Reborn I am the second generation of stars

Chapter 170 Primary School Student Composition

Many people started watching Chapter 1 "Small Village by the Mountain".

"Er Lianzi opened his eyes wide and looked straight at the black roof made of thatch and mud. The old quilt covered his body was already dark yellow, and he couldn't see his original face. Musty smell."

"The other person next to him is the second brother Han Zhu, who is sleeping very soundly, and there are bursts of snoring from him from time to time."

"About half a foot away from the bed, there is an earthen wall made of yellow mud. Due to a long time, the wall has cracked a few inconspicuous slender openings. From these cracks, faintly Mother Han's nagging and complaining voice is occasionally mixed with father Han's "click" and "click" sucking sound from smoking a pipe."

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Guo Ming felt a little disappointed after reading Chapter 1, because Chapter 1 really didn't have much to offer. Apart from introducing the identity and background of the protagonist Han Li, there was also a mention of Qixuanmen.

Could this be a sect of cultivating immortals?
Because it is written at the end of Chapter 1: "Han Li never imagined that after going out this time, the amount of money would be meaningless to him. the road."

It is precisely because of this sentence that Guo Han has the confidence to continue reading.

He wanted to know what the protagonist's fairy road was?How is it different.

But after reading the three chapters, Guo Ming felt even more disappointed, because Qixuanmen is only a martial arts school, and the protagonist's character dislikes him very much, he is too dull.

This is different from the protagonists in the novels he usually read. The protagonists in ordinary novels are either extremely insolent, decisive, or very wise and close to monsters. Although these are what the protagonists think, they are better than Han Li!

And Han Li has no special identity at all, his parents are not dead, he doesn't have a childhood sweetheart with a great background, his mother hasn't been taken away, he isn't a genius whose dantian was deposed, he isn't a time traveler, he doesn't have a system, and he doesn't have a golden finger yet. He was just an ordinary mountain village boy who couldn't be more ordinary.

Such a setting made Guo Ming very uncomfortable.

And writing martial arts is too old-fashioned, what era is this?You still write about martial arts, and you also write about martial arts on web sites, your heart is really big!

Anyway, Guo Ming was not happy with "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals", and "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" was far below his expectations.

In his mind, the plot of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is like this, the protagonist gets the cultivation technique of gods, gods block and kill gods all the way, Buddhas block and kill Buddhas, accompanied by beauties all the way.

The contrast of reality made him unable to complain.

When a person is not happy with a book, he will feel that the book is bad everywhere.

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So he posted a comment.

"I've heard about Fuyun's name for a long time, but today I saw that it was a false name. What is "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" written? The plot is not compact, the writing is rubbish, and it is simply useless. I really don't know why so many people praise him. Stinky feet, it seems that this is really an era when Xiaobai is in power, but in my opinion, Fuyun doesn't even have the level of writing Xiaobai, at most it is at the level of elementary school students..."

Sprinkling hundreds of words, Guo Ming criticized Fuyun as worthless, and also criticized "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" completely. In his eyes, Fuyun and "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" are rubbish.

He originally wanted to read "The Supreme Confucianism and Taoism" written by Fu Yun, but now that he saw "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals", he didn't intend to read it even with this effort, it would definitely stain his eyes, so he might as well not read it.

"Floating clouds and rubbish? Only at the level of elementary school students..."

The comment immediately went viral with the fuel of some people.

Because the contrast is too great, in the eyes of many people, Floating Cloud is a clear stream in the Internet literary world. Whether it is "The Big Star Reborn" or "The Most Sage of Confucianism and Taoism", he has always been seeking new ideas and changes, but now he is being regarded by others. It is said that it is only "primary school level".

Many people find it funny.

"how is this possible?"

"Floating Cloud is only at the level of a primary school student, so please tease me..."

"If even Fuyun is only at the level of elementary school students, then we are not even at the level of elementary school students. Who said this, why does it sound so funny?"

"It's the biggest joke I've heard this year."

"It is estimated that grapes are sour because they can't eat grapes. There are too many people like this."

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Many people began to watch "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" curiously, wanting to find out the reason from this book, and to see what kind of book made readers make such vicious comments.

Many people were also disappointed after reading the three chapters of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals".

"Floating Cloud's level has dropped!"

"What the hell are you writing about?"

"It's really hot eyes! I can't believe it was written by Fuyun."

"Is this really written by Fuyun? It can't be looking for a gunman, right? Many great gods are doing this now, but it's easy to smash their own signs!"

"I can't believe that this book was written by Fuyun. The level has dropped too fast. This book can't be compared with Xigua's "Cultivation of Truth", even if it is not worthy of lifting shoes."

"Fuyun let me down, Bai waited for so long, it was really a waste of waiting for him."

"Watermelon has won a big victory this time. "Cultivation of Truth" has already swept "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals". There is simply no suspense."

"It must be a ghostwriter. Fuyun must have asked someone else to write it. This writing is too bad."

"Jiang Lang's talents are exhausted! Fuyun is Jiang Lang's talents."

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Many people started to speak up.

"The identification is complete, there is no doubt that the student of Fuyun Elementary School."

"Garbage cloud, get out of the Internet circle."

"He's still called a great god just like that, I'm pissed off!"

"The writing is too rubbish. Returning Erlengzi, Han Li, and Qixuanmen sounds silly. Don't regard everything as innovation."

"It's a waste of my tip, Fuyun compensates me for my tip."

"I've never read such a rubbish book. Fuyun is a fucking elementary school student, even worse than an elementary school student."

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But there are also Fuyun fans arguing for him.

"I think this book is pretty good. I like Han Li's character. He is down-to-earth and takes one step at a time."

"I think we should trust Fuyunda, when has he let us down."

"This book should be a slow one. Everyone should wait. In fact, this book is quite interesting. It's different from the cultivation novels I read. I'm really curious what kind of world Fuyun will show us?"

"The world has not yet shown the tip of the iceberg, and it is too early to draw conclusions."

"The title of the book is "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals". It must start with mortals. Anyway, I still have a sense of substitution. I don't know why there are so many people who don't like it."

"As always, support Fuyunda, I believe he will not let us down."

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However, these remarks were quickly drowned out by the voices of criticism.

At this time, Xigua was drinking with several of his friends, looking very happy.

"This time I let out a bad breath, thank you guys."

Watermelon said to his friend.

The rhythm of "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" this time was inspired by watermelon.

His friends said: "What are you talking about, we are friends!"

"Haha, happy cooperation."

"Pleasant to work with."

Watermelon and his friends toasted, their faces flushed and they looked very excited.

There was a cold light in his eyes: "Fuyun this time, I will destroy you forever, and you will never be able to turn over again."

Few of those who offended him have come to a good end, and he will make those who offend him pay a heavy price.

(End of this chapter)