tokyo soulful legend

Chapter 103 Her Day Off [Chapter 3K]

The next day, weekend, at ten o'clock in the morning.

In the Arakawa District, in the Magic Cafe under the Kakugengawa Building, Shiori Kashiwahara, who was yawning but extremely high-spirited, looked expectantly at Risa Takeda in front of her.

Last night, she wrote a manuscript for a long time.

The effect of collecting materials is remarkable. She has gained a lot of ideas and words for reference, which can be regarded as filling her previous ideas and repairing the written content, while the content that stuck her before Passed by her naturally.

"This time the original manuscript..."

Risa Takeda considered her words, raised her eyebrows, and her eyes fell on Bai Yuan Shizhi's face, her eyes reflected that delicate and pretty face that was very tired but extremely energetic between her brows and eyes.

"Does it need to be revised?"

Shiori Baiyuan suddenly became nervous. Risa Takeda can definitely be called the "old man" of Baiyuanchuan Library. The quality of the product is good or bad, and it can be judged sharply.

"No, this manuscript is a one-to-one reproduction of the ideas you told me at the time." Takeda Risa shook her head and simply dismissed Baiyuan Shiori's random thoughts, "The quality is There is no problem at all. Even if I told you before that this subject matter is actually not palatable, but again, as long as it is good enough, it can break many rules.

"From an editor's standpoint, I personally think that the manuscript you have shown now, Mr. Bai Zhi, has considerable potential.

"Maybe some places still need to be repaired and repaired, for example, the handling of some small details can be done more smoothly, and some dialogues can be pondered.

"However, for this part of the repair, I personally think that you have to wait a few days later, when your mind calms down, and then make a decision."

Hearing this, Bai Yuan Shizhi breathed a sigh of relief, and then she looked at her editor curiously, "What if it's from a personal standpoint?"

She understood what Takeda Risa's "if" meant. From the editor's standpoint, the other party said that, and it was a business matter. From a personal standpoint, the other party's thinking might be a little off.

"Well, let me think about how to tell you..." Risa Takeda was silent for a while, then raised her head, and met Shiori Baiyuan's eyes looking at her in the air, "Let me just say it straight, you I always have an indescribable sense of déjà vu for this hero in my works.”

Takeda Risa had met Kitagawa Che, and she had even seen a photo of the young author in Kaoru Kano's place.

Under this series of premise, every time she sees the "he" described by Bai Yuan Shizhi, especially the traits that Beichuan Che has deeply felt for her in this "he", she will always feel uncomfortable. Consciously associate this 'he' with Che Kitagawa.

"Sister Lisha, what do you mean?"

Baiyuan Shizhi did not take the initiative to say that sentence.

"Does the 'male protagonist' in your novel have..." Takeda Risa didn't finish her words, but silently cast a questioning look at Bai Yuan Shiori.

Some words don’t need to be finished. We are all smart people. The communication between smart people will be difficult to deal with during the game of interests, but when there is cooperation and no conflict of interest, it is absolutely worry-free.

The male protagonist in Baiyuan Shizhi's works is a bit too 'lively'.

It is obvious at a glance that this character is a prototype in her life.

"Yes." Baiyuan Shiori nodded, but she didn't hide anything. In other words, with Takeda Risa's temperament, since she has already asked this step, she basically said it clearly, even if she gave a negative answer. , the other party will not believe it.

What's more, she didn't intend to hide it at all.

Just now, she called Takeda Risa "Risa sister", which means that at this moment, their identities are no longer editors and authors, but good friends.

"So, oh." As if she suddenly remembered something, Takeda Risa closed the laptop in front of her, propped up her chin with her left hand, raised her eyebrows, and looked at Bai Yuan Shiori with interest, "Continue. Our conversation has nothing to do with the editor and the author, it is just a private conversation between friends."

After the words fell, Bai Yuan Shizhi nodded.

So, Risa Takeda continued with peace of mind, "I remember, Xun seemed to have said that he and you are in the same school but in different classes, right?"

In Takeda Risa's impression, ever since she started cooperating with Bai Yuan Shiori, this young and beautiful girl rarely mentioned the opposite sex of the same age, even in private, when she occasionally invited each other to have a meal, they What we talked about the most during the day were morning dramas, novels, and things that happened in school. Like now, it was the first time that someone of the opposite sex of the same age was written into a book, or even acted as the male protagonist.

"Yes."

Bai Yuan Shizhi nodded and gave an affirmative answer.

Risa Takeda thought about it, and made up the picture in her head, and she asked tentatively, "You won't go to him after every class, will you?"

"Not at all." Bai Yuan Shizhi showed an expression of "how is that possible". If she went to Bei Chuan Che every class, it would be too outrageous. The frequency of her going to Class A of Senior One is only a week. It looks high, but if it is averaged out every day, it is actually only once or twice.

"Oh, that's okay." Risa Takeda breathed a sigh of relief, "If you have to go for a walk after every class, it will be a big problem."

"for example?"

Bai Yuan Shizhi looked at her with some doubts.

"Sometimes contact that is too hot and does not pay attention to distance will burn yourself and others." Risa Takeda shrugged and added silently, "This is an emotional consultant I have been working on for many years. Teacher's personal experience."

This is what she said after hearing too many complaints from her friends.

This is the reason why most first loves have no good results. Everyone is very jerky, and they don’t know how to like someone. When they are hurt, separated, and finally learn how to like and treat someone, First love is gone.

"I see."

Bai Yuan Shizhi nodded thoughtfully, but the other party reminded her.

However, she also knew clearly that the other party was not her, and the experiences she provided could only be discussed in general terms. How to use it specifically and whether to use it or not were all things she should ponder and think about.

"Then, back to the topic." Risa Takeda coughed lightly, dragging the topic back to the original point, "I want to know, is this book over so far, or is there still part of it that hasn't been written yet?" over?"

The original manuscript that Bai Yuan Shizhi showed her was only about [-] words, which is quite satisfactory in terms of the average volume of novels about campus romances, but the overall story gave her the feeling that it was more like a certain story. This level is not over yet.

"There's still a part that hasn't been written yet."

Bai Yuan Shizhi gave the answer.

On the one hand, it was based on the time relationship last night, and on the other hand, the most critical thing was that she actually had not thought about the ending of the story.

"how much time is required?"

Takeda Risa asked the question.

Personally, she is very optimistic about this manuscript and likes it very much. As a reader, she is looking forward to the development of the plot, whether the male and female protagonists can be together, and whether the second female lead will be together. will leave.

However, as far as she is concerned, she still prefers another heroine with an indescribable sense of vulnerability to the heroine of the warm civilian family.

"Before the end of this month?"

Bai Yuan Shizhi thought for a while and gave such an answer.

She didn't talk too much, so that she gave words like 'just a few days', on the contrary, she gave herself a relatively generous time.

On the one hand, it is based on the current yesterday, on the other hand, it is because she herself needs to think about how the two heroines will end.

The current plot has exceeded her own initial estimate, and she can't even artificially interfere with the character's reversal.

"Relatively speaking, there is still plenty of time."

Takeda Risa nodded, recognizing Bai Yuan Shiori's statement.

"Yeah, leave enough time, do it in a leisurely manner, and no one is forcing me." Bai Yuan Shizhi pouted and made a small joke, "It's comfortable not to have a deadline."

Hearing this, Risa Takeda rolled her eyes, and said to herself that you are a real girl, is it really okay to talk about this in front of the editor?
It feels like talking about not doing homework in front of the subject teacher, and the main point is bravery.

"What are you going to do next?" Risa Takeda coughed slightly, took out her phone and looked at the time. It was still early, and there was still half an hour before eleven o'clock. "Wait. Wait, have lunch here before leaving, or do you say?"

"I'm going to go straight home."

Bai Yuan Shizhi yawned big.

Today she doesn't plan to touch this again, she has even thought about it, after the current matter is over, she will take a taxi straight home, take a nap, and make up for last night's sleep.

"Well... let me take you home."

Risa Takeda hesitated for a moment, but said this sentence anyway.

"Thank you."

Uncharacteristically, Bai Yuan Shizhi did not try to be brave, but complied honestly.

"Huh."

Hearing this, Takeda Risa let out a low cry, looked at Bai Yuan Shiori a few times in surprise, and thought to herself that you have become a stranger too.

This girl was not like this.

But Risa Takeda thought for a while, then smiled with relief, why Baiyuan Shiori changed is not important, what is important is that her change saves her a process of persuasion.

If the process is simplified and the result remains the same, that's good.

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　　Thanks to teacher 8852 for the monthly ticket and teacher WINtert3 for the reward. Your support is the motivation for my writing.

　　
　
(End of this chapter)