Back to modern times, Her Majesty the Queen and I are both laid off

Chapter 101 You Xiao Linzi, don’t be jealous!
It was nothing to say at first, but after determining the subject matter and direction of his writing, Jiang Li suddenly became very interested.

She had just finished dinner and couldn't wait to start her writing career. She didn't have a writing tablet for the time being, and she didn't know how to type on the keyboard, but this didn't bother her at all, and she could write even while holding her mobile phone.

Lin Luo felt that she didn't just want to make money by writing novels, but there might be another important reason.

——In this way, the Daqi she knew was introduced to the world.

Let me tell the world that along the line of history, there was a bifurcation during the Southern and Northern Dynasties. This bifurcation caused the historical development of you and me to go our separate ways, and gave birth to a dynasty called Daqi in another world.

It is equally dazzling and dazzling; it dominates the world, and God has given it to all nations, it is no worse than your prosperous Tang Dynasty.

The intersection of two historical lines, the collision of two worlds, is this not a kind of cultural export?
It’s just that this cultural export probably can’t be exported. Just seeing her write the beginning, Lin Luo said that she didn’t care, what the hell is this, why are you writing the Anthology of Taizu?

"What you are writing is not a novel. You cannot even tell a basic story. The story needs an entry point. This entry point can be when the protagonist encounters a crisis, it can be a conflict, even if you write about any incident Either way.

But now you just write about the birth of Taizu, just write, and you can also complete the scene: the rainbow penetrates the sun, the purple air fills the courtyard, the two ears of grass grow, and the sweet spring springs from the ground. What do you want to do?Does it make sense for you to write this? It makes no sense at all. "

Jiang Li retorted: "What do you mean it has no meaning at all? Readers only need to read the beginning to know that I, the Grand Ancestor of Da Qi, was born sacred."

Holy shit, this kind of thing can only fool two fools. If I were a reader and just read the beginning, my first reaction would be that you are provoking my IQ, and my second reaction would be to point the cross
Lin Luo couldn't stop vomiting in his heart: "This is the 21st century. No one has believed in this for a long time. What you write is history, not fantasy. Even if you insist on writing like this, can you stop using the lyrics? You This is written like Zizhi Tongjian, it is written in popular language, you can read other books and see how others write it."

"The vulgar things they wrote, how can they be compared with mine?"

Lin Luo was so proud that he was convinced, "But you write novels for others to read. You choose to use more popular words and sentences, so that you can have a larger audience of readers, so that some people can't even read it." .”

"What's so unreadable about this?"

"Come, read it yourself: The emperor's concubine, the Empress Dowager Xuanci, Gao Shi, met the gods in a dream on the night of Wuxu in September of the 17th year of Tianjian, and gave birth to Taizu in the wild. At that time, the thunder and lightning were dim, the golden light suddenly appeared, and there was a rainbow. The sun is full of purple energy. I didn't notice it just now, but tell me, how did this thunder and lightning and rainbow appear at the same time in the middle of the night?"

Jiang Li said in a matter-of-fact tone, "That's why it's a natural phenomenon. That's how it should be."

Lin Luo: "."

That fucking makes sense.

"But what you write is a novel, a story, do you understand? Not only is the story interesting to write, it should at least make people want to read it, right? Who will read it when you write it? No one will read it, you know?"

Lin Luo gave her advice, "Like this, you write like this, isn't it recorded in the history books? Taizu started out as a mountain bandit who robbed homes and houses."

When he was halfway through speaking, Jiang Li corrected him with a serious face: "They are the green forest heroes who gathered a crowd to revolt."

Still so serious but Lin Luo chose to obey her,
"Okay, green forest hero who gathered a crowd to revolt, please delete your broken header. Write it like this. At the beginning, it says that Taizu was kidnapped by bandits. The bandits wanted to kill him. At this time, Taizu's goal was to save his life.

Then he wrote about how he dealt with the bandits. In the end, he not only saved his life, but also subdued these bandits, took the top spot, and became the eldest brother of the bandits and the green forest hero. "

"This is not recorded in the history books."

"Then you can't make it up?"

"How to make it up?"

No editor would write a shitty novel like yours. Lin Luo almost blurted out these words, swallowed them back, and then said:

"For example, you write that he was captured by bandits. The bandits wanted to kill him and raised their swords. At this critical moment, another group of bandits came to attack, or officers and soldiers came to suppress the bandits. At this time, Taizu I gave the bandits advice and successfully resisted or repelled the enemy, thereby saving my life and gaining the attention of the bandits."

"So you conquered the bandits?"

"How could it be so fast? Now that I have solved my life-threatening situation, and I have gained a certain status in the bandit group, as a little boss, it's up to you to arrange this."

"After becoming the little leader, a few days later, the enemy came again. Taizu helped to fight off the enemy again. This time the battle was fruitful, so he gained a lot of prestige among the bandits. Everyone looked at him. Cheers and cheers.

However, the bandit leader was a villain who was generous on the outside and jealous on the inside. He was unwilling to do this and felt that he had lost face. However, he was worried that Taizu could not touch him because of his merits. Instead, in order to show his generosity, he gave him a high position. .

Then you can show Taizu's skill and ability through certain events, and how to use your personal charm to get along with the bandits. In any case, you will increase your reputation and win the hearts of the people.

As a result, the bandit leader couldn't bear it and began to secretly give Taizu various obstacles. He deftly resolved them again and again. In the process, the other bandits also saw that the boss was intolerant and gradually began to treat him. The bandit leader is dissatisfied."

Jiang Li gradually became fascinated. Although there is no record of this in the history books, writing it this way does seem more attractive?
Seeing that Lin Luo had finished talking and her chattering finally stopped, she took the opportunity to ask: "How should I write what you said?"

?

Lin Luo just picked up the water glass and planned to take a sip of water to moisten his throat. Hearing this, he couldn't help being stunned, ". I've already told you this, and you still don't know how to write it?"

Jiang Lixin said that she really didn't know much, but she said it euphemistically, "It's not that I don't know, I just hesitated for a while and didn't know how to write."

Then I still don’t know. Lin Luo: "What I just told you is the outline of the initial plot. You just fill in the content according to this outline."

"How to fill it?"

".It is to describe those scenes and the psychological activities of some main characters to enrich the plot, and then set up people through the plot."

As he was talking, Lin Luo stopped and said in a faint tone, "Don't you understand?"

"It's not that I don't understand. I seem to have some understanding vaguely, but I can't explain it clearly at the moment and it's not true."

Lin Luo was silent for a moment, "I said, can you please stop holding it? Yumu's brain is not clear-headed. For someone as stupid as you, I am already very tired of teaching you. You are still such a good face. If you don't understand something, just say it directly." Come out and I can explain it to you in a more targeted manner, okay?"

Jiang Li opened his eyes wide in shock, "You said I have an elm-headed head?"

"Don't you think so?"

"Are you still calling me stupid?"

Lin Luo put his hand on his forehead: "I can't teach you as a disciple."

“If you don’t teach, don’t teach.”

As soon as the words came out of his mouth, Jiang Li came to his senses, "Stop talking so much about yourself, when did I become your disciple? Besides, I didn't ask you to teach me, but you, who kept chattering and making a lot of noise, made me noisy. I am upset and disturb my thoughts."

"Okay, okay, I won't disturb your writing anymore. I'm going to take a shower and go to bed." Lin Luo got up and walked to the bathroom, "You can write it yourself."

Jiang Lixin was dissatisfied and said angrily: "Write it yourself, write it yourself. When I was in Daqi, I didn't see you, Xiao Linzi, write anything world-famous and magnificent. Even the memorials you wrote were nonsense. No talent at all.

Now you have come to teach me. When I write it and make a lot of money, you Xiaolin, don't be jealous! "

"Ha ha."

Before the bathroom door closed, a burst of laughter came from inside along the crack of the door.

This laughter was full of deliberateness. When Jiang Li heard it, he felt that he was being ridiculed. He was really being bullied!She became angry and said: "Get out of here!"

Of course Lin Luo would not get out. Instead of getting out, he would lock the door to ensure his personal safety.

I don't have a clear mind, I'm still naive, I just write like that, I still want to make a lot of money, I'm just waiting to hit the street.

The subject matter is good, and the complete main plot is already there. There is no need to conceive the problem of changing the map. Just write it step by step and it is done. The most is to expand the plot.

As long as you follow the writing method of conventional novels, regardless of how much you earn, there is still no problem in earning several thousand yuan a month.

Writing to her would be ruined.

Forget it if she doesn't know how to write. Let her read other people's novels to learn. After reading them, she learned nothing. On the contrary, it only increased her blind self-confidence.Just teach her by yourself, and you will get angry if you say she has a stupid head or that she is stupid.

So small-minded.

——It seems that she is not being petty, but that she cannot accept it. After all, she is the emperor, and she has always been conceited and smart. No one has ever dared to say that to her.

Moreover, he is indeed smart. He is smart in other things, but he is a little slow when it comes to writing novels.

The warm water washed over his body, Lin Luo closed his eyes, thoughts racing in his mind.

Maybe it's because he's not good at teaching others, not to mention he's also a newbie, so he's at the level of the gangster Quanqin.

But after all, I have rich experience. After all, I have read a lot. I can read anything in Daqi, and I even have a group of people who write books. It is one of the few ways to entertain me when I am Eunuch Lin.

He was kind enough to impart experience to her, but his attitude was not correct.

Forget it, when the time comes and you fight hard, you will naturally learn to learn. Some people who are emperors will never look back until they hit the wall.

Seeing that Lin Luo didn't come out and the sound of running water still sounded in the bathroom, Jiang Li simply went back to the room and locked the door to prevent a noisy person from disturbing her thoughts.

Then he leaned on the bed, holding his cell phone and continuing his coding career.

I was just about to write down the beginning of the more than [-] words, but I hesitated a little. Compared with what Xiao Linzi said, my own writing seemed to be less attractive than what he said.

No, why should we use his?

If you say that I have a stupid head and that I am stupid, if I use his ideas to write, wouldn't it prove that I am not as smart as him and that I am stupid, and then I don't know how proud I will be.

Let me use my own starting point. Although it is not as attractive as his, it is not necessarily that bad. The so-called pearl is not dusty.

When my book reaches a certain starting point, everyone will be eager to follow it.

When I make a lot of money, you, Xiao Lin, must not be jealous!

Thinking angrily in his heart, Jiang Li stretched out his finger and continued to slide on the screen. Before he could write three lines, there was a loud knock on the door.

She didn't want to pay attention, but the knocking on the door didn't stop. After enduring it for a few moments, Jiang Li said angrily: "What are you doing!"

"It's quite early. Are you ready to go to bed now?"

"I can sleep whenever I want. Why do you care so much?"

"Okay, I don't care about you, you go to sleep, I'm going to bed too, good night."

"Night"

The word "night" was spoken subconsciously, and the word "an" after it was swallowed back by Jiang Lisheng. Why should I say good night to you?
damn thing!
Early the next morning, after Her Majesty took a bath, she continued writing a book.

In order to write a book, I didn’t even bother to write calligraphy and shoot a video. Someone in the group was urging me to update it.

Lin Luo replied in the group while brushing his teeth, "Jiang Jiang is busy with something, so the update may be late."

Someone in the group immediately asked, "Huh? Why didn't she tell her directly when she had something to do? Why did she ask you to do it?"

Lin Luo: "Because she is using her mobile phone."

"How did you know she was using her cell phone?"

"We live together, it's reasonable for lovers to live together, right?"

After sending a short reply, Lin Luo hid his merit and fame, put his phone back in his pocket, and stopped paying attention to the worldly disturbances.

I created a broken fan group and there are still people who want to poach my corner and destroy the idea of ​​​​pure love warriors in the group.

Let’s talk about the Cao thief kind.

After washing up, Jiang Li still kept swiping the screen with his fingers. Lin Luo walked over and sat next to her. The screen was too small to see clearly, so get closer.

It's still a bit unclear, so get closer.

Sensing his move, Jiang Li moved to the side and said without raising his head, "I'll kick you if you come close to me again."

"I want to read your masterpiece, but the screen is too small and I can't see clearly from a distance."

As he spoke, Lin Luo moved over quietly. Seeing that she didn't move any further, he continued: "I bought you a writing tablet online. It will arrive in two days. Then you can use it on the computer. It’s written on it.”

"Yeah" Jiang Li responded, then thought of something and asked, "What were the people in the group talking about just now? Why does the phone keep ringing?"

"Remind you to update. You were typing here when you got up early in the morning. Someone in the group asked, and then I told them that you were busy and said something else. If you want to know, just check the group messages later. If you feel uncomfortable, If it’s noisy, you can set up a group message to avoid disturbing others.”

Lin Luo looked at the screen. It was still the same writing style as Zizhi Tongjian. At best, there were more descriptions of scenery and dialogue between characters.

For this kind of thing, you must hit it hard, and it won't even make a splash.

"How many words have you written?"

"Almost three thousand."

"The speed is quite fast. If I write another [-] words, I will be ready to publish the book."

Hearing this, Jiang Li finally broke away from being immersed in typing, turned around and asked, "Isn't it just a matter of sending the book to the starting point? You only need [-] words to send it?"

"Yes, start with [-] words, and then just write [-] words and send them out every day."

"Who will you sign a contract with after posting it?"

Lin Luoxin said you'd be damned if you could sign a contract, but she said: "You don't go to others, they come to you. There is a fixed process for this. If you publish a book, it will enter the new library of the website. Then an editor will take a look and if they like your book, they will send you a message asking you to sign a contract."

"Of course, you can also choose another method - internal submission, which is to submit your manuscript to the mailbox of another editor. If they take a fancy to it, they will sign it directly."

After hearing the last sentence that he could sign directly, Jiang Li immediately made his choice, "Then what kind of internal investment do I want?"

"Okay, then let's make an internal investment." Lin Luo smiled. In fact, he also supported internal investment, mainly because it was quick.

The manuscript was typed back more quickly, and classmate Jiang Jiang's dream of making a lot of money was exposed more quickly.

Recognize reality and give up illusions.

Jiang Li always felt that this guy's smile was a little strange, so he couldn't help but ask, "Why are you smiling?"

"It's nothing. I'll go down and buy breakfast for us. Don't stop writing now and take advantage of this break to shoot the video."

Seeing her nodding, Lin Luo stood up, paused before walking out of the door, turned around and said, "What do you want for breakfast? How about rice porridge and steamed buns?"

"I want purple rice porridge with sugar."

"It's unnecessary to add sugar. I know it without you telling me."

(End of this chapter)