Knights of the Wasteland Fortress

Chapter 156 Closing Speech
It's over without saying anything.

Because it's not really the end.

It can only be said to be an open ending, although the follow-up part has already been designed and outlined.

But the problem is also serious.

Basically, I won’t say that my grades are bad, so I can’t write such words, because in my opinion, the poor grades are because I have written problems, not because readers don’t subscribe, follow up, or vote. reward or something.

So for this closing speech, I will write a summary of the lessons, and I will explain it to those friends who are curious about why the book ends.

I won’t talk about boasting and self-abuse. When it came to the last paragraph, I basically explained everything about the world view as much as possible. The last climax battle that was originally designed was also due to progress and foreshadowing. Pull up, so sorry for readers who had a bad experience.

However, based on this lesson, I also seriously felt where the problem was.

To put it simply, just like the "path dependency" mentioned in the last chapter, the biggest problem with hacking this book is "no path dependency".

Yep, this is something I hadn't noticed before.

It’s not that there have been similar situations in previous books, but usually after writing tens of thousands of words and 10,000+ words at the beginning, I couldn’t continue writing. It’s just that I didn’t understand what was going on at the time, and I just felt that I was not capable enough.

But this book is different. When writing this book, I have already written some books, and I have a relatively clear understanding of my ability. Even the first 20 words of the novel have used some of the previous successes. Experience, in a short period of time, made the grades better.

But this does not conceal the biggest problem with this book, which is "no routine".

In other words, apart from constructing the world view with all my heart, I didn't consider what kind of story this book should be, farming?Bing attack?adventure?Mecha?Slapping people in the face?I started creating these questions without thinking about them.

The previous stories are very simple, so I don’t need to think clearly, and I can write them down. For example, in the previous underground city, I just need to honestly write about going to the underground city for adventure. The core of the story is fighting and exploring. Plus encounters with teammates.

But this book is different.

The setting of this book is so complicated that it is feasible to write it from any angle, and I also tried to write all these feasible perspectives (because according to previous experience, it is feasible to do so ).

However, the result turned out to be a mess, with no priorities. Even when I finally wrote about mech warfare, it was difficult for me to expand the relevant content because there was no foreshadowing.

The combination of soldier strikes, external equipment, and main equipment, brain terror is also not good.

It is entirely relying on the idea of ​​"manipulating the body of the gods to fight", which pulls some of the highlights in the middle.

However, the content after the battle of manipulating the body of the gods was not well presented.

Especially after the end of the Tianhuo War, I really found that I didn’t know what to write. This situation also appeared after the previous climaxes.

To put it simply, I focused on "the unfolding of the story" and missed the "circulation of routines".

Recently, when I was confused, I carefully scanned some books on the ranking list, and found that the biggest gap is here.

Many excellent works have done a good job of "story cycle".

They are basically adding something to the "routine", and each time it is a cycle of simple things such as "forensic doctors to identify corpses" or "pretending to be aggressive and making money".

But what Jiatu did was too chaotic. To put it in a bad way, it was too high-spirited, with only a purpose, and no step-by-step process.

In the end, it became a high-speed rampage where the author knew where the direction was.

After this situation made me realize, I felt very sorry and ashamed.

It's just that at the end of the story, even if you know the mistake, it's impossible to reverse it, because you can't re-establish the cycle in the second half of the story.

So I can only bite the bullet and start writing on the premise that there is no loop, and finish the last part of the mecha battle.

So that's what I ended up with, and I hope readers who feel they've been ripped off, or who are deeply confused as to why this book is what it is, will be satisfied with it.

As for the new book, it should be coming soon, after all, I don't plan to write such complicated works anymore.

The new book should be set in the city, and I haven't considered whether to add surreal elements, but it should be a rebirth novel.

It will be a relatively simple routine cycle, such as "elimination of spirits" or "love".

If it is fast, it can come out within half a month, because today's chapter is finished, and the day after tomorrow at the latest, I will try to write the beginning.

After finishing this book, I have gained a certain amount of self-confidence, because I have never "finished" a work. Although this time it was "cut in half", in my opinion, it can be regarded as the first book. I can be regarded as a "finished" work.

Because until the last chapter, I can clearly know where my ending is, which is different from those previous works where I thought about the ending while writing the process, and in the end, the more I wrote, the more I wrote, the more confused I had to be directly eunuch. Same.

With these experiences and self-confidence, I can focus my energy and attention on "routines" and "plots". I don't have to worry about what the next plot should be like in the past few years while writing. Where does it unfold and end.

I dare not say that the next book will still meet the tastes of every friend, but I will only try my best to present the most essential. The author you see is just such a person, who is neither practical nor honest. He will suppress speech and criticize, and even the eunuch has written many books, and there is no guarantee that the next book will be finished.

But I at least guarantee that the next book will try to write an ending like this one, and try to write it longer than this one.

So, see you in the next book!
(End of this chapter)