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Chapter 2 The teacher teaches you to write novels
Chapter 2 The teacher teaches you to write novels
I thought that after the exam, Liu Xu could go home by himself, but what he didn't expect was that the teacher was waiting at the entrance of the exam room and took all the students back to the classroom.
"I know that some people may feel that the exam is over, so they can rest unscrupulously. Then I want to tell you that the exam is far from over. This is only the first day. For the next three months at least, you will all be in In the state of the exam!"
"Why do you say that? Because you have to keep updating your novels every day."
"Do you think that you can successfully gain readers' recognition just by writing a novel with a maximum of a few thousand words in five hours on the day of the exam?"
"Let me tell you, this is impossible. Without more than [-] words, it will be difficult for readers to truly recognize your novels, let alone provide you with the power to read."
"Although the essay test will forcefully recommend your novel to 1 readers, even if all of these readers read the text you wrote yesterday, it is only a few thousand words, and it is impossible to be sincere. Approve your novel!"
"In the coming time, each of you must ensure that you update at least 4000 words per day, and until the update reaches more than 5 words, it is possible for readers to really like your novels, and then contribute your own reading experience. Power to you! When will 1 of these 1000 readers contribute to your reading power, when will you be able to truly obtain the qualifications of the heaven-sent literary appointment!"
"Also, it is absolutely not allowed to interrupt updates. If you don't update for a day, readers will feel extremely disappointed in you, and they will be completely disappointed in this book." After the teacher finished speaking with a serious expression, he began to comment on the students' novels up.
Unlike the college entrance examination, where you have to wait for nearly a month to see the test papers, the moment the literary examination is over, all relevant novels will be logged in the library that is common throughout the world.
The library is under the official management of the world government, and all novels in the world can only be published in the library, including the novels just finished by these candidates.
Because it is recommended by the literary examination, the library will even force readers to read all the text.
To avoid the emergence of outstanding new writers, but because the beginning of the novel is not interesting, readers will not be interested in reading the beginning, so that the situation of Shanhai Yizhu is why all teachers attach great importance to the literary examination and think it is a change A critical exam for the fate of all students.
After all, this kind of behavior of forcing all readers to read novels, except for the noble reason of literary examination, the rest of the reasons are difficult to make readers willingly force them to finish reading a novel.
At the same time, and only at this time, the teacher can still help his students,
Although not all the teachers in the school are contracted authors, at least they are very close to the contracted authors and have many years of writing experience.
After reading the beginning of their students' novels, they will give more systematic suggestions to help their students continue to write,
To win the recognition of more readers.
The teacher couldn't wait to turn on the teacher's computer, click to enter the library, and directly use his privilege as a teacher to find out all the novels written by his students one by one, and then prepare to read and comment one by one.
"Which one of you will volunteer first?" The teacher asked with a smile, and as a result, two or three brave ones jumped out. The teacher nodded, praised them, and opened a book called "My Defense Can Infinitely Stack Up" first. ", and the author of this novel is sitting next to Liu Xu.
"The title of the book is good. It directly points out the selling point of this book, and at the same time, it can make people interested in reading it!" The teacher nodded, and first praised the classmate, saying that he was flattered.
Then, the teacher began to read, and at the same time, the content of the novel was directly projected onto the big screen behind him, so that all the students could see the specific content of the novel, and Liu Xu was no exception.
As for what this novel is about, in fact, you can already guess it just by reading the title. This is an online game novel, and it is about a world where everyone must play online games. There is a chance to randomly draw props.
As a result, the protagonist actually got an artifact armor. The initial defense of this armor is 0, but every time it receives 100 attacks, it can increase a little defense, and this defense can be superimposed infinitely.
And then... no more, this student only wrote about 4000 words in total, which is the content of two chapters, and naturally there is no follow-up content to read.
"It's okay at the beginning!" The teacher thought for a while, and then commented, "Except for the poor writing, there are no other problems. Such a child should be able to attract readers' interest from the beginning. The most important thing is to continue reading. The next 20 chapters or so."
"I suggest that in the next 20 chapters, your plot can be arranged like this. First of all, you have to let the protagonist be humiliated and beaten by players of the same level, because your armor defense is 0 at the beginning!"
"Afterwards, you can find a hidden map that spawns monsters crazily. The map is full of monsters with fast attack speed but weak attack power, the kind that can attack you 100 times in a few minutes. You retreat in it In a few days, when you come out, you will have the terrifying defensive power of a [-] or [-]-level player, and then you will beat the people who insulted you, beat the boss of the Novice Village, explode more high-grade equipment, etc.!"
"Anyway, at least the plots of the next 50 or so chapters can be written according to this routine, but after 50 chapters, it will be difficult to attract readers' interest in repeated cool points. You have to think about how to create new cool points. At the same time, I want to There is a way to set up some very long-term plots, such as the twists and turns of the story behind this artifact armor, or some hidden conspiracy to destroy the world, etc..." The teacher talked for about 5 minutes, and said This classmate kept nodding his head, and everyone was so excited.
In the next full day, the novels of the whole class basically got comments and help, and Liu Xu also read all the articles of these students.
I found that the novels written by most of the students are basically urban, science fiction, different worlds, online games, etc., which are relatively popular recently, and can quickly create refreshing novels.
Finally, it was finally the turn of Liu Xu's novel.
""The Romance of the Three Kingdoms"? What kind of inexplicable name is this? Liu Xu, just because of your name, you will lose 50% of the readers!" The teacher said heartbroken just by looking at a name.
"what!"
"Hey"
"..."
In the next ten minutes, the teacher's expression continued to undergo various changes, and the expression was so rich that he had never read anyone's novels before.
In the end, it took the teacher nearly 20 minutes to finish reading Liu Xu's novel, which was at least three times longer than the reading time of any previous novel.
"What does Eastern Han mean?" Finally, the teacher couldn't help asking.
"It's a dynasty I made up!" Liu Xu said.
"What do you mean by Dynasty?" The teacher then asked blankly.
"Ah..." Liu Xu was stunned for a moment. Could it be that there is no concept of dynasty in this world?So he could only try his best to explain, "The dynasty is a historical period ruled by the royal family of a clan, a complete family inheritance!"
"..." Hearing Liu Xu's explanation, the teacher's expression became more painful. It took a long time to understand the meaning of this sentence, and then asked, "What does the emperor mean?"
"The emperor... this... is probably the ruler of the whole world!" Liu Xu himself exploded, he had no idea what the meaning of such a word that all Chinese people understood.
"Oh, you mean the president of the world government?" the teacher said.
"Hungry... almost!" Although there is a huge gap in concept between the president and the emperor, Liu Xu doesn't know how to explain this gap, so he can only nod vaguely.
"Student Liu Xu, don't dislike the teacher for asking too many questions, because the questions the teacher asks represent the biggest problem in your book, that is, no one can understand your novel at all!" The teacher was heartbroken. Said.
"Student Liu Xu, although the teacher really wants to praise your creativity, you have come up with so many weird settings, and you even want to design a brand new world view with ambition. But the teacher still wants to tell you that you want to Creating a new worldview is really a good idea and makes for a good book."
"But one step of innovation is a genius, and two steps is a lunatic, but your novel has hundreds of steps of innovation. Even teachers can hardly understand your novel, let alone ordinary readers. Creativity is Good thing, the teacher still wants to tell you that this "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" of yours is not good, and it is impossible to get a written contract from heaven."
"Your novel is a piece of rubbish!" After reading the whole novel, I returned to the scene at the beginning of Chapter 1.
(End of this chapter)
I thought that after the exam, Liu Xu could go home by himself, but what he didn't expect was that the teacher was waiting at the entrance of the exam room and took all the students back to the classroom.
"I know that some people may feel that the exam is over, so they can rest unscrupulously. Then I want to tell you that the exam is far from over. This is only the first day. For the next three months at least, you will all be in In the state of the exam!"
"Why do you say that? Because you have to keep updating your novels every day."
"Do you think that you can successfully gain readers' recognition just by writing a novel with a maximum of a few thousand words in five hours on the day of the exam?"
"Let me tell you, this is impossible. Without more than [-] words, it will be difficult for readers to truly recognize your novels, let alone provide you with the power to read."
"Although the essay test will forcefully recommend your novel to 1 readers, even if all of these readers read the text you wrote yesterday, it is only a few thousand words, and it is impossible to be sincere. Approve your novel!"
"In the coming time, each of you must ensure that you update at least 4000 words per day, and until the update reaches more than 5 words, it is possible for readers to really like your novels, and then contribute your own reading experience. Power to you! When will 1 of these 1000 readers contribute to your reading power, when will you be able to truly obtain the qualifications of the heaven-sent literary appointment!"
"Also, it is absolutely not allowed to interrupt updates. If you don't update for a day, readers will feel extremely disappointed in you, and they will be completely disappointed in this book." After the teacher finished speaking with a serious expression, he began to comment on the students' novels up.
Unlike the college entrance examination, where you have to wait for nearly a month to see the test papers, the moment the literary examination is over, all relevant novels will be logged in the library that is common throughout the world.
The library is under the official management of the world government, and all novels in the world can only be published in the library, including the novels just finished by these candidates.
Because it is recommended by the literary examination, the library will even force readers to read all the text.
To avoid the emergence of outstanding new writers, but because the beginning of the novel is not interesting, readers will not be interested in reading the beginning, so that the situation of Shanhai Yizhu is why all teachers attach great importance to the literary examination and think it is a change A critical exam for the fate of all students.
After all, this kind of behavior of forcing all readers to read novels, except for the noble reason of literary examination, the rest of the reasons are difficult to make readers willingly force them to finish reading a novel.
At the same time, and only at this time, the teacher can still help his students,
Although not all the teachers in the school are contracted authors, at least they are very close to the contracted authors and have many years of writing experience.
After reading the beginning of their students' novels, they will give more systematic suggestions to help their students continue to write,
To win the recognition of more readers.
The teacher couldn't wait to turn on the teacher's computer, click to enter the library, and directly use his privilege as a teacher to find out all the novels written by his students one by one, and then prepare to read and comment one by one.
"Which one of you will volunteer first?" The teacher asked with a smile, and as a result, two or three brave ones jumped out. The teacher nodded, praised them, and opened a book called "My Defense Can Infinitely Stack Up" first. ", and the author of this novel is sitting next to Liu Xu.
"The title of the book is good. It directly points out the selling point of this book, and at the same time, it can make people interested in reading it!" The teacher nodded, and first praised the classmate, saying that he was flattered.
Then, the teacher began to read, and at the same time, the content of the novel was directly projected onto the big screen behind him, so that all the students could see the specific content of the novel, and Liu Xu was no exception.
As for what this novel is about, in fact, you can already guess it just by reading the title. This is an online game novel, and it is about a world where everyone must play online games. There is a chance to randomly draw props.
As a result, the protagonist actually got an artifact armor. The initial defense of this armor is 0, but every time it receives 100 attacks, it can increase a little defense, and this defense can be superimposed infinitely.
And then... no more, this student only wrote about 4000 words in total, which is the content of two chapters, and naturally there is no follow-up content to read.
"It's okay at the beginning!" The teacher thought for a while, and then commented, "Except for the poor writing, there are no other problems. Such a child should be able to attract readers' interest from the beginning. The most important thing is to continue reading. The next 20 chapters or so."
"I suggest that in the next 20 chapters, your plot can be arranged like this. First of all, you have to let the protagonist be humiliated and beaten by players of the same level, because your armor defense is 0 at the beginning!"
"Afterwards, you can find a hidden map that spawns monsters crazily. The map is full of monsters with fast attack speed but weak attack power, the kind that can attack you 100 times in a few minutes. You retreat in it In a few days, when you come out, you will have the terrifying defensive power of a [-] or [-]-level player, and then you will beat the people who insulted you, beat the boss of the Novice Village, explode more high-grade equipment, etc.!"
"Anyway, at least the plots of the next 50 or so chapters can be written according to this routine, but after 50 chapters, it will be difficult to attract readers' interest in repeated cool points. You have to think about how to create new cool points. At the same time, I want to There is a way to set up some very long-term plots, such as the twists and turns of the story behind this artifact armor, or some hidden conspiracy to destroy the world, etc..." The teacher talked for about 5 minutes, and said This classmate kept nodding his head, and everyone was so excited.
In the next full day, the novels of the whole class basically got comments and help, and Liu Xu also read all the articles of these students.
I found that the novels written by most of the students are basically urban, science fiction, different worlds, online games, etc., which are relatively popular recently, and can quickly create refreshing novels.
Finally, it was finally the turn of Liu Xu's novel.
""The Romance of the Three Kingdoms"? What kind of inexplicable name is this? Liu Xu, just because of your name, you will lose 50% of the readers!" The teacher said heartbroken just by looking at a name.
"what!"
"Hey"
"..."
In the next ten minutes, the teacher's expression continued to undergo various changes, and the expression was so rich that he had never read anyone's novels before.
In the end, it took the teacher nearly 20 minutes to finish reading Liu Xu's novel, which was at least three times longer than the reading time of any previous novel.
"What does Eastern Han mean?" Finally, the teacher couldn't help asking.
"It's a dynasty I made up!" Liu Xu said.
"What do you mean by Dynasty?" The teacher then asked blankly.
"Ah..." Liu Xu was stunned for a moment. Could it be that there is no concept of dynasty in this world?So he could only try his best to explain, "The dynasty is a historical period ruled by the royal family of a clan, a complete family inheritance!"
"..." Hearing Liu Xu's explanation, the teacher's expression became more painful. It took a long time to understand the meaning of this sentence, and then asked, "What does the emperor mean?"
"The emperor... this... is probably the ruler of the whole world!" Liu Xu himself exploded, he had no idea what the meaning of such a word that all Chinese people understood.
"Oh, you mean the president of the world government?" the teacher said.
"Hungry... almost!" Although there is a huge gap in concept between the president and the emperor, Liu Xu doesn't know how to explain this gap, so he can only nod vaguely.
"Student Liu Xu, don't dislike the teacher for asking too many questions, because the questions the teacher asks represent the biggest problem in your book, that is, no one can understand your novel at all!" The teacher was heartbroken. Said.
"Student Liu Xu, although the teacher really wants to praise your creativity, you have come up with so many weird settings, and you even want to design a brand new world view with ambition. But the teacher still wants to tell you that you want to Creating a new worldview is really a good idea and makes for a good book."
"But one step of innovation is a genius, and two steps is a lunatic, but your novel has hundreds of steps of innovation. Even teachers can hardly understand your novel, let alone ordinary readers. Creativity is Good thing, the teacher still wants to tell you that this "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" of yours is not good, and it is impossible to get a written contract from heaven."
"Your novel is a piece of rubbish!" After reading the whole novel, I returned to the scene at the beginning of Chapter 1.
(End of this chapter)
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