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Chapter 332 If it weren’t for the boss, I would send you a blade! (15, please recommend and vote monthly)

In order to modify the plot of Xiao Longnu being defiled, which made him feel uncomfortable after reading it, Yang Yi spent a lot of effort to dissect the plot of the entire book when his wife was pregnant, and then spent a lot of time to conceive and adjust the revised version. plot.

After all, the defilement of Xiao Longnu is a relatively important part of the entire story of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". It connects the previous and previous plots and stimulates the subsequent conflicts between Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu. Then the two of them broke through the taboo of teacher-student romance. , the confinement of worldly vision, are all inextricably related to this plot.

It really affects the whole body. If Yang Yi wants to change this plot, he has to consider the impact of the revised plot on future plots.

Therefore, in order to maintain the integrity of the original work to the greatest extent, Yang Yi still racked his brains and changed the plot to show that Xiao Longnu was almost defiled. She had already completed the psychological transformation and wanted to accept the intimacy of "Yang Guo" However, after hearing something wrong with the breathing sound, he immediately woke up and used the imperial bee technique to sting Yin Zhiping and escape.

Yang Guo arrived just in time. He didn't know what Yin Zhiping had done. After he went to relieve "aunt" from the acupuncture points, he innocently described to Xiao Longnu what he had just witnessed.

Xiao Longnu thought that he had misunderstood her disheveled condition, so she showed Yang Guo the palace sand to show her innocence. However, Yang Guo didn't understand anything and kept talking about his previous experiences.

It was not that Yang Guo didn't understand Xiao Longnu's thoughts, but he was influenced by the secular framework of feudal ethics and always felt that being with his master was immoral and would be despised by the world.

Xiao Longnu saw that he was pretending to be deaf and mute, and was filled with grief and anger. She felt that Yang Guo knew her feelings for him, but because she mistakenly thought that she had been tainted and lost her innocence, she was unwilling to accept her.

So, just like the original work, Xiao Longnu vomited blood in despair and left the ancient tomb without saying goodbye. This led to the subsequent plot of Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu searching and hiding in the rivers and lakes, causing upheaval in the entire rivers and lakes. .

Yang Yi himself can accept the revised plot.

Moreover, the text after systematic polishing does not seem to be much different from the original work.

But after others watch it, will they think this plot is unreasonable?
Yang Yi was not sure yet, so he wanted to ask Le Zehan, the second reader of his book (the first was of course Li Mengfei).

"It's so beautiful! Otherwise, why would I stay up all night and watch it all night? It's really beautiful. The little dragon girl in it, Brother Yi, I tell you, this character will definitely be loved by countless audiences!"

Le Zehan first gave a piece of praise.

"Then do you think there is any unreasonable plot in this book? Is it uncomfortable to read?"

Yang Yi asked.

"Unreasonable? Yes, I think there is something unreasonable. Brother Yi, at the beginning, you seemed to have set the age of the little dragon girl to be seventeen or eighteen years old? She was seventeen or eighteen years old at the beginning, and maybe a few years older later. .”

The "unreasonable things" mentioned by Le Zehan were somewhat beyond Yang Yi's expectations.

"Yes, when she first appeared, she was less than 23 years old when she jumped off the cliff. After 16 years of dating, they reunited. Xiao Longnu was 39 years old at that time."

Yang Yi introduced it to Le Zehan like a treasure trove.

He has sorted out all the details of this book clearly. No one knows "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" better than him.

"Yes, I think Xiao Longnu's age is a bit difficult to deal with. Brother Yi said that he and Sister Yi will be filming this TV series together. Will there be a big age gap? I don't know what the audience will think after watching it. Do you have any opinions?"

Le Zehan said it tactfully enough, and Yang Yi also understood what he meant, that is, at Li Mengfei's current age, she couldn't play the role of Little Dragon Girl!
Even if another actor is used to play the role of Xiao Longnu in her youth, it would not be appropriate. After all, no actress can have the appearance and temperament of Li Mengfei. Not to mention, Xiao Longnu has more scenes in her youth. This separates the two actors. When I come to play, I don’t even know who is the protagonist and who is the supporting role.

"There should be no problem. Let's take a look at this then!"

Yang Yi smiled mysteriously.

He couldn't tell Le Zehan that he was sure that Li Mengfei could return to her previous youthful age, at least physically she would look younger.

Let’s speak with the facts when the time comes!

"Okay, yes, Brother Yi, I think there is another plot that is not very appropriate."

Le Zehan flipped through the manuscript he printed out.He no longer struggled with Yang Yi about whether Li Mengfei was the right age to play the role of Little Dragon Girl.

If the boss says it’s suitable, then it’s suitable!
Why can’t someone else’s works and investments pamper their daughter-in-law?
Besides, in fact, Le Zehan also feels that except for being a little older, Li Mengfei is particularly suitable for the role of Xiao Longnu in other aspects.

He is cold and taciturn, indifferent to fame and wealth, and does not want to live in the world.

Didn't Yang Yi write this role tailor-made for his wife?

If it were any other young actress, she might not be as good as Li Mengfei!

"Tell me, which plot is inappropriate?"

"It's the seventh chapter, where Ouyang Feng tapped Xiao Longnu's acupuncture point, almost causing her to be defiled."

Hearing Le Zehan say this, Yang Yi's heart jumped suddenly.

"What do you think is inappropriate and how can I change it for the better?"

Yang Yi took a deep breath and asked on the phone with a wry smile.

"How to change it? I don't know how to change it. I just think that Brother Yi will get scolded if you write this plot!"

Le Zehan scratched his head, he was still looking for the plot!

This chapter also has a little too many pages.

"Being scolded?"

"Yes, Brother Yi, you are also someone who has written online articles. You should know that this reader can't stand such a cuckold plot. Although it didn't succeed, readers will still feel a little uncomfortable after reading it. Wouldn't it be better if I didn't write it? Would it be better?”

Le Zehan eagerly waited for Yang Yi's response.

He was so reluctant to let Xiao Longnu be humiliated like this. Moreover, because of this misunderstanding, the two were separated for 16 years. How much youth was wasted!
As a reader, if it weren't for the fact that Yang Yi was his boss, Le Zehan would have wanted to send him a blade!

"It cannot be changed. In fact, this plot arrangement is of great significance, because they are a master-student relationship. It will definitely not be easy to break through such secular barriers. There must be a breaking point of conflict."

Yang Yi laughed.

He laughed secretly in his heart.

He has already changed to this, but Le Zehan still finds it difficult to accept it.This kid has never read the original work. If he had read the original work, he would probably be even more miserable!

"Brother Yi, what I say is that art is more about the beauty of imperfection. But even in the most classic tragedies, Romeo and Juliet, Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai, people would not arrange such plots for the heroines. Brother Yi, I think your book will definitely be very popular after it is published, but there will definitely be many readers who hate this plot and will scold you online!"

Le Zehan couldn't laugh or cry.

"If you want to scold me, just scold Daxia Jin. Why would you scold me? This book was written by Daxia Jin."

Yang Yi said it confidently.

The pen name he left behind in these two books was "Jin Da Xia".

Yes, he still didn't sign his real name.

(End of this chapter)