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224. Finale
Finale (Book Cutting Notice)
According to my past experience as a reader, generally when the author starts to take leave for various reasons, it often means that the book is about to become eunuch.
Let’s start with the outline of the book.
The main line is to collect 7 "Phaseless Scales" in each world, fight with enemies to capture 10 "Holy Tree Talisman", and collect the Golden World Holy Tree Brand. In the end, the protagonist relies on the blessings left by the "dragon" and "tree" , defeated the BOSS "Dragon of Time" and became the new Creator God.
The background is that the Creator God who created everything is tired of creating the world and wants to find his own origin.
He left behind the "Creation God Candidate" mechanism to select qualified successors.
[Creation Simulator] is the executor of the mechanism, the Golden World Sacred Tree is the supervisor of the rules, and the Dragon God is the guardian of order.
After the Dragon God created the Dragon Clan and disappeared, the Dragon Clan was torn apart. The Dragon of Time inherited most of the Dragon God's power by devouring all its kind. (The "Creation God Candidate" responsible for the execution of [Creation Simulator] ended in the dragon civil war in the first era. The Golden World Sacred Tree re-created the universe and evolved into the second era.)
Then in the second era, the Dragon of Time focused on the original power of the Golden World Sacred Tree. It used various conspiracies to cause the Golden World Sacred Tree to split and degrade into ten Golden World Trees, and used the long time to consume it. , Devouring the origin of the Holy Tree of the Golden World, in order to achieve its own evolution and become the next Creation Dragon God.
Every time the Golden World Tree degenerates into seeds and is regenerated, a trace of its origin will be stolen by the Dragon of Time. (Subspecies such as fantasy stars, elements, and life are the next-level world trees that were born when the origin of the golden world tree was stolen)
The Second Age was destroyed.
In the third era, it evolved under the joint influence of the Dragon of Time and the ten golden World Trees.And the [Creation Simulator] also in each era, when executing the "Creation God Candidates" program, the Dragon of Time gradually discovered loopholes in the rules, secretly controlling the process and results of each "Creation God Candidate" .
The "Phaseless Scale" is another part of the power created after the disappearance of the Dragon God. The Dragon of Time cannot control it, so those who have always regarded the "Creator" who holds the "Phaseless Scale" as a potential enemy.
For this reason, He guided the previous "Creators" to destroy the world of "Sora", the hometown of Paradox, the Planeswalker, and other worlds.
This is to prevent the "Creator" from coming into contact with the "Phaseless Scales".
After Ye Xing collects the "Golden World Holy Tree Brand", he can not be disturbed by the world and maintain the permanent effect of 2 times the attribute increase as the "Creator". Therefore, when all personal attributes reach 50 points, under the increase He already has 100 points of all attributes that exceed the world limit (the Dragon of Time's all attributes are 99).
In the end, Ye Xing relied on the ability of "Phaseless Scale" to fight back, and after becoming the new Creator God, he restored and restored the original world. (Except for enemies, all other beings who died as a result of the "Creation God Candidates" have been resurrected.)
The story development of this book is generally like this. There is actually a lot more content that I want to write:
(The wild world invades the real world in reverse, and the 101st "Creators" step forward to protect the real world;
Creators whose worlds have reached maturity can directly seize the authority of lower-level world creators without harming their lives.For this reason, those "creators" who were lagging behind in the ranking chose to transfer their "authority" to captain Tan Yi for various reasons;
Therefore, he competed with Ye Xing for the only "Creation God Candidate" spot in the later period, and after losing, he said the last words "If you are a god, so be it."
Finally, under the design of the Dragon of Time, the protagonist fell into a passive situation of "all the worlds come to fuck". The strongest "Creator" in history came across time and launched an attack on the world of "Holy Tree".)
But as some book friends commented, not only did the plot have repetitive routines, but it also made me feel tired while reading. After considering the current results and writing status, I finally decided to cut the book.
(PS: After all, the author himself has never been a creator god. Every time he compiles the setting of a new world and the unique races of that world, he has to rack his brains)
Finally, I will make an experience summary of the writing process of this book and sort out the pitfalls I encountered while writing the book.
Advantages: 1. Internal investment can pass the lottery
2. Write an outline before starting the book.
Things to note:
Rhythm: 1. The pace of the plot in the early stage was too slow. In the middle and late stages, in order to catch up with the progress of strength, the pace suddenly became very fast (reason analysis: the positioning of the creation flow is not clear, maybe more readers want to watch the farming genre) Development, or the kind of creation genre unique to the protagonist, and when I actually wrote it, I was referring to the Plane War flow and the Total War series)
Emotion: 2. The plot in the middle and later stages of the book has failed to bring emotional ups and downs to the readers, and has become like a running account, dryly describing the resource accumulation process before each strength improvement, etc. The online article will eventually be Still cool and happy.
Characters (settings): 3. This book gives too many settings, and new characters, goods or enemies are added in each world.Once the number increases, it becomes uncontrollable. Old characters appear less and less, and the images of new characters are too shallow.Even if the enemy appears directly without any foreshadowing, it will appear very abrupt and have a sense of separation.
Not only does the reader feel tired while reading, but as the author, I cannot control the plot.
Combat strength: 3. Although the strength level has been established when writing the outline, according to reader feedback, the combat strength has shown signs of collapse (the same is true in the previous book, which is an old problem). This shows that at the beginning, the design It's not detailed enough.Once combat power is set too high, it cannot be stabilized.
Subject matter: 4. New authors really have to start with popular subjects. Regardless of whether they are fandom or urban, they can bring a certain amount of traffic and popularity (at least it is much better than staying alone on unpopular channels)
Map: 5. The map is changed too frequently. Even before the exploration of the original world is completed because the enemies are too strong, the protagonist has already gone to a new world, introducing new characters and plots (which may make readers stumble while reading, and also affect those who The emotional rhythms of readers who read every day.
After all, web articles are not games, so there is no need to design a storyline like [it can only be played from the other side].
The diarrhea-like sense of smoothness may bring about a good experience. I may try this rhythm in the next book)
Reading accumulation: 6. Although the channel I voted for is science fiction, the actual content it writes has little to do with it. It is more like a "stitch monster" like the Skrats.Such as the development of world civilization, industrial processes, technological manufacturing history, etc.
These all require sufficient knowledge reserves, but I did not realize this before publishing the book. After the internal investment was approved, I happily published the book.
Update: 7. I would like to kowtow and apologize to all readers!
The most important thing about web articles is updating.The update time of this book is unstable, late at night, and the number of words updated daily is uncompetitive (the biggest reason is laziness + procrastination)
It is very necessary to prepare and save the manuscript in advance.
Regarding the concept of the new book, there are currently two main directions: one is the Tokyo Kaitan genre, which focuses on youth daily life and reasoning; the other is a Game of Thrones-themed fanfic.
If you are interested, you can wait until around mid-October and click on the author's profile picture to see if there are any new books.
Finally, I wish you all good health and all the best.
Peace, joy, success and no worries!
(End of this chapter)
According to my past experience as a reader, generally when the author starts to take leave for various reasons, it often means that the book is about to become eunuch.
Let’s start with the outline of the book.
The main line is to collect 7 "Phaseless Scales" in each world, fight with enemies to capture 10 "Holy Tree Talisman", and collect the Golden World Holy Tree Brand. In the end, the protagonist relies on the blessings left by the "dragon" and "tree" , defeated the BOSS "Dragon of Time" and became the new Creator God.
The background is that the Creator God who created everything is tired of creating the world and wants to find his own origin.
He left behind the "Creation God Candidate" mechanism to select qualified successors.
[Creation Simulator] is the executor of the mechanism, the Golden World Sacred Tree is the supervisor of the rules, and the Dragon God is the guardian of order.
After the Dragon God created the Dragon Clan and disappeared, the Dragon Clan was torn apart. The Dragon of Time inherited most of the Dragon God's power by devouring all its kind. (The "Creation God Candidate" responsible for the execution of [Creation Simulator] ended in the dragon civil war in the first era. The Golden World Sacred Tree re-created the universe and evolved into the second era.)
Then in the second era, the Dragon of Time focused on the original power of the Golden World Sacred Tree. It used various conspiracies to cause the Golden World Sacred Tree to split and degrade into ten Golden World Trees, and used the long time to consume it. , Devouring the origin of the Holy Tree of the Golden World, in order to achieve its own evolution and become the next Creation Dragon God.
Every time the Golden World Tree degenerates into seeds and is regenerated, a trace of its origin will be stolen by the Dragon of Time. (Subspecies such as fantasy stars, elements, and life are the next-level world trees that were born when the origin of the golden world tree was stolen)
The Second Age was destroyed.
In the third era, it evolved under the joint influence of the Dragon of Time and the ten golden World Trees.And the [Creation Simulator] also in each era, when executing the "Creation God Candidates" program, the Dragon of Time gradually discovered loopholes in the rules, secretly controlling the process and results of each "Creation God Candidate" .
The "Phaseless Scale" is another part of the power created after the disappearance of the Dragon God. The Dragon of Time cannot control it, so those who have always regarded the "Creator" who holds the "Phaseless Scale" as a potential enemy.
For this reason, He guided the previous "Creators" to destroy the world of "Sora", the hometown of Paradox, the Planeswalker, and other worlds.
This is to prevent the "Creator" from coming into contact with the "Phaseless Scales".
After Ye Xing collects the "Golden World Holy Tree Brand", he can not be disturbed by the world and maintain the permanent effect of 2 times the attribute increase as the "Creator". Therefore, when all personal attributes reach 50 points, under the increase He already has 100 points of all attributes that exceed the world limit (the Dragon of Time's all attributes are 99).
In the end, Ye Xing relied on the ability of "Phaseless Scale" to fight back, and after becoming the new Creator God, he restored and restored the original world. (Except for enemies, all other beings who died as a result of the "Creation God Candidates" have been resurrected.)
The story development of this book is generally like this. There is actually a lot more content that I want to write:
(The wild world invades the real world in reverse, and the 101st "Creators" step forward to protect the real world;
Creators whose worlds have reached maturity can directly seize the authority of lower-level world creators without harming their lives.For this reason, those "creators" who were lagging behind in the ranking chose to transfer their "authority" to captain Tan Yi for various reasons;
Therefore, he competed with Ye Xing for the only "Creation God Candidate" spot in the later period, and after losing, he said the last words "If you are a god, so be it."
Finally, under the design of the Dragon of Time, the protagonist fell into a passive situation of "all the worlds come to fuck". The strongest "Creator" in history came across time and launched an attack on the world of "Holy Tree".)
But as some book friends commented, not only did the plot have repetitive routines, but it also made me feel tired while reading. After considering the current results and writing status, I finally decided to cut the book.
(PS: After all, the author himself has never been a creator god. Every time he compiles the setting of a new world and the unique races of that world, he has to rack his brains)
Finally, I will make an experience summary of the writing process of this book and sort out the pitfalls I encountered while writing the book.
Advantages: 1. Internal investment can pass the lottery
2. Write an outline before starting the book.
Things to note:
Rhythm: 1. The pace of the plot in the early stage was too slow. In the middle and late stages, in order to catch up with the progress of strength, the pace suddenly became very fast (reason analysis: the positioning of the creation flow is not clear, maybe more readers want to watch the farming genre) Development, or the kind of creation genre unique to the protagonist, and when I actually wrote it, I was referring to the Plane War flow and the Total War series)
Emotion: 2. The plot in the middle and later stages of the book has failed to bring emotional ups and downs to the readers, and has become like a running account, dryly describing the resource accumulation process before each strength improvement, etc. The online article will eventually be Still cool and happy.
Characters (settings): 3. This book gives too many settings, and new characters, goods or enemies are added in each world.Once the number increases, it becomes uncontrollable. Old characters appear less and less, and the images of new characters are too shallow.Even if the enemy appears directly without any foreshadowing, it will appear very abrupt and have a sense of separation.
Not only does the reader feel tired while reading, but as the author, I cannot control the plot.
Combat strength: 3. Although the strength level has been established when writing the outline, according to reader feedback, the combat strength has shown signs of collapse (the same is true in the previous book, which is an old problem). This shows that at the beginning, the design It's not detailed enough.Once combat power is set too high, it cannot be stabilized.
Subject matter: 4. New authors really have to start with popular subjects. Regardless of whether they are fandom or urban, they can bring a certain amount of traffic and popularity (at least it is much better than staying alone on unpopular channels)
Map: 5. The map is changed too frequently. Even before the exploration of the original world is completed because the enemies are too strong, the protagonist has already gone to a new world, introducing new characters and plots (which may make readers stumble while reading, and also affect those who The emotional rhythms of readers who read every day.
After all, web articles are not games, so there is no need to design a storyline like [it can only be played from the other side].
The diarrhea-like sense of smoothness may bring about a good experience. I may try this rhythm in the next book)
Reading accumulation: 6. Although the channel I voted for is science fiction, the actual content it writes has little to do with it. It is more like a "stitch monster" like the Skrats.Such as the development of world civilization, industrial processes, technological manufacturing history, etc.
These all require sufficient knowledge reserves, but I did not realize this before publishing the book. After the internal investment was approved, I happily published the book.
Update: 7. I would like to kowtow and apologize to all readers!
The most important thing about web articles is updating.The update time of this book is unstable, late at night, and the number of words updated daily is uncompetitive (the biggest reason is laziness + procrastination)
It is very necessary to prepare and save the manuscript in advance.
Regarding the concept of the new book, there are currently two main directions: one is the Tokyo Kaitan genre, which focuses on youth daily life and reasoning; the other is a Game of Thrones-themed fanfic.
If you are interested, you can wait until around mid-October and click on the author's profile picture to see if there are any new books.
Finally, I wish you all good health and all the best.
Peace, joy, success and no worries!
(End of this chapter)
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