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Chapter 78: Silence Marks Weiyang Palace

Xu Yingze's plan changes at any time, and Mu Zhengguang changes with her. In the next chapter, the "changes" are more obvious. Her approach and behavior are not bad, but they are not perfect either.

This chapter mainly writes about three locations and analyzes the plot based on the locations.

The first location is Huashan.

Climbing Huashan is very difficult. "Mu Zhengguang wanders among the peaks", this benefit and convenience is brought by the asymptote.

The second location is the Weiyang Palace.

The first mention of the Ganges Palace in the entire book was in Chapter 2, when Mu Zhengguang said, "It would be nice if I could go and see it."

The Weiyang Palace and the Ganges Palace are different in nature, but both were built by the Star Lord.

Mu Zhengguang believes that "this palace seems to be non-existent", while Xu Ying believes that "things in the palace seem to never change."

The third location, another mountain.

Mu Zhengguang and Xu Ying have the opportunity and ability to do what they want, such as traveling, hiking, and changing the location of hiking at any time.

From this part of the plot, we can see that Xu Yingze is also an ordinary person. Her interests and behaviors are not alternative or special. What is special is her "heart" rather than her external performance.

Xu Yingze's rationality and maturity did not make her restrained, rigid, or stagnant, and those seemingly unstable behaviors also appeared in her to a greater or lesser extent. From another perspective, Xu Yingze was only 15 years old at that time, and it is difficult for people of this age to be "calm".

There is also a little bit of physical description in this chapter. This physical description is written from Mu Zhengguang's perspective, which is very subjective and "exudes a beauty that makes people happy and excited."

This description of his appearance triggers Mu Zhengguang's associations with the past. One of the most important settings of this volume is about to surface.

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Chapter 79: The Origin of Powerful Strength

The long paragraph written by Mu Zhengguang can be divided into three points. The first point is the wish, the second point is the desire, and the third point is the characteristics.

Mu Zhengguang put "force" and "quantity" together without separating them. Xu Ying separated "force" and "quantity", which is a good idea. More specific details have not been written yet.

Combining their conclusions: wishes and traits affect the asymptote, desires affect the asymptote, and the higher the degree of fulfillment of the wish, the stronger the force.

The idea proposed by Xu Yingze was to "go back and see the classmates who had finished the exam." The "classmates" she mentioned were not people in the same grade as her, nor was she referring to any specific person. Later in the text it said "Xu Yingze looked at the appearance of these people." "These people" definitely could not be the same person.

Now that we are here, let me finish this paragraph first.

"Xu Ying looked at these people and gradually felt that the passage of time had its merits: if there had not been the previous three years, there would not have been this moment... In the near future, in the next era, the hardships and difficulties of the world should be reduced."

Xu Ying did not deny "before", nor did she deny "now", nor did she deny "a moment". What she hated was "three years". "Three years" for "a moment" was too long and too abnormal. She did not like this abnormal phenomenon and wanted to change something.

There is a psychological description before this paragraph, "In daily life... if you always don't interact with people of the opposite sex of the same age... it sounds a bit abnormal... if you expand this constraint without limit... it goes against the original intention of goodness."

The omitted content is also important. Those words are used to indicate the degree and explain the prerequisites, but there is no need for specific analysis.

The summary in Chapter 66 wrote, "Mu Zhengguang did not regard Xu Yingze's contact information as a secret that could not be revealed." In this chapter, Xu Yingze did not regard Mu Zhengguang as a "secret." The original text said, "Xu Yingze intended to let him learn how to interact with the opposite sex, and find the boundaries of interacting with the opposite sex."

Mu Zhengguang respects and does not interfere with Xu Yingze. Xu Yingze does the same to Mu Zhengguang.

In this chapter, Xu Wanyang officially appears. Mu Zhengguang is indeed not good at dealing with girls, especially girls of the same age.

Asymptotes have affected people's daily lives, whether it is controlling rain or jumping over the railing on the second floor, these are common things that happen in the new era.

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Chapter 80: Who is driving the secret visit?

The content of this chapter is closely related to "darkness", and it also opens up a hidden line and begins to lay the groundwork.

Regardless of whether Mu Zhengguang guessed right or wrong, regardless of whether the asymptote was triggered by humans or not, the asymptote will definitely rewrite many things in the later stage, which is inevitable.

Now that we have discussed the topic, let’s talk about the event.

The first thing was that Xu Yingze and Mu Zhengguang went to Xu Wanyang's house.

Let me extend this a little bit. Mu Zhengguang puts friends before family, so he writes more about his friends and less about his family. Xu Ying puts family before friends, so she writes more about her family and less about her friends.

The second thing is the conversation before the dinner.

In this chapter, there is no description of Mu Zhengguang's language. In this situation, it is difficult for him to speak. He is not very good at socializing, not to mention that there are girls of his age present, which makes it even more difficult for him to speak.

"I thought they were just ordinary friends," Xu Mingsong thought. His thoughts were far from the truth. However, from his thoughts, it can be seen that Mu Zhengguang and Xu Yingze had very little physical contact. The two of them were getting along in a respectful manner.

The third thing is to have a dinner together.

This matter can be divided into two parts, the conversation during the dinner and Mu Zhengguang’s thoughts.

Xu Ying persuaded Xu Wanyang to accept the 360 ​​points. She did not condescend to give points to others, but regarded this help as a cooperation. Through this cooperation, the originally unfamiliar city became no longer unfamiliar.

Mu Zhengguang has a different opinion on 360 points, which I will not elaborate on here. What he is worried about is desire, "unparalleled desire is probably the common point of ancient people."

Linking desire and power together is a conclusion that just appeared in the previous chapter. This conclusion may be right or wrong. Mu Zhengguang believes that this conclusion is right, so he is worried.

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Chapter 81: "It's Hard to Predict the Score Even though It's Already Decided"

This chapter is divided into three parts.

The first part is the communication between the two protagonists.

There is a lot of content in the communication, such as "darkness" and fate. There are similar words in the previous chapters, so I will not summarize them here.

Specifically analyze two sentences and two ideas.

"Interacting with kind people makes people feel that pursuing justice is a beautiful thing. Interacting with evil people makes people feel that pursuing justice is a stupid thing." "Although kind people and evil people look similar, the effects they have on people are completely different." These two sentences directly and clearly express the two people's views on good and evil.

"Words that are often said will also be forgotten. Having someone to help and remind you is easier than facing it alone." These words look a bit like narration, but according to the author's writing habits, narration and language description are usually not in the same paragraph. These two sentences should be psychological descriptions.

The second part is the communication between Mu Zhengguang and Lu Hao.

Chapter 71 says, "If you want to give sharing bonus points to others, just log in to the official website of the institute, find the bonus column, and fill in the score and the other party's ID number. That's all." From the process of giving points, although Lu Hao and Li Moqi didn't want the points, Mu Zhengguang was still able to force them to give the points. With Mu Zhengguang's ability, it was too easy to get the ID number of a classmate. Mu Zhengguang respected his friends' ideas, so he didn't force them to do something.

What Mu Zhengguang said to Lu Hao was at most guidance. He told Lu Hao his ideas and then waited for Lu Hao to make a decision.

"Whether she wants a score or not has nothing to do with you." "Two people don't need to have the same score to be together." "The person who deserves your love must at least care about you and want to see you become better." If Mu Zhengguang was not Lu Hao's friend, then what he said might be a little inappropriate. Having said that, although Mu Zhengguang was Lu Hao's friend, Lu Hao was still unmoved.

Lu Hao's choice was not wise, but it was not stupid either. Mu Zhengguang was his friend, and the help this friend could bring him was far more than just grades. Although Lu Hao did not know what the stationmaster and the dean of the branch were, he was still very clear about what the Medieval represented.

Li Moqi is not necessarily a person with more positives than negatives, but her views and opinions on grades are more appropriate. Grades are related to her standards for choosing a spouse and making friends, but the correlation is not significant.

She didn't make friends just for the sake of grades, but people with low grades couldn't be her friends, that was her bottom line. In the end, Li Moqi didn't ask for Mu Zhengguang's grades.

The third thing is to fill in the score.

The final result was very different from what Mu Zhengguang expected. Lu Hao and Li Moqi didn't take a cent either. This shows that even though there is an asymptote, there are still many things that don't go as planned. There are very few things that can be predicted accurately in one's life.

Because Mu Zhengguang values ​​friends more, he writes about calculating scores for friends and communicating with friends in detail. Xu Ying values ​​her family more, especially Xu Wanyang, so she writes about things related to Xu Wanyang in detail.

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Chapter 82 "Branch Dean Zhao Yuxi"

In this chapter, it is clearly pointed out that Mu Zhengguang's estimate of the admission score of Shuimu University is not quite right. The lower limit of his estimate is far from the actual score.

There are some descriptions in this chapter that abandon reality for the sake of drama. They mainly focus on two points, one is the scores, and the other is the admission ranking. The score span of the top 1800 is too wide, the first place is nearly 1300 points higher than the th place. Even the second place is about points higher than the th place. Logically speaking, if everyone buys points or everyone scrambles for points, there should be quite a few people with super high scores. But if there are too many people with high scores, it will cause the two protagonists to make miscalculations.

The admission rankings mentioned in this chapter are also seriously inconsistent with the facts. The provincial ranking of 95th and the provincial ranking of 96th are either both stable or not stable. It is impossible for 95th to be stable and 96th to be unstable.

The second half of this chapter is about Zhao Yuxi.

The spokesperson for the King of Dongting Lake, the dean of the Qichuan branch of the research institute, the ancient Zhao Yuxi.

In the summary of Chapter 63 it is written, "As the plot develops to this point, the names of the Ancients begin to appear frequently."

In the summary of this chapter, you can write a sentence like this: As the plot develops to this point, the ancients begin to appear frequently.

They no longer appear in the narration, no longer appear in small scale, and no longer are mentioned occasionally, but run through the entire text and are deeply rooted in the plot.

Zhao Yuxi's speech was relatively long and was divided into four parts.

The result of the first part is "The twelve webmasters had different expressions, and Zhao Yuxi saw the answer from their expressions."

The result of the second part was that "before people had time to understand the deeper meaning of the leader's words, the leader moved on to the next topic."

The second part of Zhao Yuxi's speech went against the purpose of the institute. From her speech, it can be seen that she did not take the vice president seriously.

What the vice president said was "as long as you don't kill ordinary people at will", and what Zhao Yuxi said was "You and your immediate subordinates don't kill others without reason or kill your colleagues". There is a big difference between the two, and it is definitely not as simple as changing a word.

The third part talks about two privileges, which end with "you are responsible for the consequences". These two privileges are prepared by Zhao Yuxi for her subordinates, and they are truly "privileges".

The fourth part is about work. The key point is that "being late is entirely voluntary."

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Chapter 83: Ancient People Commonly Seen in the World

This chapter contains a very detailed description of the two characters' appearances. This description is written from Zhao Yuxi's perspective, describing the two characters' images in Zhao Yuxi's eyes.

If it was Mu Zhengguang who looked at Xu Yingze, he would definitely not say "That is, this girl is really a grown-up, but she has not been tainted with the maturity and sentiment of an adult, and is not mixed with a single stain." These words are seriously inconsistent with Mu Zhengguang's experience and personality.

Chapter 58 says, "I seem to understand why it is beneficial for you to have a youthful appearance forever." This is Mu Zhengguang's opinion of Xu Yingze. It's not that he didn't notice Xu Yingze's charm, but he would not use the word "young lady" to describe Xu Yingze's appearance.

Similarly, it is impossible for Xu Yingze to describe Mu Zhengguang as "fair-skinned and beautiful".

Zhao Yuxi's abilities are very complex. The article gives two generalizations: synaesthesia of all things and the ability to distinguish true from false.

These two abilities do not provide combat power, but they are crucial and even the foundation of survival.

The abilities of the two ancient contestants: the power of oblivion and cohesion.

Su Tao's power of forgetfulness is not obvious in the text, but it makes sense: Su Tao makes his opponents forget themselves and the game, and then obey his orders.

There is too little display of Yu Qingchi's abilities in the article, so I will not analyze them further.

Zhao Yuxi listed two abilities of excellent medieval people, the power of replication and the power of abstract inheritance. Both of these powers were mentioned by Zhu Chenyu. But Zhu Chenyu never mentioned the four words "genetic power".

Zhao Yuxi said, "The power of forgetting and cohesion are actually not as good as the power of excellent medieval people." This is her personal opinion and has not been confirmed by the narration.

Zhao Yuxi asked Mu Zhengguang and Xu Ying whether they were lovers. Mu Zhengguang said no, but Xu Ying said yes. Moreover, Zhao Yuxi believed that neither of them lied. How to understand this?

It's easy to understand. Mu Zhengguang said that they were not lovers because he had a different view of the word "lover". At least he didn't think that his relationship with Xu Yingze was the kind of lover relationship that is often seen in the secular world.

Zhao Yuxi thought Mu Zhengguang was a blockhead, and Xu Ying was calm and rational, and her judgment was generally accurate. She could see this information from a very simple and ordinary question, on the one hand because she had the ability to sense everything and distinguish true from false, and on the other hand because her own way of thinking and wisdom level were high enough.

As an aside, Xu Ying does not have the ability to sense everything or distinguish true from false, but she knows that Mu Zhengguang is just against the word "lover" instead of denying their relationship. Because the two of them are connected, they can understand each other's accurate thoughts without the need for empathy or the ability to distinguish true from false.

At the end of the chapter, there is a conversation between Mu Zhengguang and Xu Yingze. The part that needs to be summarized has been written in the main text: there is no accusation, no excuse, and no "wooden head" that Zhao Yuxi saw in their conversation. Xu Yingze is calm and rational, and so is Mu Zhengguang.

In fact, this passage was originally placed in the "Author's Words", but I think it is more accurate and appropriate to put these words as narration in the main text.

Writing the "Author's Note" is a process of checking for omissions and filling gaps. What details and conclusions are missing from the main text? Are there any logical errors, confusions in time and space, far-fetched reasoning, absurd words and deeds in the main text? After rereading it, you can find these problems to a certain extent. What details can you remember after reading the main text, what conclusions can you draw, which sentences are confusing, which sentences are impressive... Then, these words are worth putting in the chapter review for specific analysis.

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Chapter 84: Meeting the First Assistant

Mu Zhengguang asked Xu Yingze for advice. His respect and admiration for Xu Yingze were not just words, nor were they only expressed in one aspect.

"She never wanted to deal with these people again and hated this kind of asymptotes," Xu Ying hated asymptotes that could affect people's hearts. However, both operational power and existence power can affect people's hearts.

Chapter 22: "If one uses existence to destroy nature, kill life, manipulate people's hearts, and tamper with facts, then that's too much." This is Mu Zhengguang's idea. It can be seen that Mu Zhengguang doesn't like to influence people's hearts. If he likes and envies this kind of behavior, then he will definitely take action.

"Mu Zhengguang was skeptical about her first words." Mu Zhengguang was skeptical of the words (I wish the text was "that would be the best"), not the person. His suspicion was not right, but also not wrong. Even Xu Yingze herself was not sure whether what she said was correct.

Although Mu Zhengguang had doubts, he voiced his doubts, which was quite rare. On the other hand, if he was doubting not a sentence but a person, he could have listened to the sentence in reverse, hidden his doubts in his heart, and never spoken them out.

"From what I know and from what you said, the types of people you like can be roughly divided into five categories... Our past is real... Plus, we have similar natures, so no matter what kind of people appear around you, they are just insignificant passers-by."

Xu Ying knew the five types of people that Mu Zhengguang liked and his attitude towards the opposite sex. This was not guessed, but was expressed and told by Mu Zhengguang. The communication between the two involved all aspects, and the article only wrote a small part of it.

Xia Yiming asked Xu Yingze, "What is the relationship between you two?" Xu Yingze replied, "No comment." Why didn't she answer according to the "standard answer"? Because she had no obligation to tell Xia Yiming the truth, because Xia Yiming and she were not close.

This chapter also contains a detailed description of the appearance, which is divided into two paragraphs.

Xia Yiming was relatively objective in her initial assessment of people, able to see both their strengths and weaknesses. However, when she heard that these two were both medieval people, her evaluation of them suddenly increased.

Here I would also like to say that Mu Zhengguang would definitely not notice whether Xu Yingze has muscles or not. Xia Yiming could notice it because it was her interest and her vision. Similarly, Xu Yingze would not say that Mu Zhengguang was "not tall". She used to feel sad because Mu Zhengguang was not tall, but she did not say "not tall".

By the second paragraph describing their appearance, Xia Yiming re-evaluated their looks and began to praise them.

She previously thought that Mu Zhengguang "did not have the temperament of an adult man and did not seem to exercise often", but in this paragraph, it became "young and promising, gentle as jade". Moreover, she did not praise Xu Yingze for her good looks in the previous paragraph, but in the next paragraph, she said "she is fair and pretty".

We can say that Xia Yiming's aesthetics is influenced by asymptotes and asymptotic rates.

It is a fact that Xia Yiming's aesthetics are not objective. If Xu Yingze had a beauty that could make fish sink to the bottom of the water and geese fall to the ground, or the moon hide in shame, then how would Xia Yiming view her appearance without knowing that she was a medieval person? Just move the words in the second paragraph of the description of her appearance over.

After Xia Yiming knew that the other party was a vintage person, she did not describe her as "beautiful enough to make fishes sink and geese fall" or "beautiful enough to make the moon hide and the flowers ashamed". In other words, although she had the "vintage filter" and although Xia Yiming intended to praise Xu Yingze, she still felt that the other party's appearance was not beautiful enough to make fishes sink and geese fall or "beautiful enough to make the moon hide and the flowers ashamed".

Let’s take a look at what Zhao Yuxi said: her figure and appearance are flawless. Although her facial features and face cannot be called absolutely beautiful, they should not be belittled in any way.

In short, there are no disadvantages, but there are not many advantages either.

Xu Yingze is not the most beautiful person who can be seen at a glance in a crowd, and the article never deliberately emphasizes her beauty. Xu Yingze is good-looking, but this is not her main attribute, nor is it her most outstanding advantage. It is just a relatively intuitive external advantage, nothing more.

Finally, let’s talk about Xia Yiming’s criteria for choosing a partner.

There is no doubt that her standards are not high. Although most people cannot meet her standards, she has met them. She is relatively good and wants to find a suitable match, which is understandable.

In fact, her standards can be said to be relatively low. She is a recent ancient person, but she does not require the other party to be a recent ancient person. A person who is inferior to the recent ancient person, or a modern person is also fine.

Let me say more about the criteria for choosing a partner.

In the new era, after people have asymptotes, asymptotes and asymptotic rates are added to the mate selection criteria. When something is added, something is removed. This chapter talks about a very obvious example, muscle.

In the old days, many people believed that muscles were a symbol of strength. But in the new era, in the era of asymptotics, muscles are useless. No matter how well you train your muscles, can they increase strength? Acceleration? Maybe a little bit. But this little difference is nothing compared to the difference in domain radius.

There is an upper limit to increasing strength through muscles, but there is no upper limit to increasing strength through domain radius.

If two people have the same domain radius and the same asymptotic rate, it is possible that the person with more muscles has greater strength. But what if they are different? Moreover, training muscles takes so much effort. People don't have to do anything, and the domain radius will increase. How easy is that.

Using the asymptotic rate of asymptotes as the standard can reduce many conflicts. Interactions between people will also be safer and more convenient. At least both parties will say whether they are ancient, medieval, recent or the latter three. Then the weak party should no longer take the initiative to provoke the strong party.

(End of this chapter)