Lost in love at the beginning, I backhand her best friend

Chapter 20 Teacher Liu's Charm

Another weekend of the week.

Wang Zihao went back to the Jinhu Mansion in Hexi to eat and drink.

The relationship between him and Liu Qianqian is a bit delicate now, and he has a girl in his heart who is fighting against his ex-girlfriend.

It's just that living in the rented house on the east side of the river is always touching the scene, and the ex-girlfriend has the upper hand.

It will be better to go home.

Last week, sitting with Ma Tengfei on the Taohua Island Music Fountain Square, Wang Zihao was still in high spirits.

This week, he was wilted, sitting there in a daze, watching the sky gradually darken.

For nine days, there were more than 4 words, and there was still no short stop.

"Haohao, to be honest, you are very talented..." Ma Tengfei handed a cigarette to Wang Zihao who seemed to have no love for him.

Ma Tengfei has been reading "Covering the Sky" written by Wang Zihao and wanted to give some advice.

But except for Chapter 1, the protagonist didn't have such a turnaround. In the following chapters, Ma Tengfei didn't know how to give advice.

He feels that the best friend is really talented, the world frame setting is very powerful, the plot design is fascinating, the overall momentum is majestic, and the characters are vividly portrayed...

The only downside, and at the same time the most heart-wrenching part, is that the opening chapter is too anti-market.

It's like a beautiful woman, although she is peerless and independent, but her background is ordinary, she is divorced with children, and she has three sons.

Any man who wants to marry this beautiful woman may think twice after knowing it, or even turn his head and run away.

"Don't talk about it, I will update another chapter tonight, and it will only be [-] words." Wang Zihao was very depressed.

If you didn't vote for an internal lottery, you published it directly. After [-] words, you didn't come to the site short, and many old authors cut it off without hesitation.

Because of this number, there will be several editors cross-reviewing the manuscript.

If an editor is not optimistic, there may still be a possibility of misreading.

Several editors are not optimistic, and the probability of misreading is almost zero.

"Why don't you change the beginning again?" Lighted the cigarettes for the iron buddies, and Ma Tengfei also lit one for himself.

In addition to this suggestion, Ma Tengfei was embarrassed to give other suggestions on writing.

Because he felt that he couldn't guide Wang Zihao, so it's better not to mislead his disciples.

"I don't know how to change it." Wang Zihao gasped, why is "Covering the Sky" not acclimatized here?

The songs of "A Diao" and "Girl by the Bridge" are not acclimatized here, right?
That's it.

Isn't it because of his "music talent" that Liu Qianqian chased after him?

If he had no musical talent, let alone Liu Qianqian, even the divorced young woman downstairs with two children would look down on him.

"It's really painful to change the text. It's like operating on your own child. If you accidentally kill or maim it." Ma Tengfei has a deep understanding.

"Apart from the problems in Chapter 1 at the beginning, are there any other problems later?" Wang Zihao asked Ma Tengfei humbly.

"Later..." After hesitating for a while, Ma Tengfei said: "It's very powerful, I can't fault it, at least with my level, I'm not qualified to make irresponsible remarks."

After a pause, Ma Tengfei exclaimed: "How about Chapter 1? After reading the following chapters, I don't think there's anything wrong with it. It's the need for the plot. The problem is that you are a newcomer. Being poor is the original sin."

Wang Zihao nodded silently.

If you were born poor, everything you do is wrong. Before you become rich, no matter how hard you try, you will not do your job properly.

The rich second generation went to the island to play yachts and hold parties, and spent tens of millions to enjoy life.

If you were born into a poor family, and you spend hundreds of dollars in restaurants, you are called a prodigal.

"Then I have to write another book." Wang Zihao sighed.

cut?

Ma Tengfei was a little heartbroken. He had never supported his buddies to go this way before.

But now, he's supportive.

The beginning of the book "Covering the Sky" is really amazing, and the buddies belong to people with extraordinary talents.

"It's possible... If you don't insist, you can take the initiative to apply for a contract with [-] words." Ma Tengfei didn't want to see his best friend's talent be stifled.

When Wang Zihao opens a new book, there is a high probability that he will become timid, looking forward and backward, and his writing talent is restricted by the so-called framework.

"Is the success rate of voluntarily applying for a contract high?" Wang Zihao asked.

Ma Tengfei was in a dilemma, and said: "I don't know about this either, I haven't studied it, and I haven't seen anyone mention it."

"Then let's change to another one, and grasp the essence of the three golden chapters at the beginning." Wang Zihao planned to change to another one.

After hesitating for a moment, Ma Tengfei, who also writes on the Feiyue Chinese website, said: "I have some reader base now. When I go back tonight, I will push you a chapter. I originally wanted to wait for you to sign a contract before pushing it."

Wang Zihao regained consciousness immediately: "Is it effective?"

"There is one thing. In the past, I insisted on finishing the book normally even though my grades were bad. The reader's stickiness was higher than most writers. But what I wrote was not a fantasy theme, and the chapter pushing effect may be relatively poor." Ma Tengfei regretted.

"Forget it. I didn't sign the contract. If I write hundreds of thousands of words and haven't come to the site, cut it off, it will affect your hard-earned word-of-mouth." Thinking over and over again, Wang Zihao rejected the kindness of the iron buddies. .

"It doesn't matter, it doesn't affect much, you know it well, it's the book I brought to heaven, it can increase good luck." Ma Tengfei laughed.

Wang Zihao shook his head: "It's really unnecessary, I have a new inspiration, and I will start a new book when I get back tonight. Don't be in a hurry this time, I will send it to you first when I finish writing it, and if you think it is feasible, I will cast it in first."

"Did you give up "Shading the Sky"?" Ma Tengfei regretted.

"Well, one must be down-to-earth. Only by solving the problems of life can one be qualified to talk about dreams." Wang Zihao said.

It's a pity, but what the iron buddies said is right, Ma Tengfei said: "Okay, you only need to write [-] words for your new book first, and [-] words for the internal input is enough."

Wang Zihao went to a nearby vending machine to buy two bottles of drinks and returned, handed one bottle to Ma Tengfei, and then the two walked around Taohua Island.

While walking and chatting, Ma Tengfei suddenly pointed to a place on the opposite side of the island, his eyes lit up: "Haohao, do you still remember there?"

Wang Zihao looked up: "Where?"

"Whispers of the wind is the neighborhood where there are many villas." Ma Tengfei envied in his eyes.

"Oh, remember, what's the matter?" Wang Zihao unscrewed the drink bottle and took another sip of the drink.

Ma Tengfei lowered his voice slightly: "Do you still remember our music teacher in the third year of high school?"

Liu Qianqian?
Wang Zihao was taken aback, and said: "I remember, how could I not remember, the youth of all the boys in Taohuahu Middle School."

Back then, Ma Tengfei told Wang Zihao that Liu Qianqian lived in the Fengzhiyu community.

Ma Tengfei smiled and said: "Ms. Liu is still living in the language of the wind, and has always been a teacher in our Taohuahu Middle School."

Wang Zihao nodded: "It's been five years, and Mr. Liu has never thought about changing schools. You can only get a raise if you change jobs. You're so stupid."

Ma Tengfei's face changed slightly when he heard the words of the iron buddies. He looked around and said in a low voice: "Hao Hao, keep your voice down. Teacher Liu often comes to Peach Blossom Island for a walk."

Wang Zihao was surprised: "You know all this?"

Ma Tengfei was a little proud and said: "Do you pay little attention to the class group? From time to time, some students said that they met Teacher Liu again on Peach Blossom Island, and they died of happiness."

Later, he also stated that every year when the peach blossoms are in bloom, many students, regardless of gender, come to Peach Blossom Island for nothing, not to see the peach blossoms, but just to meet Miss Liu, because she comes here very frequently to enjoy the flowers in this season.

"What's so happy about meeting by chance." Wang Zihao was not very interested. If it was in the past, he might be like some students in the class, looking forward to seeing Liu Qianqian again.

Now, it's too late for him to hide.

"Huh?" Ma Tengfei was surprised. When mentioning Mr. Liu, the reaction of the iron buddies should not be like this.

At that time, the iron buddies were also supporters of Mr. Liu.

Teacher Liu is the goddess in the minds of students of Taohuahu Middle School one after another.

Beautiful person, good temperament, pure face and smile, killing countless boys and girls in seconds.

I heard that after she graduated from Yanjing and returned to Shacheng County, several suitors from Yanjing came after her, which shows how terrible her lethality is.

"Haohao, I'm talking about Mr. Liu, why do you react like this?" Ma Tengfei asked suspiciously.

Wang Zihao had no choice but to say: "Girls like Teacher Liu shouldn't exist in the world. I've figured it out. I won't be her fan any more, and turn to passers-by."

Ma Tengfei was surprised: "Haohao, you didn't want to hit Teacher Liu before, did you? Only then will you have such despair and then rebellion."

Wang Zihao seemed to have heard some other information, and asked: "Is there a classmate in the class who has that kind of thought and then despairs? Which one is it?"

"It's not in our class. It's another class taught by Teacher Liu. I repeated it for Teacher Liu. After I went to college, I wanted to chase Teacher Liu, and my leg was almost broken." material.

"Who hit it?" Wang Zihao didn't hear what Liu Qianqian said about it, so he asked curiously, "Teacher Liu?"

"Of course it's not Teacher Liu. How can Teacher Liu make a move? It was Teacher Liu's fans who didn't interrupt him, but after returning home, that classmate was still broken by his parents." Ma Tengfei gloated, and Teacher Liu did the same. You and mere mortals can get close?

"That's really a sad thing." Wang Zihao sympathized with that classmate, and then felt relieved, saying that Teacher Liu is also my prospective girlfriend and should not be violated.

"According to the gossip, Teacher Liu is too good. He hasn't talked about a boyfriend yet, and he doesn't know who will be so lucky to catch up with Teacher Liu in the future." Ma Tengfei sighed.

There may be some non-elite owners in Jinhu Mansion, where Wang Zihao lives, and Crystal Bay, where Ma Tengfei lives.

But none of the owners of Whisper of the Wind is an ordinary person.

Just like someone who owns a private jet, can he be an ordinary person?

Liu Qianqian lives in the language of the wind. This alone makes ordinary people daunted and can only look up.

"Ms. Liu... is really outstanding, there are very few men who can match her." Wang Zihao didn't feel that Liu Qianqian's value was lowered because of Liu Qianqian's active pursuit.

In fact, what she pursued was not him, but some charms that he showed that did not belong to him.

"By the way." Ma Tengfei said suddenly: "Haohao, someone in the class wants to have a party recently."

"Party?" The time for the musical fountain was up, the music sounded, and Wang Zihao and Ma Tengfei walked to the arch bridge.

"There was a party in the second and third year of graduation, and I haven't had a party since then. Someone mentioned this this year, and there were not many responses at first, but the study committee member said that she would go to KTV to sing after dinner, and she might invite Teacher Liu. The response suddenly increased, and the students who are in other places want to come back." Ma Tengfei was very excited, and asked his best friend: "Haohao, are you going?"

(End of this chapter)