Chinese students at Hogwarts.

122. Revised and improved 1 chapter

Modified and improved the details

I'm really sorry, but when I wrote Chapter 28 Snape's emotional foreshadowing, I felt very smooth and there was no problem.

But when I just re-read it, I felt something was wrong, a bit abrupt.

After pondering for a while, I still perfected the details and paved the way.

It makes me uncomfortable to read it myself, let alone readers.

It has been modified now, please refresh it again for those who have already subscribed, if it still feels a bit awkward, I will continue to modify it and try to write it well.

By the way, all the single chapters have been published, and it's the end of the month! !Don't hide your tickets, everyone, I will show you a split, and ask for a monthly ticket by the way.
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