Reborn I am the second generation of stars

Chapter 168

The reason for choosing "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is actually very simple, because "Mortal" is more suitable for creating a system than "Immortal Rebellion".

Let's talk about the level of cultivation, the mortal system is Qi training, foundation building, Jindan, Yuanying, Huashen and so on.

And "Xianni" was about the same at the beginning, and then it was the first step, the second step, the third step and so on.

Moreover, "Mortal" describes all kinds of cultivation skills in almost a very detailed manner, so "Immortal Rebellion" may surpass "Mortal" in some aspects, but it is still far behind in terms of groundbreaking.

"Mortal" is more suitable to be the protagonist of "Mortal Stream" than "Immortal Rebellion".

It can be seen that almost all of them refer to the mortal model from "The Journey to the Immortal" to "Hundred Refinements and Immortals".

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Moreover, "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is Wang Da's pinnacle work, and he has not surpassed himself since then.

The achievements of "Ordinary People" are obvious to all, and the first place in the recommendation list is proof.

Xu Qian began to write the first "Mountainside Village" of "Ordinary People".

"Er Lianzi opened his eyes wide and looked straight at the black roof made of thatch and mud. The old quilt covered his body was already dark yellow, and he couldn't see his original face. Musty smell."

"The other person next to him is the second brother Han Zhu, who is sleeping very soundly, and there are bursts of snoring from him from time to time."

"About half a foot away from the bed, there is an earthen wall made of yellow mud. Due to a long time, the wall has cracked a few inconspicuous slender openings. From these cracks, faintly Mother Han's nagging and complaining voice is occasionally mixed with father Han's "click" and "click" sucking sound from smoking a pipe."

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Such an opening is very different from other novels. Most of the other novels start with time travel, and the protagonist is a soldier king or something, but in fact, his IQ is about the same as that of a mentally handicapped.

But Han Li's start was "Er Lengzi", an ordinary mortal, who would have thought that he would become the "Old Demon Han" who would shake the three worlds in the future.

This is a story of "a mortal becomes a fairy", and it is also a very down-to-earth story.

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A week later, Xu Qian had accumulated a certain amount of manuscripts, and he was about to upload "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals".

But before that, he had to read "Ordinary Man" first. He didn't read "The Most Sacred Confucianism and Taoism" last time, but he let him miss it for a long time.

He sent a tt message to the big bald head: "Boss bald head, my new book has been sent to your mailbox, please check it out."

The big bald head was overjoyed when he saw this message: "Fuyun is finally releasing a new book."

Fuyun is now his trump card!

He couldn't wait to open his mailbox, and then saw a document named "Mortal Cultivation Biography".

"Is this the name of the new book "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals"? It's really quite earthy."

The big bald head complained a little.

In fact, the name "The Legend of Mortals Cultivating Immortals" is quite silly, and it is often complained about in another world, but this name is a bit of a mention, because this story is about the process of "mortals becoming immortals", not "mortals". What is the name of "The Legend of Xiu Xian"?
Then the big bald head read a few chapters of Xu Qianfa's content, and thought what should I say?

"It seems too ordinary."

"Is this really the level of Floating Cloud?"

"Or has my own level of appreciation declined?"

The big bald man said suspiciously.

He passed the document of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation to Immortals" to other editors and editor-in-chief, and he thought to himself, "Maybe I didn't see the beauty of "Mortal"."

The other editors and editor-in-chief all showed curious expressions when they heard that this was Fuyun's new book.

Because Fuyun can be regarded as one of the most innovative novel authors in recent years, watching his new book should be a kind of enjoyment.

But after reading a few chapters, they all expressed emotion like big bald heads.

"Is this really written by Fuyun?"

"It's too ordinary."

"It doesn't fit the three golden chapters at all!"

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The editor-in-chief said, "Looking at the beginning, I don't like this book."

The other editors also sneered: "The floating cloud seems to be the end of Jiang Lang's talent."

"The writing ability is still not good after all. After writing one or two books, it will wither."

"Compared with the real great god, there is still a certain gap."

"Fuyun is still a bit off the mark!"

The other editors gloated a little. They were still very envious and jealous of an author like Fuyun with a big bald head. Now that they saw Fuyun's "declining talent", they couldn't help but sneer.

The big bald head was very unpleasant to hear.

The editor-in-chief also said: "Let Fuyun prepare a new book again, don't smash your own brand."

The editor-in-chief is doing this for the good of Fuyun. It is not easy for an author to establish a godhead. If a book is not written well, it may cause the godhead to fall, especially for new gods like Fuyun who have no background.

The bald man nodded, and he also felt that what the editor-in-chief said made sense.

Therefore, the bald head said to Xu Qian tactfully: "Fuyun, your book is not good enough, do you want to change it?"

"Forehead?"

Xu Qian fell into deep thought.

"Mortal" is not cool enough?This is obviously impossible. If it is not cool enough, how can so many people watch it?
Watching Han Li grow step by step from a simple youth in a mountain village to an old devil Han who has dominated the three worlds, how many people have brought themselves into it, how could it not be enjoyable?
However, it is true that it is slow in the early stage, because the routines of the book "Mortal" are different from the current mainstream routines, so it makes people read awkwardly, but after dozens of chapters, it basically gets better.

So Xu Qian said: "Just choose this one, you have to trust me."

The big bald man smiled bitterly and said, "Okay."

But he still didn't take it seriously in his heart: "It's really capricious!"

He probably guessed Xu Qian's psychology, probably because it was too easy for Xu Qian to become a god, so he didn't cherish it, and after he learned enough lessons, he would understand what "good words of gold and jade" are.

If Xu Qian knew the big bald head's thoughts, he would be very speechless: "What is this all about?"

"Can you stop making up those unnecessary plots?"

The big bald head said to the editor-in-chief: "Fuyun still insists on publishing this book."

The editor-in-chief sighed, "You're really stubborn!"

"You're a young man after all, don't look back until you hit the south wall."

The other editors sneered secretly in their hearts: "Stupid."

"Stubborn, really stubborn!"

"He deserves to throw himself on the street. This kind of person will definitely throw himself on the street, and he will throw himself forever, forever."

"This kind of person has to suffer a little bit, otherwise he doesn't know how high the sky is and how thick the earth is."

"I think he's going to cry very soon, and he's going to be very scared to write the next book like this one."

"Wait for the clouds to hit the street, and I'm ready to watch a good show."

. . . . .

"We still have to give some recommendations."

The editor-in-chief said to the big bald head.

The bald head nodded: "I hope I can save some face."

With the recommendation, the results of "Ordinary People" will at least be guaranteed to a certain extent.

After that, a banner was pulled up on Huanjian.com's homepage: "Fuyun's new book "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is shocking."

Although I am not optimistic about Fuyun's "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" this time, I still have to give the treatment that should be given. After all, Fuyun is a great god, and this is one of the reasons why Huanjianwang can continue to thrive.

(End of this chapter)