The male god of fast wear can't run

Chapter 1202 That one hit the street, counterattack (12)

However, as soon as the book was opened, Gu Nanqing received a new book review.

Meow meow meow?
When Gu Nanqing opened it, her first reaction was to be confused.

She actually caught a living god in the book review section!
[People are not as good as the old]: Congratulations to the daughter-in-law for opening a new book, spreading flowers~
But after being stunned for two seconds, she finally realized that this guy seemed to be Kumamon.

The excited thoughts were extinguished at once, and she was a little dumbfounded.

Forgive her, I really can't connect a legendary god with Kumamon himself.

After all, that guy had been talking about rushing to the street before, and this sudden change of identity surprised her for a moment, and then subconsciously felt that he was not as good as Jiu and Kumamon were two people.

Before she had time to leave a footprint on the comment of [People are not as good as old], she received a message from [Kumamon].

[Kumamon]: Damn it, I thought you were lying to me when you said that you changed your style, but I didn't expect you to stop writing literature and art in the end!

[Kumamon]: And I looked at your beginning, I think you can stand up this time!This starts with absolute 666
[Kumamon]: But I still have a little suggestion, your character setting at the beginning is a bit too much...

Gu Nanqing hasn't responded to the message yet, and the master has already started to give Gu Nanqing his opinion.

I don't know what to say, so let's read what the great master posted with peace of mind.

But from this point of view, it can only be said that she is worthy of being a great god. Gu Nanqing thinks that what she proposed is very reasonable.

And there are some places where Gu Nanqing felt that his writing skills were insufficient and he couldn't express that feeling, but when Kumamon mentioned it like this, he suddenly felt a sense of enlightenment.

I don’t have enough writing skills in this place. If I write in another way, the effect is not the same?You don't have to force yourself on your own shortcomings.

……

Anyway, this discussion plot is a few hours.

After the discussion, Gu Nanqing was still in a daze.

She has only sent out ten chapters, and there are only ten chapters. How can Xiongxiong give her so many suggestions, and even set out the follow-up plot to give himself more setting suggestions?

[Yan is not as good as before]: (Love you.jpg)

[Yan is not as good as Chu]: Little bear!Don't you code?Sacrifice so much time to explain to me, touched!

Kumamon looked at his manuscript and raised his eyebrows.

[Kumamoto Bear]: Sorry, I have a manuscript (stand hand.jpg)

Gu Nanqing looked at the [-] manuscripts that he managed to save, thinking about Kumamoto's suggestion just now, these manuscripts are useless.

Alas, I have been saving manuscripts for so many days in vain.

However, when Gu Nanqing deleted these manuscripts, she stopped neatly.

After all, she was hoping to turn around this time, and the manuscript was fine but not many.

However, she did not delete the backup of the manuscript, maybe it is still useful?
Thinking about revising and saving the manuscript, Gu Nanqing felt a little thin.

She really doesn't like to tap in front of the computer every day, but the persona and tasks can only make her do this, which is really annoying.

So, Gu Nanqing tricked Kumamoto into typing together by claiming that Kumamoto was the one with the manuscript.

Typing alone, how uncomfortable, hurt each other.

But Kumamon is indeed a great master, and he didn't hesitate at all when he shouted and typed together.This kind of professional attitude made Gu Nanqing feel inferior.

However, Gu Nanqing was always looking for high-quality manuscripts, and the book was finished quickly, so she had a very serious problem to face.

That is, without fees, there is no source of income, and she has very little money left.

(End of this chapter)