The bard wanders into the entertainment circle

Chapter 204 Modifying the Script
What Zhang Jizhong and the others were looking at now was Wang Yuyan's appearance. Seeing Chen Shuo opening his mouth and coming, Liu Yifei couldn't help but smile.

Seeing her, Chen Shuo pointed at her and said, "It's not right for you to smile like this, raise your hand to cover it up a little bit.

Yes, the index finger and thumb are stretched out naturally, and then the middle finger, ring finger and little finger are hooked to the sleeves, and while raising the hand, slightly lower the head, and lower the eyelids first and then lift. "

After hearing this, Liu Yifei couldn't help covering her mouth with a smile, and subconsciously followed his instructions.

In an instant, the image of a classic woman who couldn't help but smile with lowered brows and covered her face with pink sleeves was reflected in the mirror.

"Good!" Zhang Jizhong, Zhou Xiaowen and others couldn't help but praise after seeing it: "That's the feeling."

Pointing to the stylist and makeup artist at the side, she said, "Remember the feeling just now, Wang Yuyan's makeup and hair follow this feeling."

"Understood, Director Zhang."

Seeing this, Zhang Jizhong and Zhou Xiaowen explained a few more words, and asked Chen Shuo, "How is your script? Tomorrow it's your turn to try on costumes."

Chen Shuo said: "I read it twice, but I feel that there is something I don't understand. I just want to ask the two of you for advice."

Over there, Jiang Tong had already told Zhou Xiaowen his thoughts. Zhou Xiaowen nodded and said to Zhang Jizhong and Chen Shuo, "Director Zhang, Chen Shuo, let's sit aside."

"it is good."

Chen Shuo waved to Liu Yifei, who was still putting on makeup, and followed the three of them to a resting place beside them to sit down.

Zhou Xiaowen said: "Just now you said that you have some doubts about the script, where are they?"

"At the very beginning, when Duan Yu appeared in the scene, I was a little confused...Secondly, the latter part..."

Chen Shuo also bluntly told out several scenes that did not fit Duan Yu's personality that had been sorted out in the past two days.

Together with his own understanding of Duan Yu, why he felt that these scenes were unreasonable, etc., he also talked about it.

This time he was not as tactful as when he was talking to Jiang Tong, and he made no secret of his intention to modify some deficiencies in the script.

Now he has filmed six or seven roles back and forth, and he has been in the crew for a long time, and he is well aware of some gossip.

There is a saying: The king of hell is easy to provoke, but the little ghost is difficult to deal with.

Some ideas may not be a problem for people like Zhang Jizhong and Zhou Xiaowen, and they will even listen to your ideas carefully and think about their rationality.

But like those middle-level people who are responsible for specific affairs, they may think that you are too busy and directly veto it.

It's not that Jiang Tong is such a person, but he knows that there is no need to expose his thoughts prematurely to arouse people's resentment, and then add hardships to what he wants to do.

After Zhang Jizhong and the two listened to Chen Shuo's thoughts, they also began to look at his script and think about the information he compiled.

In the notebook, there is not only Chen Shuo's understanding of Duan Yu, but also his understanding of each scene.

What is the reason for those scenes in the script that he thinks are unreasonable?
Under each question, there is also a list of some information, good aspects, bad aspects, and his opinion on how to improve.

These are all marked one, two, three, four and listed out in an orderly manner.

After reading these things, they were convinced that what Chen Shuo said was not empty talk, let alone random changes made in order to increase his role in the scene.

Zhang Jizhong put down the notebook in his hand, and said: "It's normal to have problems, after all, we have made some changes to the original when we wrote the script, and it is inevitable that there are deficiencies.

The questions you raised are indeed the problem, but I can't give a perfect answer all of a sudden. "

He looked at Zhou Xiaowen and Jiang Tong and said, "How about this, Xiaowen, talk to the screenwriter team and ask them to come up with someone to do the total.

Just because of the previous incidents, there was no script reading for the first few episodes.

Jiang Tong, find another group of people and read the script with Chen Shuo and the others in the past two days to see if there is anything unreasonable.

The places that can be changed can be changed directly, and the places that are not easy to be changed should be checked for reasons.
After all, it is impossible for such a long novel to be condensed into a script of 40 episodes to be 100% reasonable. "

"Okay, I'll talk to the screenwriter team later." Zhou Xiaowen nodded.

"Okay, Director Zhang." Jiang Tong also nodded in agreement.

Chen Shuo also said: "Then director Zhang, director Zhou, and director Jiang will be troublesome."

Zhang Jizhong waved his hand and said: "It's nothing, you can take the role of Duan Yu seriously, which is exactly what we expected.

If you can perform a unique Duan Yu, these are nothing. "

Whether to modify the script or not also depends on the timing.

When the crew has officially started filming and all departments are running at high speed, you propose to revise the script.

For the crew, good or bad, it's all about trouble.

However, before the filming of the script starts, as long as they don't maliciously add roles for themselves and destroy the structure of the script, everyone is happy to see it succeed.

The stage of script reading is to prepare for better polishing of the script.

The reason why Jiang Tong didn't let him read the script directly and then revise it was also because he couldn't figure out his situation, so he pushed the matter to Zhang Jizhong and Zhou Xiaowen.

Zhou Xiaowen called the screenwriter team, and after clarifying the situation, he continued to watch Liu Yifei and others' looks with Zhang Jizhong.

And Chen Shuo greeted Liu Xiaoli, Liu Yifei, and Shu Chang, and then left with Jiang Tong.

He wanted to revise the scene, which involved more than just script and line revision.

In addition to the people sent by the screenwriter team, the director team, logistics team, actor team, etc. all need people to participate.

The script has been changed, but it still has to be implemented after all. How to shoot, how to prepare, how to cooperate with the performance, these all need to be considered.

It is impossible to change the script and then fail to shoot due to various reasons, so that not only did the work be useless, but also disrupted the previous plan and delayed the time.

After gathering all the people, Jiang Tong took everyone to find a small conference room and began to discuss how to modify the plot.

The main force of the discussion was Chen Shuo and the screenwriter. One of them discovered the problem and the other solved it.

The rest of Jiang Tong and others are mainly as supplements, giving opinions on whether the revised plot of the two can be implemented.

Duan Yu's script is so thick that it would take several hours to even read it, let alone such an in-depth discussion.

It wasn't until nine o'clock in the evening, seeing that everyone was hungry, that Jiang Tong ended the discussion.

Fortunately, although Chen Shuo has opinions, he does not have opinions on all the scenes.

After more than half a day, the effect was remarkable, and everyone had already discussed several of the more important scenes he proposed.

After everyone had dinner and supper together, they went back to their rooms to rest.

(End of this chapter)