Resurrection of the Mystery: Starting from the Clone of the Stone-born Monkey.

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It was on the shelves for 10 days, and the average order was from 1300 to 2100
According to the rules, 100 words are 1 words, and the author needs 8 words plus more.

There is also the reward part, currently there are 1 rewards, according to 1 coin 4 reward, plus [-] words
The monthly ticket is currently 340, which is still a long way from the two goals of 500 and 1000 (crazy hint!)
A total of 2 words from the first subscription and the previous month's monthly subscription have been paid off.

The next 8 words will be added. It’s a bit much. At least I can finish more than half of it before the end of this month.

Jia Geng is like this,

Thank you readers for your support, thank you very much for your support
Then read the reader comments recently.

The author is relatively glass-hearted, and he only dares to read the comments once every three or four days. The rest of the time, he is watching the subscription data in the background.

As for specific comments

The author belongs to that kind. The reader gives a little criticism, and the author has to reflect all morning:
Did the author make a mistake?Where did I write it wrong?Where are the roots?Can it be changed?How to avoid it in the future?

Ahem, so I read the comments really late.

I read the comments this morning

Except for the free chapters, there are indeed problems with the writing, and the parts that cannot be changed, and they are repeatedly whipped to death, making people feel ashamed and unbearable,

Paid Chapters.
In yesterday's comment, it was said that the strength and body shape of the snake avatar were not suitable.

It's already 25 meters long, so how come its explosive power is only nine tons?
Cough cough, listen to my sophistry.
Well, when I wrote it at the time, when considering data growth, I actually ignored the issue of tonnage.

Well, I checked it on the Internet. The 15-meter-long snake is about 1.1 tons. It is a Titan python, and its head is about the size of a 13-year-old boy.This is an extinct snake

In the past century, there have been snakes nearly 15 meters long, weighing approximately 500 kilograms.
A 10 meter long snake weighs 225 kilograms

However, a whale with a body length of 15 meters can reach a body weight of 30 tons.
Different species, the weight gain brought about by body length is indeed not the same.
There are no snakes over 20 meters in the existing world. It is really hard for the author to refer to the weight. The overall weight of a 25-meter snake should be more than 3 tons, right?
Then some readers asked, this is the world of high martial arts, how come the strength of the alien beast is about 3 times of his own weight?

In the real world, the world boxing champion weighing 200 jin can punch up to 700 jin with explosive force,

Ordinary humans can more than triple their limits, so how come the alien beasts in the world of high martial arts are only tripled?

Is this unreasonable?
Heck, listen to the author's sophistry again,
The snake's attack method is not "bumping" and "drawing", but "entangling" and strangling.

Whose snakes use head hammers and tail whips to hunt and kill animals, so they use the muscles of the head and the muscles of the tail to hunt and kill. Don't they all rely on winding and strangling to use the muscles of the snake's whole body?
It's like a boxing champion doesn't fight with his fists, but bites with his teeth.
The explosive power of impact and whipping is nine tons, so the explosive power brought by the entangling secret is even greater, isn't it?

Every contact area of ​​the strangled enemy will be squeezed by more than nine tons of force. This is the real explosive power of the giant snake!

Well, well, having said so much, it’s all patched after the fact. When I calculated the growth data at the time, I really didn’t think about the tonnage issue. Now I can only round it back as much as possible. It should be barely rounded (probably ?)
In the follow-up, the issue of tonnage will indeed be considered, and then the snake clone will not always use attack methods that are not suitable for its own body structure, but will improve and integrate its strength.

After all, the behemoth must have a card.

In terms of details, the earlier comment about the details of the snake training martial arts, the author paid attention to it later.

Except for some details that were not considered, there is also the direction of the story.

Some readers said that the proportion of "clone" and "main" plots will be neglected. The main plot is good, but the clone plot is not to your liking, or vice versa.
Hmm. When the author writes the story, it is like playing "StarCraft" or "Red Alert". Both the main body and the avatar are heroic units in the hands of the commander. It is a multi-line operation and commands multiple units to develop at the same time.
When the author was writing the book, he didn't feel a sense of separateness and separation of the subject, because in the author's view, they are one.

Just like the limbs and internal organs of a person, although they have different functions and appearances, they are all essential parts of a person.

The main body forms the head, and the clones form the limbs and internal organs!

The avatar is the fist that the protagonist throws out, a tool for exploring the world.

Hmm. The author's idea should be correct, but maybe the storyline arrangement and language expression ability are still a little bit lacking, and this feeling has not been conveyed to all readers.

I reflect, I reflect.
Some readers said that too many intense stories and conflicts would make them feel tired. This is indeed quite reasonable. This book is not just a combat novel, but also has farming elements.

Isn't farming just about staying calm and growing patiently? Isn't it tiring to fight and kill?
Some people like adventure, and some people like farming. The author is also thinking about weighing the proportion of the two types of storylines.

Farming is for self-improvement and harvesting, and taking risks is to add to the icing on the cake, improve the best, and speed up farming.

Obtain more tools that are beneficial to farming during the adventure,
The progress obtained from farming is also the confidence to take risks.

Ahem, actually, the author has updated 14 words in the ten days since it was put on the shelves!

The free chapter part is only 17 words.

The rhythm of the story after the paid chapter, the two-day update for stable development, and the two-day update for adventure harvest, but I update quickly!
Therefore, the plot advances very fast. The adventure plot is finished in two days, and the farming and management is finished in two days.

I never want water and procrastination!

If the daily update is only 4000 words, then this cycle may be extended a lot, and the current plot may not be written until next month.

Hmm. Let the author think about it, maybe the plot performance is a little less effective, and the text needs to be refined a little more to deliver a better effect.

Being able to express more effects with the least amount of words is probably the pursuit of most authors.
Some readers also asked whether the tone would be too high after it is released. The adventures come one after another, and the monsters appear one after another. Each one is stronger than the last. How should the follow-up plot be written?

Hmm. At this time, it is time to test the author's accumulation of reading materials. If I have read a lot before, then there will be no shortage of materials to write!
Ten years of bookworms, worthy of a battle!
(End of this chapter)