Desert Lord: I have a training ground

Chapter 83 Summary and remarks on the release.

First is the summary of the first volume:

The plot of the first volume has a lot of problems, and the biggest problem is killing Thor.

What everyone criticizes the most is Thor's overly powerful and unbalanced combat power.

This is actually because when I first wrote the Sol attribute panel, I hid the information due to the poor level.

Therefore, its abnormal talent was not revealed in advance.

This caused Sol Dragon Vein Warlock and Dragon Secret Treasure to appear too unbalanced when revealed.

But this is actually only the early stage, and the abnormal strength of the Myth Lord is mostly reflected in the early stage.

Because it only takes 5 years for hatchlings to enter the level 12 hatchling stage, they skip the hatchling stage due to the acceleration effect of the novice protection week and appear invincible.

But it takes a full 19 years for dragons to go from childhood to level 100 adulthood!
100 years + level 7, does this growth rate suddenly enlarge the hips again?

Therefore, the lords of each race have their own periods of strength.

Dragons are strong in the early stage and even more powerful in the later stage, but in the middle stage it takes hundreds of years to develop and they can be killed accidentally.

As for ordinary lords, such as humans, after establishing a kingdom in the mid-term, they climb the technology tree, and their territory develops at an almost geometric rate.

But in the early stage, there are only a few farmers in a territory, so he is weak.

And Wang Qianzi met a strong opponent at a weak point in time. The level of the training ground has not been unlocked yet, and the large-scale standard violent troops have not yet been fully activated.

But I really failed to write this plot well. Here are a few questions to summarize:

[-]. Rhythm jumping.

Everyone must have felt it when they were watching, Thor's attack was very sudden (actually the attack should have been so sudden, but I didn't set up any foreshadowing, it looked like a deus ex machina).
This is because I got impatient writing days [-] and [-] of the first week.

At that time, I had already deduced the plot of the climax, and my brain and fingers were impatient, so I skipped the sixth day, which kicked off with Thor's attack.

You must pay attention to this and not jump around.

[-]. The display is rough.

The second most common concern is that the protagonist develops too fast.

It seems that it has only been a few days since the advent, and you already have so many level 5 and 6 troops. With Thor's blessing, you can reach level 13. It seems as if your combat power is about to collapse.

Well, let me elaborate more here.

The combat power has not collapsed, and the protagonist's upgrade speed is fast, but not invincible.

There are no professions at levels 0, 1, and 2, as I mentioned earlier.

The general upper limit of professional level is 33

In other words, if you directly subtract three levels, Thor is only a level 9 boss, and he has to rely on props to reach level 10.

Moreover, all arms have potential limits, and their levels will reach their peak!
Therefore, you don’t have to worry about the collapse of combat power, at least not until various legendary and epic arms are released in the mid-term.

Finally, the third most popular response was that the upgrade experience is too huge!

4级升5级要6万2，之后每级都翻5倍，这么下去10级升11级那还了得？
But at the same time, there is another setting that I have been emphasizing-the larger the scale of the battle, the double the experience value.

After a large-scale battle is completed, thousands of level 1 recruits can directly jump to level 6 (of course, you have to take them into the battle, and you have to keep them alive to win.)
The meaning is also obvious - encourage large-scale legion battles!

High risk, high return.

These three are the questions I summarized. There are other questions you can ask here.

For example, I focus on advancing the main line, and the content of territory construction and farming is missing.

For example, for the heroine, Wang Qian is a king, so it is impossible for him to have no heirs. In the Middle Ages, monogamy was still the emperor's harem.

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In addition, as long as everyone's typo is posted, I will take the time to correct it when I see it, and I will read it myself.

The problems have been summarized, the bad ones must be abandoned, and the good ones must be carried forward.

Next, let me talk about the two points I am most satisfied with so far:

First, there is no cliché to confuse the plot.

As of this writing, I have nearly 8 collections.

At least in terms of plot, I haven't seen any readers criticize me for the plot being cliché. The most common one is that Thor's combat power is unreasonable.

I think, at least when everyone watched it, no one would have guessed that the climax plot would unfold like this (although it was scolded miserably).When I was a reader myself, I disliked plots where I could see at a glance how the next tens of thousands of words would unfold.

I think the most important thing when reading a novel is the freshness and unknown, which makes me deliberately avoid it when writing.

Second, and most importantly - Legion War!
What I want to write is the combination of military units and legion battles!
It's not a card game, it's not that I play the little king and you play the big king.

This lord text, Desert Lord, is not about fighting over whose arms are rarer or whose arms are more awesome.

Several of the strongest lords got into a fight, with dozens of top legendary units fighting against each other.

If you create a level 18 demon, I will create a level 20 angel, which is unnecessary.

When soldiers are grouped together, a team can be formed into a regiment, and a regiment can be formed into an army.

With the blessing of fetters, the quantitative changes of ordinary soldiers can overwhelm everything!
The 12th-level Thor faced a large group of 6th-level dragon-turned-lizard men, a level difference of twice as much!

But when Thor faced the rain of javelins, he had only one word - run.

伊利丹带着260名具装骑兵（普通2星）和175名骑射手（普通1星），运用战术和优势，能活活溜死一支千人龙人兵团（普通3星！）

A wave of Qianba Bow can destroy tens of thousands of dragon-veined kobold warlocks from 800 meters away, but conversely, a super giant thunder ball from the opponent can also directly destroy the world;
The 20 mages are now epic one-star units, and they can't kill particularly hard. They can only provide support to the frontal legions with average potential.

Which of the 14 flying dragons and 40 fairy dragons is not a rare unit?Still be a vehicle and support!

The concept of legion and the combination of arms that I have always emphasized are reflected here.

Ordinary soldiers can also take advantage of their large numbers, give full play to their bonds, and serve as the backbone of the legion, and they can also have spring!
All in all, the subsequent large-scale legion battles are definitely not the village cooperation or fantasy deity.

The world is big and the desert is small.

As far as the plane of Calradia is concerned, it is not even one ten thousandth.

Wang Qian has only now unified the desert.

Next, we have to leave the forest, and we have to face the eight empires, dungeons and abyss, deserts and heavenly mountains, oceans and star realms, and even plane battles, Star Destroyer Cannons and Zerg natural disasters.
A grand battle with millions of legions, the combination of arms, the exquisite tactics between lords, and the wonderful combination of arms and terrain.
And under the macro-strategy, regardless of the gains and losses of one city and one place, the overall situation is achieved, and the combined vertical and horizontal diplomacy is definitely exciting!
Finally, here is my acceptance speech.

My book has been submitted to more than ten editors from Qidian, but all of them were rejected.

But I really liked the story, so I got my hair straight.

After being picked up by Qilin Da, I was pleasantly surprised to find that there were thousands more to collect!
When I received good reviews for the first time, I was overjoyed for a long time.

Although it was not a million income, and I failed to go to Sanjiang, I was already very satisfied and contented.

I have been listening to everyone's opinions, and make appropriate adjustments according to the situation. ,

Just like my name, the author, is evolving infinitely, I hope I can keep growing.

Well, now it’s finally on the shelves.

I am a pirated reader myself, and I know everyone’s difficulties.

To be honest, I am now in college, and I hesitated and struggled for a long time when I paid 56 yuan for a book that I loved before I paid for it via WeChat.

But if you are chasing updates, it only costs a few cents a day.

I have never asked for a monthly pass or for follow-up reading, and I dare not ask for rewards. Now that it is on the shelves, I just want you to spend 1 yuan to make an initial subscription for me.

If everyone enjoys watching it, I would be very satisfied if you can follow it and support it.

I promise to update 3 times a day after it is put on the shelves!
Update rules. Although it’s a bit funny for me to talk about the alliance leader, if there is any, I promise to update five chapters.

6k, write 6k every day! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Yes, although I am still a student, my coding speed is also slow.

But after I put it on the shelves, I will insist on spending two of the three time periods in the morning, afternoon and evening to write 6k every day.

Because of a very simple truth, the more you update, the more you earn.

6k earns half as much money as 4k!

Even if my first order is rubbish, I can try to change my life through a 6k smart recommendation. What if it works?
The monthly guarantee is 1500, and you can earn 3 for 4500 months.

And my grades may not be that bad. With the average subscription, I might be able to earn 2000 per month?
If I can write an average of 500, then I will have the confidence to tell my mother that I will not work in the factory during the summer vacation.

My motivation for writing novels is very simple, that is, I really don’t want to work in a factory anymore during my summer and winter vacations! ! ! !

Well, to sum up, I would like to thank the editors, readers, and seniors for their continued support and guidance. Thank you.

(End of this chapter)