Dingguo

Chapter 79 Six Elements of Travel Notes

If you are in a good mood, you will sleep well. After a good night's sleep, you will naturally feel refreshed the next day. 【】

After practicing Tai Chi in the small courtyard, Mr. Su called his family to have breakfast together... Speaking of Su Yi, this morning, he will set off to return to the capital... It will take a day to go back to the capital.At the same age as Su, with a weak body, such a high-intensity rush is still unbearable...Leave as soon as possible, walk today and tomorrow, hurry up on the road, and you will probably arrive soon, so today must leave Yes... During the dinner, Su Yi asked Su San what plans he has for this year, what plans he has in the future, and whether he would like to accompany him to Beijing?

Naturally, Su San won't go to the capital city, it's good to stay in Wuling, leisurely, worry... Besides, I'm used to living here, I don't really want to move around... As for this year's arrangement, next year's plan...he didn't Thinking so much... So I responded vaguely, and refused to be specific... Su Yi saw that Su San was vague, but he didn't insist on this matter... If he came, Su San's arrangement would naturally have his reason .

He had already heard about what happened at the gathering of talented scholars last night.

With such talent and knowledge, the third younger brother who can still keep a low profile does not know what he is doing, so there is no need for him to worry too much... After sending Su Yi away, life seems to have returned to the calmness of the past...Su The old man should have also heard about what happened in Juxian Building in Zhongqiuye.Strangely, the old man didn't respond at all, and he didn't ask him where those poems came from like last time.

It is estimated that the old man has also discovered something that is not quite right.

It is easy to say that one poem was bought, but several poems were composed at one time, and it is said that they are all excellent poems, so I am afraid it is not easy to buy.

Even if you bought it.To be able to memorize these poems firmly and to write them out in such a situation should be regarded as a bit of talent... Anyway, this matter did not cause any impact at home, so no one cares about it Come to ask, this is really the greatest freedom for him... Although the Mid-Autumn Festival has passed, the holiday of Siyou College continues.

It’s probably impossible to go out... Those few poems were written in Juxian Building, and then publicized by talented scholars, the reputation has spread... Although this time it is not as controversial as the Qixi Festival Poetry Festival, it is influential It is also not bad.This point can be found out from the fact that people keep handing in name stickers from the door of the Su residence, begging for a visit... There is no other way, and I don't want to be polite to others, so I have no choice but to use the trick of pretending to be sick and thank guests behind closed doors... So, Naturally, there is no way to get out of this class... These talented people should be just the heat of their heads. It is estimated that after a few days, they all know their own temperament, and the heat will also subside.

If you don't go out, you can calm down and study martial arts.

Every morning, get up early, do a few rounds of Taijiquan first, and then take the insights of that day carefully... Although the entry will not be as rapid as that day, but as long as you walk the right way, you can enter the state every day. Then there is always a time when 'quantitative change leads to qualitative change'... He has never lacked patience, let alone confidence... In addition to practicing martial arts, he also writes and writes... Recently, his painting skills have also improved... Specialize in freehand brushwork, painting some mountains and rivers.In this way, even if the painting doesn't quite look like it, there is still some meaning in it, so it won't be too difficult... It's just self-comfort, in fact, it can't catch the eyes of experts... If you can't get it, you can't get it.He was just entertaining himself, not thinking of pleasing outsiders.

Life is full of hardships in the past.If you live your whole life for others, wouldn't it be a waste of life?Wouldn't it be nice to have fun in time, and to have more freedom and ease of "visiting famous mountains by riding as soon as you have to go"?

After being cooped up at home for a few days, Siyou Academy finally reopened classes... A large group of children escaped from the arms of their parents and re-entered the academy, and started a life of learning from the sea and struggling... For these students, he It is still very emotional... The feeling of being a teacher for the first time is not the same as the feeling of being a father for the first time, but it is the first time. This feeling is somewhat stronger... In the previous life, those who stood for the first time The teacher on the podium will always devote all his energy to the first batch of students he teaches.Even after so many years, the teacher who has taught many batches of students is still deeply impressed by the first batch of students... The first time is actually a very important, very important feeling... He cherishes this opportunity very much, he feels , the further back, the more impossible it is to teach calmly like this.Therefore, his thoughts on teaching are far greater than his thoughts on other aspects... He is indeed doing this with all his heart... "So, just after Mid-Autumn Festival, you guys, close Are you worried?" He sat comfortably on the floor in front of the school, smiling at the students... Today is the first day of lectures after the holiday, but a special student, Li Yueer, came to the school... On the first day of re-opening of classes, Li Yueer appeared in the academy, and sat in the classroom with the students early in the morning... He guessed, she came for herself... Yes... Can write poetry , and also very talented... Then why, on the morning of Zhongqiu, he refused to write... As a woman, as a woman with a heart, it would be abnormal if he didn't have these questions in his heart... But, he didn't Thinking that she would use Siyou College to attend lectures, to face herself directly... Thinking about it, she didn't see his talent and learning with her own eyes, so she still had some doubts in her heart.

Leave her alone.

The students are very lively, and they have already started class, but they have not been able to stop them from talking about what they have seen and heard in the past few days... In fact, the topic is not broad, it is not about what delicious food they ate, what fun things they did... ...This is also the nature of the children, and coupled with the connivance of his unserious teacher, so after a while in class, the students are still talking very happily... He let them talk and laugh, while he was quiet Listen quietly... After a while, he finally slapped... Don't say it, it's really good. After slapping, the noise in the school immediately disappeared, just like the TV was cut off and stopped abruptly. ... Playing and playing, the children have not forgotten this order... For this order, he also put in a lot of effort... The result is still good.

"Oh...Since you're all so happy and happy to talk about it, I don't know what it will be like when you write it...you haven't started writing chapters yet.

The teacher will teach you how to write chapters today... Looking back, you write down what you saw and heard during Zhongqiu... Let's rank one, two or three, how about it? "

The students are very interested... "However, if you want to write, you must have a structure, so before writing, let's talk about the style... The style of writing things is generally called narrative... er, it is also called travel notes... It is the most common style. As for travel notes, there are six major elements...they are time, place, character, cause, process, and result...Everyone first write down these six major elements and remember them carefully...Let’s make another one Say one by one..." As he was talking, he wrote the six elements on a large piece of paper and hung them in front of the classroom... and waited for everyone to copy the six elements... But he Not in a hurry to explain, but let everyone read it several times together, and asked the students to recite these six elements by name... Fortunately, these six elements are easier to remember, everyone read it a few times, and most of them memorized ...He explained the six elements roughly, without going into the depths, but simply said: "Time, everyone understands... Yes, mid-autumn is a time; morning is also a time, and evening is a time." Is it a time... yes, it is also a time... how many time expressions can you give?"

"Okay, next is the location..."

This explanation is actually very superficial... But at the beginning, the more specific the explanation, the better... Children, the ability of abstract thinking is still very poor... If you talk about it at a high level, or at a deep level, it's not enough. I understand... Especially the ancients with very concise sentences, compared to the vernacular of the previous life, it is indeed much more difficult... Therefore, it is not easy to study hard for ten years and read all these ancients... "Okay... all these are written in, it is a travel note... For example, when the husband went shopping on the night of Mid-Autumn Festival, it can be written like this: Yu Suxi Lantern Festival, so on the night of Mid-Autumn Festival, I took Yu'er to go shopping in Wuling City. There are so many lights on it... There are all kinds of animal lights, all kinds of flower lights, and many lights that have never been seen before, which enriches people's knowledge..."

"It can be done in just a few words... Who can tell sir... Can you find the six elements of what you just did?"

The students shouted one by one... and found out all the elements..."Very good, you found everything right...Since that's the case, I think you will know it...well, sir, I'd like to, You can only talk, but you can't write... I will give you three sticks of incense time, and you can also write about your experiences..."

The students were very obedient. Seeing that the teacher had finished the task, they lay down on the table one by one, holding a pen, tilting their heads, facing the six elements, thinking hard... He glanced at Li Yueer, and saw Li Yueer leaning against the corner, A thoughtful look on his face.

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