Tokyo star girlfriend is a love brain, what should I do?

Isn’t Chapter 16 just editing? [Please vote for recommendations and follow up on reading]

For students who are trying to complete their graduation project for the first time, scripts often have many flaws.

Issues such as the logic of the plot and the speed of development require several or even dozens of revisions before it can be regarded as barely watchable.

Of course, there are students who are so gifted that they hardly need revision.

But handing over a thick book that can be used as a commercial movie script for the first time...

It was indeed the first time I met Yui Koike.

No, to be precise, this is probably the first time in the entire Qiyu Art University, right?

"Then...is this script okay?"

Kimura Hayato asked hesitantly.

He is more concerned about whether the script can be passed.

"It's too good." Koike Yui sighed softly, tapping her slender fingers on the desk.

"Two hours is too long. After all, this is a school, not a theater. This script is more suitable for commercial shooting."

Too long?
Kimura Hayata pondered for a moment and then said: "Then if the duration is compressed to less than 10 minutes, is it okay?"

"It's possible, but it's not easy to compress so much content..." Yui Koike frowned, "It's not easy."

"no problem."

A smile appeared on Kimura Hayata's face.

Two hours become four and 10 minutes. This operation...

Isn't it just editing?

"Huh?" Koike Yui was puzzled.

"Teacher Xiaochi, please lend me your computer."

"Ah good."

Koike Yui stood up in confusion, watching Kimura Hayata take off the backpack on his back and take out a USB flash drive from it.

Plugging in the USB flash drive, Kimura Hayata opened the backup script file of "Tonight, the World's Love in the World" saved in it.

The script-heavy text appears on the computer screen.

Kimura Hayata pulled out the keyboard, the mouse kept switching positions on the screen, and he pressed the delete key frantically.

Seeing scenes and shots disappear one after another in the document, Yui Koike wanted to say something.

But seeing that Kimura Hayabusa was too focused, he still chose to remain silent.

Always have to see what he does before evaluating...

I don’t know how much time has passed, but the document has bottomed out.

Kimura Hayata stopped pressing the delete key.

More than half of the original text document has been deleted.

Kimura Hayata quickly browsed the document from the beginning.

"That should be enough." Kimura Hayata raised his head and looked at Koike Yui, "The current script can be controlled within four to 10 minutes."

Koike Yui nodded somewhat dullly.

The two exchange places.

Kimura Hayata stood quietly aside, and Koike Yui looked at the script document on the computer screen.

A two-hour script was cut down to four and 10 minutes in just a short time?

Koike Yui doubts whether Kimura Hayata's actions will affect the plot line and rationality of the film.

but……

As her mouse wheel kept scrolling.

Koike Yui's eyes widened.

After a long time, she looked away from the last punctuation mark in the document.

wonderful.

That was the only word left in her mind.

I originally thought that such major deletions and major changes would definitely destroy the original story line of the script, and may even greatly reduce the viewability of the entire script.

But Kimura Hayata was very bold and deleted all the family lines of all the main characters in the original script.

Only the plots of the male protagonist Kamiya Toru, the female protagonist Maori Hino and the female protagonist Koizumi are retained.

If the original script is interspersed with the stories behind each character, it is like a piece of ice gradually getting better and better little by little.

The deleted script seems to be a flash in the pan.

It tells the beautiful love affair between Toru Kamiya and Maori Hino. At the moment when the relationship reaches its peak, the shot of Toru Kamiya's death is inserted.

Without the exquisite details of the original script, there is a bit more emotional ups and downs.

And if calculated carefully, not only can the main plot of the script be clear and clear, but the most important thing is that the time can be controlled within four to ten minutes.

Even less...

Koike Yui looked at Kimura Shota again and her eyes changed completely.

Maybe this guy is a great genius? !

"If it is the current script, it can indeed be controlled within the time limit." Yui Koike said.

"Then, Mr. Xiaochi, is this script ready to start filming?"

"However, there are some places that I think Mr. Sun can modify better."

Koike Yui paused for a moment, then moved the mouse and began to comment on the shortcomings that she felt when reading the script.

"Like the very beginning, maybe we can use the initial flashback scene to insert the scene of Koizumi looking through Maori's diary..."

"Hayato-kun's scene of the first date between Kamiya Toru and Maori has been cut too much. If you can keep the scene of the two together before the date... In this case, it may be better..."

Kimura Hayabusa listened attentively.

I have to say, compared to the editing-style deletions in my own movie.

The suggestions put forward by Yui Koike seem to add a touch of soul to this edited script, keeping the rhythm of the script more reasonable.

Sure enough, distance from a true professional.

I still have a long way to go.

"There are probably so many problems that can be thought of, but overall, the current script is quite good."

Kimura Hayata nodded.

"Speaking of which, if Hayabusa really shoots a two-hour movie, the funds will be far from enough, right?" Yui Koike asked the question that she had been wanting to ask since yesterday.

Originally, she thought Kimura Hayata chose such a pure love theme just to keep costs low.

But now it seems that Kimura Hayata's low cost was actually compared to other types of commercial film investment.

Even if the original script is to be made into a movie, it will definitely be a huge sum of money for Hayata Kimura.

Hayato Kimura frowned, and immediately said awkwardly: "If I say to attract investment, will Mr. Koike believe it..."

"letter."

Yui Koike hardly hesitated.

"Eh?" Kimura Hayato asked in confusion.

"With a script that can see commercial value and Kaoru Asuka, it is very possible to get investment." Yui Koike had an inexplicable smile on his face.

Kimura Hayata stiffened.

"You already know..."

"It looks like my younger brother will be under the care of Lord Falcon for a few days."

Koike Yui said in a flat voice, unable to hear many emotions.

"Hi."

Kimura Hayata quickly bent down and said.

"Just leave if you have nothing else to do."

"Huh?" Kimura Hayato looked up in surprise.

That's it?

As if he guessed what Kimura Hayata was thinking, Yui Koike added:
"The final result and score will be determined as they are, and nothing will change because of others."

"..."

Watching Kimura Hayata leave, Koike Yui couldn't help but hold his forehead.

She felt angry when she thought of her unsatisfied brother, who looked so excited and worthless when he went home last night.

If it were before yesterday, maybe she would have firmly rejected this matter.

I asked you to borrow photography equipment, but what if you requisitioned my brother?Don’t you understand to avoid suspicion?

But now...

Maybe Haoyi being by his side is not necessarily a bad thing.

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