Crazy criticism of villains, I taught them how to behave

Chapter 213 It’s not too late for the extra chapter
"Husband, we have a guest!!"

The restaurant, which had been without customers for almost a month, finally had a few visiting businessmen who were unfamiliar with the place.

Lin Susu excitedly greeted people into the store.

There is no way, several years have passed, and the couple's cooking skills have not improved at all. But who is Lin Susu?

People who won’t shed a single tear when they see a coffin!

A handsome young man in plain clothes skillfully handed tea to several people.

After he left, a diner said curiously, "Huh? The waiter serving tea and pouring water looks very much like His Royal Highness Prince Li!"

Like General Shang, King Li has been worshiped as a god by the people for hundreds of years. Most people have a portrait of him in front of their shrines.

Lin Susu slowly shook her fan and smiled: "Is it possible that he is it?"

"?"

The diners looked at each other and laughed, "The boss lady is really good at joking. King Li was a figure from hundreds of years ago."

"Yes!"

Lin Susu smiled, said nothing, strolled to the kitchen, and said to the young man who was cooking with ease, "I never thought that you would actually work for Nanyu at that time."

Zhu Yan kept his hands on him, "Putting aside any grudges, he is indeed an emperor's talent."

After a pause, he added, "What? I can't be like him and have the world in my heart?"

Someone starts acting weird.

Lin Susu stretched out her fan and pointed at the pot, "Why is it sour? Did you put too much vinegar?"

Zhu Yan, "..."

When the food was served, as soon as the food was in their mouths, they all spat it out with a "pop" sound.

Before he had time to attack, he heard a loud "pop" on the counter, and the pretty proprietress spoke angrily.

"Where is that brat Zhu Weichi? Where did Ye Ye go?! Look at me if I don't deal with him well today!!"

As she spoke, the landlady skillfully grabbed the boss and walked out of the store.

After a while, he came back and said apologetically, "I'm in a hurry to find my child. There's no charge for this meal, so I'll treat you all as a treat!"

After speaking, the two disappeared without a trace again.

Several diners were speechless.

Let’s just say this is a shady shop. They don’t charge money. Let’s just say it’s not a shady shop. This food... is going to kill you!

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At the corner of the street, several five or six-year-old children gathered in a pile and were throwing stones at the trees.

"I'll throw it higher!"

"It's obviously me!"

During the dispute, a boy in brown clothes weighed the stone in his hand with an arrogant expression, "Let me do it!"

He was obviously dressed in the same way as the children around him, but his appearance was as beautiful as autumn leaves, and he actually made the ordinary clothes look like splendor. Several children got out of the way, and he took a good posture and threw the stone up. He heard a burst of "quacking" birds and a dark object fell from the tree.

A crow covered its head and said fiercely, "Who is it?! Who dares to hit me!!"

"Ahhhh! Monster!!"

The children scattered in terror, but the beautiful boy remained where he was.

Crow was stunned when he saw him, "Huh? You kid, you look so familiar? I seem to have seen you somewhere before?"

The boy looked at it curiously, "Crow?"

Crow's expression changed, "What nonsense are you talking about, you brat? I am a parrot! A parrot!!"

The boy put his hands on his hips and snorted, "It's the crow!!"

"hiss!"

The crow was angered and flew over, raising its thin legs to give him a kick.

However, the next second, the boy grabbed his leg, lifted him up and shook him. As he was dizzy, Crow retched.

Who is this bastard?

To be able to control it so easily, you must know that it is a raptor that has been practicing for hundreds of years! ! !
The boy kneaded it for a while but found it boring. He picked up the crow's legs and began to walk back, muttering in his mouth.

"Eating bird meat tonight..."

How to write a crazy comment?
Again, use my contrast method!
I think a simple crazy criticism is too one-sided, and I don’t like the perfect male protagonist, that is, the kind of male protagonist who is perfect in terms of morality, ability and psychology.

Regardless of the male or female protagonist, I like people with flaws, so that they feel like they are human beings, as if they have really been in this world.

Combined with the tragic life experience of the male protagonist, I decided to write about him from two extremes, and also used the method of contrast.

His psychology should be a combination of extreme darkness and extreme purity.

I have heard a saying that roughly means that a child's badness is a kind of innocent badness, a kind of evil without knowing it.

So I gave the male protagonist a child-like mentality. On the one hand, he is pure and innocent, and on the other hand, he is bad without knowing it.

He should treat love like a child, ignorant and awkward, loving but awkward. His evil makes him want to destroy, and his kindness makes him unable to control his approach.

Moreover, he grew up in the cold palace. From childhood to adulthood, he was forced to grow up. His mind was actually like that of a child.

It also fits the personality.

However, I actually don’t know what the final effect of the male protagonist will be...

I have already done my best.

Haha, finally, it’s over!

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