Chapter 35 Final Review Gu Qinghan

Xiao Ju was speechless when he heard this. He didn't expect that the mysterious reader was really Gu Qinghan.

And today he was rewarded with a hard time. It turned out that the content of the novel was to blame.

Also, Gu Qinghan clearly knew the routine he had been following, but he still stuck to it. It was so... so cute!
"uh-huh!"

"what--"

Hearing the sudden sound from behind, Gu Qinghan was startled and quickly turned off the screen of his phone.

"Why didn't you make any move when you came in? You scared me!"

Facing Gu Qinghan's angry expression, Xiao Ju first touched her head, and then...

"Don't hide, I've seen it all."

The angry expression on Gu Qinghan's face disappeared instantly, replaced by coldness and seriousness.

"I saw it, I saw it. Can't I read what you wrote?"

sweat!
Gu Qinghan's tone suddenly turned cold, making Xiao Ju feel a little bit of pressure.

"Yes, yes!"

"What you wrote is still between us. Can't I comment?"

"Ok, Ok!"

"In that case, am I wrong to criticize you for tampering with the plot?"

"Yes, you are right!"

"You think what I said is right, then should you change the entire plot?"

"what?"

Xiao Ju was confused. He should have criticized Gu Qinghan for secretly reading his novels and commenting behind his back. But now he was mainly guest, and everything was his fault.

"What? You won't change?"

Gu Qinghan stretched out his white and tender hands, lifted up Xiao Ju's T-shirt, and placed it on his already blue waist.

"Uh... I can't change it, why should I be so violent?"

"Huh? Who are you calling violent? You often say that hitting means kissing, scolding, and loving. Does this count as beating you? I am rewarding you!"

"Hey, no, no, it still hurts. If you don't want to be violent, it's because my body is too weak."

Gu Qinghan didn't dare to really screw her up. He was the one who felt distressed if he screwed her up.

"Huh, hurry up and change the article. Make a big change to the whole article!"

After saying that, Gu Qinghan left the room, not knowing what to do.

Xiao Ju felt like crying but had no choice but to revise it from the beginning.

Gu Qinghan came back soon, still holding something in his hand, but Xiao Ju was revising the article seriously at the moment and didn't pay attention.

Suddenly, Gu Qinghan put his little hand on his waist again, making him tremble.

"Don't move, I'm giving you medicine."

Xiao Ju lowered his head and saw that Gu Qinghan was applying ointment to him with his soft hands. It was very refreshing.

"Actually, no need, it doesn't hurt much, it will be fine tomorrow."

Xiao Ju reached out and touched Gu Qinghan's head, with a look of doting in his eyes.

In the end, I still felt distressed, um, so good.

"Stop talking nonsense, don't worry about this, hurry up and revise the article, I will check it tomorrow!"

Hey~
Xiao Ju sighed in his heart and had no choice but to endure the pain and make major changes. He was forced to do this.

It turns out that the high-spirited protagonist turns into a scheming man and a doormat. It would make me cry if I say it too much.

After modifying for more than two hours, it was already midnight.

Xiao Ju took a look and saw that Gu Qinghan had gone to bed long ago and he was on the verge of fishing now.

"I'm too tired today. Have a good rest tomorrow."

Xiao Ju quietly turned off the light, then climbed onto the big bed, and slowly rubbed against Gu Qinghan's side.

"Slept soundly."

He thought for a while, it was so late, so he better not wake her up.

First, he put a seal that belonged to him on her delicate red face, then he put his arms around her slender waist and held her gently in his arms.

Feeling the two soft pillows on his chest, Xiao Ju nodded with satisfaction, and then fell asleep quickly smelling the faint fragrance of Gu Qinghan's hair. …

Xiao Ju overslept the next day and woke up because his nose was itchy.

When he opened his eyes, he saw that Gu Qinghan's pretty face was still close at hand, and that soft and delicate body was still in his arms.

And just now, she was scratching his nose with her hair.

"Xiao Qinghan, you are too naughty, I sleep so soundly."

Xiao Ju was sleepy and closed her eyes again.

"Don't sleep. It's late. Get up quickly."

Gu Qinghan pushed Xiao Ju and put his hair on Xiao Ju's nose.

"What time is it?" Xiao Ju asked without opening his eyes.

"It's nine o'clock!"

"Ok?"

Xiao Ju's eyes suddenly opened and she sat up instantly, seeing Gu Qinghan's pair of white, tender and round legs pressing on his legs.

"It's so late? I have to make breakfast quickly!"

Just as Xiao Ju was about to get up and go to the kitchen, Gu Qinghan grabbed him.

"Don't go, I've already ordered takeout."

A look of apology appeared on Xiao Ju's face. He was too late yesterday and couldn't get up early today.

"I will get up earlier next time. You are already hungry."

"It doesn't matter. If I hadn't asked you to change the article, you wouldn't have gone to bed so late. Anyway, I don't have to go to work today, so it's okay to go to bed late."

Gu Qinghan shook his head, completely indifferent to it,
"Hehe, I changed the article yesterday, have you read it?"

"Not yet, I'll look at it now."

"Aren't you going to take a shower?"

"I'll wash it after the takeaway arrives."

Gu Qinghan was really excited. He immediately opened Xiao Ju's novel and started reading it from beginning to end.

Xiao Ju wanted to wash up, but was held back by Gu Qinghan.

"Don't run away, I haven't finished the review yet. If I don't like something I like, huh~"

Xiao Ju stared at the bitter face, slumped down on the big bed, put his arms around Gu Qinghan's waist, and sat on his lap.

And Gu Qinghan also leaned on his chest.

"Well, the changes here are good. It fully describes the darkness in your heart. You encouraged me to ride a roller coaster, and then took advantage of me at Piao's House."

……

In the middle of Gu Qinghan's trial of Xiao Ju's revised article, a takeaway call came, and Gu Qinghan immediately rushed him to get the takeaway.

Xiao Ju, who was amnesty, hurried away and poured the takeaway food into his own bowl seriously.

So in the end it seems, but like he did it himself.

After doing all this, he called Gu Qinghan to have breakfast, and then went to wash up first.

Not long after, Gu Qinghan also finished washing up, and then the two of them happily ate takeout.

Sometimes when you are used to eating food at home, you suddenly find that takeout is particularly delicious.

"Uh-huh, I've reviewed your revised text. Generally speaking, it's good. It's in accordance with my opinions, but!"

"Uh... no buts, it's already perfect."

Xiao Ju looked a little uneasy, as if he was about to give up something important.

"Yes, it's still that roundworm. I've already said that I can't talk about roundworms anymore!"

"I think it's pretty good. It's so interesting. Readers will definitely want to read it..."

After Xiao Ju's 10-minute long speech, he finally saved his "roundworm" plot.

Gu Qinghan: "Big Orange, are you a time traveler?"

Xiao Ju: "!!!"

(End of this chapter)

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