The beautiful girl who rejects me will regret it

Chapter 26 Makoto Fukuzawa who loves books like his life

As dusk approached, there were still only three voices in the literary club room.

The sound of drinking water, the sound of flipping through books, and the sound of typing on the keyboard.

It is now mid-April, and the end of spring is coming. Occasionally, a cool breeze blows into the room, but it does not make people feel cold, but rather comfortable.

Xiyuanji Akino repeatedly revised his [-]-word manuscript three or four times, and finally pressed the save button.

This is the version he completely overturned the three versions he wrote last night and re-wrote them.

He found that every time he read a book, or even every hour, he would have new ideas and think of new sentences that were more suitable for the story.

But the overall story is not off track, it's just good or bad, and he doesn't know how to describe it.

However, no matter how bad it is, this is also the story of your name. The plot of this story alone, Akino Xiyuanji thinks it can be popular, but he still hopes to write better as much as possible, so that this excellent work can be published here It is widely circulated in the world and praised by others, so it can be regarded as worthy of the author of the previous life.

"It's finished." Only then did Akino Xiyuanji notice that there was a glass of water in his hand. He took a sip and thanked Himekawa Mao.

Himekawa Mao shook his head lightly, staring at the notebook with bright eyes.

"Makoto, I want to watch it too."

"Then let's go together."

The content of [-] words, starting from the confused dream, some small fragments, and the inexplicable lines between the hero and the heroine, it can be said that the opening chapter is not very catchy.

But this part only wrote less than [-] words, and it quickly got to the point.

The body exchange of male and female protagonists.

The first scene is from the perspective of the hero Taki.

Here Xiyuanji Akino was very impressed, so some of the reactions to the hero's possession of the strange girl's body were also written in great detail, and some psychological activities were also emphatically portrayed.

In the end, the content of these [-] words was probably fixed at the point where the heroine also found herself swapping bodies.

Frankly speaking, you can't really see much just by reading the opening chapter. At present, you can see a general outline of the story and the following plot contradictions.

That is, the chaotic dream at the beginning, those lines, and why the body swap?

Also, the comet mentioned in the first act hit the earth, is it also a foreshadowing?
As a senior who also makes money from light novels, Makoto has also written many best-selling works, so she thinks she is qualified to give advice to Akino Xiyuanji.

But at present, it seems that Akino Xiyuanji is really talented. The story just throws out four suspense at the beginning, attracting readers to guess, and it still uses the novel opening method of body exchange.

Such an opening chapter can already be said to be much better than the many Taozi articles currently on the market where the head can be seen at a glance.

But... why does it feel like this story is not long?

"Interesting! Very interesting, Xienji-kun!!" Himekawa Mao said with a ruddy complexion.She rarely reads light novels, and this is not a new routine of body swapping, which is naturally her first encounter.

Although, it is described that the male protagonist chooses to grab the female protagonist at the first time possessed... It makes her feel that it is not very good, but after thinking about it carefully, it is precisely this way that has a dramatic effect, and it will be interesting, and the follow-up will not be so good. I care about it.

Looking down all the way, everything is quite smooth, and several foreshadowings are very obvious, which makes people look forward to the next development.

"Thank you."

However, Xiyuanji Akino did not relax, after all Fukuzawa Makoto hadn't spoken yet.

After a while, Fukuzawa Makoto read the opening chapter again and asked, "Did you list all the outlines from the beginning to the end of this novel, right?"

"Yes."

"Sure enough... Then I won't talk about the issues that should be paid attention to in the development of the storyline. You have already understood enough."

"Then let's talk about Ni's style of writing, your style of writing... Actually, from the perspective of writing light novels, it is completely sufficient, and there is no problem at all."

"But I always feel that you seem to be deliberately restricting yourself. You seem to write articles according to a formula. First, describe the scene, then cut into the dialogue, and then move on to the action. In fact, you can be more flexible. You can start directly with the dialogue, and those scene descriptions can be included in the second paragraph of the psychological description of the protagonist after waking up."

"You don't have to write things too rigidly. Sometimes some bright spots that are enough to make people remember come from some whims."

"Following the rules will only ruin the spirituality of your novel."

After listening to it, Akino Xiyuanji smiled wryly, "But I always feel that I don't have confidence, and I'm a little afraid that my writing will destroy the most beautiful picture of this story. This is what worries me the most."

"Why do you put so much pressure on yourself?" Makoto Fukuzawa frowned and said, "Mr. Xiyuanji, your mentality is wrong. Even if I admit that your story is indeed new and interesting enough, you can't think about it. One step at a time? It’s normal for the first work to have problems of one kind or another, but as creators, we can’t stop writing because we can’t be perfect.”

"This is a dead end, and there is no so-called perfect in this world, there will always be shortcomings."

"Yes, Xiyuanji-kun, you should be more confident and write boldly." Himekawa Mao also encouraged.

"I see." Xiyuanji Akino replied seriously after listening to their sincere suggestions.

"There are still... some questions. Although you already have a complete story and a writing style that matches, Mr. Xiyuanji, have you studied the market, or have you thought about why some novels can sell well?" Fukuzawa Makoto lightly He lightly closed the laptop and asked.

"Because it captures the needs of readers... and the story itself is interesting enough?"

"Well, that's right, but there is one more key point."

"You have to clarify the positioning of the novel you write. For example, mystery novels are written for mystery fans, so the text inside should not be gorgeous, but simple and concise."

"As for some romance novels, your plot can be bad, but the protagonist must be vivid and vivid, and the protagonist must also resonate with the majority of people. Romance novels, of course, must be more beautiful and gorgeous."

"There is also serious literature. The reason why ordinary people can't read serious literature is because it is written on purpose. Some entanglements, some deep-seated discussions about human nature, these are all things that must be written in literary works, so The plot has to be heavy, not lighthearted."

"Then light novels, what is the task of light novels?"

"It's very simple. It is to give readers an outlet for their emotions, so that readers feel comfortable after reading and pass the time. This is the task of light novels."

"Then, according to this positioning, you can actually make some fine-tuning in terms of the writing and the overall plot of your novel."

"You have to think about which plot and which part of the lines can best express emotions, so that readers can empathize with what you write. This is very important."

"If you do this, then your novel will definitely sell well. On the contrary, even if it is a good story, it may be difficult to be discovered, and eventually the pearl will be dusted."

After listening to Fukuzawa Makoto's words, Xiyuanji Akino felt that he could not find his way, and all his confused thoughts disappeared.

These are excellent speeches!
Sure enough, joining the literary club is a very correct choice!

"I see, thank you for your advice." Xiyuanji Akino thanked Makoto Fukuzawa very sincerely.

It was the first time for Makoto Fukuzawa to explain this to others as a teacher. She blushed slightly, "No need to do this. After all, you are a member of our club. This is a must-have benefit for joining the club."

"Well, if you finish the manuscript... remember to show it to me as soon as possible..."

"If there is anything bad, I will continue to give you advice."

"Also, do you need me to recommend an editor for you? If necessary... I can also introduce you."

Hearing this, Xiyuanji Akino felt blushed, and asked others to help him with everything, isn't that a bit...

"You don't have to feel embarrassed, I'm just a recommendation, and I can't guarantee that your novel will be published or sold."

"Everything is determined by the quality of the novel itself. If the quality is high enough, it will be popular wherever it is placed." Fukuzawa Makoto said lightly.

Xiyuan Temple Akino heard the words, paused for a moment, "Then I'll submit this one myself, thank you Fukuzawa-san."

"Well, it doesn't matter."

"It's getting late, let's end today's club activities."

"Okay, see you tomorrow then."

"See you tomorrow."

"Greetings, Xiyuanji-kun~"

After Xiyuanji Akino left the club, Fukuzawa Makoto's tense breath just now dissipated in an instant.

She opened the notebook in front of her, and read carefully the opening chapter written by Akino Xiyuanji again.

Looking at it, her two fair legs began to swing involuntarily.

The girl was very happy, and what made her really happy was the fact that she was mentoring Akino Saienji.

She is about to witness the birth of a beautiful novel.

"I really want to urge him to write it quickly...but...hey...this opening chapter is really well written...these few foreshadowings are also..."

"I really want to see the progress of the story, I really want to watch it..." Fukuzawa Makoto lay on the table, whispering softly, and the brilliance in her eyes grew more and more.

Seeing Fukuzawa Makoto's cute appearance, Himekawa Mao couldn't help pinching her face, "Don't worry Makoto, I think Xiyuanji-kun is still very hardworking, he probably can write it in a week." ?”

"One week...it's a long time..." Makoto Fukuzawa felt itchy in his heart, and felt uncomfortable if he couldn't read the full text for a day!

"You really love books like your life..." Himekawa Mao smiled lightly.

(End of this chapter)