Is this cartoonist mentally ill?.

Chapter 404: Criticism of the Plot on the th Day of the Twelfth Month (Orig

In addition, Master Jingxin also asked Li Huowang to get her a pair of more special eyes so that she could expel the Danyangzi from Li Huowang's body.

What she wanted was an evil eye called the Eighteenth Day of the Layue.

And this eighteenth day of the twelfth lunar month has a special power. It changes every year on the eighteenth day of the twelfth lunar month. Not only its appearance will change, but its magical powers will also change. This is why Master Jingxin doesn't know what it looks like now. She just remembers that it was red.

In order to get rid of Dan Yangzi, Li Huowang didn't care about so many things now. Besides, Master Jingxin also said that he had the Daqianlu with him, so it should be easy to solve the issue of the eighteenth day of the twelfth lunar month.

Although he didn't know how to solve the problem of the 18th day of the twelfth lunar month, he turned and walked out of the room, intending to look for the 18th day of the twelfth lunar month.

But in the end, Master Jingxin asked him to keep the persimmon cake he had bought not long ago. Since the gold was gone, the persimmon cake was nothing. So he put down the persimmon cake and left.

However, after Li Huowang and Master Jingxin finished their discussion and left the room, Master Jingxin did something strange.

In the cartoon, after Master Jingxin was the only one left in the room, she stretched out her right hand, which was black between her fingers, and reached into the folds of her greasy fat flesh.

It seemed like a treasure bag for storing things.

In the next cartoon, with a "pop" sound, a thin old man with atrophied limbs and a bald head mixed with decayed fluid was dug out by Master Jingxin.

The old man had cloudy pupils, expressionless face, and looked lifeless.
"Son, did you hear that? Mommy found some dried persimmons for you to eat. Haha, aren't you happy? I still remember that you loved eating dried persimmons the most when you were wearing open-crotch pants."

Master Jingxin ate the persimmon cake while mixing it with other chewed food in her mouth and fed it to the "old man".

The old man didn't move at all. He didn't spit out the disgusting food, but he didn't swallow it either. The food just dripped from his mouth.

It is obvious...this is Master Jingxin's son who is also Xinsu.

Judging from the current situation, Master Jingxin's son has gone crazy. In order to protect him, Master Jingxin hid him in her body and maintained his life by this feeding method.

It seems that it is not only Master Jingxin's son who is crazy, but also Master Jingxin...

But it's normal for a mother to go crazy when she sees her child become like this.

Master Jingxin stuffed the food in her son's mouth until it was full, and at the same time told him that Li Huowang's future would be much worse than his, but he still did not react and unconsciously vomited the food in his mouth.

Then, the scene turned to Li Huowang's companions.

It’s just... everyone seems to be a little dissatisfied with Li Huowang, because Li Huowang is becoming more and more assertive and self-willed.

He no longer discussed anything with them, as if he regarded them as a burden, even though Li Huowang was the strongest among them and was the savior who helped them escape from Qingfeng Temple.

However, Li Huowang's increasingly strong personality made them feel a little uncomfortable.

In particular, in order to expel the Danyangzi from his body, Li Huowang gave all the gold to An Ci'an without any consultation with Bai Lingmiao, Chun Xiaoman and others.

This made them even more uneasy.

Comic fans also felt a little uncomfortable with Li Huowang's personality change.

But this is a comic, so everyone feels it’s actually okay.

One advantage of comics over novels is that the protagonist can have his character changes and personal growth described.

The protagonist of a comic can be accidentally defeated by the enemy and can have some character flaws, but as long as he grows up, no one will say anything.

But the protagonist of the novel... everyone prefers a perfect personality protagonist who has a sound mind, is born with a strong character, is not timid and will not be deceived.

Li Huowang actually has a very sound personality, but he still has defects because of the characteristics of his own heart and what happened to Danyangzi along the way.

Soon, when he was leading Bai Lingmiao and others to look for the 18th day of the twelfth lunar month according to Master Jingxin's instructions, he also noticed his own psychological changes.

However, he also fell into the trap of Layue Shiba, but he did not expect that Layue Shiba actually created a Wujia Village, and its ability was to fundamentally change cognition and replace a person's identity silently.

And also transfer the various identities of other people to that person.

This kind of ability is simply impossible to guard against, even Li Huowang has suffered from it.

However, on the 18th day of the twelfth lunar month, he stole Li Huowang's identity and trapped Li Huowang and others...

Li Huowang activated his "heart element" ability again and traveled back to the modern world...

Therefore, he immediately regained his awareness of his own identity.

However, he did not travel back to deal with the 18th day of the twelfth lunar month.

"I can't just sit there and wait. After the illusion fades, La Yue Shi Ba might modify my perception again. I must influence the other side by acting in the illusion."

Li Huowang thought of this approach and was ready to take action at any time.

However... the plot of "The Taoist Immortal" ended here, and Lin Qingshan did not continue to finish the subsequent plot.

Comic fans have no choice but to keep the suspense and keep their curiosity until next week.

But they didn’t know that the following plot... would be extremely explosive!
However, the popularity of "Daoguiyixian" has increased greatly recently, and it is still in the third place, although it is not as good as the two comics "Divine Clan" and "True Dragon God's Selection".

But its popularity is far higher than the following comics.

The most important thing is that "The Taoist Immortal" is very popular. Stimulated by the tense, exciting and eye-catching plot, the discussion about it on the Internet has never decreased.

But that's all there is to it. After all, most comic fans still don't fully understand the plot and settings of "Daoguiyixian".

What is the cultivation system in this world? It seems that there is no realm division?
Also, what on earth happened to this world? Why did it become so weird?

What’s the matter with Li Huowang’s time travel? He is Xinsu… What kind of physique is this and what is its use?

Unlike previous comic works where most of the settings were revealed at the beginning, allowing fans to have a 70% understanding, "Daoguiyixian" has been serialized to the 31st episode so far, and everyone is still a little confused.

In addition, there have been no key and exciting plots yet, so the popularity can only be maintained here.

While the popularity of "Daoguiyixian" remains at this level, "The Gods" has sparked even more heated discussions.

After Yang Mingfei discovered that his "memory" was different from that of other people at Casal Academy, he went to find Chen Nuonuo for help.

But he didn't know that Casal College was suspecting him of a recent series of attacks. Just when he and Chen Nuonuo were in danger, the useless senior brother came to find him.

He, Finkel and Chen Nuonuo decided to return to Chu Zihan's hometown BJ, looking for traces of Chu Zihan left behind, but accidentally broke into the Nibelungen where Chu Zihan had encountered that year with Chen Nuonuo... However, it was these plots that made the fans of "Protoss" dissatisfied.

Because... the protagonist Yang Mingfei actually still likes the "female lead" Chen Nuonuo in the fourth part of the plot.

Although in a work, the male and female protagonists are usually standard, but...

There is really no match between the unlucky male and female protagonists of "The Protoss"...

The most important thing is that after experiencing the plot of the Black Moon Tide chapter, everyone thought that it was because of Eiry's relationship, and the loyalty between Shuaizai and his senior brother Caesar.

The loser should not be reluctant to leave the heroine Chen Nuonuo anymore.

Especially the opening plot of Odin's Abyss, Caesar really had nothing to say to the loser, and handed the student union to him, helped him build momentum and transformed his outfit, and transformed him from a useless "S"-class half-blood who was questioned and ridiculed in the academy to a real "S"-class half-blood admired by his younger classmates.

So based on the "brotherhood" that everyone believes in, isn't it a bit inhumane for you to still care about your elder sister-in-law?

Secondly, even though Eri is dead, and there doesn't seem to be a resurrection match in "Protoss", isn't it a bit disgusting that you're thinking about other women after Eri's death?
In fact, this is just a bit offensive to those who are against Eri. After all, Eri is already dead, and it is understandable that the protagonist has found another female character he likes.

It could be Ling, Mai, Su Enxi, or even the little goddess Su Xiaoqiang who appeared again in the fourth part...

But why was it sister-in-law Chen Nuonuo?
In the plot, Eri had an "emotional affair" right after leaving, and also seduced her sister-in-law...

The combination of these two plots is like you said you had a stomachache a few seconds ago, and then others saw an unidentified yellow object in your crotch.

It's hard not to think you actually shit your pants.

So comic fans began to feel dissatisfied and thought that the comic author Yangyangshu was being disgusting.

A lot of negative reviews began to appear online.

"Eri left right after and you're already thinking about your senior sister... Akaashi is a dog that can't change."

"That's disgusting. I feel so sorry for Eri for liking someone like this."

"Do you think Xisa has done anything wrong to you? Xisa gave you the position of student union president against all odds, gave you a gun, and bought you clothes.

In the Black Moon Tide chapter, he really treated you like a little brother and risked his life to protect you. When we were underwater, Senior Brother Chu and I risked our lives to get out and protect you. Is this how you treat him?"

"The recent plot is really disgusting. Not only is the protagonist as irresponsible as a loser, he also has no moral values. How can you pretend to be a bit?"

"It is said that Yanyangshu is treating himself as the protagonist. He has indeed studied abroad and has a senior sister..."

"Is this the reason why you can't forget about Senior Sister?"

"That senior sister is also miserable. She was originally living a happy life with her original husband, but someone drew her into a cartoon heroine and she is still being scolded."

"Honestly, why are you scolding my senior sister? She didn't give me any hints. She just saved the situation once out of kindness and even recorded a birthday greeting for me. And now she's being blamed. This is really miserable."

"If I met such a person, I would really throw up. I was trying to help him but he made up a love story out of nothing."

"If the senior sister in the comics was a little bit mean, I would scold her instead of scolding this tough protagonist. What you said is really outrageous. The senior sister hasn't contacted the loser for more than a year, but he still came to her door."

"Yang Mingfei is too outrageous... He hasn't grown up in four years of college - I mean in terms of his personality and psychology. I thought he had grown a little, but he immediately wilted before he could show much. He still sticks to others like a dog-skin plaster. It's disgusting..."

"Alas... Now I'm thinking that it might be a good thing if "Gods" ended after this part of the plot."

"You're wrong. The best ending for Protoss is with Tide of the Black Moon. I really don't think the sequel of Protoss will be good. If it continues like this, the reputation will probably drop to the bottom."

"Yanyangshu will never be as good as Qingshan Laozei based on this one thing. The protagonist of Qingshan Laozei is not so unlucky and despicable."

……

Yang Shuzhun saw these negative comments online at this time, and some comic fans even went to his Weibo account to comment.

As a Weibo expert, he felt extremely upset after seeing these comments.

Because...these talking comic fans really touched his pain point.

He did have a senior sister whom he liked very much when he was studying abroad.

And the last sentence above, "You will never be able to compare to Qingshan in your life," made Yang Shuzhun even more angry.

But he will not admit that he is not as good as others, nor will he admit that there is something wrong with his plot.

This is also a common problem among most creators. They think that there is nothing wrong with the plots they create from their own perspective.

Just saying that he is not as good as Lin Qingshan...

He was somewhat powerless to refute, although the popularity of "The Gods" still suppressed Lin Qingshan's new work "The Tao of Strange Immortals" as always, and the same was true when Lin Qingshan serialized "Parasyte" before.

Even in the previous annual popularity ranking, "The Protoss" still leads Lin Qingshan's "Chainsaw Man" with a slightly obvious advantage.

Judging from the comic's current weekly popularity and overall popularity, he can be said to have surpassed Lin Qingshan.

However, in terms of animation, film and television adaptation and influence, he is far inferior to Lin Qingshan.

Because the first season of "Protoss" animation was bad, no matter how many reasons he had, the "Protoss" animation was bad, but Lin Qingshan's comic-adapted animations "Edgewalker" and "Chainsaw Man" were both very popular.

The most powerful cyberpunk comic book, "Edgewalker", was even adapted into a movie, with global box office exceeding 3 billion.

With this result, ten Yang Shuzhuns cannot compare to Lin Qingshan.

but……

"I won't lose. Even if the haters don't support Protoss anymore, it will still be a super popular phenomenon. It may be as successful as the Harry Potter series in the future!"

Yang Shuzhun said firmly, and then...

He casually took a photo of his workbench and posted it on Weibo with the caption:

"Although we don't have the bodies of true gods, we have a strong heart to slay gods and destroy demons! I will do my best, God Eggs!"

(End of this chapter)