Is this cartoonist mentally ill?.

Chapter 67 Critical Moment

"Damn it! What happened just now!"

Mann said ruefully.

The situation on Tanaka's side is not optimistic, and it seems that he is about to die.

"Oops! It would be trouble if he dies!"

Mann said with an ugly expression.

David panicked for a moment. What... was he doing just now?
Why the hesitation?

Why is the chain lost here?

He fell into deep self-blame and panic.

On Dolio's side, David, who was still panicking, was operating the deep dive access system.

"Cheer up! David, you helped her connect, right?"

David looked at Lucy in the ice pool.

He woke up instantly, and with the cooperation of Dolio, he disconnected Lucy's deep dive connection.

But at this moment, Mann became angry when he looked at David who lost his chain at the critical moment.

"David!"

David didn't realize anything at this time. He just said happily, "Ah... Lucy's side is also..."

However, the next moment, Mann's huge slap fell directly on his face.

"David! What are you doing!"

Mann angrily questioned David.

However, David turned around and asked Mann, "Ah... what about you?"

"What are you doing?!"

"What did you say?"

Mann was stunned and asked condescendingly.

"Injuring Qiwei, causing Lucy to do it by herself... What are you doing!?"

"David...you..."

Mann suddenly felt a little guilty.

Yes...if it weren't for him...

But just then, Dolio yelled, "Mann! David!"

"When Tanaka died, the jammer exploded!"

"Signal sent to trauma team!"

This meant that the trauma team would soon be sending armed personnel to try and save Tanaka's life.

And the arrival of the trauma team is likely to attract the NCPD, the police force of Night City!

By then, they will face the siege of two major armed forces!
"hateful!"

Mann also woke up from his self-blame at this time, "David! Let's talk about it later!"

"Go get the car ready!"

David was still dazed, and Dolio, his always gentle sister-in-law, couldn't help it anymore.

She punched David in the face and said angrily, "Cheer up! David! You promised to do this job well! Then do it well!"

David was also woken up instantly, hugged Lucy and took action directly.

"We'll be there soon, you guys wait in the car!"

Mann obviously meant that he and Dolio were responsible for breaking up the rear.

"I understand!"

David held Lucy in his arms and directly used the powerful time-stopping ability of "Sianwistan".

At this moment, mobile teams and hover vehicles from the trauma team arrived one after another from the sky.

“Is this what a platinum member of the trauma team gets?”

Mann said as he looked at the armed team in the sky.

"There are gunshots recorded in the service area, or armed personnel may appear, seeking NCPD force support."

said the armed officer on the trauma team's mobile hover vehicle.

Over there, David took Lucy to the car, and when he started the car, he even turned on the loud music.

Suddenly Lucy woke up.

With the emergence of the trauma team and NCPD, the war between Mann and Dolio is about to break out.

"This is the end of this story."

"I rely on!"

Zhou Wenwei felt numb when he saw these three words. When I was most excited and nervous, why did you stop me here?

His mind was now filled with speculations about the next plot.

What will happen to David and the others?
Why is there David's information on the information in Tanaka's neural network?

Can eldest brother Mann and sister-in-law Dolio escape in the end?
All of this is too much room for imagination.

This made Zhou Wenwei unable to sleep or eat well.

but……

"David, this is too harmful."

Zhou Wenwei said angrily, "Why is he hesitating?"

In the eyes of these comic fans, in fact, David did not hesitate and gave Tanaka an anesthetic directly, and everything would have gone smoothly.

As a result, David was tricked by Tanaka and arrived there in a daze.

Only then did Tanaka die from behind.

Even if Tanaka will definitely die in the end, there is a difference between dying unexpectedly before the information is obtained and being killed after the information is obtained.

After obtaining the information, he was killed and disposed of by Mann and others.

Then Mann and Dolio had enough time to evacuate the area where Tanaka died and put this matter behind them.

So David's hesitation was indeed too harmful.

Lin Qingshan's previous animation "Edge Walker" was probably because all 10 episodes were released at once.

Therefore, everyone was affected by the coherent plot at that time, and did not resent David at this time, because he hesitated and killed Mann and Dolio.

But it's different when "Edgewalker" becomes a comic.

Due to the long serialization period of the comic, David's shortcomings of hesitation and death are particularly magnified at this time, and are not covered up by the advantages in the subsequent plot.

This will naturally make everyone unhappy.

As for the eldest brother Mann, he injured Qi Wei due to illness, which caused things to go wrong.

Everyone can understand this, after all, this is not a problem caused by Mann's subjective factors.

But because of that damn cyberpsychosis.

Sick...

No one wants to get sick.

The same goes for Mann, who doesn't want to get sick and hinder the completion of his mission.

It's just that he is a little stubborn and does not intend to change to a lighter prosthetic body to slow down the onset of the disease.

However, even if Mann now wants to change to a lighter prosthesis to slow down the onset of the disease.

He definitely couldn't change this at the time of the mission.

So is Mann at fault?

Have.

But it can be understood and forgiven.

On the contrary, it was David's hesitation that led to Tanaka's death and the arrival of the trauma team and NCPD. This is somewhat unforgivable.

This is also the case on the forum about "Edge Walker" at the moment.

"It's not David's hesitation. The trauma team and NCPD won't come. Why is he hesitant?"

"This protagonist... I'm numb. Isn't this harming others and myself?"

"I think that although the eldest brother Mann made mistakes, he can be forgiven, but what about David? What is he doing?"

"It's so easy to be fooled by the enemy. You are a real tiger, brother!"

"Oh, I hope that the eldest brother can evacuate smoothly and safely. In the next episode, the eldest brother will not risk his life to protect his sister-in-law and run out, but he will die, right?"

"According to the current situation... I feel it is very likely that this is the case, and the knife is issued again..."

"I'm actually more curious about why Lucy is so afraid of Arasaka Company, and why Tanaka has David's information in his system."

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh - I feel like I'm going to die without reading the latest episode of "Edgewalker"!"

……

Forums and comic fans began to have passionate discussions. Generally speaking, there were more comments hoping that Mann and Dorio could be safely evacuated.

By the way, I criticized David, the hesitant male protagonist.

At the same time, after the latest episode of "Edge Walker" was posted to the Internet, the Internet became a hot topic.

But all this has nothing to do with Lin Qingshan, because at this time he and Pochita are accompanying Gu Qianli, who has just returned to the Magic City.

　After thinking about it, I decided to write about some daily things and things that I had in mind. For example, the reason why I wrote about David and his friends in the year 2077, and why the protagonist plays a game, is because I really want to be in the game. I made a V to save David, Mann and the others in the DLC, so that’s why I arranged it this way.

　　However, based on everyone's opinions, we have decided to adjust the ratio of comics to daily life and other story lines to about 3:1. Comics will be the main part, but daily life and other story lines will be interspersed in a smaller proportion. .

　　The comics will focus on important plots, such as Mann's death plot in "Edgewalker". I will write two or three chapters, and I will try my best to cover the rest.

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