mage's dating rules

Chapter 71
In fact, those who follow my Bilibili account Shenwu Liuliu should know that the birth of this book was a complete accident.

After finishing the ending of the last book, I was going to enjoy playing "Tears of the Kingdom" until August, then enjoy playing Baldur's Gate 3 until September, and finally enjoy playing "Starry Sky".

By the way, the last book "Space Flight Manual" seems to have only 60 words, but in fact, it has already written all the foreshadowing that can be written and received. It is a complete farsighted fairy tale.

Back to this book.In fact, I will write this book, because the night I finished the last book, I especially wanted to find a traditional one, sword and magic, preferably like "Dragonlance Chronicle" and "Dragonlance Legend" translated by Zhu Xueheng Take a look at the book.

As a result, after looking at it, I still had to turn to "The Sword of Amber" in the end.

But I have seen the Amber Sword too many times. Where to find the ring and what monsters to fight at the beginning, I may be more familiar with the protagonist Brando.The same situation also happened in old books such as South's "Mage Story" and Milky Bear's "Ghost" (also known as "Marry a Sister as a Wife").

Then the new works, there are systems that can send tasks everywhere, the cheats are so strong that you can get the power of Balabala when you hang up and sign in.It’s not that I look down on these, I know that there are some well-written ones, but it’s not realistic for a person who is rushing to find a copy of “Legend of Dragonlance” to read them.

So that day, the more I watched, the more angry I became, and then I threw my phone away in a fit of anger, got up from the bed and wrote by myself.

It took me four and 10 minutes to paint Chapter 1 of this book, and then I threw it to the editor.

Among the four 10 minutes, two 10 minutes were spent on checking the monster illustration book and selecting modules.

When I wrote Chapter 1, I didn't know that there were so many roles behind the court mage who mentioned it. At that time, I just wanted to hear that the archmage only thought of his teacher through the protagonist, highlighting the awesomeness of his teacher.

At this time, I didn't even know that the Kuusanian Empire was an electorate country like Shinra.

I just want to write an introductory paragraph that is familiar to people who run a group - this is a term, which refers to when the DM (the host in the script killing) makes up a story when running a group, and concentrates the characters of the players together.

So, in the tavern, a mage with an extraordinary background took on a mission to meet his client and teammates.

It's such a simple beginning, and it's painted out all at once.

Of course, because I was the one who wrote the book, a silver-haired girl appeared in Chapter 1. I originally wanted to put on braids and glasses, but the princess's intelligence didn't seem to match this image.So wait until later.

After writing this beginning, I continued to read the old book, and fell asleep while watching it.

Unexpectedly, when I woke up, the beginning passed.

In fact, after waking up, I don’t want to write any more. What’s the matter? Tears of the Kingdom will come out soon. Who will open the book at this time, idiot?

However, the editor had already passed the draft, and desperately urged me to write a few more chapters, so there was no way, and this story was born.

In fact, looking back now, you will find many traces of changing the direction of the story in the middle.I don't really have an outline.The princess's second brother, Bruce, was a villain at the beginning, so I shaped it as a villain.

At the beginning, I really planned to write about Seizing the Wife.

Mark became an insider, which also started in Chapter 5. He was a good person at the beginning.After Mark became the inner ghost, I originally planned that he was the nail planted by Tang. I still thought so until I wrote the underground chapter. In the end, I thought, it seems that there is a lack of a BOSS battle, so it’s you. mark.

This kind of temporary brainstorming idea will definitely have loopholes.So I can only use a few cursory words to bring Mark's background check and so on.

Vulnerabilities belong to loopholes, the effect is good!

There is also a loophole, which is to use the scroll to resurrect Erwin. This is when I wrote that Bruce promised to use the resurrection scroll to exchange the dragon-shaped magic with the protagonist, and I suddenly remembered whether it is possible to resurrect Erwin to ask for information.After discovering this, I hurriedly applied a bunch of patches.

Fortunately, in order to have fun playing Kingdom Tears, this time I suppressed the urge to post after finishing writing, this time I have saved the manuscript!In the past, I would not make major changes to the chapters that have been released. I could only make mistakes and make mistakes.

This time it is really because there are a lot of manuscripts saved for the tears of the kingdom, so I can go back and modify them.Personally, I am very grateful to Nintendo.In the future, in order to be able to enjoy the other games I am looking forward to when they come out, I decided to keep the manuscript.

In this way, if you find that the writing is poor, you can go back and correct it.

Back to Erwin.

Originally, this resurrection scroll was intended to be used by the protagonist's team as a cover. I was thinking that when the protagonist tore the scroll to resurrect the princess in the future, let him understand the true meaning of love.

It's a pity that there is currently no way for the protagonist to understand the true meaning of love.

There is also the photo frame. My original idea was that this photo frame is the orphanage where Erwin was a child. The protagonist went to the orphanage, learned how he left the orphanage, and followed his path to finally find the church.

It was when I was writing about the torture of the revived Irwin that I had a sudden thought: Hey, it seems that it can be more straightforward. The orphanage is a false memory produced by the ban, and it is actually the headquarters of the religious order!

I'm leaving this idea here now, and when I actually go to the headquarters of the cult, you can come back and compare what good ideas I have.

For me, writing a book this time is so cool, I can write wherever I think of, because I have saved manuscripts, and I can go back and put in the foreshadowing.

There are too many temporary changes like this, like the emperor, who was originally a very pure villain, it would be over if he was killed, but in the end he was given a trial, and there was also a "Rainy Season in Castame" .

This "Blood Banquet" is also a temporary idea, the main reason is that Crusader Kings 3 has updated the DLC, which includes Scarlet Wedding and Scarlet Banquet.

The final trial of the king was originally not planned, but it was inserted temporarily when writing it.

Of course, not every inspiration can be saved to the end. For example, when I wrote about the untouchables being escorted to the execution ground, I didn’t know why my brain had a twitch. I wrote him singing “Beat You with a Steel Whip” and released it on a regular basis. up.Looking back later, what is this, I deleted it.

It has been sent out before it is released, and it is estimated that it is already being scolded.

All in all, this volume can be finished, and there is such a degree of completion, it is really the blessing of the inspiration-and the credit of "Tears of the Kingdom" for forcing me to save the manuscript.Thank you, Link, thank you, Nintendo.

As for those cold humor jokes, well, it's mainly because I'm a very humorous person.All my works basically have this element.

After writing this, I looked back and found that it was all about it.People's postscripts are all kinds of high-level things, and my postscript looks like a record of brain teasers.

But there is no way, what creative ideas and intentions people talk about, that is what they have.I didn't, I really wrote it where I thought of it, really scribbled.

Such a scribbled thing, did not expect to produce any results.And you see, I've written Western fantasy, and this category couldn't be cooler.

Writing western fantasy at the starting point, if you want to get popular, you have to go to the game category and follow the path of amber flow.

But I don't want those digital and systematic things.

So you can see the results now. I don’t know how I got into Sanjiang. The follow-up reading of this book is very bad, and it’s the kind of bad that no matter how much you add to your collection, you just don’t add follow-up reading.

Who will write Western Fantasy if they come up with the results?

The edited draft of this book was very straightforward at the time, and I didn’t mention any revisions. I held a glimmer of hope and asked, “Is this the best book?”

The editor laughed: "You've already written about DND, so I don't need to give you advice. If I really want to give advice, I will suggest that you don't write about this topic."

But I wrote it anyway.

My original intention was to write a serious Western fantasy like "Dragonlance Chronicle" and "Dragonlance Legend". Of course, because of personal preference, there may be a little Japanese style like "Rhodo Island War" Fantasy element.

So far, this goal has been achieved fairly well.

The first volume has now ended in a way that I am quite satisfied with. The protagonist team went down the river, preparing to pursue the clues that were hard-won.The cat people set off in the opposite direction to find their own tribe.

The catman's departure is to pave the way for the elf archers to join in the future. It's a fantasy story. Why is there no elf archers?However, her leaving the team has also become a nutrient for the growth of the protagonist, but this idiot immediately began to do quantitative analysis.

My idea for the protagonist team is this: everyone has their own irreplaceability, so there cannot be repeated occupations.

And try to be as diverse as possible.So you can see that cat people and werewolves have some overlap. They are both characters with animal ears, and one is enough.In the future, there will only be one Spirit Absorber or Undini.

I wanted everyone to have enough distinctive traits, so Marika gave up the possibility of becoming a drow ranger, and there was no animal companion, Haifa.Maybe in some plots in the future, Mr. Cui will be used as a rescuer to rescue him. I don’t know, after all, there is no outline.

Elf I originally planned to let Legolas appear on the stage as it is, but according to the rules of the starting point, with the addition of the original characters of the Lord of the Rings, this book will be defined as a fan of the Lord of the Rings.So you will probably see an elf sister who is as sassy as Legolas.

Then the dwarf bard, the halfling—the halfling didn't think about anything, after all, there was already a rogue, so there was no need to add a snitch.

Of course, there are paladins, how can a fantasy story be without paladins?It's also a pleasure to see how the paladin is tricked into being on the same team as the drow.Although I haven't figured out how to fool you yet.

In the future, it will probably follow the rhythm of adding a new character to a volume.

However, I don't have an outline, and I may mess around.

There is also a farming element.

In fact, I personally like the kingdom system in "King of the King". Although it is poorly done, I have a feeling that I have really become the king of a country in a fantasy world.

I also like the fortress system in "Pillars of Eternity".

But this book, in general, is an adventure story, and the main character is on the move the whole time, from one place to another.So this farming may be realized by operating a ship or an airship or something.

I don't know exactly how to add it, maybe I will add it tomorrow.

As for the next plan of this book, that’s all for now. I really don’t have an outline, and I don’t know what to talk about.

Oh, by the way, there are still some certain things, such as the protagonist will get ogre power gloves behind, or only recognize him, why add this, one is Li Rongdao's "Dragon Race" (not Jiangnan) when I was in junior high school that), so kudos.

Second, mage, the ultimate dream of a mage is to go up to melee. The protagonist can't perform Tansen Transfiguration for the time being, so give him ogre power gloves and let him chop with a two-handed sword.

Let me tell you the truth, it is easy for me to go astray in this kind of brainstorming creation, and I will not be able to pull it back in the future, and there is also the possibility of eunuchs.

That's why I put it in this position.

Except for the clues about the church, I didn't leave any so-called "buckles" at all. For every reader, the first volume is a relatively complete story, and there should be nothing to worry about.

So if you are worried about eunuchs or something, you don’t need to continue watching, or wait until I finish and read the evaluation before deciding whether to watch it or not.

If you are still willing to continue watching, then today (June 2023, 6) at 8:[-] pm, welcome back, and our journey continues.

In order to let everyone quickly enter the plot of the second volume, at [-]:[-] tonight, I will prepare ten updates, which will include the first small climax of the second volume.

After that, as usual, it is eight in the morning and eight in the evening. There are too many games this year. For example, on July 7, there will be "Jagged Alliance 14" that I have been looking forward to for a long time.

I want to play for a few days without sleeping and eating each one, so I have to save the manuscript.My output is about three chapters a day, saving one chapter and posting two chapters will free up game time.

Of course, sometimes there are particularly fascinating plots left, I will post an extra chapter as appropriate, so as not to let you fall asleep with worries.

that's it.

(End of this chapter)