After being rejected by Ome, I got an emulator

Chapter 120 You are not good at this plot

At seven o'clock in the evening, Lu Li took one last look at the rising data, turned off the computer, and walked out of the office.

Although it was past the off-duty time, the lights in the living room were still on. Lin Xuan was fixing things, and it seemed that she was going to get off work; Xu Ruquan was concentrating on looking at the computer, and the mouse kept moving.

"Boss, I'm off work first." Lin Xuan said with a beige schoolbag on her back, waving her hand.

"Okay, be careful." Lu Li nodded with a smile, and then unconsciously glanced at Xu Ruquan's computer screen.

Perhaps because of the power of lsp hidden in his blood, Lu Li can always find some unsavory content in his life; just like some book friends, the author writes a very normal article, but they can find all kinds of things in it. cart……

With just a casual glance, Lu Li found something wrong on Xu Ruquan's screen.

Although there was only a beautiful young lady on the screen, Lu Li, who had read countless books, was automatically retrieved in his mind through the abnormal blushing complexion and empty eyes...

This style of painting...

As a man, Lu Li couldn't restrain his curiosity and tiptoed up.

Lin Xuan, who had already set things up and was about to leave, saw the boss's appearance, and naturally realized that something was wrong. She stopped and listened quietly with her ears pricked up.

It can only be said that as expected of an art master, Lu Li has already gotten so close, Xu Ruquan still didn't respond at all, and he was completely immersed in his own world.

At the same time, in order to check the completeness of the plot, he was browsing page by page, which happened to be convenient for Lu Li behind him.

Looking at the composition of the manga, Lu Li still had a look of surprise on his face at first, but the more he saw it, the more distorted his expression became.

What kind of shit is this smearing cake...

If this is a novel, the plot can be so rotten, I guess the author will be smashed by the readers...

After checking the words, Xu Ruquan nodded in satisfaction, and moved the mouse towards the uploading place.

Seeing that upload was about to be pressed, a voice suddenly sounded in Xu Ruquan's ear.

"stop it."

The sudden sound startled Xu Ruquan, his whole body swayed, and he almost fell down with the chair.

It was still Lu Li who had quick eyesight and quick hands, and held down the chair with one hand and Xu Ruquan with the other at the last moment.

"Boss." After seeing who was coming, Xu Ruquan was stunned for a moment, looked at Lu Li, then looked at his computer screen, hesitated and said, "Boss, you said that I can use my off-duty draws manga."

"I didn't say I wouldn't let you draw." Lu Li said with a bit of heartache, "But you...you really draw well, but the plot..."

"What's wrong with the plot?" Although he was questioned, Xu Ruquan was not dissatisfied, but had some expectations... As a real cartoonist, he only wants to draw the best works, and if he really has good suggestions, he will not hesitate Adopt without hesitation.

"First of all, this is the plot." Lu Li, who has read countless books, couldn't bear to let a pearl be dusted, and unreservedly shared his experience in constructing the plot when writing the novel, "Your plot is too flat, and the post-production feeling is not enough."

After writing a lot of novels, Lu Li's ability to control the plot is naturally not to mention, and he has done a good job in controlling the emotions of the readers.

"Look here, although the male lead and the professor belong to each other's tauren, the male lead didn't make any money, it can even be said to be a small loss." Lu Li pointed Jiang Shan and said, "The male lead's aunt and cousin were all killed by that, And the male protagonist only got the professor's wife, so 2 for 1 is obviously a loss, you think this is a small climax, but the readers don't feel any pleasure at all."

"You can change this paragraph like this." Lu Li thought for a while, re-conceived the plot, and said, "You can write that the professor was going to do it, but in the end it was delayed because of some things. The master made puffs. The male master learned about the professor's plan through this incident, and counterattacked accordingly, such as launching an attack on the professor's daughter..."

Because he is used to writing novels, these plots can be said to be blurted out by Lu Li...

Xu Ruquan didn't understand it at first, but after thinking about it as a reader, his eyes gradually lit up.

It seems to be better than the original plot...

"And then?" Xu Ruquan said excitedly, his eyes full of excitement.

"Then it's your own arrangement." Lu Li said casually, "You just need to use the presence of the yellow hair to add that sense of tension and oppression to the manga, but don't let anything happen, or you will lose readers, and then And then increase the coolness by the male protagonist's behavior of rebelling against the bull's head and yellow hair, just keep going like this..."

Xu Ruquan was silent for a while, and then almost threw himself on the computer, modifying it bit by bit.

Seeing that Xu Ruquan listened to it, Lu Li felt an inexplicable sense of accomplishment in his heart. Just as he was about to stretch and go to the gym to exercise, he suddenly saw Lin Xuan standing on the other side, looking at him with a complicated expression.

Hey, didn't she say to go back? Why are you still here... Lu Li was silent for a moment, suddenly embarrassed.

Brothers, I forgot that there was a girl next to me when I was chatting with you, what should I do?Waiting online, very urgent...

"Aren't you leaving yet?" Lu Li's face was relatively thick. After a moment of silence, he immediately recovered, looked at Lin Xuan and said preemptively.

"Ah...ah me." Lin Xuan was a little confused, and she didn't know what to say.

Originally, he wanted to work a little overtime and leave immediately after finishing today's tasks, but he didn't expect to hear the handsome junior chatting with another artist in the studio when he left.

Lin Xuan has a bit of a gossip character, so she pricked up her ears and listened quietly. Who knew what she heard...

Although she is a girl, she is not some ignorant little white flower. She can still understand what Lu Li said.

It's over, it's over, I won't be filled with puffs... After thinking that she heard something she shouldn't have heard, Lin Xuan was a little nervous, timidly like a frightened little white rabbit. Looking at Lu Li.

"Okay, I'll take you home." Lu Li, who felt that he was late, sighed softly, opened the door and said to Lin Xuan.

"Oh oh oh... good." Lin Xuan nodded and walked out of the door with a tearless expression on her face.

It's over, it looks like I'm really going to be filled with puffs... Wait, it seems that I'm not at a loss... I'm not at a loss, Lin Xuan, what's the matter with you...

Before Lin Xuan could sort out her thoughts, Lu Li had already walked out, striding towards the parking lot.

(End of this chapter)