Good son-in-law of the Ming Dynasty

"The characters have come to life completely. There are not many people with this ability. It is the mark of a famous author to be able to write the characters vividly." Boss Lin's heart trembled.

Recalling it, it can be said that today's novels have written all the stories, and the authors are more concerned about the characters.

If people are written well, the book will naturally sell well.

Every year, there are eight hundred if not one thousand books, but many books are obviously well written when I read them.As soon as I put the book down, I couldn't remember what the protagonist looked like.

It is not easy to write a memorable protagonist.

In this sense, Su Mu's book is really powerful.

Vigorously cheering up, Boss Lin continued to read.

Looking at it, it was no small matter, and immediately felt that this book was really good-looking.

No, it should be said that there can only be one word to describe it, just like eating a cold watermelon on a hot day, the whole person is happy and cool.

When Sun Houzi entered the door of Bodhi Patriarch, Boss Lin breathed a sigh of relief: After going through hardships and crossing the sea, he finally joined the disciples of an expert. Monkey now has a great opportunity to cultivate immortality.

Then the story turned to Bodhi's opening of the altar, and Boss Lin was even more excited. In a trance, he seemed to be on the overseas fairy mountain, listening to the patriarch's discourse.

Then Bodhi asked Sun Wukong which book of Taoism he wanted to learn, how about the word "shu", and talked about the benefits of the word "shu" for a long time, and then Wukong asked if he could live forever.

The Patriarch replied that he couldn't. The monkeys came here to seek longevity, so naturally they refused to agree.

Boss Lin nodded secretly, thinking: Shuzi Taoism is just asking the gods to help Luan and asking Bu Yiyao, but it is just a fortune teller's skill, it is really meaningless, and I would not want to learn it.

Then there are the Taoism of the word "flow" and the Taoism of "quietness" and "movement". Because they cannot achieve longevity, Monkey King rejected them all.

Seeing this, Boss Lin was also annoyed, and said in his heart: "This Bodhi Patriarch is really, the monkey came to learn the Tao with such sincerity, and stayed on the mountain for seven years, how could he teach so many useless things? Isn't this fooling people? Determination cannot be learned, even if you learn it, you will be a little bit better than ordinary people, so many years of time were wasted."

There was an inexplicable resentment in my heart, and I was almost too angry to watch it.

Fortunately, the manuscript has reached the end, and there is still half a page of words left.

I took a sip of the already cold tea to calm down my mind, and continued watching.

Boss Lin was completely stunned by the contents of this half-page. When he saw Patriarch Bodhi jump off the altar, hit Sun Houzi three times on the head, scolded him for a while and then left with his hands behind his back, his mouth was full of old blood. Almost squirts out.

A thought sounded in my heart: Oops, Master is willing to pass on your true skills, that is a great kindness, as a disciple, you should accept it readily, and be grateful.This monkey is so good, picks and chooses, does not learn this, and does not learn that, this can be regarded as offending Patriarch Bodhi to death.This principle of cultivating immortals and learning the Tao is the same as that of ordinary people who study and improve, and they have to be done step by step.For example, when a child enters a school, he has to read "Three Character Classics" and "Thousand Character Classics" for several years, then learn "Four Books" and "Five Classics", and finally learn to write stereotyped essays. Only when the foundation is solid can we talk about understanding the saint's humble words and righteousness, and only then can we talk about fame and official career.

The first time a monkey learns Taoism, he needs to practice the method of longevity. Just like a six-year-old child who has not yet read, clamors to enter the imperial examination room. If I were the teacher, I would have slapped him.

"Perhaps, in the eyes of our ancestors, monkeys already belong to the type that is so lofty and far-reaching that rotten wood cannot be carved."

Seeing this, Boss Lin was frustrated for a while: If I were a monkey, no matter what kind of spells, whether I can live forever, I will learn one first.He doesn't learn this, he doesn't learn that, he always thinks that there are more brilliant Taoism waiting for him in the future, and the result is so hot that the master gets angry, and he doesn't teach the same thing, this is shooting himself in the foot... Hey , A monkey is a monkey, isn't this situation just like a monkey breaking a stick, breaking one and throwing another?

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It was getting dark, and he didn't eat any food. Boss Lin just sat in the shop, feeling fiery and impetuous in his heart.

I can't help but think, Su Mu wrote here, it can be said that he has written the monkey's way of cultivating immortality, so what should he write next?

What if I were the author instead?

Well, generally speaking, when encountering such a situation, the monkey should go to the master to make amends and apologise, just like the protagonists in other stories who are motivated to study.

Master is probably still angry, and he will definitely not forgive.

Therefore, the monkey should kneel at the mountain gate for three days and three nights, and finally there will be a rainstorm or something to test it.

Therefore, Wukong's sincerity moved Patriarch Bodhi and taught him all the techniques of longevity.

No, judging from Su Mu's book, it is unique and not out of date, so it is certain that it will not write such old-fashioned stories.Otherwise, there is nothing special about this book. In this way, it is really a dung on the head of the Buddha, which greatly spoils the scenery.

Then, judging from the novel style of Su Mu's book, how should I continue writing it?

After scratching his head for a long time, Boss Lin thought for a moment, picked up a pen and wrote down two thoughts on paper: [-]. In the end, the master came to the enemy, and the monkey made great achievements at the critical moment, was rewarded by the master, and learned the longevity technique; Second, the monkey was kicked out of the teacher's school and went to another place, where he got a famous teacher and learned a great supernatural power.

After finishing writing, Boss Lin first crossed out the first item.This idea is good, but Wukong is just a mortal now... no, it should be a mortal monkey, if he encounters an enemy, he will definitely be ashamed immediately, how can he make meritorious deeds?If it was me, I would have already hid aside and escaped.

The second is even more impossible. This book has already spent so much pen and ink on the three-star cave on the oblique moon. If the monkey apprenticed to another teacher, wouldn’t it be worth writing so many words at the beginning? I haven't written a book, but I wouldn't make such a low-level mistake, right?

Looking at the pen in his hand, Boss Lin admired Su Mu for the first time: This book is really good-looking, making it impossible to guess what will happen next, leaving it full of suspense.Most of today's books are straight-forward narratives, and it's really uncommon to think that this kind of novel that keeps shaking the burden is really uncommon.Wonderful, really wonderful.

The story is so well guessed!