They have become goddess husbands, who needs a superstar system

Chapter 28 A Genius Stands on the Shoulders of a Superstar System (12)

"Mr. Shi, we are here to see you."

Yang Yi finally waited for Ye Fuming's notice, and the two went to the supermarket to buy some fruit, then came to Teacher Shi Jianqin's house excitedly.

"Xiaoye, Xiaoyang, come in, come in, come in as soon as you come, why are you still bringing fruit?"

Shi Jianqin opened the door for them and welcomed them in with a smile.

Teacher Shi Jianqin's house is similar to Ye Fuming's, they are very common commodity houses.Of course, because it took a long time to buy it, Teacher Shi Jianqin's house is more spacious than Ye Fuming's house, and the location is better.

But also because the house built in the early years did not have an elevator, but now it has an external elevator, so it seems that the space and sunlight are somewhat suppressed by the elevator!Even in broad daylight, when Yang Yi and Ye Fuming came in, the lights were on in the living room of Teacher Shi Jianqin's house.

"Mr. Shi, I know your personality. It's okay to bring fruit, but if you bring other things, you may be kicked out of the house!"

Ye Fuming laughed.

"Xiaoye, you can't do this, you haven't been so fond of drilling before!"

Shi Jianqin criticized him with a smile, then handed the fruit bag to the daughter next to her, and asked her to wash and cut it, and then served it directly to eat with the guests.

"Mr. Shi, your daughter doesn't seem to be an actress?"

Yang Yi took a closer look. Although Teacher Shi Jianqin's daughter didn't speak much, she didn't look like an insider in her clothes.

If you are an insider, especially an actor, you will pay more attention to your hairstyle and makeup. The other person will be naked at home and his hair has not been carefully taken care of.

In contrast, Shi Jianqin is neatly dressed, and the ends of her hair are cut delicately. With a camera, she might be able to capture the feeling of a family scene on TV.

"Yes, she is working in the community now, and today just happens to be on vacation. Xiao Yang observes the characters very carefully. No wonder she can write a script like "The Hidden Corner"."

Shi Jianqin looked at Yang Yi approvingly.

In her opinion, Yang Yi's filming experience over the years may not have been so successful, but his growth has been huge. He looks more stable and more mature in thinking than the young boy who sneaked in to take classes.

With such progress, such ability to observe and think, why not have a successful day?

"The Hidden Corner" marks the beginning of the qualitative change he has accumulated in the past ten years!
Shi Jianqin invited Ye Fuming and Yang Yi to the study room. Although it is not as spacious as the living room, the light is better. The bright sunlight shines through the large glass windows and falls on the desk and a bouquet of daffodils placed on it. White line-shaped pottery bottles, goose-yellow stamens, and tender green leaves embellish the entire space, which is fresh, bright, and elegant.

"I read Xiao Yang's script. Xiao Ye is right. This story is very cleverly conceived by you, and it will be very thought-provoking after reading it. I will reflect on it. In the process of educating my own children, there are He didn't take the child's feelings into consideration."

Shi Jianqin put on her glasses and took out the script she printed on the table.

Yang Yi has good eyesight, and he can see the circles drawn on the script from a distance.

It can be seen that Mr. Shi's attitude towards the script is also very serious.

Even though she is over 60 years old, her energy is not as good as before.

"Mr. Shi, Yang Yi not only writes the script well, but also has a lot of ingenuity as a director! Yang Yi, show Teacher Shi the storyboards you drew."

Ye Fuming pushed Yang Yi, who was standing there stupidly, with his arm.

"Mr. Shi, this is the storyboard of the first episode I drew."

Yang Yi quickly took out a stack of bound A4 papers from his bag, and handed it over.

This stack of paper was very thick. In order to prevent it from falling apart, Yang Yi bought a special punching machine and then strung them together with loose-leaf iron coils.

There is no way, there are too many scenes in one episode, even Yang Yi can't draw them all.

He can only draw a part that is more instructive, but even so, the thick A4 paper has to be printed on both sides, which is why he has produced such a "book" storyboard atlas.

"Little Yang is too hard, did you draw so many storyboards? Actually, it's not necessary."

Shi Jianqin initially felt that Yang Yi's idea of ​​drawing storyboards was a bit too dogmatic.

How is it possible for someone to draw all the shots of the entire episode?
Even if the director has an idea for this work in advance, it will only be a rough and simple idea of ​​some shots and angles, and when it comes to on-site shooting, he will continue to improve it as new ideas come up. My own previous lens requirements.

There are even directors who have no idea at all, just take a few more shots, and then use various techniques to piece them together into a story-telling video when editing.

Directly using storyboards to draw all the shots, Yang Yi may have committed the common fault of Mengxin directors who are too idealistic.

It may also be too eager for success, so I want to do everything.

Shi Jianqin just wanted to persuade Yang Yi not to be too idealistic and put so much pressure on himself to draw so many storyboards. Later in the shooting, he might feel that it didn't work and overturn it completely, thus wasting all his efforts.

But she opened the plastic cover of the loose-leaf clasp, and when she looked at the first few storyboards, the words of persuasion to Yang Yi stopped on her lips.

The first few storyboards directly depict the scene at the beginning of the TV series where the two old men are pushed down the mountain.

The first picture is a distant view of mountain climbing, explaining how high the mountain is.

The second picture is a panoramic shot, explaining the spatial relationship between Zhang Dongsheng and his father-in-law and mother-in-law before taking the photo, and where they are respectively.

The third picture is a medium shot of Zhang Dongsheng raising the camera, highlighting the gloomy look on his expression.

The fourth photo is a panoramic shot of Zhang Dongsheng changing places. It also expresses the spatial relationship, showing that he gradually moved to a place closer to the two.

The fifth picture is a frontal medium and close shot composition. Of course, it is obvious that Yang Yi drew the dots and circles of the camera's viewfinder frame, showing that this is Zhang Dongsheng's first perspective picture through the camera.

But in this storyboard, the faint red shadow drawn by the red pencil made Shi Jianqin, a "bystander", feel terrified!

Because she knew very well that soon after this scene appeared, the mother-in-law she played was going to be pushed off the cliff by Zhang Dongsheng!
"Red means danger!"

At this time, Shi Jianqin had long forgotten what he wanted to say before, and when he raised his head to look at Yang Yi, there was only praise in his eyes.

"Yang Yi still keeps in mind the contents of the teacher's previous lectures! But I discussed with him here, I think this lens is used well, but the red light feels a bit too deliberate. The camera takes pictures, and the viewfinder frame is not Such a red light, if you become popular here, it is divorced from the facts. And people who understand movies will know that something will happen at a glance! The hint is too obvious, I don’t think it’s good.”

Ye Fuming stood up, pointed to the storyboard on this page and said to Shi Jianqin.

"There is such a red light. In some cameras, as long as the diagonal auxiliary light is turned on, the red light will flash out, but it is not so obvious. But the idea of ​​my lens is to suggest and subtly create a suspenseful atmosphere, so it is Let the audience understand!"

Yang Yi argued hard, he insisted because he had seen the original film and liked it very much.

"It can be used. The language of the lens is also an aspect of film and television works. And Xiao Yang, you use film-making skills to shoot TV dramas. This in itself is a kind of hard work, which is worthy of praise."

Shi Jianqin watched them argue with a smile, and finally expressed his approval.

"It's just that I really didn't expect that you did so much work in the early stage and conceived such detailed pictures in your mind. The paintings are also so good. As an actor, the mother-in-law in your play, I read these pictures Painting, I already know how I should act!"

Shi Jianqin turned over a few more pages, and became more and more emotional as he read.

"So I think, Mr. Shi, I'm not exaggerating. I really think that Yang Yi's work can be shot, and it can be shot very well. It's as exciting as the story of his script that I'm watching! Although he used to I’ve never really been a director.”

Ye Fuming now made no secret of his admiration for Yang Yi. He boasted about it in front of Shi Jianqin.

"Xiao Yang has never been a director, but he has his own unique understanding of the lens and his own thinking about composition, which is rare!"

Shi Jianqin looked at Yang Yi, who was already standing there waving his hands in embarrassment, and also praised him repeatedly.

"It's really God's meal, Mr. Shi, do you think he chose the wrong job before? A good screenwriter and director, a little genius, ran to die in the actor's profession."

"You mean he shouldn't have come to the acting class to sit in, but he should have gone to the directing class, right?"

"Yes, and didn't Yang Yi study screenwriting before? If I were the dean of their department, after reading this script, I would definitely talk to him. What have you been doing for the past ten years? Back then, if you studied screenwriting seriously, you wouldn't I wasted ten years of youth!"

Yang Yi was so complimented by the dialogue between Ye Fuming and Teacher Shi that he sang and I sang, and his face turned red.

What kind of genius is he in screenwriting and directing?
Yang Yi's genius was discovered just because he now stands on the shoulders of the superstar system.

Instead of asking him what he has been doing for the past ten years, he should ask what the superstar system in his head has been doing for the past ten years?

"However, Xiaoye, I don't quite agree with your point of view."

Shi Jianqin's turning point made Yang Yi regain his concentration and listen to her voice.

"Life experience is actually a part of growth. I don't think Xiao Yang's ten years as an actor were wasted, he was settling!"

Shi Jianqin likes to use the word precipitation.

"Without the accumulation of the past ten years, there would not be a work like this that we would think is excellent just by looking at the script and storyboards."

"You asked Xiao Yang ten years ago to write, could he write "The Hidden Corner"? Impossible, he must have tasted the bitterness and bitterness of the world, and he has a certain understanding of the warmth and coldness of the world in different situations. Only with a deeper experience can there be a thought-provoking work like "The Hidden Corner"!"

"If you ask Xiao Yang from ten years ago to direct this drama, he won't be able to draw these storyboards. What you see on paper will eventually become shallow, but you will definitely know that you have to do it! In school, everything you learned is It’s just a basic foundation that is not worth mentioning. Only if you shoot a lot of works yourself will you have a deeper understanding of performance, the camera, and the language of the camera.”

"Xiao Yang, do you think the teacher is right?"

Shi Jianqin looked at Yang Yi.

"Ah, yes, yes, yes!"

Yang Yi nodded quickly.

　Thanks to Autumn God Light for the reward (づ￣ 3￣)づ~
　　
　
(End of this chapter)