College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 100: Associations and perceptions from poems (2)
The structure of the article is rigorous and progressive. It discusses the problems in reality, analyzes the various life styles in the world, and closely focuses on how people should face their own themes. It is profound and thought-provoking.The language of the article is fluent and the argument is clear, which shows the candidate's good language control ability.

classic case
Su Shi, Tao Yuanming
A view
(a candidate from Shandong)

At the beginning of human creation, human beings have greedy curiosity. People are always pursuing and exploring. When they encounter a high mountain, they want to turn over to see what is on the other side of the mountain. Come and take a peek at the hidden secrets.And in the endless exploration, what do we often pay attention to, have we lost something?Stare straight at the eyes in front of you, have you ever looked at the beauty from a distance?
After exploring for a lifetime, Newton finally stopped. He turned his energies to theology, which seemed to run counter to science. People were sighing and even abandoned him. However, did he really lose his authenticity?Is it really the so-called insanity?No!We will not believe the words of these people who only value awards for achievements. I know that after spending a lifetime of scientific research, Newton has realized that the universe is too big to care about the self-satisfied little wisdom of life. Only superficial people who can appreciate the profundity and impenetrability of the Creator will hold a little invention and shout: "I see the world clearly!" , Overlooking the beautiful scenery on the top of the mountain.

Zhou Dunyi wrote: "It can be seen from a distance but not played with." This is the implicit expression of the Chinese about the beauty of distance. Isn't it incisive?Does the peerless beauty have to enlarge the pores to be clearly visible in order to see the beauty?Does the colorful oil painting have to be dismembered into pieces of color spots to appreciate it?Exquisite poems must be expanded into a paragraph to appreciate?This world is already complicated enough, do we have to show the details one by one?
Rolling in the world of mortals, endless love and hatred, love and hatred, all living beings, who can return home by cloud?Instead of rolling and climbing in the secular world, it is better to swim on the top of the mountain and share the ups and downs of the red sun.The daisy at the foot of Nanshan reflects a face with a smile like a flower in the vicissitudes of life. The world is against me.Dirty world, endless temptation, money, status, fame, however, who can really see clearly these mirage-like expectations?Sometimes, it is also a kind of courage to look back and look at everything like clouds and fog outside the green hills.

People will have pursuits, and they will all have a desire to find out, but sometimes what you strive for is a kind of incompleteness and regret, but when you look at it from a distance, what you harvest is perfection.

score review
The articles are short and concise, with strong emotions and distinctive personalities.Through Newton's example of abandoning science and pursuing theology, as well as Zhou Dunyi's words, he powerfully expressed his idea of ​​"overlook".A series of rhetorical questions in the third paragraph adds to the strength of the article.

hazy beauty
(a candidate from Shandong)

The bright moon shines on the flowers, and the deep pool is a clear and transparent beauty, but we cannot deny the misty rain of apricot blossoms, and the water moon in the mist is also a kind of beauty; the high mountains in the north of the Yangtze River and the abrupt peaks are firm and thorough beauty, but we cannot deny the small bridge in the south of the Yangtze River , the fog lock tower is also a kind of beauty.The same is true of life. Accurate data and classic formulas are the rigorous beauty, while profound prose and magnificent poems embody the hazy beauty of life.

The poet has a saying: People who look up at the starry sky always think that the stars are gems, crystal clear and without blemishes.People who fly to the stars know that there is dust, gravel, and the same complexity as on the earth.It is true that the dust on the stars shows the beauty of desolation and reality, but the beautiful legends about the stars and the moon are accompanied by the growth of generations.It is these daydreams and longings, it is these hazy beauty that arouses people's yearning, and guides people to fly to the moon, Mars, and outer space. The hazy beauty in life is the booster of life progress.

Obscure beauty is the source of traditional national culture.The history of Chinese civilization spans 5000 years, from Pangu creating the world to Nuwa creating man, from Chang'e flying to the moon to Kuafu chasing the sun, colorful myths and stories have been handed down as national treasures.Are these not the exploration and hazy perception of the unknown world by the advancing people?Even today when we accept the theory of the origin of species and evolution, we who believe in atheism can still appreciate the beauty of imagination and creation.

Obscure beauty is a source of inspiration.Zhang Ji's "Fengqiao Night Mooring" has been widely recited for thousands of years, and the line "Jiangfeng Fishing Fire vs. Worrying" is even more deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.However, in recent years, many people have put forward new interpretations, translating it as Jiangcun Bridge and Feng Bridge facing Mianmian Mountain, and they did not hesitate to conduct textual research on this.If we say that exploring the moon is the unknown mystery calling us, and it is the inheritance of the hazy beauty, then the textual research on the "new interpretation" is completely superfluous.When Qu Yuan by the Miluo River recited "Heavenly Questions", I don't think he was just looking for an answer.Ask God how long?Where is the place?Sheng He Huan?Why bother?What is love?What is wrong with the common people?If all these questions are answered, won't the charm of this magnificent poem through the ages disappear?

The wise men in life will always sit and watch the world of mortals in the flowing years, smiling with flowers.Even if you are as frustrated as Zhang Ji and as miserable as Qu Yuan, you can still taste the hazy meaning of life, so why do we bother to destroy it?Only by knowing how to appreciate the beauty of obscurity can we understand the true meaning of life.

score review
This article is full of literary talents and has a relatively profound cultural background. Under the clever words, there is a wise cultural thinking, which is a prominent feature of this article.In addition, the structure of the article is clear, the layers are clear and integrated, and there is no shortage of sincere emotions in the rigor. It is really a rare masterpiece in the examination room!

wonderful words
The bright moon shines on the flowers, and the deep pool is a clear and transparent beauty, but we cannot deny the misty rain of apricot blossoms, and the water moon in the mist is also a kind of beauty; the high mountains in the north of the Yangtze River and the abrupt peaks are firm and thorough beauty, but we cannot deny the small bridge in the south of the Yangtze River , the fog lock tower is also a kind of beauty.

The wise men in life will always sit and watch the world of mortals in the flowing years, smiling with flowers.Even if you are as frustrated as Zhang Ji and as miserable as Qu Yuan, you can still taste the hazy meaning of life, so why do we bother to destroy it?
beauty, the sadness of distance

(a candidate from Shandong)

Since Cangjie created characters, Chinese characters have always been pictographs expressing meaning.The ancestors created characters, not only incorporating the agility and beauty of the characters, but also the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of the characters.A word is a picture, then a word is a world with strong visual sense.For example, "distance", through this complicated horizontal and vertical vertical, I seem to see a sense of resentment rising upwards, accompanied by the classical beauty gradually drifting away, indistinct, flickering.

It is no exaggeration to say that the classical beauty of China is the pavilions and pavilions built on the distance.We can imagine that this distance is the distant lovesickness of "the king lives at the head of the Yangtze River, and the concubine lives at the end of the Yangtze River", or it is the concept of family status and hierarchy that is farther than the geographical distance, or "a lonely grave for a thousand miles, nowhere to talk Desolate" life and death, or a loyal minister sighing with the "unknown" king.

Some people say that "poetry is the crystallization of pain", while literature bursts out of strong emotions, and distance is the thoroughfare between reality and beauty.However, today's society with rapid information development has greatly shortened the distance that should have separated Tianshui.Mobile phones and the Internet can quickly transmit information at any time, and trains and airplanes can send loved ones to each other immediately. Diminished, let the block that should have been gathered in the heart and rushing to the chest not be watered with wine or poetry, but collapse on its own, never again.

Without distance, without strong emotion, without sharp edges, all people are pebbles, losing the classical beauty in the smoother mutual promotion, leaving only modern sadness.

Without recruiting people to see them off, how can there be a resentful woman who sews cold clothes for her beloved sighs in the July fire?Without the separation between the monarch and his ministers, how can there be the passionate righteousness of "Wen dies to remonstrate, Wu dies to fight" and the pure loyalty of "Teacher's Biao"?Without the "arms of Qinghui" of the little children whose father went to do nothing to watch under the moon, without the pain of friends staying away from the wind and cold outside the Great Wall, how could there be a "Three Folds of Yangguan", a willow branch to give away, a Tears in the ten-mile long pavilion, comforting and comforting each other with the words "Mo Chou has no confidant in the future, no one in the world does not know the king"?

Mr. Qiu Yu said, "The distance separated by mountains is a kind of despair, and the distance connected by waterways is a kind of sadness." In the field, we can only be a little bit desperate and sad. May the distance, the human relationship, and the beauty still be there.

score review
Candidates discussed the beauty of distance from far to near, and rationally demonstrated their views on distance through rich examples and negative writing techniques.In addition, the title of the article is also very poetic.Citing verses indiscriminately is also a major feature of this article.

Celebrity Quotes
Thousands of miles away, there is no place to talk about desolation. --Su Shi

Don't worry about having no confidant in the future, no one in the world knows the king. ——Gao Shi The distance separated by mountains is a kind of despair, and the distance connected by waterways is a kind of sadness. ——Yu Qiuyu
dreams dance in reality
(a candidate from Shandong)

Looking up at the starry sky, the stars that seem to have no flaws are shining in the Milky Way, which brings us infinite reverie, how many people's beautiful dreams have been released in the starry sky that is not stained with dust!People who fly to the stars know that, like the earth, there is dust and gravel, so they lose their desire for fantasy.Although we cannot blindly indulge in our own fantasies, we cannot let our free-flying thoughts be submerged in the ruthless reality.

Ruan Ji focused on the turmoil in the world and the strangeness of his friend's head, and escaped from reality by getting drunk. He had been evading, evading, and escaping all his life, but he was finally cast aside because of an article "A Note to the King of Jin for Zheng Chong".Ji Kang, on the other hand, lived completely in reality and refused to make any compromises with life, and finally became famous with a song "Guangling San".In fact, one step forward from Ruan Ji's drunkenness is Ji Kang's "Guangling San", and one step backward from Ji Kang's "Guangling San" is Ruan Ji's drunkenness.If the two of them take a step in the middle and balance fantasy and reality a little, maybe the living will not be hidden in the hallucinations, and the dead will be merged into the sky, leaving future generations with endless regret.

How can we let those who look up at the stars understand the reality, and how can we let those who fly to the stars keep their dreams?
In that era when everyone complained, Mr. Shen Congwen focused on the cruelty of reality, but still wrote that small town in the south of the Yangtze River as a paradise with beautiful mountains, water, and people. The reality did not obliterate his hope for life. Look at this society and your own life with emotion and a pure heart.He didn't indulge in his fantasy, nor let reality numb his soul.

Mr. Zhang Yunhe is also a wise old man. She has experienced great wealth in her life, and she has also experienced wars and catastrophes for ten years, but she always maintains a feeling of compassion and a childlike heart that never ages.Her sympathetic feelings make her face reality and overcome it, and her never-aging childlike heart makes her not give up the right to fantasy under any difficult circumstances.

Kawabata Yasunari's shallow sentence "at four o'clock in the morning, I saw the crabapple flowers were still asleep", touched so many hearts instantly, this is the most perfect combination of dream and reality.Let those worldly things fall apart in an instant, and warm the hearts that are becoming numb in reality.

Face up to reality, but don't commit yourself to reality, maintain fantasy, but don't indulge in fantasy, let dreams dance a hearty dance in reality!

score review
Clear arguments, rigorous structure, and examples combining pros and cons are the characteristics of this article.Candidates explained the importance of the combination of reality and ideals from the negative side through the cases of Ruan Ji and Ji Kang, and explained from the front side through the stories of Shen Congwen, Zhang Yunhe and Kawabata Yasunari.

classic case
Ruan Ji, Ji Kang, Shen Congwen, Zhang Yunhe, Kawabata Yasunari

Meet in the track of dream and reality
(a candidate from Shandong)

Throughout the ages, human beings have been weaving dreams and hopes from generation to generation.Looking at the sky, the starry sky is twinkling, telling the murmurs and devout prayers of the ancestors; that dream is so real and so far away, because it is an eternal pursuit in the heart, a prosperity and fantasy floating in reality.

The reality of Xuejiu is "jump up and fly, grab the elm and stop"; the reality of streams is to sing "the sound of decadence" between the cracks of the stone; I just look down at my feet."They have already been trapped in the quagmire of reality and cannot extricate themselves, and their numb hearts have long given up the right to have dreams and look at the horizon.So the wings of dreams drift away, and the shackles of reality hang around their necks.

Withdrawing my thoughts of reverie, I realized that dreams are the stars in the sky, illuminating the rushing life forever; reality is the land under the feet, recording the footprints of the road steadily and thickly.People should neither live in flashy dreams nor indulge in the hustle and bustle of reality.On the road of life, one should plant dreams on the left and reality on the right, pick them at any time, and harvest hope.

Looking for the origins of the ancients, I heard the call of Du Fu's Ministry of Industry, "There are tens of thousands of mansions, and the world's poor are all happy, and the wind and rain are unmoved, and it is as safe as a mountain." This is a cry of concern for the country and the people, and it is Du Fu's heart. Biggest dream.Looking back, I heard Mr. Lu Xun's exclamation looking up at the starry sky: "I don't care about the cold stars, I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood", "Lian Guangyu has a lot on his mind, and he listens to the thunder in a silent place".This is my husband's dream of "saving the country with a pen". Even though he is disappointed with the reality, he is not in despair. His hesitant cry arouses the rise and efforts of the Chinese people.

Tracing back the journey of the world, I saw Magellan's dream of traveling around the world. He greeted the magnificent waves with a broad mind, and wrote the thickness and responsibility of life with his dreams.Even though he was slaughtered by the indigenous people during the trip, the cruelty of reality did not kill or weaken his dream.Later generations followed the track of his dream and went to the world.Looking back, I saw the dream of Martin Luther King. The ugly and stubborn reality hit this "dream chaser" again and again, but his dream condensed the justice and strength of all black people. His persistence bowed at the feet of this great national warrior.I saw Xu Benyu's simple and unpretentious smile again. He did not pursue the car and BMW like his classmates, nor did he escape because of the incomplete reality. Instead, he devoted his dream to remote teaching.They are all strong dreamers in reality!
Looking for the road from ancient times to the present, I looked up at the starry sky in the sky.Dreams and reality intersect in people's lives. Let us embrace our dreams with lofty aspirations and write beautiful chapters of life in reality with open-mindedness!
score review
The article has a profound idea and a reasonable structure. Through a large number of examples, it illustrates the dual importance of pursuing ideals and facing reality.The article adds literary effect by citing verses, and it is also very friendly to read.

Celebrity Quotes
There are tens of thousands of mansions in Ande, which shelters all poor people in the world and is as safe as a mountain. ——Du Fu

Since Han Xingquan doesn't notice, I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood. ——Lu Xun

Lian Guangyu, with a lot of thoughts on his mind, listened to the thunder in a silent place. ——Lu Xun

classic case
Du Fu, Lu Xun, Magellan, Martin Luther King, Xu Benyu, etc.

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