The Crown Prince of Huayu!

Chapter 265: What does Fang want to know about the world of cultivation?

Chapter 265: What does Fang want to know about the world of cultivation?
Fang Xiang is actually not that old, only one year older than Han Jiadong. He is not yet twenty-seven, but his annual income can already reach more than one million.

He can already be called a successful person.

Of course, it is definitely incomparable to Han Jiadong.

So after receiving a call saying that director Han Jiadong wanted to see him, he immediately rushed to the capital from his hometown.

After meeting Han Jiadong in the tea room, he was even more excited and incoherent.

Han Jiadong asked him to calm down before getting to the point.

"Have you made any plans for the subsequent plot arrangements of this novel?"

"Yes, yes, I have prepared an outline."

Fang wanted to say that he took out a document prepared in advance and handed it to Han Jiadong.

Originally, he only made detailed plans for the next 100,000 words, and then only had a rough idea.

The protagonist has worked so hard to develop his divine power, and spent so much time in the novel, but this guy named Wei Sheng can't even obtain his divine power inexplicably.

"and many more!"

Fang Xiang thought about it for a while and then started talking.

"Yes."

It's over! It's over!

The way it is written, it would be strange if it didn't end badly.

Han Jiadong's tone relaxed at this time.

Han Jiadong was not convinced by his statement at all: "The role of a commander is that one person leads a group of subordinates, and the subordinates do not take action. How can the commander conquer the Hundred Barbarians Realm by himself?"

As for the content... the first and middle stages were fine, and Han Jiadong would nod from time to time.

Fang Xiang was asked again, and he couldn't help but feel uneasy.

Fang Xiang's face was still filled with excitement as he thought about the scene where Wei Sheng cut off the main peak of Kunlun with his sword, and nodded: "Yes."

"Uh……"

At the same time, I couldn't help but wonder, does Director Han's willingness to give suggestions mean that he hasn't completely given up on himself?

"If you want to show Wei Sheng's talent in swordsmanship and character charm, you don't have to be the most powerful. The power of the subsequent protagonists is already strong enough. There is no need for Wei Sheng and others to gain supernatural powers inexplicably and break the balance with Kunlun. You can set Wei Sheng to be the first person with divine power. Even in the end, because of the gap between spiritual power and divine power, it doesn't matter if he dies under Lin Qian's sword. The imperfect regret will make the impression more profound, and the audience will also imagine what it would be like if Wei Sheng What will happen if you can also cultivate your divine power?"

Not only is he not the protagonist, he is not even ranked as the third male lead based on his role...

He stopped Fang Xiang from talking: "Kunlun is the strongest force in this novel?"

No wonder his novels tend to end badly.

"Right under their noses, one person and one sword cut off their main peak?"

I didn't even practice my divine power properly, but I suddenly obtained it from others, and then I became invincible...

Fang Xiang was confused. Although Kunlun would definitely lose according to his settings, Han Jiadong said that the exciting decisive battle he had set seemed to have become useless.

"Uh...how to change it?"

After hearing this, I started to frown from time to time.

Han Jiadong shook his head: "You spent so much time emphasizing the power of the war department and the role of the prohibition formation. But in the end, Kunlun, which has some of the most powerful war departments in the world, is also protected by countless prohibition formations. At the base camp, he was stabbed to pieces in front of one person? Isn’t this person the protagonist?”

Han Jiadong continued to ask: "One person has turned the villain's base camp upside down. How are you going to arrange the subsequent plot?"

Director Han will not be dissatisfied with his follow-up plot and not ready to adapt his novel, right?

"can."

"Well... I mainly wanted to show that the supporting characters have their own charms. The protagonist mainly plays the role of commander, and Wei Sheng is the sharpest sword."

But after his first contact with Han Jiadong's staff, he quickly compiled an outline of the follow-up content.

Han Jiadong took the information he handed over, flipped through it, and said, "Can you briefly describe it orally?"

When he heard that Wei Sheng had cut off the main peak of Kunlun with his sword, Han Jiadong could no longer bear it.

"This, I plan to arrange another decisive battle with human sea tactics."

"Is that necessary? Even if Kunlun can win, won't they still be unable to stop Wei Sheng? What's the use of winning? Will Wei Sheng kill all the senior officials sooner or later?"

"Your protagonist's strength expanded too quickly in the later stage. The climax plot of conquering the demon world and the demon world is completely uninteresting, especially the demon world. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist has never actually been to the demon world... This needs to be changed."

Fang Xiang said a little unsure.

Fang Xiang finally hesitated, but nodded.

Fang Xiang's eyes lit up when he heard this, and following Han Jiadong's train of thought, many good ideas came to his mind instantly.

"Correct!"

"Uh……"

"Are all the main strong men of the other party here?"

Han Jiadong had already found other problems at this time.

"Are they still the last villains?"

“Are you the author or am I the author?”

"I...I'll think about it again."

Fang Xiang said without confidence.

Han Jiadong did not embarrass him too much, and reminded: "Since the last volume has set that the protagonist has lost all his cultivation, don't let the protagonist recover too fast, you can take your time, and the hundred barbarians in the demon world are in a unified state, and the underworld is in a unified state. The situation is one of conflict between heroes, which one should a normal person fight first?"

"Yes, I understand."

Fang Xiang quickly agreed. According to his own setting, the protagonist Zuo Mo could destroy the unified Hundred Barbarian Realm by himself, but he asked his generals to lead the war department to fight to the death in the underworld... It was indeed unreasonable. .

"Why didn't this little fruit appear later?"

Han Jiadong asked again: "Did he die in battle when the monsters invaded?"

In terms of roles, Xiaoguo can be considered the heroine of the first volume.

As a result, this person was not found directly later.

Fang Xiang hurriedly said: "No, no, he was just caught by the demon clan, and he will appear again later."

"Will it have any further role in promoting the plot?"

"Uh...she is too weak..."

This means that if you appear again, you can only make soy sauce.

Han Jiadong did not comment this time, but asked someone else: "Where is this Li Xian'er?"

If we say Xiaoguo is the first heroine in terms of roles.

Li Xian'er is the female character who looks most like the heroine in the first volume.

Because although Xiaoguo has a lot of roles, she is indispensable in promoting the plot. Her existence is more about pretending to be cute and cute.

In comparison, although Li Xian'er has never officially met the protagonist, she is the only one who has an emotional scene with the protagonist in the first volume.

If emotions such as "fear" and "unpleasant" are also considered emotions.

And the strength and background are all powerful enough to crush the protagonist.

Even though the novel has now been updated to the fourth volume, when Li Xian'er, who only made a brief appearance in the first and second volumes, and the protagonist's "online love" will appear, it is still the most anticipated emotional scene in the novel.

"She comes and goes. She is the granddaughter of the leader of Tianhuan Sect. She will have many interactions with Zuo Mo later."

Fang Xiang quickly replied that Tianhuan Sect was one of the four major forces in the human world as famous as Kunlun, but it was left behind by Kunlun after entering the age of divine power.

"Marriage with the protagonist?" Han Jiadong guessed.

Fang Xiang hesitated: "This... I haven't thought about it."

"Then please describe the scene when she first met the protagonist."

"Uh...I haven't thought about this yet."

"..."

Han Jiadong was a little speechless at this time.

The most anticipated scene in the early part of the novel, not only should it make people cry and make people cry, but it should at least make people feel comfortable after reading it, right?
As a result, you haven’t even figured out how to write it?

No wonder the later stages always suck.

Sure enough, there is a reason why the bad reputation is so famous.

Han Jiadong sighed secretly, and then reminded: "Didn't your protagonist get a magic formula called Shi Xiang from Pu Yao that has been useless? You can use it on Li Xian'er through Qianhe, and then arrange for the two to meet by chance. Li Xian'er doesn't know the protagonist. The protagonist recognizes Li Xian'er through scent recognition as the woman who tortured him to death in the early stage. I will add more details to the story. "

Fang Xiang's eyes lit up again, Han Jiadong said that he was looking forward to the scene where the two met.

"Okay, I'll add it when I get back!"

"Zeng Lian'er appeared too late. Please move her part earlier."

According to the setting, Zeng Lian'er is considered the second female lead.

The heroine A Gui is the male protagonist's maid and child bride.

Zeng Lian'er cultivated the moon power corresponding to Zuo Mo's sun power.

The two of them can cultivate both spiritual power.

However, according to Fang Xiang's original arrangement, Zeng Lian'er had to appear in the fifth volume, and the plot was already halfway through.

Fang Xiang agreed immediately.

Han Jiadong asked a lot of questions later.

For example, the personnel structure of Zuo Mo's sect is unreasonable. Basically, there are only four brothers and sisters who represent the strongest combat power in the Jindan period, as well as the protagonist's group of disciples. The middle-level deacons and the like are not mentioned at all.

It is such an unreasonable plot arrangement that when the protagonist is doing business in his own sect's shop, he will be threatened by three rogue cultivators at the pulse condensation stage (below the golden elixir).

It is also unreasonable for a group of people in the Pulse Condensation Stage to participate in the Sword Trial Tournament while the protagonist is in the Foundation Building Stage. It is better to skip the preliminaries and directly invite the protagonist to participate in the main competition, and when inviting, the protagonist is only in the Qi Training Stage!
In normal mortal-style novels, it is equivalent to a group of competitions in which only the Golden Core Stage participates, and a Qi Training Stage is invited to participate.

Is this reasonable?

Of course, these are actually minor problems and can be easily corrected.

The biggest problem is the currency settings inside!

When dividing the first-grade crystals to the tenth-grade crystals, the initial exchange ratio of one to one hundred is outrageous enough. Later, there is actually a setting that the higher the level, the greater the exchange ratio.

For example, when a third-grade crystal stone is exchanged for a fourth-grade crystal stone, the ratio is five hundred to one.

Based on this setting, how many of the most commonly used first-grade crystals are equivalent to a tenth-grade crystal?

If the exchange continues like this, the monetary system inside will collapse sooner or later.

Han Jiadong doubted whether Fang Xiang would be able to write down the tenth-grade crystal in the end.

Of course, Han Jiadong can also understand.

Fang Xiang is just a novelist. What does he know about the world of cultivation?
Let alone building a new monetary system.

So Han Jiadong went directly to Fang Xiang to show off, saying that he would invite specialized economic and monetary experts to reset the monetary system during the adaptation.

Fang Xiang was not dissatisfied with this, but was very happy and even excited.

Because this means that director Han Jiadong is really serious about adapting his own work!
Han Jiadong has indeed confirmed that he will adapt this novel. Although it has many problems, its advantages are enough to cover up those problems.

Just like the original "Game of Thrones" in time and space, there are also many problems.

For example, Dragon Mother’s most important first pot of gold, exchanging dragons for the Unsullied Legion, was like playing house. The other party didn’t even verify whether they could tame the dragon, but they stupidly handed over the Unsullied Legion to them. Dragon Mother was then killed by the dragon on the spot.

Also in the first city captured, they lazily arranged for one of the opponent's three commanders to fall in love with Long Ma at first sight, and then killed the other two commanders and defected to Long Ma.

Although the whole show is famous for its Machiavellian plots, many of the plots are really just child's play.

He was supposed to be the smartest little devil in the show, but by the final season his IQ had become that of an idiot with the same height as him.

It fully demonstrates what it means that a screenwriter with a certain IQ can only write characters with a certain IQ.

But even so, it still has no impact on Quanyou's popularity around the world.

"How come the leader of the Wu Kong Sword Sect and the protagonist's master who are in several golden elixir stages didn't show up later?"

"They're all dead."

"How did you die?"

"Forced by Kunlun to go to the front line, he died in the battle."

"Write out the specific process and make it more heroic and sensational."

As the ceiling of combat power in the early stage of the novel, since we decided to make it into a TV series, we must explain their results.

But even though they abandoned the protagonist, they are not the villains.

Even the people are nice.

The leader is dedicated to the sect.

The second uncle is the strongest. He can turn the ice chi sword into a chi dragon and is the strongest in the early stage. Even the Jindan ancestor Zuo Mo killed with a city of people is not as strong as the second uncle.

The third uncle is in charge of finances and is the most kind.

Although the master is a woman, she is very strong, sharp-tongued, and treats the protagonist very well.

"Xiao Guo, Li Fengying, and Luo Li were also captured by the demon clan at that time?"

"Yes, it is."

"Write down what happened after they were captured in the demon world in detail. Their ransoming later will not advance the plot anyway. You might as well treat them as pawns in the demon world. It just so happens that your sense of existence in the demon world is too low. Among them, Luo Li, you can arrange him as a sword servant of a demon clan who likes swordsmanship."

Luo Li is also the protagonist's senior brother, a swordsman genius. Wei Sheng initially served as his sword servant, but in the end he counterattacked and became his senior brother due to his talent and hard work.

When he appeared as a villain, he was cold and arrogant in love, and bullied the protagonist. The protagonist's first formal contest was with him.

After losing to the protagonist and being abandoned by his girlfriend, his personality changed.

To describe it in one word, it is "whitewashing", and the whitewashing was very successful.

According to Fang Xiang's original arrangement, after he was caught, his hand tendons and hamstrings were severed, and his cultivation was abolished. Before being abolished, he was only in the pulse condensation stage. However, after he was rescued, it was because he learned the secret book given by Pu Yao. , his cultivation level suddenly skyrocketed to a strength comparable to the peak of Nascent Soul.

It's very confusing.

It's all just to force the supporting characters to keep up with the protagonist's strength.

By the time He Fang wanted to finish explaining, Han Jiadong already had ideas in his mind about how to film the first and second seasons.

Like Game of Thrones, the first season mainly relies on some interesting and novel daily life to show the world of cultivation.

The point is not the plot, but the shocking special effects that are even better than Game of Thrones.

The second season began to officially enter the development of the protagonist's personal power, and finally ended with the protagonist leading a group of pulse-condensing foundation builders to kill a golden elixir ancestor with great difficulty.

At the same time, as a comparison, the stronger head masters were easily killed in the battle with the demon clan.

It can be regarded as officially putting the demon clan, which only existed in legends before, on the table.

At the same time, it is also the first time that Kunlun, a decent behemoth in the human world, is placed on the opposite side of the protagonist, increasing the audience's expectations for the third season.

(End of this chapter)

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