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Chapter 198 Han Emperor Xian is stronger than Qin Shihuang [Sixth]

"Library News: Congratulations to the author Yuanshi Tianwang, because your work "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" achieved the second place in the overall list of newcomers in 312 Wenyuan, and your work "Chu Han Hegemony" will receive a first-level award. Page recommendation, and a third-level page recommendation, and a reward of tens of millions of people, the specific recommendation time will be given according to the order within 313 years, please make sure to update”

"Library news: Congratulations to the author Yuanshi Tianwang. Your work "Chu-Han Contest" will be rewarded with a million tweets on January 313, 1. Please make sure to update it."

"There are so many rewards for being second on the rookie list!" Liu Xu looked at the news in the backstage of the library in surprise, not knowing how many people Chairman Qianlong had quarreled with because of him, and had no idea what the meeting was about. something happened.

At this time, Liu Xu didn't know how much trouble this tens of millions of people had caused him.

Anyway, in the next few days, Liu Xu will update "Chu-Han Struggle for Hegemony" normally, and the peak of the entire Great Qin Empire will slowly unfold under Liu Xu's pen.

Because the time from the domination of the world to the collapse of the Great Qin Empire was too short, only 14 years in total, you said that it would not work for him to write a "General History of the Qin Dynasty", so Liu Xu simply took Zhao Gao as the early stage The protagonist of the book, uses about 20 chapters to describe the various ruling measures of the Qin Empire during the period when the emperor was still alive.

Of course, it also incidentally described various things that Zhao Gao encountered while serving the first emperor, as well as some of his own character traits, paving the way for Zhao Gao to revise the first emperor's edict and usurp the power of the Qin Dynasty.

Here I must criticize Liu Xu. Even if I copied a copy of Romance of the Three Kingdoms and learned various technical skills of Shuangwen novels in this world, I still don’t know the essence of writing a novel. To be exciting, readers must have the desire to read on.

As a result, Liu Xu didn't write much about all kinds of wonderful contradictions. The protagonist Zhao Gao had almost no other perspectives other than serving Qin Shihuang, so readers could only follow Zhao Gao's eyes to see how to unify the emperor. Weights and measures, how to unify characters, how to unify currency, how to burn folk books, kill warlocks, collect weapons from all over the world to cast 12 golden men, and build a huge mausoleum and Afang Palace for yourself, as well as the Great Wall to defend the Huns in the north, etc. .

Anyway, the first twenty chapters all describe these plots. Although the writing is relatively comprehensive, it completely shows the social situation of the entire Qin Dynasty from the official perspective of the Qin Dynasty.

But the problem is that readers don't like to read these things at all. After Liu Xu finished writing Chapter 1, some people directly criticized it in the group.

"I think the writing method at the beginning of this chapter is not attractive, especially writing this calendar, which cannot play the role of commanding the whole work, and if viewed as an introduction, it seems very long-winded."

"I probably understand what the author wants to write in this chapter, but this chapter is really not like a novel"

“too watery”

"It's really boring. Is Zhao Gao the protagonist? Isn't Liu Bang the one who founded the Han Dynasty? Why did you write about Zhao Gao first!"

Criticisms like this abound in the group, although Liu Xu's original intention is to use Zhao Gao's perspective to fully describe a powerful Qin Dynasty, and then let readers understand what such a huge empire is like. collapsed in an instant.

This is written by him as a historian, ignoring the fundamental point of writing novels.Unlike the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, where Chu and Han struggle for hegemony, there are original texts that can be copied, but the same original text is also a constraint that prevents Liu Xu from writing freely.

But now that he writes his own novel, Liu Xu can write it completely according to his own temperament, so the first half of the novel is similar to the beginning of the history book, which is naturally very boring.

So even if "Chu Han Hegemony" has written more than 20 chapters, there are almost all kinds of criticisms among the readers, although some old readers said that such content is actually very interesting to read, and they can fully understand the author's setting The whole world is more interesting than simply watching some pretentious plots.

But in general, most of the comments are boring and uninteresting.

In addition, the various contents described in the first 20 chapters of the novel have also been complained and dissatisfied, and have been scolded by a large number of readers. Among them, the unification of weights and measures, writing, and currency are the most venomous.

Because these contents occupy nearly six chapters of the plot, no matter in the novel group or the comment area of ​​the novel, everyone is yelling at Liu Xu for being a parallel importer. Let's take a very classic reader's speech as an example.

"I don't know if the author is sick. He actually wants to waste so much pen and ink and our time on things like currency, words, weights and measures, but these things make me vomit."

"If these things are unified, they will be unified. If they are not unified, they will not be unified. What is there to write about? It is completely nonsense to say that these things can shape the entire unified country in the future. Even if these things are scattered, it is not consistent with the unity of the country." Does it matter if they are not unified?"

"Could it be that everyone speaks different languages, and uses different currencies and weights and measures, so that we can't become a unified country?"

"I don't understand, if Qin Shihuang is really as wise and great as the author wrote, why did he put so much effort into doing such a stupid thing! I don't know whether it is Qin Huang who is stupid or a certain garbage author who is too stupid gone."

"Yes, there are people who say that reality is also unified. That's right, we are indeed unified in reality. But isn't this for the convenience of everyone reading novels and gathering everyone's reading power, this is the unity. "

"There is no such thing as world reflection in Huaxia in the novel. Why do you have to unify these things? I think the author is sick, his head is out of tune, and he is self-righteous!"

This kind of comment has been recognized by many readers. Most people think that it is unnecessary to unify these things, and there is no need to spend so much pen and ink to write, and the content is very boring, and it is completely used for water plots.

Later, I wrote about another major policy of Emperor Shihuang, which is the policy of building the Great Wall. They also said that this was a decision made by garbage writers. Building the Great Wall was completely a brainless idea, not to mention how to build the Great Wall in an era without technology. What a waste of manpower and material resources.

Of course, what is the use of repairing the Great Wall?

The Great Wall is so long, and it is impossible to place tens of thousands of troops on each section of the Great Wall. The Huns in the novel only need to break through a section of the Great Wall, and they can drive straight in.

This is the same as when the city is defending against the reflection creatures. As long as a section of the city wall is breached, a large number of reflection creatures will pour in directly, and the walls in other places are meaningless at all.

So the readers felt that the plot was too poisonous, and the author of the rubbish didn't have enough brain capacity to come up with such an awesome idea of ​​building the Great Wall, so he forced Qin Shihuang to implement this stupid policy, and let a Qin Dynasty do it for him. Pay for your own stupidity.

Some people think that the author of the trash can't figure out how to destroy the powerful Qin Dynasty, so he deliberately tossed out such a means of repairing the Great Wall, using this kind of plot to artificially weaken the power of the Qin Dynasty.

It completely reflects the stupidity of the garbage author.

The only diagnostic plot that can be recognized by a large number of readers is the plot of burning books and killing alchemists, because this plot overlaps with the real world very cleverly. It's almost the same, everyone expressed that the connotation has been reached, the insinuation is quite good, and then gave Liu Xu a rare praise.

All in all, almost the vast majority of readers think that "Chu-Han Struggle for Hegemony" is a novel that failed at the beginning, especially the systems that were implemented when the Qin Dynasty was founded were all unimaginable and without any scientific basis, except for intensifying social Apart from contradictions, there is no policy of any long-term significance and value.

Unless Qin Shihuang was reincarnated as a pig, it is absolutely impossible to come up with such a policy, so there is only one answer, that is, the author of the garbage is a pig, and he forcibly lowered Qin Shihuang's intelligence.

And thanks to the garbage author's setting, the Qin Dynasty is the most garbage dynasty in the entire Chinese world, and Qin Shihuang is also the most garbage emperor. Even Han Xiandi Liu Xie is better than him.

At least after Liu Xie succeeded to the throne, the Eastern Han Dynasty lasted for 53 years, but Qin Shihuang, the founding emperor, only had 13 years after he ascended the throne.

Qin Shihuang was the first emperor and also the most trash emperor!
Liu Xu smiled wryly after reading these comments. If Liu Xu knew that this was indeed what Qin Shihuang did, and that Qin Shihuang was indeed an emperor through the ages, he might not be able to help but start revising the novel according to the readers' comments.

But at the same time, Liu Xu also began to doubt whether he was really suitable for writing novels. The first novel he created had such an outrageous start.

(End of this chapter)