Good son-in-law of the Ming Dynasty

But I saw that the article I wrote earlier had been carefully ironed with heavy objects, and it looked very neat.

In the article, there are also circles, and many places have been revised in small letters, and comments have been added.

It can be seen that Mr. Wu is very careful and good at being a man.He did not hesitate to praise Su Mu for his good work.As for what is not enough, it is also very tactful, for example: the sentence here does not make sense, would it be better to delete this sentence?

Or: It would be better to add a question here.

There are only revisions throughout the article, but not a single criticism.

But Su Mu could tell that the other party was very dissatisfied with his article.

Moreover, there are too many places that have been modified. It can be said that there is no problem with only breaking and inheriting the problem.The opening, middle, and closing of the strands, and the final knot, were all painted over, added, deleted, and embellished beyond recognition.

Because of the status, Su Mu was also quite dissatisfied with this waste manuscript.But after being changed into this way, he still blushed slightly.

I thought: This is my worst article, Mr. Wu read it, but I don’t know how to despise me?

However, the level of the old master is really good, after all, he passed Juren, and judging from his revised article, his level is already comparable to that of Shaotai.

It's just that Mr. Shao focuses on practicality when teaching, and has strict requirements on the format and the style of the article. To put it bluntly, you must make sure that people can't find any mistakes in your article. -----This is typical pragmatism, specially designed to deal with imperial examinations.

This old Wu Juren is on the contrary. Judging from the words and sentences he revised, they are full of inexplicable and incomprehensible agility, and have a special beauty of words. ----This is typical romanticism.

Comparing the two, we can't tell which is better.

However, as far as Su Mu's current situation is concerned, as a modern person, he attaches great importance to the format of the eight-legged essay, and after reading books with Mr. Shao for so long, he thinks that he has basically mastered the rules of this genre.But classical Chinese writing can't pass the test of life and death, there is no way, after all, I am a modern person, and in this respect, I am inherently weaker than the ancients.

In the past, Mr. Shao was not good at writing, and he couldn't give Su Mu much guidance.

Compared with Mr. Shao, this old man Wu is outstanding in literary talent, and he is more suitable for Su Mu at this stage.

Therefore, apart from blushing, Su Mu also admired Lao Juren's writing style.

I also remembered what Ms. Wu said earlier, if you have any homework, you might as well hand it in for him to review, and I was naturally willing.

Seeing Su Mu looking at the manuscript, Xiaodie also stretched her head over, focusing on it.

Su Mu patted her on the head with the manuscript: "Xiaodie, you can't read, can you understand?"

Xiao Die snorted: "I see that Master Wu's handwriting is beautiful, and I like it in my heart. It's fun to watch, okay?"

"You can also tell whether the calligraphy is good or bad. In comparison, do you think his calligraphy is better than my master's?" Speaking of calligraphy, Su Mu looked intently, and Wu Laojuren's calligraphy was really beautiful. With one stroke of the pen, it is so refreshing and clean that it makes people get goosebumps.

This kind of calligraphy is not bad, but it lacks strength, and it only pursues the beauty of form, which lacks something that touches people's hearts.

However, the old Juren has been ill for such a long time, and his spirit is weak, so he can't speak of strength in writing.What's more, his articles are already beautiful, so it is reasonable to match such words with such words.

"Young master's handwriting is naturally good, but it's not as good-looking as Master Wu's. How should I put it..." Xiaodie thought for a while: "I don't know how to read, and I don't know if I'm right. Young master's handwriting is fine. It looks like the plaque in the temple, it is big and bright, which makes people a little afraid. Master Wu's writing is like flowers, which makes people like it."

"You really hit the spot." Su Mu nodded. When he was in Baoding, he was famous for his Dong Qichang style.In fact, when she was learning calligraphy, she was a student of Yan Zhenqing, and she was based on seriousness and humility, and solemn and majestic. Xiaodie said that her calligraphy was the same as the temple plaques, but she got the point.

Su Mu's writing has a spirit, but Wu Laoju's character is tangible and boneless, and the level is much worse.

Of course, it was impossible for him to say this in front of Xiaodie, so he just sighed: "Wu Lao Juren's article is really good, and it is even rarer that he is willing to give me advice, Xiaodie, it seems that I want to worship him as a teacher .However, the old Juren may not be willing to accept me as a student, but only asks me to send the finished homework to Miss Wu every day, and then transfer it."

Xiao Die was also happy, "Young master is a talented person. It must be very good for Master Wu to be praised so much by you. It is a good thing to be his student."

Su Mu thought of something: "Ordinarily, the old Juren is willing to change my homework for me. Even if he accepts me into the door wall, he should ask for advice face to face. Why should he turn his hand from Miss Wu instead?"

He was also very strange.

Xiao Die's words made Su Mu's confusion clear: "Master, you don't know now, Mr. Wu has a strange disease, he can't see the wind and see the light, and he doesn't want to see people."

Su Mu: "It's a strange thing, so what if you see the wind and see the light?"

Xiaodie probably got to know Ms. Wu these days, so she said, "I also heard what Ms. Wu said. Ten years ago, Mr. Wu's family moved to the capital to take part in the examination, saying that they wanted to be a Jinshi. The exam lasted three times, and he failed every time. After knowing that there was no hope of getting on the list two years ago, Mr. Wu couldn't bear the blow and fell ill. After returning home, he lay in bed for two months before he could get off the ground. I can’t see the light, and when I see the light, my eyes will cry; when I am blown by the wind, I will have a headache. In this way, Mr. Wu has not been out of the house for two years.”

Su Mu rubbed his chin, thinking: Old Master's disease is probably a kind of neurosis, the deputy commander who was always healthy back then seems to have the same disease.This disease can only be cured slowly.Since the old master doesn't want to see me, forget it, at worst, give the homework to Miss Wu first.

However, the old man is seriously ill, so it's better not to bother him too much, just send one article a day.

After talking with Xiaodie for a long time, before going to bed, Su Mu read the revised article again, and said hello again, feeling more and more admired in his heart.

I just feel that the revised texts seem to come alive one by one, with their own souls, rather than a rigid test-taking composition.

The elegant calligraphy, the ironed manuscript exudes a vague orchid fragrance.

With a smile on the corner of Su Mu's mouth, he became more and more curious about the old Juren: but he didn't know what this old Juren looked like, with his talent and writing, he gave birth to a beautiful daughter.As the saying goes, daughter Xiao's father, I think that Lao Juren was also a romantic and unrestrained son when he was young.It's just that such a dream lover of a girl with a spring heart has been ruined by reality and the imperial examination system. It's really embarrassing!