Dingguo

Chapter 76 The Competition of Entry Poems (5)

Tianxiang didn't care about this, and nodded with Su San again, and then began to play... the tune, and everyone heard the song "Yongyule"... only heard Tianxiang pull out the prelude, and sang slightly: The bright moon is like frost, the good wind is like water, and the scenery is clear. 【】

Su San was slightly taken aback...Xiang Tianxiang: Isn't this the poem I wrote to Ren Yingying?

But when Tianxiang was also smiling at her... she understood... No wonder, her voice was sincere just now... So that's how it is... All the talents only nodded slightly after hearing these few sentences, the meaning of the word is not bad , this friend of Tianxiang is extremely talented... Tianxiang continued to sing...: Qugang jumps fish, Yuanhe pours dew, lonely people see.Like three drums, a leaf resounds, and the dark dream cloud is startled.In the vast night, looking for a place again, I feel that I have come to the small garden to travel all over.

After singing the previous Que, there will be a passage in the middle, which gives the talented people time to ponder.

Just talking about the scene description of Shangque, it is already excellent... What is commendable is that this scene is clearly written, but there is an emotional connection in the dark, "Meng Yun", "Shocked", "Re-search", "Walk all over" They are all hinting at the mood of the owner of the words... It is a common technique to express emotions in the scene, but it is rare to be so subtle and natural.

Just listen to this part, and everyone will know that this word is probably a masterpiece... I don't know who made it... I heard that Wang Shaoyou and others are closer to Tianxiang, I am afraid that this word will not come out of them... Everyone Thinking of this in her heart, Tianxiang began to sing: Tired guest at the end of the world, the way back from the mountain, looking away at the hometown.The swallow building is empty, where is the beauty?Airlock Louyan.Ancient and modern are like dreams, never dreamed, but there are old loves and new grievances.Right at the same time, the night scene of the Yellow Tower, I sighed for Yu Hao, "Good..." After singing, everyone thought about it again, and then someone shouted loudly... Everyone has a good opinion in their hearts, whether the poem is good or bad, they I naturally understand in my heart... This word is naturally good. In comparison, even if I am in the prime of life, I may not be able to write such thoughts. The praise of "good" is worthy of..."I don't know if this But who wrote the first "Yong Yu Le"...I'm afraid this poem is just a poem, and it's also excellent...Brother Shaoyou, it can't be your new work..."

Wang Shaoyou quickly waved his hands... "Where, where... this word is excellent... Shaoyou doesn't have this kind of skill, he is ashamed, he is ashamed..."

Wang Yu's words are quite true... Once the words were sung, everyone felt a little bit powerless, and wanted to change the words in the words, but they still couldn't find a place to change... Only this point can be seen The sophistication of the writer.

Everyone saw that Wang Shaoyou denied it, and then heard him say something that he was ashamed of... Thinking about it carefully, it is really not Wang Shaoyou's style... Thinking about other people, they couldn't think of who might have made this word, so they had to Xiang Tianxiang...Tianxiang smiled lightly...Bi said mysteriously, "He is also a great talent... It's just that this great talent doesn't want to show his name, so he specifically asked not to spread it... Today, if it weren't for Mr. Su To be there... This word will never be sung... Now that I have sung it rashly, I don't know that great talent, will I blame it in the future?"

Seeing Tianxiang say this, Lin Rong couldn't help but feel happy, this is an opportunity.

I was so happy that tonight really went smoothly, even Tianxiang cooperated with me, and touched Liu Jian... Liu Jian is a good dog by Lin Rong's side, he understands everything, and he will fall in love as soon as he touches..."Yes, brother Su Miss Tianxiang risked offending others for you...Brother Su, don't let Miss Tianxiang down..."

Liu Jian said with a slight smile, but it got everyone's minds hooked again... Everyone repeated the same old story: they said that the time is almost up, the wine has been drunk, and the music has been listened to... Even the bricks can't be thrown away. At least... there must be a few words coming out... Su San didn't answer, stood up and walked to the table next to him, picked up a brush, and then said with a smile to everyone: "It's hard to be polite... just write a poem, laughing at me." , laughing..."

When everyone saw that Su San was really going to do it, they all said, "It's not a problem, both refined and popular..."

Then someone rushed to the table... But Wang Shaoyou took a good position and stood beside Su San... It looked like he wanted to see it first... He picked up the pen, soaked it with thick ink, and thought for a while , and wrote it down.Wang Shaoyou occupied an excellent position, so of course he wanted to show something... So Su San wrote a sentence, and he followed Su San's pen and read down... "Jinse, end...fifty strings; one string, one pillar... ...Sihua Year."

Everyone's complexion changed... The beginning of this poem naturally mentioned the matter of Tian Xiangqin just now, which is enough to show that Su San wrote this poem impromptu.

But this alone, of course, can't make everyone change color.What really makes everyone become palladium is the subtlety of the first two sentences.

As soon as the first two sentences came out, everyone didn't say anything, but tasted it in their hearts, so they changed their faces... Jinse!Why do you have fifty strings?You know that every string and every column reminds me of the good times with you.

Ah, such an opening, such a poetic flavor...it's really coquettish and romantic.Such a good sentence, why can't I think about it...Su San paused, waiting for everyone's reaction.

Although this poem by Li Shangyin is not perfect for this occasion, it is a good poem that people in the future will have to repeat silently several times after reading it. It is suitable for this situation... The original meaning of this good poem by Li Shangyin is unverifiable, and the understandings of later generations are also different. Such a poem whose poetic meaning is not very clear has a kind of temperament of being at ease with the situation, so there is no need to worry about it when he uses it boldly. ...It's just a few words, I'm afraid it needs to be changed.

Lin Rong and Liu Jian didn't join in, but when they heard that Wang Shaoyou had only read two sentences, they lost their color... It seems that such a sentence, such a plot, is not something ordinary people can do... The two of them were changing faces... Wang Shaoyou's voice sounded again... "Qin Sheng...Xiaomeng, Mi...Butterfly, Emperor Shu...Chunxin...Trusted Du Juan."

In the history of the feudal dynasty, Zhuangzi became Qinzi, and Emperor Wang also became Emperor Shu. In order to meet the situation, it is still necessary to make slight changes.

Fortunately, these allusions, during this period of time, he has learned some of them, so that people will not be asked what allusions he used... Tianxiang couldn't help but blush when she heard Su San write such a poem... According to the From her understanding, these two sentences should be interpreted as: Your and my past lives are like the butterfly in Qin Shengmeng, colorful, but that has become a dream; I am like the Emperor of Shu, transformed into a cuckoo, Crying blood and wailing every day, and refusing to leave for a long time... As soon as I wrote the zither at the beginning of the article, I realized that this poem came from hearing my own zither sound.But Mr. Su, why did he say the words of "Sihua Nian"... What is the past between us... This person can really think about it... Wang Shaoyou continued to read... "The sea... the moon pearl ...tears, Lantian...the sun is warm and the jade produces...smoke."

These two names are closely related to the previous two sentences, which further show the author's intention... It is a sentence that strengthens the poetic flavor.

At this point, the last two sentences are to be closed.

It's just that everyone doesn't care if they accept it or not... For them, if they can write such a poem, it's a breeze to close it, to close it well... The key is, what kind of poem can they accept? Such a good pass, this is what they expected... At this time, their mood has long been no longer on the mind of Su San, who can write such poems, how can people of their level be able to test Su San? school?

Everyone followed the poem, thinking about how to end the last two sentences, so as to be worthy of the meaning of the poem... It seems that the mind is attracted by the poem... Every night, I feel like The sharks on Canghai Xiandao under the moon!All the tears she cried turned into pearls.But the beautiful life of you and me in the past was the smoke from the jade on the Lantian Mountain, which is far away, but not within reach.

Tsk tsk, how can such a meaning be collected, it can be collected well... Everyone nervously looked at Su San's pen... But Su San paused for a moment, and raised his head to Xiang Tianxiang.

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