People are in Panlong, from nine to five
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To revise, through the comments of book friends recently, I feel that the writing is biased.In fact, I originally planned to change the atmosphere of Panlong World through similar competitions, and by the way, the protagonist's area is getting bigger and bigger.
He even thought about taking Linlei Hongmeng to the heavens to play in the end. In this way, the writing might be longer.But now it feels like it might be wrong.There may be problems with the setting at the beginning, but the story in Panlong World is fairly smooth, and the people and things that expand Panlong World can actually be seen by everyone.But after adding the content of the real world competition, the effect is not as smooth as I imagined.Although the test screen I imagined was very exciting, it just lacked the feeling of a dragon.
Especially according to everyone's comments, it should be that I have fallen into a state of fascination with the authorities.
So when I was writing today, my mind was a little confused. In the end, the more I thought about it, the more I couldn't continue to follow this line of thought, and the idea of writing was not clear.So I finally decided to change the follow-up outline.
Today, I will not write along the previous train of thought for the time being.I'll change the angle and continue tomorrow.
(End of this chapter)
To revise, through the comments of book friends recently, I feel that the writing is biased.In fact, I originally planned to change the atmosphere of Panlong World through similar competitions, and by the way, the protagonist's area is getting bigger and bigger.
He even thought about taking Linlei Hongmeng to the heavens to play in the end. In this way, the writing might be longer.But now it feels like it might be wrong.There may be problems with the setting at the beginning, but the story in Panlong World is fairly smooth, and the people and things that expand Panlong World can actually be seen by everyone.But after adding the content of the real world competition, the effect is not as smooth as I imagined.Although the test screen I imagined was very exciting, it just lacked the feeling of a dragon.
Especially according to everyone's comments, it should be that I have fallen into a state of fascination with the authorities.
So when I was writing today, my mind was a little confused. In the end, the more I thought about it, the more I couldn't continue to follow this line of thought, and the idea of writing was not clear.So I finally decided to change the follow-up outline.
Today, I will not write along the previous train of thought for the time being.I'll change the angle and continue tomorrow.
(End of this chapter)
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