Douluo: Simplify Cultivation, Holy Angel

Chapter 189: Closing Remarks

After writing on and off for half a year, I finally finished the novel Angel.

Here, I would like to thank the readers for their great support. Thank you very much.

It was my first time writing a novel, and there were many things that I didn’t handle well, such as the characterization, the advancement of the plot, and the design of the exciting parts. It was really difficult.

The plot of the book Angel is that Li Xuanji defeated Tang San in the final battle between gods, but was killed by Shura God himself. The protagonist successfully resurrected in the Dou II period 10,000 years later with the help of the resurrection card. After growing up again, he finally became a god again, but was attacked by Tang San and the Shrek Seven Devils. He was seriously injured and reincarnated. It was not until the Legend of the Dragon King in Dou III that Li Xuanji finally stood up and killed Tang San.

At this time, the real boss of Douluo Continent, Dragon God, appeared. After all, Tang San is 50% vegetative, while Tang Wulin is 75% soul beast blood. I have reason to suspect that Tang San's rise to power is a conspiracy of soul beasts.

To be more precise, it was the conspiracy of the Dragon God.

Based on this, I connected all of Douluo 1, 2 and 3 together.

But I overlooked one problem, which is that it was too unpleasant.

Whose protagonist is being suppressed like this all the time! Whose protagonist's first four soul skills don't even have one that can attack!

So unhappy.

Isn't the purpose of reading novels to have fun and have joy?

I reflect.

So, originally I was going to connect the plots of Douluo Dalu 1, 2 and 3, and the goal was to have a million-word masterpiece, but after some revisions, it became like this. The book Angel has many shortcomings, and I am grateful to the readers for reading this.

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Then there is the hole in the book Angel, which I need to fill.

This is Rona with the Centaur spirit. She was originally planned to have a spirit fusion skill with Li Xuanji, the Centaur Shooter.

Then came the hundred thousand year old soul beast Xiong Batian. Her role was also reduced a lot, and she almost became a transparent person later on.

The escaped Lone Goose was originally planned to join the Shrek team and lead Tang San and others to the Yin-Yang Eyes of Ice and Fire, but this plot was also deleted.

Bai Xue, the blood-clothed woman, was originally set to secretly control a large number of soul masters. Later, she became a team with Tang San and others. However, she was backfired by the spiritual charm of the Angel Holy Sword injected into her spirit by Li Xuanji, and was killed by Qian Renxue in the final battle.

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That’s all for now.

Then there is the new book, "In Douluo, I can strengthen everything", I hope this book will be better written. (End of this chapter)

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