Hong Kong Island Comic Master

Chapter 271 Naruto

At the beginning of the story, a neon-style village appeared on the screen.

It is backed by a cliff with a huge human head, and there are wires crisscrossing the roofs of the ancient buildings, indicating that this village seems to have been in a relatively recent period. A building in the middle of the picture has a big word "fire" on it, which is very eye-catching.

Then in this building, someone reported to the Hokage who was writing that a child named "Naruto" used paint to graffiti on the statues of past Hokages.

In just a few strokes, before the protagonist Naruto appeared, the image of a troublemaker emerged.

Then Naruto was captured and returned to school, where he learned from his class teacher, Mr. Iruka, that he was a jack-of-all-trades and failed two consecutive assessments.

At this time, Kishimoto Saishi discovered that the ninja in the comics was not the killer who lurked in the dark in ancient times, but a modern one. The ninja became a normal profession and even had a school.

In the clone technique assessment the next day, Naruto still failed.

Being ostracized by his classmates due to his low strength and having no relatives, Naruto looked very lonely sitting on the swing.

Just when he was at his most desperate, a teacher named Mizuki gave him an idea and asked him to steal a scroll that could help him graduate.

However, what is surprising is that when Naruto stole the scroll, he discovered that Teacher Mizuki, who seemed to care about him, actually used him, just to get this scroll with many forbidden techniques written on it.

Fortunately, Mr. Iruka appeared in time and saved Naruto.

However, at this time, Teacher Mizuki told Naruto that the fox demon who almost destroyed the village was Naruto!

Just when Naruto was about to collapse, Iruka risked his life to save Naruto.

Obviously Iruka's parents were killed by the fox demon, but Iruka cherished Naruto very much and made Naruto completely change his mind.

In the end, through the shadow clone technique learned from the scroll, Mizuki was successfully defeated and Iruka was saved.

And at the end of this chapter, the scene of Iruka lying under the tree announcing Naruto's graduation impressed Kishimoto Saishi even more.

The first chapter of this comic is very long, a full 60 pages, which is comparable to two chapters of other comics.

However, it just happened to be a story that was successfully told.

After reading this, Kishimoto Saishi fell into deep contemplation.

There is no doubt that Li Wannian's new work to cater to the tastes of neon people is "Naruto"!

The reason why I chose the name "NARUTO" is because the name "Naruto" is a Chinese translation. The original name of the comic is "NARUTO", which translates to Naruto.

In order to draw "Naruto", Li Wannian also spent a lot of effort.

After all, compared to "Dragon Ball" which does not need much modification, and "Bleach" which only needs minor repairs, "Naruto" needs too many modifications.

First of all, the character of the heroine Sakura needs to be changed.

The character of Sakura in the original work is very unpleasant for many reasons, but the most important one is the author's problem with character creation.

In Li Wannian's writing, Sakura can't let anything happen to Ludo, and she will die without any trouble!

In terms of character design, we can learn from Nami. Although they are all similar characters, not many readers hate Nami. This is because Nami is weak and weak. When things happen, she is really good at it and can really defeat many opponents who are stronger than her!

Secondly, the plot in the middle and later stages needs to be changed.Whether it's the later wave battle or Naruto's mouth escape, these really challenge the reader's IQ.

Why should a boss who has experienced so many tragic stories become a good person just because of your words?

Isn’t this how plot killing works?It’s not the villain that’s being killed, but the IQ of the readers.

In this regard, both the battle scenes and the plot direction need to be significantly modified.

Finally, and the most important point is that the background setting and ending of this comic must be changed!
After thinking for a long time, Li Wannian finally decided to delete all the content about the big boss Kaguya Otsutsuki and his clan in the original work.

In this way, the lineage theory of the reincarnation of Asura and Indra has also been deleted.

In Li Wannian's conception, Ninjutsu should not be the product of aliens, but a spell derived from Taoism, and Chakra should not be alien energy, but another name for Qi.

Therefore, in Li Wannian's story, the place where the five major countries sit is actually an island, similar to Neon Island, and there is a vaster continent beyond the ocean.

These natives in the five major countries have no idea about the outside world and think that the world they live in is the whole world.

Thousands of years ago, a warlock named Xu Fu brought three thousand boys and girls eastward here. After a series of reproduction, ninjas and ninjutsu were gradually formed.

Therefore, it also explains the various props that appear in Journey to the West, why there are Taoist escape methods in ninjutsu, and so on.

The final big boss can also be changed from Kaguya Otsutsuki to Xu Fu, just like the plot in "Wind and Cloud 2".

Of course, such modifications may dissatisfy many Chinese and Neon people.

Chinese people will think, why in a comic, the party representing justice is the Neon Man, and the evil boss is Chinese, aren't you vilifying the Chinese people?
But in Li Wannian's view, a Chinese who couldn't survive on the mainland has become the ancestor of the island that represents neon. Doesn't this just prove the power of China?
As for the villain issue, as long as the character is well created, it is completely normal for the villain to be loved by people!

Of course, some Neon people will also be dissatisfied, thinking that Li Wannian is humiliating Neon.

But first of all, this part of the content is placed at the end of the comic. In terms of time, it must be more than ten or twenty years later.

By then, Naruto will have already received the benefits he deserves, and he won't be afraid of being blocked by the Neon government.

Besides, isn’t this actually true?What do they have to object to?

In short, when Li Wannian decided to serialize "Naruto", he had already considered all the doubts that this comic would face when drawing it, and he was mentally prepared!
"Qi Shi, what do you think of this comic?"

Seeing that his brother had finished reading, Kishimoto Seishi couldn't help but ask again.

"It's okay, but the painting is a little too sunny. Ninjas should be killers living in the dark. It's like playing house!"

After coming back to his senses, Kishimoto Saishi couldn't help but complain about this comic, with even a hint of disdain in his eyes.

"Tch, you are just a primary school student, Hokage who knows how to hammer!"

Seeing his brother's appearance, Kishimoto Seishi couldn't help but complain.

Does he know his brother so well? The toughest thing in his body is his mouth!

(End of this chapter)