Cartoonist's Dream

The next day, the 28th, Friday morning.

Unaware that he had fallen into the quagmire, Li Mu borrowed a classroom in Nanhua as usual.He picked up the pointer and poked it under the podium, and there were many spider webs under the podium overnight.

In Nanhua, even in the Mid-Autumn Festival, all kinds of creatures are still so lively.There are always unexpected visitors in the home, classroom and dormitory, and you may step on a bamboo leaf green (snake) if you are not careful.

Li Mu, who had more than half a year of teaching experience, had encountered this kind of snake in school.They are very common in Nanhua, and they may be found on green trees or grass.At that time, it seemed that the weather was getting colder and I wanted to find a warm place to lie down. As a result, the snake nestled under the podium all day until it was discovered by the careful female teacher.

The past is worth looking back on.After all the students arrived, Li Mu resumed his teacher's attitude - pointing fingers at a group of men and women who had never met more than ten days ago.Of course, the teacher is friends with the students during recess, and should indeed resume seriousness during class.The students who respect the teacher and the students who do not respect the teacher can see their academic performance at a glance. [

After saying hello "teacher" and "classmate"...

"Sit down. Before I start the lecture, I want to test the knowledge taught in the first lesson. It is something that must be memorized. I hope you will not let me down. I said memorization means that you are not allowed to turn the book. Please close the book now. notebook."

When they heard that they were going to "take the first lesson", some of them immediately started to look through their notes, so Li Mu had to remind them.

——He started flipping through the book before he finished speaking, so he must not be too stupid to react so quickly.

Since I am not an idiot, there are only a few reasons: either I did not pay attention to what the teacher said, or I pretended to be smart and advertised myself as "a good memory is not as good as a bad pen", in short, I did not memorize what I should have memorized.

Li Mu didn't bother those students, but chose someone who could answer and asked:

"Lei Yishan, you come to memorize the core part of the commercial standard of comics."

The boy who was called looked a bit like a bodybuilder, Mi was a little taller than Katsuo.Wear a black sports vest.It has an orangutan face and wears a pair of reserved black-rimmed glasses.

——With a shiny bald head, it is really a very inconsistent equipment.

Li Mu complained in his heart about the image of his student.

Lei Yishan loves sports. It is said that it is to prevent frozen shoulders. Drawing cartoons can easily cause shoulder strain.The reason why you wear small glasses instead of big glasses is because the small glasses case is easier to carry when exercising.

"Yes——" Lei Yishan, known as Major Armstrong, stood up and said back: "1. The freshness of the story; 2. The story is easy to understand; 3. Is the character setting interesting; 4. Is the overall description serious and careful? .”

What Lei Yishan said was part of the content of Limu lesson-one.

Freshness - Most readers don't like to read old stories, even old water in new bottles, so it is said that the creativity of comic book authors is very important.

Comprehension - If the story is too jerky and difficult to understand, it will become a niche comic, and the simpler the comic, the easier it is to be accepted.certainly.Here we must distinguish between "easy to understand" and "brain-dead".

Characters—In addition to reading stories in comics, you can also read characters. Interesting characters can often be equated with interesting stories, and ordinary characters can directly drag down interesting stories.

Although some people think that the fourth item is not important, Limu thinks it is important to be careful.After all, he has always paid attention to the quality of painting.The quality of painting is the only pride of old cartoonists with rigid thinking.

There are also some cartoonists who do not pay attention to quality, and with the help of popularity, they can even sell drafts directly, such as

Leaving aside the four core items, there are other criteria for editors to review comics

5. Is the hidden dark line well designed?

6. Is there a good match between the story and the number of pages of the work?

7. Is the relationship between the characters on stage clear?

8. The weight of the dialogue is appropriate.

9.Whether the rendering of emotion is sufficient.

10. Is the title of the work interesting?

11. Whether the ending is handled properly.

12. Beautiful lines.

13.Whether the basic skills of sketching are available.

14. Whether the shape of the character has personality or charm.

15. Is the composition easy to read?

16. The overall grid fluency.

Composition and separation To put it bluntly, this is the basic skill of storyboarding.It determines whether the manga is comfortable to read; there are obstacles in the process of digesting the picture when reading, and whether the reader can understand the intention of each frame of the painter.

Yes, storyboards have their own intentions.For example, conventional relatively dense sub-frames are usually suitable for explaining the plot; another example is filled with black and have a thick black sub-frame, which is usually suitable for the memory of the story... There are still a lot of specific sub-frames in detail. Seven or eight items will not be mentioned here.In short, if the storyboard is only based on the painter's own preferences, without considering the reader's reading experience, it can be positioned as a bad storyboard.

17. Possess the spirit of service.

18. The background is drawn accurately and neatly.

19. Whether the outlets are properly used to create an effect.

20. The proportion of black and white in the composition of the screen is appropriate.

21. Whether the position of the dialog box, the size of the dialog box, and the size of the text are appropriate. [

22. Has the creative point been well realized?

Why apply the Japanese standard, but not the Chinese one?Of course not, the reason is very simple, because Riman is at the forefront, and the evaluation standard is the competitive standard summed up over the years.Japanese comics have already surpassed more than ten to nearly twenty percentage points in Japan's gp, accounting for about 1/6 of gp!The cover of "Time Magazine" in the United States said.Japan has changed from a big product manufacturing country to a big exporter of cultural industries.

Sell ​​products, sell resources, buy labor?It's far better than selling ideas!

Li Mu reviewed the old lessons, and said something refreshing to the students. It was precious knowledge beyond the age before he was willing to dismiss the get out of class.

These disciples will be an important part of his development of the domestic market. He can only draw 13 comics by himself, which can be said to be weak.

After the morning class, it is time for daily tasks and special tasks in the afternoon, which is equivalent to a painful and happy game for the Xie family sisters.Riki's provocative fingertips made them burn with desire.It directly caused them to take a very long bath at night... It is difficult to fall asleep without venting the desire in their stomachs.

At night, the middle building of Nanhua University.

In the spacious living room, there is a large rug.

It was a large carpet that belonged to Xie Ruyu privately, and the furniture in the room was gradually increasing with time.Since she will be staying here for about half a year, Xie Ruyu buys the most things for the room, but many of them are cheap and high-end goods.

Several women were either lying on their stomachs or sitting cross-legged on the carpet.Reading some books and comics.

After taking a bath, Xie Ruyu walked lightly, stepped on the carpet and sat directly with these students.

The reading meeting held in the dormitory was the reading meeting initiated by her.

During the time before going to bed, everyone gathers together to read, or discuss the content of the teacher's lecture, and exchange some interesting knowledge. This is the action content of the reading meeting.In fact, Xie Ruyu organized the reading meeting for personal purposes, and she wanted to quickly gain knowledge from these college students.

On a white soft faux fur rug.The women were all dressed casually, and their bodies under the lights were not exquisite.But also very well-proportioned and attractive.One of the women, wearing a thin T-shirt and leggings, asks:

"Do you think "Shangguo Boutique" or "T Jiapin" is better?"

《上国精品》六部漫画：《来自新世界》未、《魔法学徒》六月、《机器人日记》铁块、《秦时明月续》阿里、《九鼎记》道人、《金色琴弦》月季。杂志发售日为每月25日，单行本为1、5、9月的1-5日发售。

《t佳品》六部漫画：《魔法老师》逅宫、《食梦者》rems、《飞轮少年》fre！、《魔武士》六月、《极品家丁》蜀黍禹、《小兵传奇》雨玄。杂志发售日为每月2日，单行本预计为1、5、9的30日发售。

"In the past, "Shang Guo Jing Jing" must have been good, but since the end of "Qin Shi Mingyue's Death of Qin Bi Chu" and the little teacher continued to draw "Chu and Han Three Kingdoms under the Enfeoffment", the plot has become a little messy."

A slightly older woman next to the woman in tight pants said that she was wearing a nightgown and holding a comic commentary magazine from half a month ago in her hand.This kind of magazine is like a game magazine that writes various new games and popular game guides.As the wind vane of comic magazines, comic commentary magazines evaluate comics from a more objective point of view.

"After all, it jumped from Qin Shi to Yan Han, and the story should be a bit broken." The handsome woman helped the little teacher, but she also had her own views on "Boutique", "The "Blue Star" finished two months ago. Galgantia is also a classic work that subverts human ideas.

"At the end, the female robot 'Strite' imitating the lieutenant colonel is eye-catching. The sentence before 'Chen Bo' desperately is the finishing touch. Originally, the whole plot is mechanized regardless of sensibility, rationality and understanding of the surrounding environment. Uncle Chen actually shouted out emotional words like 'Go to hell. Rotten iron sheet' at the end.

"It can be called an epoch-making work of robot comics... But what is the new comic? That "Robot Notes" has no theme at all, except for the dazzling technology and ideas of 2019, at least I still have I didn’t see its theme. Why don’t you just knock it out and call ‘Iron Block’ to draw a new book?”

...Two months ago, it happened to be the time when Limu was in a downturn.At the beginning of August, I was urged to write by Lu Lingling again.Probably because I talked a lot with Muzi, I drew the ultra-modern work "Robot Notes" without thinking about it.

...After "The Time of Qin" ended in August last year, Li Mu felt that it was possible to string together the history of Qin, Han, Three Kingdoms, Sui and Tang Dynasties to form a masterpiece.Then, follow-up creation began, but the theme and plot were difficult to connect.With the end of the story of Jing Tianming, the son of Li Ji who runs through the plot, with Qin Huang and Xiang Yu, the whole "Qin Shi" is actually coming to an end. (To be continued. If you like this work, you are welcome to come to the starting point to vote, monthly pass, your support is my biggest motivation. Mobile phone users, please go to read.)