Tokyo: Pick up the big sister next door at the beginning

Chapter 40 040. Is Miss Sakurai Missing? ? (Thank you for the monthly ticket, Alalei, for the 500 coins reward!)

"du~du~"

No one answered.

At the door of the classroom in Class 3 and 5, Shinkai Taki called again, but no one answered.

"Hey, senior sister must be delayed by something."

"She's not going to miss class for no reason."

"When I saw my senior that day, what was she wearing?"

Damn!

Xin Kaitaki desperately patted his head.I just remember going camping with my senior sister and watching shooting stars. She seems to be very happy and relaxed when she goes out for a while.

"I saw her on Saturday morning, right, but Sakurai-senpai ignored me."

Shinkai Taki silently read the message about Sakurai-senpai for a while, especially when the other party did not respond to his line call. He also heard about the incident of a meteor splitting in the early hours of Friday morning that caused the death of three people. He felt slightly uneasy.

However, why didn't he perceive the falling meteor?

Even if I sleep relatively deeply.

Voice.10S
[Xin Kaitaki]: Sister, where are you, we are going to work together in the afternoon
Although Xin Kaitaki wanted to be playful, he couldn't help feeling uneasy.

Regarding Sakurai-senpai's message, Shinkai Taki still didn't receive it until the class ended at 14:50 on Monday afternoon.

He asked Takashiro who was sitting behind him, Takashiro shook his head, saying he didn't see him, and asked Taki, "How? Would you like to meet Yuko again today?"

Xin Kaitaki laughed and played with Takashiro for a while.

The duty begins in the classroom.At the same time, someone outside the classroom called me and said, "Xinhai-kun! Teacher Noriko is calling you!" It was the discipline committee member of the class.

Gao Cheng hugged his head and shouted from behind: "Fourth, Taki, this is the fourth time Teacher Kiko called you to her office, right?"

"What do you usually do in her office?"

"It's nothing."

Shinkai Taki behaved relatively calmly.

Akita Tanino made a gentle and affectionate cheering gesture to himself from the front.

Shinkai Taki raised his eyebrows and then walked into Teacher Noriko's office.

"Good afternoon, Shinkai-kun."

"I didn't expect that the beginning of your story would be written and sent to me that night."

Today's Hayakawa Noriko has newly changed into a white striped slim-fit shirt for women, and her waist is tucked into a narrow white irregular skirt.

Light green low-heeled diamond-encrusted back shoes, light skin-colored stockings, a head of thick and shiny black hair, neck-length, around the ears, showing her upright cheeks.

The ruler-like nose, between the nose and the face, presents a standard right angle, as if there is no trace of curvature, and she herself has a pair of peach blossom eyes, with a gentle voice and a smile on her face.

What a beautiful woman's face.

Xin Hailong looked at her for a while, and then said hello: "Today's business, today is over, I don't like to procrastinate."

"great."

"Xin Haijun has performed well recently, and he has taken the matters we negotiated very seriously."

Hayakawa Noriko showed a rare smile at Xin Kaitaki.

"Do you have any plans, Kiko?"

Hurry up and hurry up. I'm going to find my senior sister when it's over.

Xin Kaitaki's heart was beating wildly, and there was a moment of inexplicable lack of oxygen.

"Okay, I called you here today to tell you about my comments and revisions. I sent my suggestions to your email last night, mainly to refine the plot and describe the explosive points. If you can write well, go back and complete the plot revision. , send it to me twice, and if there is no problem, you can publish it on the Sakurasha writing platform, and there will be an editor review."

Shinkai Taki nodded.

When I opened the gmail mailbox, there was indeed a new email.

//A beautiful 28-year-old single woman in Tokyo is caught in the predicament of being overly demanding by a suitor, but she is not willing to agree to such a suitor, even if he treats herself very well. The story of a very bad mysterious masked man who was happy and addicted to being with him and often wanted to see him.

Shinkai Taki subconsciously turned over the stories that Teacher Noriko sent him at night a few days ago.

Modified slightly.

A masterpiece of love.

If written well, it will be brilliant.

"Jiko, actually I don't understand, what exactly is this suitor's excessive request?"

"Perhaps, we can reveal it from the beginning. After all, if readers see it by then, they will definitely ask questions."

That night, Shinkai Taki's description of the story mainly focused on the part where the mysterious masked man he met in the bar flirted with the heroine. At the beginning, he only mentioned the predicament the heroine was currently suffering.

"I like you to wear OL uniforms and stepmother skirts at home, and do various postures, so that he can feel it."

Noriko Hayakawa was looking up something at the computer.

Hearing Shinkai Taki's question, he responded in a low voice.

"Does Kiko think this is too much?"

Xin Kaitaki asked.

"Not really, the setting is that the heroine doesn't like him enough, because she doesn't like him, that's why she thinks the other party's request is too much. Xin Haijun, do you think so too?"

The chair turned around.

Noriko Hayakawa crossed her arms, and Shinkai Taki looked down at her from above.

"Also, if you don't like a person enough, then you think it's too much for her to raise ideas that are normal to her."

"Xin Haijun has a good understanding."

Noriko Hayakawa crossed her legs in silk stockings in the office.

"When I wrote it, it was more difficult to substitute. Can I use Kiko as the prototype to write?"

Shinkai Taki mentioned a more realistic problem.

Kiko provides the heroine in the story. Shinkaitaki can only complete the writing through imagination. From imagination to reality, it needs a difficult process of transcending. Unless it is the object of his own special feelings, otherwise he feels that he will not be able to read the reader.

Furthermore, when Xin Kaitaki first met Noriko Hayakawa, she had a sad look on her face. Xin Kaitaki already knew through the light curtain that Noriko is currently encountering the dilemma of abnormal thoughts.

There is an 80% possibility that it is Noriko Hayakawa.

"so."

Upon hearing this, Noriko Hayakawa first touched the hair beside her ears with her fingers.

"please!"

Shinkai Taki added in a loud voice.

Noriko Hayakawa raised her head, met her with a pair of peach blossom eyes, and said, "Okay."

"But only the two of us know about this."

Shinkai Taki nodded.

"Of course, it's your agreement with Noriko. Our purpose is to make a love novel a hit, isn't it?"

"Yes."

"Is there any plot in Chapter 4?"

"A girl's perspective, describing her symptoms and reaction to being flirted with after meeting a mysterious masked man last night."

Shinkai Taki nodded.

Kiko herself is a girl's perspective, and she must be very clear about the symptoms and reactions of being teased.

Shinkai Taki found that from this point of view, asking Noriko's reaction to being flirted with was a good starting point.

Now that the mysterious masked man has teased her, unless the heroine's perspective describes the feelings, it is necessary to arrange the plot of the encounter between the two.

I sorted out my thoughts.

Shinkai Taki recorded all the key points in daily's notebook, left the office, and headed for his part-time job.

The senior was angry that night at the camp, she couldn't help but stretched out and offended her, that's why she ignored her, right?

　The editor said that Tuesday, today and Wednesday can be updated normally, do you agree?

　　
　
(End of this chapter)