The days when I retired with the queen of music

Chapter 427: Guiding Xu Changqing and proposing cultivation

After Lu Anzhi returned home, Xu Changqing sent the manuscript not long after.

Lu Anzhi read Xu Changqing's manuscript and knew why Xu Changqing asked him for advice.

Xu Changqing's manuscripts have improved a lot compared to before. At least there are obvious improvements in upgrading and rhythm. Step by step upgrading, fighting, and steady progress can still make people watch.

This is the improvement that writing "Fights Break the Sphere" brought him for such a long time.

The biggest advantage of "Battle Breakers" is its rhythm.

But the problem is that Xu Changqing still has not broken away from the barriers of writing martial arts in the past. Even if he imitates "Dou Po", what he writes still has a martial arts flavor. Compared with other websites that are slowly developing on Xinfeng Chinese Network, Wen, the meaning is still quite different.

In this manuscript, Xu Changqing changed the grandfather he carried with him into the soul of an ancient alien beast, and then on the upgrade route, like the alien fire in "Dou Po", he gave the protagonist the ability to control beasts. But the beginning of the story is still a very traditional revenge, but on top of this, it adds the plot of the protagonist being looked down upon as a good-for-nothing, so that the protagonist's subsequent rise can shock others.

But that's it. In the final analysis, it's just a combination of "Dou Po" and various martial arts novels.

So Lu Anzhi chatted with Xu Changqing in Qiuqiu: I think you still haven't opened up your mind and imagination.

Xu Changqing agreed with this sentence: Yes, Mr. Lu. In addition to "Dou Po", I also specifically referred to other novels on the website. Nowadays, there are many novels on the website that are very wild and unrestrained, with references to ancient mythology, Greek mythology, Nordic mythology and so on. But when it came time to write it myself, I couldn’t learn it anymore.

Lu Anzhi: They haven't let go of their ideas yet, they just quoted them, or they used the world view of those myths to develop the story. That's another way of writing. I think what you want to write is not that way.

In fact, the novels on Xinfeng Chinese website are quite imaginative and come in various genres, including urban pretentious novels. Lu Anzhi even saw the shadow of "The Best Young Master" in one of the ranking works. But there is a problem, that is, these Internet articles from the ignorant period have not yet formed their own systems. Therefore, unless they are directly "learned", it is difficult to imitate them like peeling off the skin and leaving the bones.

When Xu Changqing saw what Lu Anzhi said, he replied: Yes.

Lu Anzhi: So you can think freely. There are many interesting things in this world. I can give you a few examples for your reference. Do you want to take a look?

In Sanwei Bookstore, Xu Changqing was stunned for a moment when he saw this sentence from Lu Anzhi. Is Mr. Lu going to show himself all kinds of magnificent imaginations? This surprised him a little, and he couldn't help but sit upright and wrote on Qiuqiu: Okay, thank you Mr. Lu.

Then after a while, he saw a WeChat message from Lu Anzhi: You like to write Eastern-style stories, and your writing style is destined to be more suitable for Eastern themes. I won’t give you examples of Western fantasy stories. As for the Eastern story system, there are many themes that can be explored.

Lu Anzhi: For example, the contention of a hundred schools of thought during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period can be used to set up the system. Confucian Haoran Zhengqi, Taoist Taoism, Mohist organ skills, etc. can all be written in detail. Can so many poems and articles in ancient times be counted among Confucian supernatural powers? The great Confucian said, "Dark clouds are threatening to destroy the city," which means the sky is changing. Then the realm of cultivation can also be extracted from the development of Confucianism, such as scholars, saints, sages and so on. If you think about it, I don’t need to say more.

"hiss……"

Xu Changqing took a breath of cold air.

Lu An came up with a small idea that shocked him greatly. Now with the rise of Xinfeng Chinese website, Internet literature has just begun to develop. Although all kinds of wild ideas have emerged, they have not yet matured. At least he had never seen Lu Anzhi's thoughts like this.

Lu Anzhi: Another example is the Realm of Cultivation. Your novel still has a martial arts flavor at first glance, or you can tell at a glance that it is based on "Dou Po". In fact, you can also jump out of this and create some systems. For example, there is the Yang Shen in Taoist practice terminology. Can you extract it and create a system for cultivating the Yang Shen?

Lu Anzhi: There is also the theory of inner alchemy in the Taoist "Shen Tong Qi", which can also be used. Based on this, we can create a set of cultivation realms, such as Qi refining stage, foundation building stage, golden elixir stage, Nascent Soul stage, etc. Wouldn’t it be good?

Lu Anzhi: Anyway, your mind is still open. The same goes for the battle scenes. You can let go of your imagination and split mountains and seas with one move like in mythology, and later on you can break a planet with one punch. If you have the strength, you can also make some nonsense about being dictatorial for eternity, slaying all enemies in the world, and holding the sun, moon, and stars in your hand, and there is no one like me in time.

Xu Changqing's eyes widened when he saw this sentence from Lu Anzhi, and he was so shocked that he couldn't speak.

At this time, Tang Liping's shop next door was almost busy, so Tang Liping took the time to come over and check on the children. As soon as he entered the door, he saw Xu Changqing sitting behind the counter, lost in thought, and couldn't help but ask: "What's wrong with you?"

Xu Changqing shook his head and said, "It's nothing. Mr. Lu is teaching me how to write a novel. I was just shocked by him. He is really amazing. He has so many fantastic ideas and unconstrained ideas. So many people have added them on the website." Get up, I'm afraid I won't be able to compare with him."

Tang Liping said calmly: "That's for sure. You don't even want to think about who he is."

Xu Changqing nodded and said: "That's right. After all, he is the person who can write so many classic novels, from "The Legend of Wukong" to "Dragon", to "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", "The Three-Body Problem", "Harry Potter" "The Little Prince". His ideas are endless. Like the subject matter of Internet articles, he can probably come up with hundreds or thousands of creative ideas when he uses his brain, but he just doesn't bother to write them."

However, Tang Liping felt that this sentence was a bit exaggerated: "That's not enough, is it? Hundreds or thousands? How can it be such an exaggeration?"

Xu Changqing felt that what he said was a bit exaggerated. I don’t know if it was influenced by Mr. Lu’s advice just now. If so, maybe it’s a good thing?

At this moment, he saw another message from Lu Anzhi: If you want, I can provide you with a story background setting. You can write the story according to this setting. Open your mind and think boldly. Think.

Xu Changqing was excited and quickly agreed: Okay, thank you Mr. Lu.

He is not averse to this. He has already written "Fights Break the Sky" around this time. Originally, he wanted to wait until he finished writing "Fights Break the Sphere" and no longer rely on Mr. Lu, but rely on what he learned from "Fights Break the Sphere" to write new stories. But now after accepting Lu Anzhi's guidance, he But suddenly I found that I was still far behind and still needed to learn.

Mr. Lu provides the background and fills in the story himself, which may also be a new training.

After Xu Changqing sent this message, he quickly received a new message from Lu Anzhi: OK, I will send it to you tomorrow.

……

After finishing the chat with Xu Changqing, Lu Anzhi immediately created a new text document and wrote the settings.

Setting the background for Xu Changqing and letting Xu Changqing fill in the content himself was also Lu Anzhi's new idea. When he told Xu Changqing about cultivation, the idea suddenly came to his mind.

The subject of cultivation reminds Lu Anzhi of "The Misty Journey" in his previous life. He still remembered how he was shocked by the wild imagination when he first read this novel in his previous life. The realm of cultivation, the gorgeous and unpredictable cultivation planets in the starry sky, and the various magical weapons all made his eyes shine at that time.

But looking back now, if it weren't for the book "The Misty Journey" still lying in his mind, that's all he could recall, right? Compared with the background that created the genre, the story of "Miao Miao Journey" itself is not too impressive.

Therefore, Lu Anzhi wanted to refine the background setting of this story, and then leave the specific storyline to Xu Changqing to complete. Let's see if the authors in this world collide with the classic settings from another world, and whether there can be wonderful sparks. Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, leaving the body, transforming into a spirit, integrating the body, refining the void, transcending tribulations, Mahayana...

Each realm comes not only from "Piaomiao Journey", but also from the refinement and completion of various subsequent cultivation novels. Lu Anzhi wrote it according to the system that was later improved, and gave detailed explanations for each realm.

After that, there were various different planets and magical and diverse magic weapons. He did not transfer all the background stories of "Miao Miao Journey", but only classified and described each planet according to type. Such a larger frame makes it easier for Xu Changqing to fill in the content.

And this way, it is more convenient and trouble-free for road safety. Otherwise, just writing out the settings would probably take him a lot of time.

He still has to write "Fate Stay Night" now, but he doesn't have time to write so many settings.

"Why did you open another book?"

When Zhang Suxin passed by Lu Anzhi at night, she saw Lu Anzhi had created a new file and couldn't help but ask. She was afraid that Lu Anzhi would be tired.

Lu Anzhi explained to Zhang Suxin: "I will write a setting and give Xu Changqing some guidance. Xu Changqing wants to write a new book."

"That's it."

Zhang Suxin nodded, then looked at what Lu Anzhi wrote and felt that she was not too interested. As for the wild and unconstrained settings and quotations from scriptures, she could see through it. However, she has long been used to it. She only thinks that her husband has the ability to write such things, so she is not surprised.

In comparison, "Fate Stay Night" interested her more.

"Can you show me "Fate" after you finish writing it?"

she asked.

Lu Anzhi nodded and said, "Of course, no problem."

But that night, Lu Anzhi only finished writing the setting of "Piaomiao Journey" and went to bed. Of course, he did not name this new setting. The name of "Piao Miao Journey" was only known to him. Just giving settings will help open up Xu Changqing's thinking.

This night was still a lonely sleep. Xianxian still loves to sleep with her grandma, Zhang Suxin stays with Xiao Qianqian, and Auntie Gu, the confinement nanny, watches.

After waking up the next day, he sent Xianxian to kindergarten, went home and had breakfast, and Lu Anzhi sent the settings to Xu Changqing.

Xu Changqing received the complete outline and was immediately shocked when he saw the complete system settings starting from Qi training, as well as the various homogeneous but different cultivation planets.

"Mr. Lu is indeed Mr. Lu."

He couldn't help but sigh to his wife.

Lu Anzhi continued to write the follow-up to "Fate Stay Night".

Ku Ku has already started urging him to finish this novel. Before chatting with Xu Changqing last night, Lu Anzhi saw the message from Kuku: Boss B, what’s behind?

After opening his laptop this morning, he saw another new message: Boss B, what’s behind?

The urging editor began to reread his own words.

I don’t know if she is anxious to urge Maple Tree to submit the manuscript, or if she is anxious to read the follow-up?

In the subsequent second chapter, King Arthur's identity is still not revealed, but the complete world view of this story has been revealed. Hercules, the son of Zeus with the rank of Berserker, appears with Illya in his car and gives Shirou Emiya an education. , let Shirou Emiya begin to understand the Holy Grail War. Readers also use this battle to understand the setting.

After Lu Anzhi finished writing, he showed the manuscript to his wife. Zhang Suxin had just finished feeding Xiao Qianqian, sat down and read the novel, and then became interested in guessing the rank of the servant. However, she spent a long time guessing who the spearman was and who the knight was, but she couldn't figure it out.

Later, Lu Anzhi sent the manuscript to Kuku, and Kuku was indeed deeply involved in it. And since she was not revealed in Lu An's drama, Saber's identity also needs to be guessed. Before everything was revealed, these things had great appeal to her.

But when all these are revealed in the future, their focus will probably change, such as the Dumb Hair King's Dumb Hair, the Lancer's Lucky E, and the like.

Lu Anzhi re-wrote the dull hair of King Dumb Hair. This feature is the main feature of Artoria, and he cannot ignore it.

After having two chapters of the manuscript, Ku Ku confirmed the quality of Lu Anzhi's new novel and its compatibility with Under the Maple Tree. He felt relieved and handed in the manuscript.

Of course it's not that she doesn't believe in Lu Anzhi's quality, she's just worried that the new manuscript won't meet Maple Tree's needs. Now that it is confirmed that there are no problems with the new manuscript, it is natural for this new novel to enter the next publication process.

So Lu Anzhi quickly received the contract from Maple Tree, which was still his usual template. He took a quick look and signed the contract.

After the contract was sent back, the serialization of the novel was quickly arranged. It will be published in the next issue of "Under the Maple Tree" when it is officially revised back to the electronic magazine.

Lu Anzhi also wrote the third and fourth chapters of "Fate Stay Night" and sent them to Kuku.

(End of this chapter)