I asked you to write a book, not to disclose your criminal record!

Chapter 33 Should I report the case?

'I am a killer.'

'Some people call me the king of the dark night, and some people call me the god of death.'

'But, no one has seen me.'

'Because, everyone who has seen me is dead.'

"Kill, and take revenge."

'It can stop injustice and enforce justice.'

"But what happens after the killing?"

'Will you gain spiritual salvation, or sink into a sea of ​​suffering and never find peace?'

"I will tell you from my own experience what to do and what will happen after the killing."

'Finally, I will persuade you.'

'Turn yourself in, there are police officers everywhere.'

'...'

When Mingyue first read this small part at the beginning, she frowned: "Another first-person perspective narration?"

"The Tazza" is also narrated in the first person.

Youyou pursed her lips: "Yes."

Most novels are narrated in the third person, and those in the first person are relatively rare.

This is especially true for online novels.

Because it is too difficult to write a good story in the first person.

The single perspective means that readers can only see what the protagonist sees, hears, and feels, and cannot see people, things, or events outside the protagonist's senses. This is likely to cause the story to be full of loopholes, etc., which are not listed one by one.

If a failed writer submits a work, Mingyue will trigger the "100% rejection" attribute when it sees that it is a story narrated in the first person.

"Give him a chance."

Mingyue didn't get angry but laughed instead, after all, this was the 'top of the list'.

The top of the Langya list is Meilang from Jiangzuo.

The top of the list is Lin.

We all have unique talents and a bright future.

Youyou and Mingyue continued to read.

'The first time I destroyed a life with my own hands was when I was nine years old.'

'I tied its hands and feet, picked up a sharp knife, and swung it at its throat.'

"I even used a bowl to collect its blood."

'It struggled, but I was very strong and pushed it into the boiling water, completely disabling it.'

'I was very cruel, I had no intention of letting him go, I chopped him up into pieces.'

'at last……'

'I have tasted something wonderful that I have never tasted before.'

'Because chicken soup is delicious.'

Youyou pursed her lips, and her delicate face showed a bright smile: "Is Lin Chuan writing a light-hearted killer novel?"

Mingyue picked up the coffee and took a sip.

Then, she pondered for a moment: "This reversal is just right. The cruel description of the chicken-killing process makes people empathize with it, creating a tense and terrifying atmosphere. Then, the reversal reveals that it is just killing chickens, which really makes people smile."

Youyou murmured: "Substitute..."

Mingyue smiled and said, "I now understand why he chose to narrate in the first person."

"Why?" Youyou asked.

"The first-person narrative style is not completely without advantages. Its biggest advantage is that it provides a strong sense of immersion," Mingyue explained.

Youyou nodded: "Yes, Lin Chuan uses the first person perspective to create a sense of immersion, and when the final revelation is made, the reversal effect can be maximized."

Editor-in-chief Mingyue looked at the title of Lin Chuan's book again.

This killer is too professional.

She rarely praised it: "If it is labeled as 'reversal + relaxed', it is not without merit."

"You rarely praise people for their good opening." Youyou said with a smile.

Mingyue raised the corner of her mouth: "That's because I haven't met a good one yet."

The two looked at each other and smiled.

However, the smiles on their faces soon froze.

Their expressions were somewhat similar, their brows were furrowed, as if there was an indescribable dullness, like a dark cloud pressing on their heads, and their faces looked heavy.

Because, Lin Chuan's "This Killer is Too Professional" is not labeled as "reversal + light-hearted". On the contrary, his label is: real.

'After killing the chicken, I had a very strong feeling.'

'I'll be a killer.'

'Because, I'm a natural born killer.'

'A year later, I joined an organization where I learned how to fight, how to use firearms, and most importantly, how to handle crime scenes.'

'These are the skills that I have learned from repeated actual combat.'

'My first mission target is a wealthy man and his mistress.'

'...'

'The mission was accomplished successfully.'

'But this is not enough, because the scene is still a mess, I have to deal with it, otherwise, I will be exposed. '

'I decided to fake the scene.'

'...'

Watch and watch.

Mingyue's lips turned slightly pale and her breathing became heavy. She wanted to take a sip of coffee, but just as she put it to her lips, she put it down again.

She couldn't drink it.

"I'm going to take a breath."

Mingyue took a deep breath, stood up and walked to the window, facing her face to the grille window, breathing in the not-so-fresh air outside the window.

half an hour.

Mingyue finally came to her senses, returned to her seat, and started to complain: "This is so real, I feel like I'm there in person!"

But Youyou on the other side didn't reply.

A look at the bright moon.

Youyou stared at the screen of her mobile phone with full concentration.

"long?"

Mingyue shouted.

Youyou came back to her senses and patted her chest: "It feels like reading a horror novel, exciting and scary, but I really want to continue reading."

Mingyue's lips twitched slightly and she nodded: "That's true, but I have a question."

"What's the question?" Youyou was slightly stunned.

"What did Lin Chuan do before he started writing novels?" Mingyue frowned slightly.

"He started writing books when he was in college. He probably hasn't done anything else." Youyou thought for a while, "Sister Mingyue, why are you asking this?"

Mingyue twitched the corner of her mouth: "I was wondering, should I report it to the police?"

"what?"

Youyou widened her eyes and stared at the bright moon.

"just kidding,"

Mingyue smiled, "Lin Chuan's opening is extremely realistic. The details are so real that I can see the scene with my eyes closed!"

Youyou nodded in approval.

Lin Chuan is too cruel!
Mingyue added: "Especially when dealing with the scene, we wiped the floor with disinfectant to prevent Luminol reagent detection, and used a hair dryer to dry the ground and soles of shoes to prevent footprints."

"When he left, he even opened the window to let the smell of disinfectant dissipate. He was so professional that I even suspected he had some criminal record!"

They both took a sip of coffee.

Slowly.

The slightly bitter taste lingered in the mouth, dispelling the bloody smell in the mind.

Youyou then said: "Will this pass the review?"

"It should be possible. His description is well controlled. If he goes into more detail, he will be locked up in the dark room." Mingyue thought for a while, "I'd better ask the reviewer."

Soon.

Review response: Yes.

A brilliant smile appeared on her delicate and delicate face, like the breeze in the early March morning blowing through the willows hanging down by the river, creating ripples on the water.

She had a feeling that Lin Chuan's new book would perform very well.

Even better than the con man!

"Youyou, why don't you transfer Lin Chuan to my name?" Mingyue blinked and suddenly asked.

(End of this chapter)