Martial Arts: The First Genius Doctor in Jianghu

Chapter 76 Summary Paragraph

This episode is finally finished, and I think it should be summarized.

Some things have already been explained in the related article at the top, so I won’t repeat them here. Of course, I know that there must be some people who think this is just right and wrong, and I can even see this kind of person in the comments from time to time.

But in fact, I don't really care about it, it's nothing more than banning and deleting.

In fact, I don’t think it’s something that can’t be put on the table when some people lose their authority. I’m not a big name, so even if you call me a big name, you must have no reason to call me a big name, right?

I am not some internet beggar, nor am I writing this book to create a "commodity" to please a specific group of consumers.

I keep emphasizing that I only write books because I want to write a story.

I used to like American comics very much, so I wrote that Marvel, but because of all the messy things in American comics, I didn't like it anymore, so I couldn't write any more.

As for the Onmyoji book, I can unabashedly admit that it was a very failed creation, because I just envisioned a concept, but when choosing how to turn the inspiration of this concept into a story, I chose myself In fact, there is no passion, but it seems to have a "hot" Japanese background, so I wrote something that should have been very interesting, rubbish and boring.

Up to now, I have written martial arts, or traditional martial arts, and it’s not even time-traveling without a system, so what achievement do I need?
The signing of this book can only be said to rely on repeated pleadings with the editor and the classification of martial arts is too cold. If there is any result, it should have been cut long ago.

That's all for the gossip, let's talk about the novel itself.

I am not a major in liberal arts or language, and even when I was studying, composition has always been a weak point from elementary school to high school, so I am sorry, my writing is indeed poor.

I am trying to continue to learn slowly and continue to improve, but the effect is really not very satisfactory.

At the beginning, I was able to imitate Mr. Gu Long's style of writing a bit, but after writing, it changed back to simple dialogue and dialogue.

Perhaps this has no effect on advancing the plot itself, but in fact the perception is indeed much worse, I'm sorry.

Even though this is my third book in the strict sense, I feel that I am still a novice, and I still have a lot to learn. In other words, my "internal strength" is indeed not good enough, and I still need to practice.

I don't want to write very white, and I don't want to write a one-man show with only the protagonist.

The most common ridicule is: "Write traditional martial arts? Can you write better than Jin Yong Gu Long?"

I'm sorry, I really can't, but I still want to write and try to get closer to them.

Maybe just thinking, maybe always thinking, but what does it matter?

Many people say that martial arts are dead, maybe they are, but if they are dead, they can't write?There are so many reasons, just like it.

I have always disliked books aimed at "leveling up", it's too gamey, leveling up, leveling up, using the same words that question me, leveling up, why don't I play games?

This is my point of view. I don't want my book to be simplified to "simple" or "digital".

Besides, the essence of martial arts does not lie in how "strong" the protagonist is.

There are protagonists with a full level at the beginning, and there are protagonists who start with a rookie, but even for those protagonists who start with a rookie, leveling up is not the main line of the novel.

Some readers in the comment area said that it looks very "Lu Xiaofeng" style.

That's true, and I'm not shy about saying that I borrowed a lot from the original story.

For example, someone can see that the basis of the first case is Sherlock Holmes' "A Study in Scarlet", and I even deliberately kept the "original flavor" (laughs), for example, the murderer is a groom, while the second case is actually from Grandma's "Study in Scarlet". The inspiration obtained in "Mousetrap", but there are so many changes, it should be difficult to see the source of inspiration.When it comes to the part of the Four Saints, it is indeed inspired by "Ghost Villa", but there is nothing similar except for pretending to be hunted down as an undercover agent.Even, in the chapter of Four Saints, I made a decision that would not appear in most web articles.

The protagonist loses.

People always say that I "screen readers", I think it's okay, or that every word in every book is "screening readers", there is nothing to be ashamed of.

I don't like intentionally disgusting readers, such as meaninglessly abusing the protagonist, such as manually cheating other or supporting characters or villains to keep up with the protagonist's progress, such as ntr, I hate these things, so I can't write anyway.

But there are some things that are called poisonous points, such as "the protagonist will lose", such as having a single heroine (I don't think the love between the two is licking the dog, but I know someone will say so).

I really hate "pairing literature", and I also hate "labeling characters" (this is why I haven't opened character cards until now, I won't open it now, and I won't open it in the future. Anyway, I don't have many readers, so I can't open it. It doesn't matter, lol).

Let's talk about the plot.

Blood Debt and Blood Repayment is the beginning, and it is actually the best written one in my opinion.

In fact, blood debt and blood payment itself is not a very complicated case. The real suspense is not solving the case, but He Ming's true identity as a police officer.

I know that many readers are impatient in the current reading environment. For example, when I wrote that He Ming was poisoned, the protagonist was eating and drinking with the heroine indifferently. I only have a few plot comments here to say that the writing is not good , The characters created are not likable.

But after seeing it, you will know that this was originally intentional.

It's just that I don't know how many people gave up and left without waiting for my explanation.

This is a helplessness in the age of online reading.

Readers don't know the author's true level and ideas. I'm just a little-known person who even has a "convicted eunuch". Readers don't want to trust me. They believe that the "unreasonable" I wrote is a foreshadowing. I don't Feeling angry or weird.

It’s as if some readers commented at the end of the Four Saints, “I’ve seen it as an undercover agent”, then I really appreciate you thinking about it seriously, and you are willing to believe me, but there are also readers who commented, “It’s a bunch of writing, there’s nothing wrong with it. After laying the groundwork, he entered the Demon Cult."

This is the problem we have to face.

Because I'm just Skaven fries, not a platinum master, so the distrust of readers is the norm.

Even if I know that there are some foreshadowings and unreasonable ones that will arouse readers' distrust, I can't leave a message "here is a foreshadowing, not that the author forgot" when there is no solution to the puzzle, because if it is written out, it will be a spoiler.I know that many online readers don't really care about the suspense. Their reading habit is to turn to the last page to see the murderer after reading the opening case.But I can only say sorry, I can't take care of you,
Back to the content of the novel.

The story of Lao Yan's separation is quite satisfactory, I think it is a story that is not lost, a small case that is not big at all, connecting the past and the future, and leading to a main supporting role, Zhao Tiefeng.

Although Zhao Tiefeng participated in two cases, to be honest, I didn't give him much love, maybe it was because the protagonist of this book was Xie Chen, so he was in the same camp as the protagonist and had a similar positioning. The character does not show any particularly attractive traits, and may not even compare to Li Huanmeng, who appeared much later than him, in terms of fullness of the character image.

He behaved more like a tool man than a plump and fleshy six-door headhunter.

Maybe readers can see that he is not stupid, can keep up with the protagonist's rhythm, and can plan some things together, but that's all.

Similar to Zhao Tiefeng, my heroine, Su Xiaochan, seems to have no special features.

Now it seems that she is a very standard vase, even the "dumb Watson" type.

Except for his outstanding lightness skills (which still seems to be a tool man attribute), there are no special features, and he will be deceived instead.

But wait, their stories are yet to come.

In fact, not to mention these two main supporting roles, even if it is my protagonist, even Xie Chen, I have not really completed his shaping.

Where did he come from, how did he meet Su Xiaochan, Emei Kongmu's evaluation of him repeatedly mentioned in the plot, and even as the protagonist of a martial arts novel, readers don't know anything about his martial arts.

It can't be that I forgot all this, right?
Don't worry, of course I haven't forgotten, because these are things that haven't been written yet.

The reason why I chose such an opening point is to allow readers to truly experience the book from the "plot" instead of focusing on "why the protagonist is so weak" or "why the protagonist hasn't learned advanced skills yet?" skills", or "why should the protagonist take care of so many things when he is already so strong".

I hope to decide what to write in this book first, so that readers can understand what kind of book it is, and then write the characters' own stories.

So, when someone scolded me "this is not a martial arts book, but a book of suspense", I didn't care and just laughed it off. After all, who can say that Chu Liuxiang and Lu Xiaofeng are not martial arts?
Finally, let’s talk about Li Huanmeng.

It's very interesting. Actually, this character doesn't get much attention, and he doesn't even play for a long time. Even in the chapter of Four Saints, his playing time is divided by Mu Sha and He Canghai, two characters who are not important in the long run. But, at least consciously, I still shaped him.

He is not a villain with a face in the traditional sense, nor is he the kind of "good nature forced to do evil" that is very common now, and he is not the "anti-social" that is often seen with high IQ villains.

His goal is very simple, he can understand good and evil, right and wrong just like a normal person, he has his own emotions, and he can act on his own will (just like the conversation with Lou Xinghe, and also like asking Xie Chen to come out to talk at the end), but he is still a the wicked.He is a simple person who understands that the logic of so-called villains and so-called bad guys is that the strong take all.He knows that he is a strong man, so in order to be able to take everything for himself, he wants to be a monster type.

Just like what Mr. Qing said, "If you succeed, you are great, if you lose, you are a laughing stock", Li Huanmeng understands that he is willing to take this path, just like Lou Xinghe, does it matter if he will become a laughing stock?

Therefore, if I think there is any bright spot in the poorly written Four Saints, it is that the character Li Huanmeng has finally managed to stand up, so that even if the story is poorly written, at least in the long-term outline, there is no what havoc.

The following content involves a small amount of spoilers, although it will not affect the subsequent plot, but if you don't like it, please don't read it.As for why?Because I want to list a lot of "unreasonable" that readers may not have noticed that I have written to prove my ability and hope to gain some trust (sorry, this is the best way I think that will not spoil everyone's experience) .

First of all, Wang Tao.

Yes, he died. Isn't it strange that a "murderer" who was obviously calm and thoughtful in the first case died so easily?
Is all this just because Li Huanmeng is "very powerful"?

Secondly, Li Huanmeng.

Will Li Huanmeng be the villain of this book?Or, he doesn't look so bad, will he be whitewashed?

The answer is no.

Will this book have a main story?

Probably there will still be, but it will not be too obvious, just like Sherlock Holmes will have a "Moriarty", of course the protagonist will also have his own real enemy, but, just like Moriarty does not just appear In "Uncanny Valley" and "The Last Case", if you read Sherlock Holmes carefully, you will find that in many cases of Sherlock Holmes, although he did not appear, there seems to be a shadow of "Professor" in the dark. Many adaptations in this area are not groundless, but just clarify the original ambiguous hints.

Well, it’s really a spoiler, and I’ll put the tips here. Maybe there are clues that I deliberately left unsaid in the article, so I will leave it to my few readers to find out by themselves. After all, the author wrote It's exciting to guess what's going to happen before it's over, right?
Next, since the purpose of introducing readers to understand the book has been achieved, the next focus is to return to the "character" itself.

So for the next case, I will reverse the timeline, go back to Xie Chen's youthful days when he was a fledgling, and read the story of his first meeting with Su Xiaochan.

Oh, by the way, some readers' comments are quite good. Although I actually divided them into "parts", I really didn't make it clear, so the next chapters will be unified into the format of xx of xx chapters.

Well, that's all for now, let me take a break today and tidy up a little.

See you in the prequel.

(End of this chapter)