Game Design: Players are moved to tears
Chapter 12 Senior Sister is Awesome!
Chapter 12 Senior Sister is Awesome!
"Old Zeng, hurry up and take a look!" The long-legged voice was a little urgent, "See how it's written."
When Zeng Jianye heard this tone, he curled his lips with disdain, looked at the screen carelessly, and quickly slid the mouse.
Haha, do you really think the plot is so easy to write?
young people!
The background of the times, the main line of the story, the ups and downs, the protagonists and supporting roles, the ups and downs, it is a complicated and huge project.
These students who have only learned a little bit cannot understand the complexity of the plot!
If a complete plot is written so quickly, I will put my name down...
Suddenly, Zeng Jianye's disdainful expression paused, and the mouse that had been sliding rapidly stopped for an instant.
He took a breath of air, and his originally soft and casual sitting posture suddenly became more formal.
The right hand controlled the mouse and quickly slid to the first interface, his expression became serious.
He even took off his glasses, took a breath, wiped them with his clothes, and looked attentive.
Read it carefully from beginning to end.
After observing this scene, Ling Jingwen's smile gradually disappeared and she stood silently behind.
After watching Zeng Jianye read it from beginning to end, he covered his mouth with his hands and remained silent.
After a short silence, he turned back to the first page and started reading again.
This time his expression was more serious, and he would even frown and shake his head from time to time.
This situation continued until Zeng Jianye was about to re-read it for the third time, and Ling Jingwen finally couldn't help but say:
"Old Zeng, don't just look at it, say a few words!"
"Is this plot bad or very bad?"
"...It's hard to say." Zeng Jianye grinned, "From the overall plot point of view, it's average."
Zeng Jianye thought for a while and added: "It's very ordinary, not even as interesting as the story of Dragon Quest."
Just as a smile appeared on Ling Jingwen's fair and elastic face, she heard Zeng Jianye's voice continuing:
"But his map design is very grand, Hedunmar, Sky City, Goblin Kingdom, the depths of Loland... and the connections are very smooth, as if he has a map in his mind."
"These map designs can completely serve as maps for a small online game."
Zeng Jianye looked at the screen, thought for a long time, and said his final evaluation: "At least, in terms of map design, I am not as good as him."
Ling Jingwen's lips were wide enough to fit a ping pong ball in, and her beautiful eyes looked at Liu Wei, who was lying half-dead on the sofa, in shock.
"But it's nothing extraordinary. At least his plot is really bad."
Seemingly seeing Ling Jingwen's shocked look, Zeng Jianye quickly added, for fear that they would be proud.
But Ling Jingwen didn't hear it at all, her mind was filled with the evaluation given by Lao Zeng just now.
A better map design than Lao Zeng? !
Lao Zeng is a B-level plot designer with numerous teachings.
Apart from anything else, the plot is definitely at the top level in the country.
But now, there is actually a college student who has not graduated who has surpassed him in school.
Even if it is just the map design, it would be too shocking to talk about it.
A D-level designer defeated a B-level designer in the field he was best at.
Ling Jingwen's pale face with a hint of pinkness changed wildly, and finally she snorted coldly and turned around to leave.
When he walked to the sleeping Liu Wei, he raised his bright pink foot and stepped on it to vent his inner resentment.
But this scene, in Zeng Jianye's eyes, was a completely different scene.
understood!
He got it all.
Why did Wenwen show that expression when she asked Liu Wei if he had finished writing the plot?
It was obviously expected!
And didn’t I just tell the truth? Why are you humming?
I am your uncle!
Especially when he saw Ling Jingwen stepping on Liu Wei, two words instantly sounded in Zeng Jianye's mind.
Flirting!
Women's University does not stay!
……
A month later, the rental house.
"Teacher Zeng, do you really not need to change it?" Liu Wei scratched his head in confusion, "Actually, I think there is still room for improvement."
Zeng Jianye glanced at Ling Jingwen and found that she felt unhappy after rolling her eyes.
It's been a month!
This brat has been asking himself this question for a month!
When she first asked, Wenwen looked very concerned.
But after she said yes several times, Wenwen's expression became like this.
Therefore, Zeng Jianye decided to settle the matter once and for all today.
He coughed twice and said with a serious expression: "Well, there is no need to modify it."
"Your map is very well written, so there must be some flaws to prove that you are a D-level designer."
Huh~
Ling Jingwen rolled her eyes again.Zeng Jianye wanted to cry.
I tried my best to praise you, but you still have such an expression, do you want me to scold him!
I'm your uncle!
So that's it...Liu Wei nodded suddenly.
Although he reproduced part of the background of "DNF", he still felt that the plot of "Dungeon" was a bit unsmooth.
Originally, he wanted to ask Zeng Jianye to help modify it, but now it seems that if it is really modified.
I'm afraid that I might be found guilty of cheating and miss this competition.
Lao Zeng is awesome!
After silently giving Zeng Jianye a thumbs up, Liu Wei looked at Senior Sister Ling and asked cautiously:
"Senior, how is your original painting going?"
Perhaps because the weather is getting warmer, Ling Jingwen wore loose home clothes today, with her long black hair flowing down and flowing to her chest, which made her even more unworthy of her figure.
Her lips parted, as bright as a summer flower: "It has been sent to your platform, junior, please check it out."
"If you are dissatisfied with anything, please don't hold back and speak out."
Liu Wei shook his head hurriedly, what a joke.
He didn't want to experience that situation again.
Liu Wei turned on his computer and logged into the platform to check it out.
But when he saw it, he stayed on the spot and even glanced at Senior Sister Ling on one side in shock.
The artistic content of these paintings is... very high.
Not only does it perfectly meet all the needs I put forward, but the colors in the pictures are full, and the postures and characteristics of the characters are also vividly displayed.
The sword soul is ready to attack, the mad and wanton berserker, the handsome and unrestrained Wanderer, the ammunition expert with many grenades, and the unruly Devil May Cry.
"How about it!"
Ling Jingwen raised her snow-white head, resembling a proud white swan, with a face full of pride.
But there were thick dark circles in the eye sockets, and even applying concealer powder didn't help.
Looking at Liu Wei who was standing still, Ling Jingwen silently took out her mobile phone, looked down, and sneered inwardly.
Oh, you didn’t expect it, I predicted your prediction.
It only took me three days to complete your art needs.
For the remaining 20 days or so, I devoted all my energy to drawing new original paintings, staying up until early in the morning every day.
I don’t even watch my favorite variety shows and romance dramas!
Just for this day!
Ling Jingwen looked at the original paintings on her phone. Each one was extremely domineering and vivid, almost as good as a C-level art designer.
She was extremely confident at the moment.
Come!
Scold me, pick on me!
Ling Jingwen sneered in her heart, she deliberately pretended to be arrogant.
Based on her understanding of Party A.
At this time, Party A, who doesn’t understand anything, will definitely point fingers, add unnecessary extravagance, and then ask himself to make modifications.
This must be the same for the junior student in front of him who wants to torture him.
As long as I wait for my junior to find fault and express his needs, I will listen with an open mind and then take out these original paintings. When the time comes...oh hahaha! ! !
Under Ling Jingwen's gaze, Liu Wei finally came to his senses and nodded with satisfaction: "Not bad."
I'm coming!
Ling Jingwen was very excited, holding the phone tightly in her right hand.
As usual, this is the time to say, 'That's good, but it would be better if...' '
but……
After a long silence, Ling Jingwen looked at Liu Wei standing in front of her, the two of them stared at each other with big eyes.
Ling Jingwen pursed her lips and asked tentatively: "Not bad, what next? No more?"
Liu Wei blinked and thought quickly.
Senior sister, what does this mean?
Not bad is not bad.
At this moment, he saw Ling Jingwen's hopeful eyes.
In an instant, he understood!
Liu Wei clapped his hands and gave a thumbs up to the senior with a brighter smile: "Very good, I'm very satisfied!"
"Senior, you're great!" Liu Wei applauded vigorously.
Ling Jingwen's smile froze in an instant!
……
I’m tired and can’t get up without any recommendation votes.
Now the author is in urgent need of something called a 'recommendation ticket' to resurrect with full health.
(End of this chapter)
"Old Zeng, hurry up and take a look!" The long-legged voice was a little urgent, "See how it's written."
When Zeng Jianye heard this tone, he curled his lips with disdain, looked at the screen carelessly, and quickly slid the mouse.
Haha, do you really think the plot is so easy to write?
young people!
The background of the times, the main line of the story, the ups and downs, the protagonists and supporting roles, the ups and downs, it is a complicated and huge project.
These students who have only learned a little bit cannot understand the complexity of the plot!
If a complete plot is written so quickly, I will put my name down...
Suddenly, Zeng Jianye's disdainful expression paused, and the mouse that had been sliding rapidly stopped for an instant.
He took a breath of air, and his originally soft and casual sitting posture suddenly became more formal.
The right hand controlled the mouse and quickly slid to the first interface, his expression became serious.
He even took off his glasses, took a breath, wiped them with his clothes, and looked attentive.
Read it carefully from beginning to end.
After observing this scene, Ling Jingwen's smile gradually disappeared and she stood silently behind.
After watching Zeng Jianye read it from beginning to end, he covered his mouth with his hands and remained silent.
After a short silence, he turned back to the first page and started reading again.
This time his expression was more serious, and he would even frown and shake his head from time to time.
This situation continued until Zeng Jianye was about to re-read it for the third time, and Ling Jingwen finally couldn't help but say:
"Old Zeng, don't just look at it, say a few words!"
"Is this plot bad or very bad?"
"...It's hard to say." Zeng Jianye grinned, "From the overall plot point of view, it's average."
Zeng Jianye thought for a while and added: "It's very ordinary, not even as interesting as the story of Dragon Quest."
Just as a smile appeared on Ling Jingwen's fair and elastic face, she heard Zeng Jianye's voice continuing:
"But his map design is very grand, Hedunmar, Sky City, Goblin Kingdom, the depths of Loland... and the connections are very smooth, as if he has a map in his mind."
"These map designs can completely serve as maps for a small online game."
Zeng Jianye looked at the screen, thought for a long time, and said his final evaluation: "At least, in terms of map design, I am not as good as him."
Ling Jingwen's lips were wide enough to fit a ping pong ball in, and her beautiful eyes looked at Liu Wei, who was lying half-dead on the sofa, in shock.
"But it's nothing extraordinary. At least his plot is really bad."
Seemingly seeing Ling Jingwen's shocked look, Zeng Jianye quickly added, for fear that they would be proud.
But Ling Jingwen didn't hear it at all, her mind was filled with the evaluation given by Lao Zeng just now.
A better map design than Lao Zeng? !
Lao Zeng is a B-level plot designer with numerous teachings.
Apart from anything else, the plot is definitely at the top level in the country.
But now, there is actually a college student who has not graduated who has surpassed him in school.
Even if it is just the map design, it would be too shocking to talk about it.
A D-level designer defeated a B-level designer in the field he was best at.
Ling Jingwen's pale face with a hint of pinkness changed wildly, and finally she snorted coldly and turned around to leave.
When he walked to the sleeping Liu Wei, he raised his bright pink foot and stepped on it to vent his inner resentment.
But this scene, in Zeng Jianye's eyes, was a completely different scene.
understood!
He got it all.
Why did Wenwen show that expression when she asked Liu Wei if he had finished writing the plot?
It was obviously expected!
And didn’t I just tell the truth? Why are you humming?
I am your uncle!
Especially when he saw Ling Jingwen stepping on Liu Wei, two words instantly sounded in Zeng Jianye's mind.
Flirting!
Women's University does not stay!
……
A month later, the rental house.
"Teacher Zeng, do you really not need to change it?" Liu Wei scratched his head in confusion, "Actually, I think there is still room for improvement."
Zeng Jianye glanced at Ling Jingwen and found that she felt unhappy after rolling her eyes.
It's been a month!
This brat has been asking himself this question for a month!
When she first asked, Wenwen looked very concerned.
But after she said yes several times, Wenwen's expression became like this.
Therefore, Zeng Jianye decided to settle the matter once and for all today.
He coughed twice and said with a serious expression: "Well, there is no need to modify it."
"Your map is very well written, so there must be some flaws to prove that you are a D-level designer."
Huh~
Ling Jingwen rolled her eyes again.Zeng Jianye wanted to cry.
I tried my best to praise you, but you still have such an expression, do you want me to scold him!
I'm your uncle!
So that's it...Liu Wei nodded suddenly.
Although he reproduced part of the background of "DNF", he still felt that the plot of "Dungeon" was a bit unsmooth.
Originally, he wanted to ask Zeng Jianye to help modify it, but now it seems that if it is really modified.
I'm afraid that I might be found guilty of cheating and miss this competition.
Lao Zeng is awesome!
After silently giving Zeng Jianye a thumbs up, Liu Wei looked at Senior Sister Ling and asked cautiously:
"Senior, how is your original painting going?"
Perhaps because the weather is getting warmer, Ling Jingwen wore loose home clothes today, with her long black hair flowing down and flowing to her chest, which made her even more unworthy of her figure.
Her lips parted, as bright as a summer flower: "It has been sent to your platform, junior, please check it out."
"If you are dissatisfied with anything, please don't hold back and speak out."
Liu Wei shook his head hurriedly, what a joke.
He didn't want to experience that situation again.
Liu Wei turned on his computer and logged into the platform to check it out.
But when he saw it, he stayed on the spot and even glanced at Senior Sister Ling on one side in shock.
The artistic content of these paintings is... very high.
Not only does it perfectly meet all the needs I put forward, but the colors in the pictures are full, and the postures and characteristics of the characters are also vividly displayed.
The sword soul is ready to attack, the mad and wanton berserker, the handsome and unrestrained Wanderer, the ammunition expert with many grenades, and the unruly Devil May Cry.
"How about it!"
Ling Jingwen raised her snow-white head, resembling a proud white swan, with a face full of pride.
But there were thick dark circles in the eye sockets, and even applying concealer powder didn't help.
Looking at Liu Wei who was standing still, Ling Jingwen silently took out her mobile phone, looked down, and sneered inwardly.
Oh, you didn’t expect it, I predicted your prediction.
It only took me three days to complete your art needs.
For the remaining 20 days or so, I devoted all my energy to drawing new original paintings, staying up until early in the morning every day.
I don’t even watch my favorite variety shows and romance dramas!
Just for this day!
Ling Jingwen looked at the original paintings on her phone. Each one was extremely domineering and vivid, almost as good as a C-level art designer.
She was extremely confident at the moment.
Come!
Scold me, pick on me!
Ling Jingwen sneered in her heart, she deliberately pretended to be arrogant.
Based on her understanding of Party A.
At this time, Party A, who doesn’t understand anything, will definitely point fingers, add unnecessary extravagance, and then ask himself to make modifications.
This must be the same for the junior student in front of him who wants to torture him.
As long as I wait for my junior to find fault and express his needs, I will listen with an open mind and then take out these original paintings. When the time comes...oh hahaha! ! !
Under Ling Jingwen's gaze, Liu Wei finally came to his senses and nodded with satisfaction: "Not bad."
I'm coming!
Ling Jingwen was very excited, holding the phone tightly in her right hand.
As usual, this is the time to say, 'That's good, but it would be better if...' '
but……
After a long silence, Ling Jingwen looked at Liu Wei standing in front of her, the two of them stared at each other with big eyes.
Ling Jingwen pursed her lips and asked tentatively: "Not bad, what next? No more?"
Liu Wei blinked and thought quickly.
Senior sister, what does this mean?
Not bad is not bad.
At this moment, he saw Ling Jingwen's hopeful eyes.
In an instant, he understood!
Liu Wei clapped his hands and gave a thumbs up to the senior with a brighter smile: "Very good, I'm very satisfied!"
"Senior, you're great!" Liu Wei applauded vigorously.
Ling Jingwen's smile froze in an instant!
……
I’m tired and can’t get up without any recommendation votes.
Now the author is in urgent need of something called a 'recommendation ticket' to resurrect with full health.
(End of this chapter)
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