The days when I retired with the queen of music

Chapter 414 Zhai Xiao is dissatisfied with the plot of "Dragon Ball"

Tang Liping was suddenly hugged by Xu Ranran, and she was stunned when she heard Xu Ranran call "Mom".

Not only her, but Xu Changqing, Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin were also stunned. However, Xianxian didn't look surprised at all. At such a young age, she didn't know that such things needed to be surprising.

The little guy turned into a little cheerleader at this moment, clapping his two little hands together and applauding "papapapa".

Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin both glanced at Xianxian, then looked at each other, and immediately understood what the other person meant. Neither husband nor wife stopped Xianxian, making this little guy become the only atmosphere group at this time.

He is just a little guy anyway, so even if he cannot be praised in this scene, it will not be embarrassing.

At this time, Lu Anzhi suddenly felt that the saying "she is just a child" was quite useful.

Tang Liping knelt down, held Xu Ranran's little face and looked at it, and said with some distress: "What's wrong Ranran? Why does it seem like you have cried?"

Before Xu Ranran said anything, Xianxian rushed to answer: "Sister Ranran misses her mother!"

Lu Anzhi: "..."

Zhang Suxin: "..."

Xu Changqing: "..."

Xu Ranran was embarrassed by Xianxian and was too shy to look at Tang Liping.

Tang Liping seemed a little embarrassed, glanced at Xu Changqing, and said nothing.

As for Xu Changqing, Lu Anzhi felt that the toes in his shoes were already digging into the floor.

Lu Anzhi picked up Xianxian and said, "It's getting late, we should go back. You guys take your time and talk."

Xu Changqing and Tang Liping were so busy that they left Lu Anzhi's family of three to eat, and let Lu Anzhi's family of three finish their dinner before leaving. At this time, the two of them had such a tacit understanding that they really seemed like a couple. Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin declined and left with Xianxian.

The little guy was sitting in the car and commented: "Sister Ran Ran's first mother is not good, but her second mother is good."

Zhang Suxin smiled silently, stretched out her fingers and tapped her slender little head gently, and said, "You are the only smart one! You are the first mother and the second mother! You can tell the difference. So which one is yours?" How are you, mom?"

Xianxian smiled "hehe" and said, "Xianxian only has one mother, Xianxian's mother is fine!"

Zhang Suxin rubbed her slender face lovingly and said, "Little man!"

The subsequent plot development of Xu Changqing's family was told to them by Wang Ping.

Tang Liping is also married and has a son who is now in primary school. His husband, who used to work part-time, died of a heart attack, so he is now single.

Because of Xu Ranran's words, the relationship between Xu Changqing and Tang Liping broke through, and they both made it clear that they wanted to develop further.

Later, Xu Changqing went to meet Tang Liping's son several times and captured Tang Liping's son with sugar-coated bullets. What happened after that was a matter of course.

Both of them were getting married for the second time, and they didn't plan to make a big deal out of it. They went to the Civil Affairs Bureau to get the certificate, and then invited their relatives and friends to have a meal together, and the matter was settled.

As for Lu Anzhi's family of three, Xu Changqing and Tang Liping were invited to a separate banquet. Naturally, several members of Wang Ping's family were also invited.

Lu Anzhi met Wang Ping's grandson Yan Junjie for the first time, and always felt that Yan Junjie looked at him with a bit of resentment.

He asked Yan Shun'an what was going on. Yan Shun'an thought for a while before reacting and said to Lu Anzhi: "Boss, I have read your "Doraemon Short Fairy Tale Collection" and "The Little Prince" to my children. There is a story called "Snow Child" in "Dora B Dream's Short Fairy Tale Collection", and my child was a little impressed by that story. He knew that "Snow Child" was written by you, the boss."

"..."

Lu Anzhi was speechless for a while, "How long ago did I publish that collection of short fairy tales?"

Yan Shun'an thought for a while and said, "It's been a long time. You later published so many books and so many songs..."Doraemon Short Fairy Tale Collection" and "Snow Child", they really seem to be in It came out a long time ago. Time flies so fast..."

Lu Anzhi nodded, sighed, and said, "Your son really holds a grudge..."

Yan Shunan: "..."

But these were all trivial matters. Yan Junjie soon stopped holding grudges and started playing with Tang Liping's son.

——Now he should be the son of Xu Changqing and Tang Liping.

It is strange to say that Tang Liping's ex-husband also happens to be named Xu. Now Xu Changqing and Tang Liping have become a family. Xu Changqing and Tang Liping's sons have the same surname. When others hear it, they think they are biological father and son.

Xu Ranran and Xianxian played behind the two older children, and the four children soon started playing together. The adults were eating and drinking, and their attention soon fell on the children.

Seeing the children having fun, all the adults couldn't help but laugh.

The place where they each met was in Lu Anzhi's bookstore. The biggest connection between them is also today’s Sanwei Bookstore. So after eating, everyone went to Sanwei Bookstore.

Four children were lingering in the children's book area. Seeing this, Lu Anzhi gave each of the four children a book. What Xu Ranran and Xianxian got were two latest picture books. The son of Yan Junjie and Tang Liping got the latest comic book.

When Lu Anzhi was delivering books, he joked with others: "I actually wanted to give them exercise books or composition books, but unfortunately I only sell leisure books here, not teaching aids."

Yan Junjie and Tang Liping's sons turned pale when they heard Lu Anzhi's words. Fortunately, Lu Anzhi still had the last part of what he said, which made them sigh in relief.

Then Wang Ping suddenly said: "Let me tell you, boss, you still make money from teaching aids. When I was in Jinju, the main sales of books were teaching aids. Not to mention the Baicaotang store, which is nearby There aren’t many schools, but there are some here at Sanwei Bookstore. Although it’s a little far away from here, it’s still possible, not too far. Let’s buy some teaching aids and sell them, which can increase our income a lot, and it can also be used by children. Save yourself the trouble of buying it outside.”

The son of Yan Junjie and Tang Liping turned pale again.

Fortunately, Lu Anzhi shook his head again and said, "Let's forget it. Sister Wang, you also know that my original intention of opening a bookstore was not to sell teaching aids. Other bookstores sell teaching aids, so we won't compete with others. This business is over.”

The sons of Yan Junjie and Tang Liping were relieved again, but Wang Ping sighed with some incomprehension and said, "How can you open a store like this!"

After finishing the meal, we sat down in Sanwei Bookstore. The marriage of Xu Changqing and Tang Liping was officially known to everyone. Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin took Xianxian back home, and Wang Ping and her family also left. Tang Liping took her son to live on the second floor of the bookstore, where it was more convenient for Xu Changqing to visit the store.

Tang Liping also learned about Xu Changqing's income and was shocked. She never expected that Xu Changqing would earn so much in a month by staying in the bookstore, looking at the store every day, typing on the keyboard and writing novels.

That was something she couldn't even imagine.

However, when Xu Changqing wanted to pay her to open a shop so that she would not have to get up early every day and work late at night to open the breakfast shop, she refused. Although she was married to Xu Changqing, she still didn't want to spend Xu Changqing's money so easily.

She sold her old house and rented a shop next to Sanwei Bookstore. She only dared to do this after she had support and no worries.

This family's life has entered a new track.

Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin occasionally bring Xianxian here to play with Xu Ranran. But most of the time, Lu Anzhi couldn't care less.

Time passed day by day, February passed, March passed, and the date of Zhang Suxin's delivery was getting closer and closer. Lu Anzhi was afraid that after Zhang Suxin gave birth, he would be busy taking care of his wife and children and would not be able to take care of other things, so he was busy saving manuscripts every day during this period.

He did not start a new book, but just finished writing the third part of "The Three-Body Problem", "The God of Death".

In addition to "Three-Body Three: Eternal Death", it is the outline of "Fights Break the Sphere". As for the script of "Dragon Ball", there is no need to write any more for the time being. Anyway, the serialization of comics is a very long time. He has given Zhai Xiao enough scripts, and the content is almost complete. It is enough for Zhai Xiao to serialize the comics for a long time.

However, Zhai Xiao was a little dissatisfied with the last part of the "Dragon Ball" script.

In that part of the script, before the Saiyans invaded the earth, Sun Wukong participated in the last World No. 1 Martial Arts Tournament. At that time, Sun Wukong had grown up and changed his image. Then he met Qiqi who came to see him, and they had a scene called "Xia Yuhe by Daming Lake", and then he married Sun Wukong.

This is where Zhai Xiao's dissatisfaction lies. She has watched all the previous scenes, and she has already drawn the scene about Qiqi.

This character does not occupy much space in the overall story of the early "Dragon Ball", and the image is not as vivid as Bulma. Seeing the image of Sun Wukong changing drastically many years later, Zhai Xiao was already thinking about the scene of Sun Wukong and Bulma, but he didn't expect that Qiqi would suddenly pop up and intervene.

This was really beyond her expectation.

So after Zhai Xiao saw this part of the script, he asked Lu Anzhi in Qiuqiu: Teacher Lu, don't you think the plot is a bit confusing when drawn like this?

Lu Anzhi: Why is it so baffling?

Zhai Xiao: Anyway, if I were a reader, I would see Bulma first meeting Sun Wukong, who had changed greatly after many years, and I would already be looking forward to something happening to these two characters who spent their childhood together. As a result, you suddenly created a character that I had almost forgotten and asked her to marry Sun Wukong. I can't accept it.

Lu Anzhi: There is no way, the plot is arranged like this.

Zhai Xiao: But it’s unreasonable.

Lu Anzhi: Why is it unreasonable?

Zhai Xiao: It’s unreasonable anyway. It's so sudden, I don't understand. Teacher Lu, why don’t you let Sun Wukong and Bulma get married? I feel like I am being greened here when I see it.

Lu Anzhi:......

Lu Anzhi: So you took Bulma’s place?

Zhai Xiao: Occasionally, I will fill in for Bulma.

Lu Anzhi:......

Zhai Xiao: So why did you arrange Teacher Lu like this? Can you give me a reason?

Lu Anzhi: It’s mainly about the subsequent plot, which has to do with the current arrangements of many characters. Later, there will be a Saiyan - an alien character, who will marry Bulma and give birth to a child named Trunks, Sun Wuhan, the descendant of Sun Wukong and Chi Chi, and there will be a lot of plot space later. .

He posted this paragraph first and was about to post it again: If he changes it casually, he won’t be able to expand on it later. Then before the words were spoken, Zhai Xiao sent Qiuqiu a message to ask him: Why not let Sun Wukong marry Bulma? Then let the new character you mentioned marry Qiqi.

Zhai Xiao: You can let the child of Sun Wukong and Bulma be called Sun Wufan, and let the child of Qiqi and the new character be called Trunks.

Lu Anzhi:......

Lu Anzhi: But there is a plot later on where Sun Wukong and Bulma went to Namek - the planet of Piccolo's race. After having some encounters there, the new character became related to Bulma. , after returning to Earth, he temporarily stayed at Bulma's house, and after having a child, the plot became logical.

Zhai Xiao: Then let the new characters live in the Flame Mountain temporarily.

Lu Anzhi:......

Come to think of it, if Zhai Xiao changed it like this, it would really make people excited? !

In fact, when he saw the reunion of Bulma and Sun Wukong from the No. 1 Martial Arts Club in the world, he also thought about the development of the relationship between Bulma and Sun Wukong.

Moreover, short videos became popular later, and he was also influenced by the short video comments. He felt that the relationship between Kakarot and Qiqi was really boring, and Qiqi became an annoying and yellow-faced woman who ignored Kakarot.

——Although from another perspective, he also knew that Qiqi's attitude and behavior were quite reasonable when faced with a husband who was focused on fighting and not caring about the family, but he just couldn't change his opinion of Qiqi.

He thought for a while and said: No matter what, you are just dissatisfied with this plot, right?

Zhai Xiao: Yes. And I feel like it’s not just me who’s dissatisfied, but other readers as well. Unless, Mr. Lu, you modify the previous story and greatly increase the length of Qiqi's story, so that Qiqi's plot can match Bulma's and match that of Sun Wukong.

Lu Anzhi: I can’t even do this.

According to Zhai Xiao's writing, "Dragon Ball" is probably going to change from a passionate battle show to a love show.

He thought about it seriously and said to Qiuqiu: Do you think this will work? I'll write according to my original script first, and you can continue drawing. Anyway, the rest of the story is still long, and the plot leading up to the wedding will take a long time to complete.

Lu Anzhi: I will write the script according to the original plot and give it to you after Trunks appears. Then you can modify it according to my plot. If you can change the emotional relationship and role positioning of the characters without affecting the overall plot direction, I will agree to you and follow your ideas.

Zhai Xiao was overjoyed and said to Qiuqiu: OK! Thank you, Teacher Lu, for trusting me so much! I will definitely change this plot!

Lu Anzhi: You're welcome.

In fact, I am also looking forward to it. What will the revised "Dragon Ball" look like?

(End of this chapter)