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Chapter 230 Writing scripts, 14

Chapter 230 Writing scripts, 14
Inviting Aunt Chen to come forward and guide the children in person, it really made the whole family feel very excited.

After dinner, while the children were doing their homework, Su Linglu and Sister Mei were dealing with company affairs in Mr. Su's study.

Together with Aunt Chen, Yue Yi analyzed and re-created every scene of the entire stage play.

With the help of Aunt Chen, the writing is naturally much easier, especially the dialogue and action scenes of each scene. With the guidance of an experienced senior like Aunt Chen, it naturally makes things a lot easier.

Of course, when Yue Yi admired Aunt Chen, Aunt Chen actually admired Yue Yi from the bottom of her heart.

Although Yue Yi is still very blunt in writing repertoires, his writing skills are quite good.

Moreover, the learning ability is very strong, and many places can be understood at a single point, and the specific details can be understood without the need to say more in detail.

"No, no, these dialogues are not good. You have to design dialogues from the perspective of children."

"That's right, it's much better this way, and you can feel it when you read it yourself."

"And these details must also be written, how the scene of this scene is arranged, and which characters should appear."

"By the way, here it is. A good stage play is not just some simple language, but dance and songs can also be added."

"Well, it's right here. It's much better. These few places need a little polish."

"Not bad, it looks much better this way, and since you want to anthropomorphize, you have to write all these anthropomorphic scenes and animals."

Under the guidance of Aunt Chen, Yue Yi quickly mastered the technique and wrote the script of the whole stage play very well.

Aunt Chen flipped through Yue Yi's written script, and drew circles on it with a pen.

"Here, here, and here, these places still need to be revised, and more specific words need to be used."

"In addition, because it is a children's performance, and most of the children have not received professional training, it should be as simple as possible."

"Well, to compress some of the content, and to shorten the change process of some scenes, and to shorten the dialogue."

"Try to be as simple and clear as possible, and there are these small details that must be paid attention to."

Aunt Chen's requirements are quite harsh, but fortunately Yue Yi is still patient and able to accept all opinions.

After a lot of scrutiny and several revisions by Aunt Chen, the script was finally finalized.

Then, Yue Yi quickly went online and sent the script to Fang Dazhuang.

"The script is relatively simple. Take a look. If you have enough time, draw all the original paintings as soon as possible."

After Fang Dazhuang browsed through the script, he was really attracted by the script.

After reading the whole thing, there is no need for any explanation at all, and the picture depicted in the script immediately comes to life on the paper.

It can be said that the whole script is very vivid, and it looks very intuitive and simple, even children can understand it at a glance.

After reading the script, Fang Dazhuang immediately sent a message to Yue Yi: "Don't worry, Mr. Yue, I will definitely get out as soon as possible."

Yue Yi also responded accordingly: Hehehe, don't be too anxious, just try your best, if it doesn't work, it's the same with taking it to the company tomorrow during the day.

Seeing the message from Yue Yi, Fang Dazhuang replied very positively: Don't worry, don't worry, I promise to rush out overnight and go to the company to polish up tomorrow.

After replying "OK", Yue Yi also started to get busy. He planned to prepare a song for the stage play.

In fact, Yue Yi didn't intend to let the three little girls of the Su family participate in the competition for the leading role.

Because there are other more important performances to be arranged for the three little girls, that is, they are going to sing a song at the end of the stage play.

Naturally, this is not only to let the children get more exposure, but also to make the whole stage play have an interesting ending.

While thinking about what song to use, the three little girls had finished their homework and broke into the room together.

Jumping into the arms of my aunt together, the three little guys looked very happy.

Yue Yi smiled and asked: "What's the matter? Why do you look so happy? Can you tell my aunt?"

The three little guys looked at each other, and then they were even more delighted, but they didn't answer their aunt.

"Auntie, Auntie, come and guess, guess why Yunyun, Xinxin, and Xuanxuan are so happy."

"Yes, yes, aunt and father, hurry up and guess."

"Ha, let my aunt guess."

After hearing what the three little guys said, Yue Yi squinted his eyes and thought for a while and said, "Oh? Do you want my aunt to guess?"

After thinking for a while, he said, "Is it because the three of you finished your homework quickly today? And there were no mistakes?"

Seeing that their aunt guessed wrong, the three little girls immediately clapped their hands happily and shouted.

"My aunt guessed wrong."

"Ah, my aunt guessed wrong."

"Ha, guessed wrong, guessed wrong."

Yue Yi smiled and hugged the three little guys and asked: "Okay, aunt and father can't guess, can you tell aunt and father?"

The three little girls leaned in the arms of their aunt and father nostalgically, and then they answered each other one by one.

"It's actually like this. Just now Grandma Chen told us about the script written by my aunt."

"Yeah, and then we saw those little birds, Uncle, can talk."

"Ha, Xuanxuan has decided not to play Snow White, and Xuanxuan will play Apple with Xinxin."

As soon as Xuanxuan's words fell, Yunyun also said with a smile: "Hehehe, Yunyun wants to play the little tree outside the house."

Hearing that the children took the initiative to play supporting roles, Yue Yi knew that Aunt Chen should have done the work for the children.

Apparently, Aunt Chen didn't really want the three little sisters of the Su family to show off too much, and it was also in order not to cause trouble for Yue Yi.

After all, Yue Yi proposed the concept of the stage play, and now Yue Yi is in charge of the script.

If the three little girls from the Su family were to be the leading actors, the parents of the classmates would definitely have some opinions.

Aunt Chen didn't want the three little angels of the Su family to be excluded in the class, which would affect their harmony with their classmates.

Unexpectedly, Aunt Chen's ideas hit it off with her, and she was indeed an old artist.

Seeing that the aunt was in a daze, the three little girls suddenly became unhappy, and they slapped the aunt together and yelled.

"Auntie, what's the matter with you? Why did you become as dumb as Xuanxuan?"

"Yeah, did Xuanxuan infect my aunt with Dadai?"

"Ha, Xuanxuan cast a spell on my aunt, and my aunt became dumbfounded."

"Hee hee hee...hahaha..."

The happy laughter of the little girls brought Yue Yi back to his thoughts, and then he hugged the three little girls tightly and said, "Oh, my uncle is dominated by anger."

"Hahahaha..." The laughter echoed throughout the small Su family building, whether it was Aunt Chen who was busy in the kitchen, or Su Linglu and Sister Mei in the study, they could all hear it clearly.

Hearing the children's laughter, the corners of everyone's mouths raised unconsciously, and a smile appeared on their faces naturally.

(End of this chapter)

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