the Hero".

"Senior, are you a devil?" Wu Geng Liuli's eyes widened. Xia Yu provided her with a very good route, but this route was too anti-human.

With so many lovely girls, how did the author have the heart to abuse them?
"I also think this style of writing is too much." Saori sighed, because she couldn't appreciate this style.

Kosaka Kyousuke glanced at Xia Yu strangely, always feeling familiar with this malicious plot?

"The summer fan exhibition has started, please line up and enter the venue in an orderly manner." The person in charge said with a microphone, and the people who heard the news were shocked and quickly lined up to enter the venue.

"Running in the arena is dangerous, please don't run!" The broadcast sounded, and Xia Yu also formally looked at the venue.

There are many fan exhibition booths in the venue, most of them sell fan books created by themselves, and some sell related peripherals.

But the most attractive thing is the cosplay in the fan exhibition.

"Wow! This white silk looks so white, and the character of the cosplay is also very cute, hiss!"

"Hei Si Le Rou, goji berry is hard to save, I can give [-] points to this leg!"

"Miss, can you take a photo? What!? Are you a man? No! I'm even more excited! Please take a photo, hey hey!"

Xia Yu wandered around the venue very familiarly, and occasionally commented on cos in a low voice, which made the other four stunned.

"Senior? Don't you want to go to the booth at the fan exhibition?" Wu Geng Liuli asked with a strange expression.

"What's so interesting about the booth?" Xia Yu asked back.

"If you don't come to visit the booth, then what are you doing here?" Although it was the first time for Kosaka Kirino to visit a doujin exhibition, she was quite clear about the main goal of visiting the doujin exhibition.

"Look at the cosplay!" Xia Yu said confidently.

"Won't you watch cosplay in another place?"

"Other places? Will you cosplay at home or at school?"

"This..." Kirino Kosaka was speechless when he heard Xia Yu's words, and then shook his head quickly, "I definitely won't! It would be too shameful for any normal person to play cosplay at home or school!"

"That's it. There are a lot of cosplay online, but this is the first time I've seen a living cosplay in the real world. Shouldn't this be a good look?"

"Should..." Kirino Kosaka was successfully brainwashed by Xia Yu, and she nodded her head in a daze and confusion.

"Senior, are you really just looking at the cosplay?" Wu Geng Liuli looked at Xia Yu suspiciously, always feeling that her senior was not studying whether the cosplay looks good or not when she watched it so seriously.

Xia Yu tapped Wugeng Liuli's head lightly, "Black Cat, you have to know one thing, knowing too much is not good for you."

"Oh~" Wugeng Liuli nodded, seeing that Xia Yu was not going to explain, and she didn't continue to pester her, recalling what Xia Yu said just now in her mind.

Hei Si Le meat, wolfberry is hard to save...

Senior is black silk control?

Note this down, it may be useful in the future.

The strange knowledge in Wugeng Liuli's mind has increased, but she still doesn't know enough about men.

Black silk and white silk are not important, the most important thing is what is in front of you, and you think it looks good.

"Xiao Tongtong, have you read the Melulu fanbook I gave you?"

"Looked."

"Is there any painter you like?"

"Yes! I like the one who draws Meruru, the one who draws tentacles, and the one who draws illustrations!" Kosaka Kirino couldn't help but hear Saori talk about his favorite anime. It's a pity that this guy can't even name the artist he likes.

Unlike Xia Yu, who would remember the author's name carefully even if he read the pornographic books.

"Actually, I know all these teachers. I want to go to them and say hello. Are you interested in going together?"

"You can go if you want me, as long as you ask me!" Kosaka Kirino showed a look of wanting to go, but this look quickly disappeared, and he raised his head proudly and squinted at Saori.

So, this old-fashioned arrogance has already retreated from the environment...

Seeing this scene, Xia Yu couldn't help complaining in his head, but Saori had obviously adapted to Kosaka Kirino's arrogant nature, not only was he not angry, but he also smiled and invited the other party to give him a face.

"Xia Yu and I will take a turn here." Kyosuke Kosaka glanced at his sister and Saori, and then decisively chose his friend Xia Yu.

Going to doujinshi or something, if you don’t follow friends of the same sex, you always feel that you can’t let go.

"Kyosuke-kun, when I came to the doujinshi the day before yesterday, I saw a little pornographic character who was somewhat similar to you~ Why don't you go and have a look?" Saori spoke again, and Kyosuke Takasaka frowned instantly.

"Where is it? Take me to see it!"

"Taijun, please~" Saori said while giving a thumbs up to Xia Yu and Wugeng Liuli. If the two succeed in getting together, then she will appoint the first skill!

(End of this chapter)