College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 1
(2006 Zhejiang volume)

composition test questions
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

According to "Liezi" records: Zigong was tired of studying, so he told Zhongni: "I hope to have some rest." Zhongni said: "There is nothing to rest in life."

There are many relevant discourses in ancient and modern China and abroad, for example: people are constantly doing creative work, and work is the best way to make people happy. (Kant)

I've basically just worked hard all my life. (Goethe)

The Son of Heaven is praying that in the coming year, he will be in Tianzong--work the peasants to rest. ("Lu's Spring and Autumn Annals")
Leisure is not an occasional game, but a third of people's life. (Tourism expert)
People should learn to rest in advance, which means that proper rest works best before fatigue. (Medical specialist)

After reading the above text, what do you think, please write an article on the topic of "life without interest / life with interest".You can tell stories about yourself or those around you, express your true feelings, and clarify your thoughts and viewpoints.

[Notice]

①The content to be written must be within the scope of the topic, and one aspect can be written, or both aspects can be written. ②Determine your own ideas, choose your own angle, and draw up your own topic. ③Except for poetry, there is no limit to the style of writing. ④No less than 800 words. ⑤No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
This is a topic full of cultural atmosphere. "Life has no interest/life has interest" appeared in the fifth volume of high school text "What is a person", and candidates should not feel unfamiliar.This topic focuses on ability, highlights speculative thinking, guides students to reflect on their outlook on life, values, optimism, and cultivates students' creative thinking.It is very different from the college entrance examination composition in Zhejiang Province in previous years.The idea of ​​the composition proposition in the past few years is: pay attention to traditional virtues (composition on the topic of "integrity" in 2001), focus on moral cultivation (composition on the topic of "choice of the soul" in 2002), focus on human (2003 "Composing on the topic of 'Emotional Affinity and Cognition of Things'"), focusing on humanities and people's understanding (2004 "Composing on the topic of 'The Improvement and Development of Humanistic Quality'), Pay attention to the relationship between man and society (2005 topic composition "one branch, one leaf, one world"). The topic for 2006 is to guide everyone to pay attention to life, pay attention to life, and pay attention to the value of life. The topic of "life without interest/life with interest" reflects the great wisdom of Confucianism and Taoism in life. The proposition is conceived from two aspects of life that seem to be contradictory, requiring candidates to "write either one aspect or both aspects", This greatly reduces the difficulty of writing.At the same time, the material provides famous aphorisms such as Kant, Goethe, tourism experts, medical experts, etc., which expands the students' thinking and reflects the humanistic care of the testers.The difficulty of the test questions is moderate, which not only has a good degree of discrimination, but also enables most candidates to write.

Writing Ideas Tips
When conceiving, candidates need to consider: What kind of relationship is there between "living without interest" and "living with interest"?After careful analysis, the following three understandings are all possible: 2006. "Life without interest" and "life with interest" are parallel and equivalent, and one side should be approved and the other side should be denied.[-]. "Life without interest" and "life with interest" are complementary to each other. It is necessary to "live without interest" and "life with interest". Only by taking both into account in study, work, and life can we achieve better results. Good effect.[-]. "Live without interest" is from the abstract level of life, which is a kind of life attitude and life goal, while "life with interest" is from the specific level of life, and the two are unified.Candidates can discuss one point, or combine them to make a comprehensive discussion, which is in line with the requirements of the tester.It can also be seen from this that the essay topics for the college entrance examination in Zhejiang Province in [-] are full of dialectical philosophy.

Full score sample essay
醉乡
(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

Jackdaws flit across the chaotic clouds, and the drunken country is boundless at hand.A smile is lonely and empty forever, and the three-pointed moon shines on the river.

The world of mortals is rolling, fame and fortune are rolling, our hearts are like feathers whirling in the crowd, floating up and down, drifting, drunk, let us put aside all the hustle and bustle, under the "High Autumn Moon", in the "Pipa Wine" Find a drunken place that belongs to us.

Most people in the world are burdened by fame. How many people "sit and watch fishermen, only envious of fish", how many people "fill in the Great Wall to empty themselves, and their temples are already stained in the mirror", and how many people are "young and divorced". The boss of the family returns, the local accent has not changed, and the temples have declined"?There are tides in the world one after another, how many people have lost their way and soul in this tide full of ups and downs?
Let's put a white deer among the green cliffs, and ride to visit famous mountains as soon as you go. Why not put a deer in your chest, among the green cliffs, on famous mountains?
In the green mountains and green waters, hold a pool of clear springs, hold a branch of green leaves, and have the simplest and sweetest dream.Get drunk, get drunk in this paradise, no more trouble, no more sorrow.In this intoxicated land, we exile our souls, watching "a clear sky with a crane rowing above the clouds", watching "the wild sky and low trees", watching the long autumn water and the sky, and seeing the clear sky and light clouds.

The tide of the Spring River is even with the sea level, and the bright moon on the sea coexists with the tide.What kind of leisurely Zhang Ruoxu is that?Maybe at that time, he wandered, lost, and lost, but he finally got happiness under a bright moon by the river, on a beach of white sand on Tingshang, and in a burst of frost in the air.In "I don't know how many people will return by the moon, the sunset shakes the trees in the river", it tells us that the spring river is beautiful, the flowers are beautiful, and the moon is beautiful. Why don't we get drunk in this "Spring River Flower and Moon Night" and enjoy a Beautiful scenery, how about a good dream?

The willow branches are green in spring, the trees are verdant in summer, the sweet-scented osmanthus is fragrant in autumn, and the pear trees are treed in winter. In fact, we really forget a lot in the pursuit.In that corner of the soul, we all long to see the clouds flowing thousands of miles away, the bright moon, the white dew flying, the water shining to the sky, the green grass all over the mountains and plains, and the fluttering snowflakes. In the midst of happiness, get drunk in this drunken country of red flowers, willows and greenery.

Life is not gray and black film, not bustling crowds.Life is flowers, trees, and grass; it is the happiest and most natural drunkenness we find with a piano, a jar of wine, and a stream of clouds.

score review
The article finds the theme of "drunken country" from "the world is rolling, fame and fortune are rolling", and the insights are unique and novel, showing extraordinary talents.The beginning of the chapter starts with an ancient masterpiece with a broad and far-reaching artistic conception, implying the theme of the full text "drunken country", which is ingenious.The article cites a large number of classical poems and passages of famous writers, as well as rhetoric such as personification, duality, and parallelism. The sentence patterns vary in length, and some expressive verbs are used, which are rich in meaning and expressive.

wonderful words
Jackdaws flit across the chaotic clouds, and the drunken country is boundless at hand.

Life is not gray and black film, not bustling crowds.

escape rather than return

(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

There is a tree beside the artificial lake, short and short, stretching out a few thick branches towards the horizontal slope, short and long, and the branches are dotted with different shades of green. Whenever I pass by the road in the evening, I can see It stood quietly in the setting sun, indescribably simple and strange!The boundless clouds seem to be the ever-changing background music, adding rhythm to the unchanging branches.It interprets the beauty of different styles for people day and night.

One day, I finally stopped for it, lost in the twilight.

When we were students, we didn't have a life.Books are our heaven, we cannot be intoxicated, but we have no choice!The roles of elementary school, middle school students have been stylized, and they are about to step into the university and bid farewell to the tiring high school life. Ecstasy is not enough to describe the mood. Even if there are friends who accompany us day and night, the sadness of going separate ways cannot be retained Hastily leaving the footsteps.Fantasy has become a part of my life, stepping into the wonderful world, seeing life is waving to us enthusiastically, happiness is higher than mountains and longer than water.

The joy of fleeing is like a thin layer of spun yarn, which is blown away by a gust of wandering wind before it is straightened!

The trivial life flows without a trace, mixed with colorful falling flowers.When looking at life from a distance, it is a form of beauty, and it is only when you plunge into it that you find it is as sharp as a blade.Milan Kundera said in his novel "The Joke": Seduced by the voice of Utopia, they squeezed desperately into the gate of heaven, only to realize that they were in hell when the gate slammed shut behind them.Life is sometimes such black humor, which makes small people feel embarrassed and helpless.Escape, it has become our instinctive choice.Tired of the life around me, I began to look around for the scenery in other places... However, in some illusory wish, I tried my best to swing the swing of life to the highest point, but when I stopped, I found that it was still in the original position !

I have always liked to travel, hoping that the scenery everywhere will always be pleasant, thinking that strangeness and distance will filter out the dust and sand, and present even unreal beauty.Laughing in the background, we have already become a part of life, and there is nowhere to escape.The scenery is indeed beautiful, but there is no reason to stay.It is better to return than escape!
I think of Wang Wei's "Bamboo Li Pavilion": Sitting alone in the secluded Huangli, playing the piano and singing.People in the deep forest don't know, but the bright moon comes to shine.Envious of the poet's bravery, he is a friend every day, and the wind is his companion, singing loudly, as if he was independent from the world.But when I imagined that picture, what I tasted was all kinds of loneliness, and there was nowhere to hide in the valley, which made me shudder!Without the feeling of looking at the moon through the window, without the free and easy way to drink wine to the wind, even if you escape to the ends of the world, you are still a prison.Escape from the hustle and bustle of reality, but also cannot escape the boundless and lonely fate!

Looking at the tree in front of me, I understand that there is no need to escape, and I have to bear the sting.Triviality and sharpness are illusions of life.Like the thorns of a rose, after pricking your hands, it is fragrant and delicate.

Instead of fleeing, it is better to return!Life should be nothing.Escaping is a kind of cowardice, but intoxication is the eternal destination.

There should be nothing to rest in life, just stand quietly with this tree, and it can also perform various styles and make passers-by drunk!
score review
The article goes from the tree to the person, and finally returns to the tree.When the author writes about his own experience, in order to avoid going straight down the line, he adopts the method of association, and uses Milan Kundera's novels and Wang Wei's poems to enrich the content, and the conception is very individual.

wonderful words
The joy of fleeing is like a thin layer of spun yarn, which is blown away by a gust of wandering wind before it is straightened!

Laughing in the background, we have already become a part of life, and there is nowhere to escape.

Celebrity Quotes
Lured by the sounds of utopia, they squeeze their way through the gates of heaven, only to find themselves in hell when the gates slam shut behind them. --Milan Kundera
Sitting alone in the secluded huang, playing the piano and whistling again.People in the deep forest don't know, but the bright moon comes to shine. —— Wang Wei

Oblique wind and drizzle do not need to return

(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

It doesn't matter whether the city is full of wind blowing, or the wind soaks the paper windows, the slanting wind and drizzle don't need to return.

Walking in the rainy and foggy streets, stepping on the wet road, embracing the rain and kissing a quiet heart.We live in the hustle and bustle of the city, looking for a way out of the soul under the care and expectation of thousands of people.The two points of home and school can constitute the whole of our life, but we also need a resting place for the soul.Imprisoned in reinforced concrete cages all day long, we, who are physically and mentally exhausted in this mechanical life, really need a piece of tranquility.

We are destined to be unable to escape from this society, and it is impossible to have the leisure of "picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely", so I am looking for a spiritual habitat in the rain.

I like to sit alone next to a clear pool on a drizzle night, watching the rain shatter the reflection of the lamp in the water, causing layers of ripples to spread out gradually, conveying a long-lasting call, a call from the bottom of my heart.I like to walk in the rainy alleyway, hold some water on my toes, savor the leisurely dance of raindrops and the joy of landing, greet the blessing of rain with my face, and feel the coolness that spreads throughout the body and even penetrates the soul.

I also like to lean on the small building alone, listen to the beautiful rhythm of raindrops, and taste the infinite eternity of life.Taste the boldness of "the wind regrets the clouds and shadows turn the raging waves, and the raindrops fly into the air and shoot the crossbow" in "the setting sun rides the evening coolness, and the open house lies in the open space".

The rain is calm. Under its guidance, my heart loses the irritability and thirst of the past, and is filled with overflowing hope.

Under the pressure of infinitely expanding study, I found a sky where I can let go, a clear spring where I can suddenly feel relieved.

The rain outside the window is still pattering, and I still have to go far away in the classroom.The wet wipes in the hands seem to be able to squeeze out the space of water, and the air in the quiet examination room is a kind of tension.

Rain, still fluttering.

The wind, chanting intermittently.

Let your mind immerse in the rain, and you will find that the dull life is actually full of vitality, and the gloomy life is actually full of beauty.

Rest in the slanting wind and drizzle, wash away the bitterness of tears and the melancholy of the heart.There is no trace of rain left in the sky, and what is floating is the breath of the cleansed soul.

In this slanting wind and drizzle, go back later.

score review
This is a rare perfect composition.The article is written in a relaxed and natural way, full of literary talents everywhere, with poetic language all the way, clean and neat, elegant and exquisite, graceful and vigorous, carrying the author's thoughts, and finally pointing out the main purpose of the article-to live with interest.

wonderful words
I like to walk in the rainy alleyway, hold some water on my toes, savor the leisurely dance of raindrops and the joy of landing, greet the blessing of rain with my face, and feel the coolness that spreads throughout the body and even penetrates the soul.

Master, please listen to me

(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

"Our life is like trying to push a big rock up a hillside. When we are about to reach the top of the hill, the big rock rolls down again, and I have to push it up the hillside again." This is Goethe's description of his hard work.

Confucius, when you read the above passage, don't you feel the unresolved depression surging in your heart?And I, whenever I see your teaching of "life without interest", I feel infinitely desperate.

Master, is there any legend about Wu Gang in your time?He kept chopping the laurel tree, and the wound of the laurel tree healed immediately.If you are in such a situation, can you still maintain your Confucian demeanor of "advancing and retreating politely"?And every time I recite a sentence "Wu Zhi does not sleep and leans on the laurel tree" in "Li Ping Konghou Yin", I am relieved that the music gave him room to rest and breathe.

Master, I keep in mind your phrase "The dead are like a man, never giving up day and night". This is probably one of the reasons why you came to the conclusion that "life has no rest".For thousands of years, it has urged people to run fast, to run fast, to catch up with the speed of the cycle of the sun and the moon with their short lives, but have you ever thought about how Kuafu, who kept chasing the sun at that moment, fell down?

Master, in our age, many people die due to overwork, and many of them can use the time they should have to make greater contributions to our society. What do you think of this?

(End of this chapter)