The immortality of mortals

Chapter 106: Updates and answers to questions

Thank you all book friends for your reading and support. This book will be on the shelves at noon today, and today’s update will also be at noon.

When I first started writing a book, I had so many different feelings, haha.

I just took this opportunity to chat with you.

There are many settings that seemed to have no problems when I wrote them, but I didn't expect that they would be criticized by some book friends.

For example, the protagonist does not feel as walking on thin ice as in the original work, like when he was in the bloody forbidden land, it was too relaxed.

Answer: The author is actually very helpless about this. The protagonist knows the general plot and has a cheat. If he is still groveling at every turn, and every dungeon and battle is written in a dangerous way, then there is something wrong with the underlying logic.

Regarding the battles, some book friends left a message saying that the battles seemed to be relatively short.

Answer: On the one hand, because the protagonist has a high level and is invincible at the same level, it is unreasonable to write a long battle. Also, there are not many methods in the Qi Refining realm, and the battles are very short. This is mentioned in the original work. .

The most important thing is the setting of the characters and their character image.

After reading this, it should be clear to everyone that the protagonist Yang Xuan is born with perfect appearance. In the eyes of outsiders, he is highly talented and has strong fighting skills.

Therefore, some characters who have a bad attitude towards Han Li in the original work may not necessarily have a bad attitude towards the protagonist.

When Wangda wrote the original work, he used the method of describing people based on events. Regarding the creation of female characters, they were basically independent, strong, self-reliant, and cool.Highlight the image by describing the difficulties they encountered.

And it is impossible for fans to write about the various difficulties they encounter, otherwise not only will the plots be the same, but the protagonists will be too useless.

So at this time, it is necessary to have a more vivid and vivid character to show the image of the female character.

The author's idea is to deeply analyze and expand the character of the original character. For example, Nangong Wan, who was a girl in the original work, was more eccentric and eccentric, and this is even more prominent in this book.There are also Xin Ruyin's gentle and rational character, Dong Xuan'er's playful little witch character, and some female characters who have not yet appeared.

Of course, you can also just use it as a vase to collect the harem without any thought... But that is just filling the numbers.

The author still wants to try his best to write each character well.

Well, as a newcomer to the book, if you find any problems or have any comments about the follow-up, you can leave a comment and the author will listen.

Let’s talk about the update issue here.

Maybe not long after I started writing a book, others wrote thousands of words an hour, but when the author wrote it, he really wrote 4000 words from morning to night... Haha, I am really helpless and I must say sorry.

When the author continues to write more words and is proficient in hundreds of thousands of words, and the speed increases, he should be able to update more.

PS: I still implore all book friends to support and subscribe.

The better the score, the more confident the author will be in writing, and the more energy he can devote to writing, and he will be able to update more often in the future!
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