People in Kama Taj have countless talent entries
130.【30 words summary】
[Summary of 30 words]
First of all, it’s 30 words, so celebrate yourself.
Before publishing the book, I set a very low goal, just 500 orders, but the improvement in results also made me look forward to getting more.
The final result was a little better than my goal, but good things are limited.
I really can't laugh.
Recently, I also reviewed the previous article and discovered the reasons why the first order was not as expected.
The main reason is still the point of 'weird world'.
The content in the strange world is reduced to a certain extent by defeating monsters and upgrading, without any depth or visibility, resulting in the protagonist's rapid improvement in strength.
But this is all because I didn’t design the concept of a weird world.
I'm constantly overturning my settings.
At the beginning, the strange world is a nightmare dimension, but there is a problem. The protagonist is doing things in the nightmare dimension. Can the nightmare take action?If the nightmare takes action, the protagonist will die.
I'm afraid of the abuser.
Moreover, the dimension of this nightmare is not high enough.
Anyway, I gave up on this design.
Later, I wanted to set the weird world into a book, but there were several questions. Who is the author of the book?How to balance the changes that the protagonist brings to the strange world with the content of the book?
The protagonist discovers a strange world written by a down-and-out author. How should this be portrayed?
So, I gave up and changed the book into a painting, and even wrote it very early.
But there is a big problem.
The protagonist fills up the painting. Should I change the painting?So, wouldn’t the characters I portrayed before be in vain?
Marvel already has a multiverse, and it travels through the paintings. Doesn’t this coincide with the multiverse?
I overturned this idea again.
I even considered following the trend of sharing talents and letting the protagonist see countless versions of himself, but I gave up. This would affect the taste of the entire book and it would probably collapse soon.
It’s better to focus the camera on the protagonist!
With this entanglement, I gradually turned the strange world into a leveling venue.
In fact, it’s harmless to write like this, but the mistake is that the protagonist’s process of defeating monsters and upgrading is too smooth...
The text seems to be displeased with mountains.
If I had to go back and write it again, I definitely wouldn’t end up like this.
And it was only when I was about to put it on the shelves that I determined the origin and truth of the strange world, and connected the strange world with the real world.
Here, I would like to share a comment from a reader, which spoke to my heart. It made me very happy that my thoughts were not in vain.Comment from the [Thirteenth Young Master] Grand Master:
[You are a very good outline maker. You are very well prepared for internal conflicts, external threats, and short-term and long-term conflicts. But what you write is really embarrassing, and you also want to write about love, love, and life. If you can't survive, you have to add an urban love story. Love in the women's federation drama is rarely described. ]
And this proves that my layout and design can be seen by readers.
but.
Since I was new here, I still had a long time of struggling, I was not confident in my writing skills, and some readers’ radical comments made me give up a lot.
For example, 'Sally Valens' in the book was originally a thread in a plot, but due to the influence of negative reviews, I directly scrapped the plot.
Asgard rewritten.
Another point, regarding the level of the entries, if the entries do not start from the white quality, but from the gray quality, perhaps there will be more room for creativity.
In addition, the protagonist's mutant abilities also disgusted many readers. In fact, this is because I was struggling with what kind of abilities should be given to the protagonist.
It doesn’t ruin the plot, but it adds even more power to the story.
I once wanted to set it directly as [Man of Steel], and have the protagonist become Superman, absorbing light and radiation, but this made me feel weird, and the style of the entire book was wrong.
It was only in the end that I was sure of the Black King's abilities.
So, this is a big weakness of mine, I always want to let the protagonist go first and then think about where to go.
In future plots, I will try to avoid it and remind myself strictly.
I really stepped on all the traps that should be stepped on.
Even so, there are readers who support this work and speak for me, which really touches me.
Let me talk about the goal of a new young author. The goal I set for myself is to finish the book with at least 100 million words.
I can still do this.
Although there are some flaws in this book, and the author has been overturning and struggling with it during the coding process, I still try hard to present the best content to all readers.
The framework of the house has now been decided.
All that's left is to fill in the flesh.
'Literary drama' is also a relatively weak part of mine, but I strive to write smoothly and wonderfully.
In short.
I hope that Mengxin can spend more time with all readers. I also welcome your supervision and suggestions.
Fight for this book, the next book, and the next book. Each book can make some readers feel a little interesting.
Mengxin: Saturday and Sunday greetings!
(End of this chapter)
First of all, it’s 30 words, so celebrate yourself.
Before publishing the book, I set a very low goal, just 500 orders, but the improvement in results also made me look forward to getting more.
The final result was a little better than my goal, but good things are limited.
I really can't laugh.
Recently, I also reviewed the previous article and discovered the reasons why the first order was not as expected.
The main reason is still the point of 'weird world'.
The content in the strange world is reduced to a certain extent by defeating monsters and upgrading, without any depth or visibility, resulting in the protagonist's rapid improvement in strength.
But this is all because I didn’t design the concept of a weird world.
I'm constantly overturning my settings.
At the beginning, the strange world is a nightmare dimension, but there is a problem. The protagonist is doing things in the nightmare dimension. Can the nightmare take action?If the nightmare takes action, the protagonist will die.
I'm afraid of the abuser.
Moreover, the dimension of this nightmare is not high enough.
Anyway, I gave up on this design.
Later, I wanted to set the weird world into a book, but there were several questions. Who is the author of the book?How to balance the changes that the protagonist brings to the strange world with the content of the book?
The protagonist discovers a strange world written by a down-and-out author. How should this be portrayed?
So, I gave up and changed the book into a painting, and even wrote it very early.
But there is a big problem.
The protagonist fills up the painting. Should I change the painting?So, wouldn’t the characters I portrayed before be in vain?
Marvel already has a multiverse, and it travels through the paintings. Doesn’t this coincide with the multiverse?
I overturned this idea again.
I even considered following the trend of sharing talents and letting the protagonist see countless versions of himself, but I gave up. This would affect the taste of the entire book and it would probably collapse soon.
It’s better to focus the camera on the protagonist!
With this entanglement, I gradually turned the strange world into a leveling venue.
In fact, it’s harmless to write like this, but the mistake is that the protagonist’s process of defeating monsters and upgrading is too smooth...
The text seems to be displeased with mountains.
If I had to go back and write it again, I definitely wouldn’t end up like this.
And it was only when I was about to put it on the shelves that I determined the origin and truth of the strange world, and connected the strange world with the real world.
Here, I would like to share a comment from a reader, which spoke to my heart. It made me very happy that my thoughts were not in vain.Comment from the [Thirteenth Young Master] Grand Master:
[You are a very good outline maker. You are very well prepared for internal conflicts, external threats, and short-term and long-term conflicts. But what you write is really embarrassing, and you also want to write about love, love, and life. If you can't survive, you have to add an urban love story. Love in the women's federation drama is rarely described. ]
And this proves that my layout and design can be seen by readers.
but.
Since I was new here, I still had a long time of struggling, I was not confident in my writing skills, and some readers’ radical comments made me give up a lot.
For example, 'Sally Valens' in the book was originally a thread in a plot, but due to the influence of negative reviews, I directly scrapped the plot.
Asgard rewritten.
Another point, regarding the level of the entries, if the entries do not start from the white quality, but from the gray quality, perhaps there will be more room for creativity.
In addition, the protagonist's mutant abilities also disgusted many readers. In fact, this is because I was struggling with what kind of abilities should be given to the protagonist.
It doesn’t ruin the plot, but it adds even more power to the story.
I once wanted to set it directly as [Man of Steel], and have the protagonist become Superman, absorbing light and radiation, but this made me feel weird, and the style of the entire book was wrong.
It was only in the end that I was sure of the Black King's abilities.
So, this is a big weakness of mine, I always want to let the protagonist go first and then think about where to go.
In future plots, I will try to avoid it and remind myself strictly.
I really stepped on all the traps that should be stepped on.
Even so, there are readers who support this work and speak for me, which really touches me.
Let me talk about the goal of a new young author. The goal I set for myself is to finish the book with at least 100 million words.
I can still do this.
Although there are some flaws in this book, and the author has been overturning and struggling with it during the coding process, I still try hard to present the best content to all readers.
The framework of the house has now been decided.
All that's left is to fill in the flesh.
'Literary drama' is also a relatively weak part of mine, but I strive to write smoothly and wonderfully.
In short.
I hope that Mengxin can spend more time with all readers. I also welcome your supervision and suggestions.
Fight for this book, the next book, and the next book. Each book can make some readers feel a little interesting.
Mengxin: Saturday and Sunday greetings!
(End of this chapter)
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