Ancient Imperial Examination Daily
Chapter 456
Chapter 456
Lu Jiuyuan looked at Du Jinning, and his eyes were full of admiration: "There are "Linjiang Immortal" and "Thinking" before, and this song "Song of the Wine to the Moon" later, it can be seen that Du Jinning, your poetry is not inferior to your literary talent. As expected, you are worthy of being a disciple of Song He. The poems are written so well, with the demeanor of Nai Shi in the capital. The most rare thing is that your poems are written well and quickly. The philosophy explained in your poems Thoughts are not something ordinary people can do.”
The students below suddenly wailed in their hearts: Do you want to do this? They haven't handed in their poems yet, so why did they give Du Jinning such a high evaluation?Still let people live?
The one who suffers the most is Qi Siyu.
If he had submitted his poems first, Lu Jiuyuan and the others would not have praised Du Jinning so bottomlessly when they saw his poems... right?
What kind of broken poems, can there be his poems?
At this time, he didn't care about the embarrassment just now. Fortunately, the manuscript paper in his hand was not broken by the fall just now. He handed the poem to Tang Zhao: "The disciple has finished the poem, please ask the professor to read it."
Compared with Lu Jiuyuan, he is still more willing to trust Tang Zhao, at least he will not be so partial.
Tang Zhao still hadn't recovered from the sullen anger just now, so he said lightly to Qi Siyu, "Okay, let's put it here."
If in the past, because of Qi Yuandao's relationship, Tang Zhao was always kind to Qi Siyu, even if he couldn't say that he was loving, but this was the first time he was so indifferent to him.
Qi Siyu knew that the mistake just now made Tang Zhao unhappy, and he made such a big scandal just now, it is the best policy to retreat and sit quietly at this time.But he was unwilling to let Lu Jiuyuan and the others keep their eyes on Du Jinning, throwing out their compliments as if they didn't want money.
Relying on his grandfather's face, he still stood where he was, and said to Tang Zhao: "Please also ask the professor to comment."
Hearing that Lu Jiuyuan praised Du Jinning's poems, Tang Zhao wanted to read Du Jinning's poems first. After all, Du Jinning submitted the manuscript first, so he had to comment on Du Jinning's first, and then Qi Siyu's.
But Qi Siyu actually stood here without moving, and he was quite like if you don't comment on my poems, I won't leave. Thinking about Qi Yuandao's contribution to the school, Tang Zhao endured his anger and picked up the poem. The manuscript reads.
To be honest, it is not unreasonable for Qi Siyu's poetic talent to be famous not only in the school, but also in the city.
His poems are fresh and refined, elegant and meaningful, and he is very good at using allusions.
For example, this song: "Spring outing is mighty, it is year after year, and it is the season of pear blossoms. The white brocade has no traces and is fragrant, and the yushu and Qiongba are piled up with snow. The quiet night is heavy, the floating light is misty, and the cold dip melts into the moon. In the sky on earth, the rotten silver glow shines Thorough..." Two allusions were used from Cen Shen's poem and "Zhuangzi. Xiaoyaoyou" to describe Gushe real person.Moreover, although this word is a chanting of things, it is actually a chanting of oneself, which is very in line with the requirements of Lu Jiuyuan's topic.
Tang Zhao felt very good.
He couldn't help but praised: "This poem is written vividly and vividly, which makes people feel fresh, refined, and extraordinary. It's good, very good."
What Qi Siyu wanted was such an effect.
After all, Lu Jiuyuan and the others are newcomers, so they are definitely not comparable to Tang Zhao in terms of prestige.So what if Du Jinning submitted the manuscript first?So what if Lu Jiuyuan and the others favored them?As soon as Tang Zhao said a few words of praise, his disadvantage of submitting the manuscript later was reversed.
After a while, when Lu Jiuyuan saw his manuscript and found that it was better than Du Jinning's, that was the time when he would shine brightly and attract everyone's attention.
The three of Lu Jiuyuan were extremely defensive.When Tang Zhao praised Qi Siyu, the three of them were not convinced.
In their opinion, Du Jinning's poem on this subject is considered to be the ultimate, and what other poem can be better than this one?It's not like they haven't seen Qi Siyu's poems during the college examination. The poems are good poems, but the traces of ax cutting are too heavy, and they are not as refreshing and natural as Du Jinning's.
Lu Jiuyuan handed the manuscript in his hand to Tang Zhao, and said, "Professor Tang, why don't you read this first."
Among the three, Shi Xiu's temperament is the most cautious.
He was afraid that people would see that they looked at Du Jinning too differently and cause unnecessary trouble, so he quickly added: "After all, this manuscript is the first one to be handed in."
Tang Zhao put down the manuscript in his hand and picked up Du Jinning's poems. After thinking about it, he handed Qi Siyu's manuscript to Lu Jiuyuan.
His behavior has no other meaning.
After all, he still doesn't know the level of Du Jinning's poems, but the level of Qi Siyu's poems is indeed good.He didn't want the three of them to look down on his school, so he wanted to present the best things in front of the three of them.
Lu Jiuyuan had no choice but to accept Qi Siyu's poem.
This time Shi Xiu and Peng Shicheng didn't go over, but waited for Lu Jiuyuan to see them before reviewing.
But before they read it, Tang Zhao slapped the table and shouted: "Good poem, good poem. Du Jinning's poem is well written."
As he spoke, he raised his head and looked at Du Jinning, only to find that Du Jinning had already returned to his seat.Only Qi Siyu was still standing there.
There are some things that need to be compared to see the good or bad, such as the poems in his hands, such as being a human being.
Although Qi Siyu's poem is good, but the structure is always a bit small, and the ending falls into the scope of talking about Taoism and teaching; in comparison, Du Jinning's poem is much more grand, not only very titled, but also at the end. It turned out to be a stunning turning point, showing his lofty ambition.The same title, the same meaning, but Qi Siyu's song is far worse than Du Jinning's.
Qi Siyu was expecting Tang Zhao to criticize Du Jinning's poem, when he heard his applause, louder than when he read his poem, as if not loud enough to express his surprise.His heart was about to collapse.
How is that kid's poem so good?What's wrong?Why are they all praising his poems?
When Lu Jiuyuan heard that Tang Zhao also praised Du Jinning's poems well, he was satisfied.
He knew that talents like himself came to the government to study, so it didn't matter to offend Qi Siyu, but it would be unwise to offend Qi Yuandao.In his heart, Qi Siyu's poem was rated as the current No.2. Lu Jiuyuan, because of Qi Yuandao's face, still praised Qi Siyu a few words: "This poem is well written, very spiritual."
If he praised a few more words, it might appear more sincere.But just now he praised Du Jinning for his great skills, but when he arrived at Qi Siyu's place, he only had these two sentences, which felt very insincere in Qi Siyu's ears.
Although Wang Changzhi and Wu Qin are also gentlemen, they are just recruiters, and they are incomparable with Lu Jiuyuan in terms of status and knowledge. As early as when Lu Jiuyuan and the others came, the two of them stood up on their own initiative and put the most central The seat was given up to a few people, and he sat on the side.
Seeing Qi Siyu embarrassed now, the two of them couldn't help it.Wang Changzhi was older, in his sixties, and had no hope of going to school in this life, and he had some talent and fame, so he came to the government school to teach, got some salary to support his family, and at the same time gained some fame.
Therefore, he was very flattering to Qi Yuandao.
Seeing that Qi Siyu's face was not good-looking at this moment, he didn't care whether his actions would make Tang Zhao think deeply, so he hurried over and took Qi Siyu's manuscript from Peng Shicheng who had just got the manuscript paper and hadn't had time to read it, and took a quick look at it , I greatly appreciate it.
After Du Jinning submitted the manuscript, she had nothing to do, so she regarded the above as a big drama. Seeing this situation, she couldn't help it, and laughed while covering her mouth.
Wang Changzhi's actions made her even feel embarrassed, so she didn't know how the client, Qi Siyu, felt.
It's unknown how Qi Siyu feels, but Tang Zhao can't stand it anymore.
Tang Zhao looked up at Qi Siyu, and said with a downcast face, "Go back first. Your seniors haven't finished writing the manuscript yet."
Anyone can understand the meaning of Tang Zhao's words: Everyone hasn't submitted their manuscripts yet, no matter how anxious you are, and no matter how ugly your food looks, you have to wait until everyone has submitted their manuscripts for review, right?
Qi Siyu is not stupid, so he naturally heard it.He hated in his heart, but he didn't dare to show it in the slightest, so he could only respond, and turned around to go back to his seat.
But I don't want to almost meet someone.
He was about to apologize when he looked up and met Qi Muyuan's eyes.Qi Muyuan looked at his cold eyes, which made Qi Siyu feel chills in his heart, a chill ran from the soles of his feet to his neck, and he couldn't help shivering.
Qi Muyuan ignored him at all, walked around him, handed his manuscript to Tang Zhao, saluted each of Tang Zhao and Lu Jiuyuan, and then simply returned to his seat and sat down.
Comparing Du Jinning's behavior with Qi Siyu's stern-faced behavior of trying to force the teachers in the seat to praise him, he can see whether he is superior or inferior.
Those students who feel that their poems are not good and have no desire to compete at all are not particularly attentive in their poems. Since Du Jinning and Qi Siyu came to the stage to submit their manuscripts, their attention has been on the stage.Seeing this scene at this time, they couldn't help but wink at each other below.
Relying on his grandfather's status, Qi Siyu became the king and hegemony in the government school. He is also a narrow-minded person, and he often tripped others up because they offended him.But he did it secretly, and it wasn't too much. With Mr. Wang Changzhi protecting him, Tang Zhao and the others didn't find out, but these things couldn't be hidden from the students.Everyone also criticized him in private.It's just that he is afraid of revenge, dares to be angry but dare not speak.
Seeing him deflated at this moment, everyone is quite happy.
The teachers in the academy have always used the examination method as the standard for marking papers.If you feel good, you will draw a circle on it. If you feel particularly good, you will write a comment on it.The more circles there are and the more comments there are, the better the poem or article is, and the more it can win the first place.
And the seats on the stage are not in accordance with the convention, the center is the most respected, and then sit on both sides in turn.For the convenience of grading papers, Tang Zhao sat at the front. In the past, they were Lu Jiuyuan, Shi Xiu, Peng Shicheng, Wang Changzhi, and Wu Qin.After Wu Qin was the last one to review the manuscript, it would be handed over to Zhai Fu for statistics.The more circles and comments on a manuscript, the higher Saifu will rank that manuscript.
(End of this chapter)
Lu Jiuyuan looked at Du Jinning, and his eyes were full of admiration: "There are "Linjiang Immortal" and "Thinking" before, and this song "Song of the Wine to the Moon" later, it can be seen that Du Jinning, your poetry is not inferior to your literary talent. As expected, you are worthy of being a disciple of Song He. The poems are written so well, with the demeanor of Nai Shi in the capital. The most rare thing is that your poems are written well and quickly. The philosophy explained in your poems Thoughts are not something ordinary people can do.”
The students below suddenly wailed in their hearts: Do you want to do this? They haven't handed in their poems yet, so why did they give Du Jinning such a high evaluation?Still let people live?
The one who suffers the most is Qi Siyu.
If he had submitted his poems first, Lu Jiuyuan and the others would not have praised Du Jinning so bottomlessly when they saw his poems... right?
What kind of broken poems, can there be his poems?
At this time, he didn't care about the embarrassment just now. Fortunately, the manuscript paper in his hand was not broken by the fall just now. He handed the poem to Tang Zhao: "The disciple has finished the poem, please ask the professor to read it."
Compared with Lu Jiuyuan, he is still more willing to trust Tang Zhao, at least he will not be so partial.
Tang Zhao still hadn't recovered from the sullen anger just now, so he said lightly to Qi Siyu, "Okay, let's put it here."
If in the past, because of Qi Yuandao's relationship, Tang Zhao was always kind to Qi Siyu, even if he couldn't say that he was loving, but this was the first time he was so indifferent to him.
Qi Siyu knew that the mistake just now made Tang Zhao unhappy, and he made such a big scandal just now, it is the best policy to retreat and sit quietly at this time.But he was unwilling to let Lu Jiuyuan and the others keep their eyes on Du Jinning, throwing out their compliments as if they didn't want money.
Relying on his grandfather's face, he still stood where he was, and said to Tang Zhao: "Please also ask the professor to comment."
Hearing that Lu Jiuyuan praised Du Jinning's poems, Tang Zhao wanted to read Du Jinning's poems first. After all, Du Jinning submitted the manuscript first, so he had to comment on Du Jinning's first, and then Qi Siyu's.
But Qi Siyu actually stood here without moving, and he was quite like if you don't comment on my poems, I won't leave. Thinking about Qi Yuandao's contribution to the school, Tang Zhao endured his anger and picked up the poem. The manuscript reads.
To be honest, it is not unreasonable for Qi Siyu's poetic talent to be famous not only in the school, but also in the city.
His poems are fresh and refined, elegant and meaningful, and he is very good at using allusions.
For example, this song: "Spring outing is mighty, it is year after year, and it is the season of pear blossoms. The white brocade has no traces and is fragrant, and the yushu and Qiongba are piled up with snow. The quiet night is heavy, the floating light is misty, and the cold dip melts into the moon. In the sky on earth, the rotten silver glow shines Thorough..." Two allusions were used from Cen Shen's poem and "Zhuangzi. Xiaoyaoyou" to describe Gushe real person.Moreover, although this word is a chanting of things, it is actually a chanting of oneself, which is very in line with the requirements of Lu Jiuyuan's topic.
Tang Zhao felt very good.
He couldn't help but praised: "This poem is written vividly and vividly, which makes people feel fresh, refined, and extraordinary. It's good, very good."
What Qi Siyu wanted was such an effect.
After all, Lu Jiuyuan and the others are newcomers, so they are definitely not comparable to Tang Zhao in terms of prestige.So what if Du Jinning submitted the manuscript first?So what if Lu Jiuyuan and the others favored them?As soon as Tang Zhao said a few words of praise, his disadvantage of submitting the manuscript later was reversed.
After a while, when Lu Jiuyuan saw his manuscript and found that it was better than Du Jinning's, that was the time when he would shine brightly and attract everyone's attention.
The three of Lu Jiuyuan were extremely defensive.When Tang Zhao praised Qi Siyu, the three of them were not convinced.
In their opinion, Du Jinning's poem on this subject is considered to be the ultimate, and what other poem can be better than this one?It's not like they haven't seen Qi Siyu's poems during the college examination. The poems are good poems, but the traces of ax cutting are too heavy, and they are not as refreshing and natural as Du Jinning's.
Lu Jiuyuan handed the manuscript in his hand to Tang Zhao, and said, "Professor Tang, why don't you read this first."
Among the three, Shi Xiu's temperament is the most cautious.
He was afraid that people would see that they looked at Du Jinning too differently and cause unnecessary trouble, so he quickly added: "After all, this manuscript is the first one to be handed in."
Tang Zhao put down the manuscript in his hand and picked up Du Jinning's poems. After thinking about it, he handed Qi Siyu's manuscript to Lu Jiuyuan.
His behavior has no other meaning.
After all, he still doesn't know the level of Du Jinning's poems, but the level of Qi Siyu's poems is indeed good.He didn't want the three of them to look down on his school, so he wanted to present the best things in front of the three of them.
Lu Jiuyuan had no choice but to accept Qi Siyu's poem.
This time Shi Xiu and Peng Shicheng didn't go over, but waited for Lu Jiuyuan to see them before reviewing.
But before they read it, Tang Zhao slapped the table and shouted: "Good poem, good poem. Du Jinning's poem is well written."
As he spoke, he raised his head and looked at Du Jinning, only to find that Du Jinning had already returned to his seat.Only Qi Siyu was still standing there.
There are some things that need to be compared to see the good or bad, such as the poems in his hands, such as being a human being.
Although Qi Siyu's poem is good, but the structure is always a bit small, and the ending falls into the scope of talking about Taoism and teaching; in comparison, Du Jinning's poem is much more grand, not only very titled, but also at the end. It turned out to be a stunning turning point, showing his lofty ambition.The same title, the same meaning, but Qi Siyu's song is far worse than Du Jinning's.
Qi Siyu was expecting Tang Zhao to criticize Du Jinning's poem, when he heard his applause, louder than when he read his poem, as if not loud enough to express his surprise.His heart was about to collapse.
How is that kid's poem so good?What's wrong?Why are they all praising his poems?
When Lu Jiuyuan heard that Tang Zhao also praised Du Jinning's poems well, he was satisfied.
He knew that talents like himself came to the government to study, so it didn't matter to offend Qi Siyu, but it would be unwise to offend Qi Yuandao.In his heart, Qi Siyu's poem was rated as the current No.2. Lu Jiuyuan, because of Qi Yuandao's face, still praised Qi Siyu a few words: "This poem is well written, very spiritual."
If he praised a few more words, it might appear more sincere.But just now he praised Du Jinning for his great skills, but when he arrived at Qi Siyu's place, he only had these two sentences, which felt very insincere in Qi Siyu's ears.
Although Wang Changzhi and Wu Qin are also gentlemen, they are just recruiters, and they are incomparable with Lu Jiuyuan in terms of status and knowledge. As early as when Lu Jiuyuan and the others came, the two of them stood up on their own initiative and put the most central The seat was given up to a few people, and he sat on the side.
Seeing Qi Siyu embarrassed now, the two of them couldn't help it.Wang Changzhi was older, in his sixties, and had no hope of going to school in this life, and he had some talent and fame, so he came to the government school to teach, got some salary to support his family, and at the same time gained some fame.
Therefore, he was very flattering to Qi Yuandao.
Seeing that Qi Siyu's face was not good-looking at this moment, he didn't care whether his actions would make Tang Zhao think deeply, so he hurried over and took Qi Siyu's manuscript from Peng Shicheng who had just got the manuscript paper and hadn't had time to read it, and took a quick look at it , I greatly appreciate it.
After Du Jinning submitted the manuscript, she had nothing to do, so she regarded the above as a big drama. Seeing this situation, she couldn't help it, and laughed while covering her mouth.
Wang Changzhi's actions made her even feel embarrassed, so she didn't know how the client, Qi Siyu, felt.
It's unknown how Qi Siyu feels, but Tang Zhao can't stand it anymore.
Tang Zhao looked up at Qi Siyu, and said with a downcast face, "Go back first. Your seniors haven't finished writing the manuscript yet."
Anyone can understand the meaning of Tang Zhao's words: Everyone hasn't submitted their manuscripts yet, no matter how anxious you are, and no matter how ugly your food looks, you have to wait until everyone has submitted their manuscripts for review, right?
Qi Siyu is not stupid, so he naturally heard it.He hated in his heart, but he didn't dare to show it in the slightest, so he could only respond, and turned around to go back to his seat.
But I don't want to almost meet someone.
He was about to apologize when he looked up and met Qi Muyuan's eyes.Qi Muyuan looked at his cold eyes, which made Qi Siyu feel chills in his heart, a chill ran from the soles of his feet to his neck, and he couldn't help shivering.
Qi Muyuan ignored him at all, walked around him, handed his manuscript to Tang Zhao, saluted each of Tang Zhao and Lu Jiuyuan, and then simply returned to his seat and sat down.
Comparing Du Jinning's behavior with Qi Siyu's stern-faced behavior of trying to force the teachers in the seat to praise him, he can see whether he is superior or inferior.
Those students who feel that their poems are not good and have no desire to compete at all are not particularly attentive in their poems. Since Du Jinning and Qi Siyu came to the stage to submit their manuscripts, their attention has been on the stage.Seeing this scene at this time, they couldn't help but wink at each other below.
Relying on his grandfather's status, Qi Siyu became the king and hegemony in the government school. He is also a narrow-minded person, and he often tripped others up because they offended him.But he did it secretly, and it wasn't too much. With Mr. Wang Changzhi protecting him, Tang Zhao and the others didn't find out, but these things couldn't be hidden from the students.Everyone also criticized him in private.It's just that he is afraid of revenge, dares to be angry but dare not speak.
Seeing him deflated at this moment, everyone is quite happy.
The teachers in the academy have always used the examination method as the standard for marking papers.If you feel good, you will draw a circle on it. If you feel particularly good, you will write a comment on it.The more circles there are and the more comments there are, the better the poem or article is, and the more it can win the first place.
And the seats on the stage are not in accordance with the convention, the center is the most respected, and then sit on both sides in turn.For the convenience of grading papers, Tang Zhao sat at the front. In the past, they were Lu Jiuyuan, Shi Xiu, Peng Shicheng, Wang Changzhi, and Wu Qin.After Wu Qin was the last one to review the manuscript, it would be handed over to Zhai Fu for statistics.The more circles and comments on a manuscript, the higher Saifu will rank that manuscript.
(End of this chapter)
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